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    • For the record, there isn't a DD story you've written I haven't thoroughly enjoyed.  Of course with that section of this story, I do wonder how she handles it when a mommy embarrassingly admits that they've started wetting the bed. I imagine most haven't even started wearing diapers to bed because that feels worse then just the bed wetting. I'm sure she tried to determine if it's hypnosis she's accidentally exposed herself to. I'm also curious how their current society handled Bigs that start wetting the bed or daytime accidents. I imagine at first they're status as an adult is temporarily removed and they're put under "observation" till it's determined if they're matured enough to get it back or have it permanently removed. I love stories like this. Where a certain group is seen as immature and the mature group has decided what actions cement that belief and how that group, in this case, Higs, react and treat those in their own group that act similar to those of the immature group. The goes for the stories where all men are deemed immature and are babies and a female starts throwing tantrums and getting into mischief or otherwise acting similar to the men in that story.
    • They just sedated him for now to calm him down, but the rest of the physical regression will be hard on him.
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    • Wow... Yeah, they ripped that band aid straight off! I wonder if they'll let him wake back up again after a couple hours or keep him in the coma until he's at that 12-24 month age range?  Enjoying this tale!
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