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    • I do not know what you mean by "not designed correctly. You seem to fall into the category of non-proportionality. In the early days of plastic pantes they were made without "forward-facing" legs, like two rear parts put together. and were very full, since, before 1951, they were only flat diapers and the panties could accommodate up to triple diapering. The fit was adjusted to suit the need. This made them very full with very short legs like in the 14th and 15th century. From what I understand the first plastic panties were homemade in the 1942-5 timeframe when rubber was not available. I know about this because some of these were still around in the early 1950's Also, snap-on panties used to be size adjustable, such as Comco. so you could adjust the waist and legs separately. That is not the case today. And all of them were "high waisted": That was not an extra-cost option
    • My Daddy and my Wife do this to me multiple times a day. They love me in diapers and would prefer I be in them 24/7 but that's too much for me so I ask them to scale it back.
    • The site was spazzing out this morning for some reason.   I couldn't open any threads (though the previews popped up).  
    • Bad guys win.  Unfortunate.  There is a bit of foreshadowing in the earlier stories, with Austin that there can be some burdens too big to put on one's self.  The cruelty and oppression of the dimension has been narrowed into an idea that maybe not tomorrow, but you can and need to survive this, and get through it, that there are people waiting for you 'on the other side', to help you.  Is that the case with her other patients?  Unknown, it's a mixed bag, but that there are small glimmers of hope here and there.  Maybe she gets out, and keeps enough of her wits to explain what Juvantis did and is still doing.  As a big, presumptively she would have a lot more sway even in her regressed state than a little with a similar accusation. I don't want to say it's under developed, there's a beginning middle and end, and it explores a handful of ideas at a meta level all the way through, but from a PLOT perspective, not a whole lot happened, and this is the kind of point in the book you'd turn and start the next chapter.  The character does not actually resolve any of her existing baggage, nor does her experience let us the audience do that either.  It's only by looking at what happens to her as a combination of all her previous patients, that we can hope to have a coherent understanding of her arc.  She tries too hard to lift up the world on her own, she does this out of guilt, she is punished.  She also has proof that like she suspected with Vincent, "something of the host survives", her decision to play it safe with him was probably justified.  Still that's like a reader meta-knowledge thing, not like her character improved from learning these things.  So it still feels like half a story. I'm glad you explored this one, and sorry to see it end so quickly, but hopefully you come back to the larger plot points here and get a chance to explore these characters again.
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