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Critiques and Writer's Discussion
For more in-depth critiques of stories and story writing discussion.
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By diaperboy187 · Posted
"No ! Give it back now ! It's mine !" Rei whined to Ella as she kept jumping up and reaching for the doll. She began to sniffle as no matter what she couldn't quite take it back. After a few more jumps she was done and began crying in frustration. Rei was going to be impossible to deal with if Ella didn't return the doll very quickly. -
By Diaperwettingboy87 · Posted
I was caught by a woman I work with. I was so embarrassed but she offered to change me. She's a lesbian that was on the butch side of the spectrum. I loved the humiliation and i think she enjoyed the power over me while humiliating me -
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