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    • Chapter 121 – welcome to May 2026, Jeff back to work and how many school days off while Lisas fourth pregnancy (third her plus one adopted) and Helping other Mothers and Fathers too – third week of May 2026, part 10,   Monday 25th to Sunday 31st May 2026 With Monday 25th May 2026 of course Bryony’s birthday ; the previous night it was arranged  her two siblings (Byron and Avery); Rose and a few other Suzy’s family members too volunteered to wake up the birthday girl for the day; rendition of Happy Birthday; and Suzy handing over  her first birthday gift (a party dress very young Adult ;and Jeff and Suzy’s card to her too; went well! In Suzy’s more detailed Monday email she explained two appointments etc and everything else we now know; as well as after her Wednesday Doc R 11.00 and a ASAP appointment in Glasgow open Monday to Saturday  (she replied later in the day when Lisa gave her time ; 11.00 Friday / see below) After breakfast a few short things similar; to the May Day (Swing park etc); with the birthday girl having choice of lunch and dinner this occasion ; lunch she chose a Clarkie’s lunch (hot food from Dundee’s 24 hour pie supplier) and with  Dinner a little early a Pizza Party (Domino’s)  BEFORE the  party 19.00! The consensus amongst all there it was even better than Jayden’s birthday… While all work and school ; Doc Reynolds did tiny bit in the office;  as Suzy did not need a scan of her womb after all with Lisa carrying Suzy’s kind offer BUT did arrange for Lisa’s blood work (extensive to cover all basis BUT knowing she was already pregnant may well make results etc different BUT This was mentioned in the notes); Lisa got a text message with her family who were at home watching Movies like Friday until leaving 18.30 for Bryony’s birthday party; the bloods were called  for Friday would be ready to drop in at her convenience; at  the Hospital. With the Glasgow-based Fertility clinic open; Lisa was able to book first appointment in their premises for Jeff and Suzy 10.00 this Friday coming ; she had said she would try , and reminded at Byrony’s bash the story (She would NOT be there but happy to help as at Suzy’s in Friday in question (ED: for this story I am using this London NHS link https://www.guysandstthomas.nhs.uk/health-information/ivf-treatment  with more information; done on a Hybrid basis for Suzy of course)  (ED: as to why only Phlebotomists are allowed to draw blood in Scotland for sample ; is anyone’s guess… I had those done by many doctors and nurses take my blood samples in England, BUT... aah who the hell cares?)   Tuesday 26th May 2026  Suzy told of the Additional Friday appointment 10.00 in Glasgow (future visits might be weekend as they had Saturday opening) ; dropping off kids Friday by Suzy’s mum / Granny Orla; leaving around 07.00 with Glasgow’s legendary M8 congestion both morning and evening  / after A80; MUCH more worse area around Airport to/from Greenock; BUT other side so less issues. With a 100 min trip on paper (and Mumtruck 4 getting her first proper Motorway run on M876, M80 and M8); traffic aside; there are a few coffee shops in vicinity too ; close bar NHS Sandyford Clinic (ED: NHS Greater Glasgow and Clyde wide  local  clap clinic  / abortions and pregnancy issues / plus all Scotland bar NHS Lothian Gender Clinic, I have been  there many times), appointment 10.00- 11.00 with Suzy fancying another try at World Buffet off other side ; so lunch 12.00 to 13.15 before back home in plenty time of the 15.00  and 15.30 Afternoon school pick-ups!  We are NOT yet if they will give us medications on first visit BUT the second way is by post/courier; additionally a second option for collections MIGHT be a relative of Daddy Jeff who lives close by (ED: gender clinics generally a forbidden for meds first visit BUT … I didn’t get them till a second shrink visit; but some private ones do…)    On this day in question though; schools and works were all back in;  Suzy additionally blogged about Lisa’s kind offer FROM NO-WHERE on her Working For A Parenting Genius blog (finally getting a time after All Schools off plus Byrony’s birthday stuff yesterday),  Daddy Jeff working from home; including another 10 minute sit down time after everyone else went to work or dropped off at School; in more detail about Lisa’s offer and both tomorrow’s appointment (Daddy Jeff offered to come Wednesday too; but Suzy needs her to take kids for Swimming Lessons (Suzy’s Doc R 11.00 ) and then Wednesday 14.00 agency to select  playroom helpers successful or not, in Suzy’s home that day.  A couple worker visits came and went (no workers  Holiday Monday) ; Suzy made lunch (pre-made frozen Cheeseburgers and chips with fresh fruit after; Daddy Jeff  made a couple Pasta Bakes (Creamy Tomato and Herb, plus non – Jewish friendly so NOT for their four Jewish family members Tomato and Bacon) ; both to give people another choice too, which went down well all round, with pre-filled Ice Cream Cones even faster… and the four former Smithson Jared, Roseanne , Sarah and Silvia  enjoyed a couple hours with their father with a wee while him watching in the Playroom and the Annexe.   Wednesday 27th May 2026  was similar with all schools back in , no kids worker visits bar Agency 14.00 after Suzy  Doc R appointment 11.00 ; with father of former Kohn family Kids later that evening , with Daddy Jeff and Byrony on School Swimming Lessons that time round (her Daddy got a few hours off!) Upon seeing Suzy sitting in waiting area; and in time for her appointment; Doctor Reynolds left the  room to coming out to see herself “Aah Suzy… come in” after giving her a massive hug. She discussed a few things; Suzy was not offended  by her offer BUT genuinely never expected her to do even make an offer like that, full stop ; and her own money paying ; her family say over last 20 years I brought their daughter out her shell 20 years ago; she has a savings account with 1 billion with a lot of her now expanded further fathers taxi company dividends; so NO Brian or SBF Money either way for once…  Doc R said it was assumed and advised continue current pills pending next cycle; by which the current stuff should be sorted BUT she would need bloods done herself. Suzy had used a Tampon to soak the blood NOT every day (one time after changing her last nappy to tidy up over there ) … … With Suzy’s current  period starting on time indeed  Tuesday 25th May for a week , it was indeed to continue pills even for another period; by that time their BUT the actual check down below was intriguing; she explained Lisa’s offer has saved her a lot of pain, work and hassle ; there is some damage still BUT getting pregnant would take longer and pills ; probably BUT of course a bit irrelevant. Daddy Jeff was advised of her bloods BUT He was taking kids School swimming lessons ; Suzy got  the lunch of frozen pizzas out 12.55 ; FYI in Daddy Jeffs car; Suzy (after removing Tampon and after nappy change)  left Doc around 11.25, Ninewells 11.30 then leaving 12.10 , getting home 12.25 with Daddy just serving  up the Pizzas there with perfect time  saying  “perfect timing!” as  Daddy Jeff and Byrony arrived around 12.55. 14. 00 was intended to be at home; around 13.55 they went     through to the Study. They had discussed by phone call most this weekend part 1 and now part 2  and extra playroom helpers were officially to acknowledge both decisions; the agency lady telling those successful when they returned to her office; and  starting not this Monday but following Monday,  with her leaving (in Mumtruck 4; swapping her tacho card over) around 14.45 for Harris Academy ; leaving Harris 15.16 for Blackness Primary and Nursery arrive 15.25, departing 15.40 getting  home close to 16.00. A Chip Shop run was being done on the way home from Suzy’s Mum at one of the Kirkton fish and chip shops, everyone’s favourites (Suzy was a Deep Fried King Rib with batter and Chips (Supper) and some  (Vanilla) ice creams too. Mr Kohn (father of Jude, Sol, Avril, Isaah) had a wee while in Playroom in their Daddy before heading to The Annexe and sometime in each of their Rooms too.   Thursday 28th May 2026  was of course Lisa’s turn for the weekend to come to Suzy. in her morning announcements reminded her kids of that , as well as a reminder of their Appointment the following morning in Glasgow.  Working meetings scheduled before and after Lisa’ arrival (all came and went without incident or any major changes or the like); Lisa arrived with the family 11.55 with her family not at School  or Work. Lunch was similar to a few weeks ago with Suzy having another one of those hot popcorn chicken and cold sliced  chicken breast Salads with some small ice cream cups from the freezer;  While Daddy jeff made for Dinner  tea Cumberland pie with steamed veggies ; with fruit cocktail and custard afterwards (Thursday he also makes Dinner if at Suzy’s).   Friday 29th May 2026  was an even earlier start than normal with Suzy and Jeff’s appointment in central Glasgow 10.00  ;  leaving 06.55 and getting actually not too bad 08.55 ; spent till 09.45 in an independent coffee shop in walking distance of Suzy was put at ease just after arriving with a lovely lady doctor by the name of Doctor (Jayne) Harris;  she knew Doc Reynolds by her first name . She explained her earlier visit , and everything  that week too. Another  look under Suzy’s hood she did see her damage; Lisa had previously explained her pain still post triplets Delivery etc AND she is paying  for EVERYTHING; no bills as she had previously pre-paid and booked her Appointments so they will; continue to  charge Lisa’s card on file ; Suzy replied “aah yes’ we’re not in Kansas any more Toto?” looking at Doc Harris and Daddy ; and certainly has a similar sense of humour to Daddy Jeff and Suzy!  With this visit there was nothing for Jeff to do (no sperm sample etc this time);  with both Suzy and Lisa having bloods done earlier in the week we can then indeed  wait for bloodwork; it was intended Suzy or Jeff could pick up printed copies of both NHS blood works around Friday before  Saturday 10.00 appointment a week on Saturday with Lisa; Jeff and Suzy (two Flexi Sitters covering helpers covering that Saturday AND every other Saturday both needed/ one when one needed ; kids pocket money spending shifted to the Sunday .; a  good thing is no days off for Lisa or Jeff indeed; BUT jeff reminded “could your Mum not collect it?” “aah yes she still works there of course!” AND in future we can do all the bloods can all be done there too!   Jeff will be asked to however  produce a sperm sample  on that morning ; so  ideally no sex for 48 hours etc but Lisa did mention your issues and she did indeed mention to me she  currently is pregnant (Suzy saying her Occupied and No Vacancies sign is up!): Lisa carrying Suzy’s  baby will get the usual NHS stuff and Local delivery of stuff and local labour ; while Suzy has fallen for every kid; after the kid (in a  couple of years) Suzy effective looking after  another newborn  ; my baby  and not my own baby  from Lisa’s (or more); Christ knows how many coffees I will need in the way in the future; Suzy said to Dr Harris, after which she shook both hands and wished good luck with everything !  ; and as well to tell Doc R she was asking for her too! Suzy mused before getting back to the car around 11.10; after texting Doc R first “well it is glad to hear everyone is on board and happy to make me another baby of our own ; even if she had NO idea Lisa’s kind offer previous Saturday ; she was indeed REALLY EMOTIONAL; with World Buffet 12.00 to 22.00 her Daddy Jeff (previously paid 6 hours parking knowing this) a couple iced coffee cups (and one Hot Chocolate for Daddy Jeff too) made her happy again! Arriving  at the buffet there  12.05 (they both had a little bit of everything) leaving 13.10; get to  back to Dundee Harris Academy around 14.45  in plenty of time (after Suzy caught up a LOT  of time with on the Motorways and Dual Carriageways; leaving 15.17 to Blackness 15.26 to 15.47; getting back to their family home around 16.15 . On the same note however  ;  Mumtruck 3 was intending to be picked up BUT With Suzy having an early start; they had pre-booked and paid a taxi from  Dundee rail station to their home (69 69 69 Taxis) ; it was indeed gone by their return to home in Dundee. Around 11.00 Lisa left to get her bloods taken; getting back to Suzy’s 12.00;  with no Suzy or Jeff she got Fish and Chips out for the kids lunch on here; Daddy Jeff did dinner to allow Suzy taking a breather ; a couple more tears in her bedroom but calmed down herself and a wee rest  ; (same Jewish kid friendly Chicken Curry and Rice with poppadom’s +  Mango Chutney too AND a selection of Ice Cream’s! )  with Suzy explaining todays’ news and plans next Sat in Glasgow; so will need to move my kids Pocket Money to Sunday ;with that happening every other appointment ;”No problem Mummy” Rose said; “have you been crying???” Knowing she was intelligent; and no point lying to kids or anyone, she said earlier with everything BUT your Daddy Jeff got me a couple of coffees next and I was back to my usual self; and had a wee rest just  now with a couple BECAUSE a lot of emotional moments since Lisa’s kind offer of last Saturday;  I know everyone in here wishes all the best! (Rose thumbs up after that; and  many other family member nods and confirms their well wishes ; Suzy said she was more than happy with everyone’s support ; and she finished off reminding everyone when she starts on new pills; it’s anyone’s guess how she will feel BUT this was previously mentioned Sunday morning; Rose replied “that’s okay Mummy we did not forget”… Suzy INSISTED doing the washing up ; BUT she saw Rose and Barry chatting before calling over Daddy Jeff ;  Suzy finished off her dish before going over to Jeff “What’s going on ; please tell me?” Daddy Jeff told her both kids had suggesting getting a big card in town saying something like Good Luck  / You Got This or something similar  positive so you know we are all thinking of you? Suzy replied that was an AMAZING idea; and a giant four way hug, before returning to the dishes! … Jeff reminded Suzy she should NEVER feel inadequate about being a Mother; you already have 16 kids , 2 grandkids; and now you want more? She agreed followed by some passionate kissing; and more besides (including given her daddy Oral Sex) ; till they fell asleep!   Saturday 30th May 2026  was a bit more straightforward; even after 29 DIFFERENT AND THEN SOME days;  after morning breakfast ; upon arriving in Dundee City Centre (leading Suzy’s  place 10.05 before Dundee City Centre 10.27 they settled on a giant  Good Luck card from Clinton’s Cards (Suzy asking them to wait till home to sign on kitchen table or another similar flat surface) ; as well as Pocket Money spending in Dundee City Centre a Greggs Dundee High Street (Suzy was a Hot  southern fried chicken baguette, coffee and some wedges for herself and a couple hot Yum Yum’s between her and her Daddy); leaving the town 12.55 getting home at 13.15. The card was signed all round; even many of Lisa’s family who were there, and Dinner was pre-made Sweet and Sour chicken and Rice (not Daddy jeffs work) with Fresh Fruit for pudding.  Additionally a reply from Doctor Reynolds that day; yes she knows her well ; a good reputation as me ; not bragging but you know the score. After a discussion included if ; while Lisa is getting most stuff; she has previously contributed to our patients Fertility Funds  ; are you thinking the setting one up? While I know Lisa is paying for most; additional costs of everything these days, mileage and in addition to effectively costs such as the both taking maternity leave for one pregnancy?  I would be chipping in a grand and I am sure Sarah can give you a little bit too? She discussed that lot with her Daddy Jeff,   Suzy’s  Additionally  Fertility Fund (for other costs over and on top of Lisa paying) ; hardly fits  on a cheque line BUT she settled  Susy’s Fertility Extra Fund (her BFF Paying and Carrying her Baby) was the decision ; she said she would try and ring fence one of her Savings Accounts and/or open new one  by that Monday; of course NEXT Tuesday working day 9th with first week helpline next,  seeing her then  BUT would email her the details by this Tuesday ; while Suzy NEVER wants to ask for help, her previous contribution to her patients over the years means that additionally decided it would be best to accept the money…   Sunday 31st May 2026  was similar to previous on Sundays; Suzy s turn Sunday lunch who made Roast Beef; awards meeting 13.00-14.00 for Lisa before she returned to Suzy’s ; getting back to Suzy leaving with  Steve and her kids 14.20  getting Dundee  City Centre 14.35 to 16.05 getting to Suzy’s place  in time for frozen Chicken Nuggets and Chips… as was usual Lisa left Suzy’s home after Dinner. With some online time she found a empty saving account (a few years ago ; some money from patients wanted to chip in just before Rose); she decided that would suffice; emailing that to her personal and work e-mail account… NOW… June… First Month new Helpline. World Cup holiday for Schools with Scotland and all the hype; Lisa pregnancy week 10 to 13, and ; oh yeah; SHE’S  HAVING HER BABY…
    • Someone has been listening to Mel Robbins.
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