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    • Chapter 10: The Ambush Tales of the Sanctuary: Book 1 - Denial – LittleFallenPrincess     “So…” I whispered, breaking the awkward silence as we waited outside Sera’s house in the suburbs, watching it closely from the bushes across the street. “So…” she whispered back. “Are you okay with this plan?” “Wait here until that guy turns up, then you ambush him. I stay here and watch out for backup. Got it.” “But are you okay with it? It means letting them break into your place…” “Yeah… I mean… I’ve got you here with me. My big strong protector…” “You don’t have to, you know…” “Don’t have to do what?” she asked. “Pretend to flirt with me. I’m here because it’s the right thing to do. I don’t expect a date out of this.” “Who says I’m pretending?” she said as she turned to me, grinning. I swear my cheeks turned bright red at that moment, something no one has ever done to me before.   -------------------------------------------------------   “So… umm…” “Go on…” she responded. We had been waiting a good twenty minutes or so, and there was still no sign of that guy or the ‘friends’ he talked about. It was cold, damp, and I could see Sera shivering a bit. “Why does this guy want to break into your place so bad? Do you have something he wants?” “He wants… me.” “Yeah but he could easily do that in public,” I replied. “What's to stop him grabbing you when you go out for groceries?” “I’m good at sneaking around. He probably knows when I go out, but not which path I take.” “Why doesn’t he just break into your house then?” “Protection spells.” “Ah, fellow witch, I take it?” I asked, smiling at the resourcefulness of this very cute girl. “Nah, but I picked up a few sigils here and there. Had to… ever since my…” She trailed off, her words indicating a hint of sadness in them towards the end… “Since what?” I asked, trying to sound a bit more sensitive. But then I started worrying I was being over sensitive or was I under… and then I was worrying more about how I sounded than what she was saying. “Since my parents were murdered.” That snapped me back into the moment. “Oh hun… I’m so sorry…” “Life of a phoenix, I’m afraid…” she said, shrugging. “Ha ha… yeah… I bet…” I’m afraid to say it took me way too long for those words to actually register in my brain, and for it to then process them, because there was an awkward pause before I yelled out. “Wait… WHAT?” I quickly looked around to check if anyone was about to hear that, before realising I was in the clear. “Oh… did he not tell you what I was?” Sera asked, with the straightest face, giving me my answer to my next question, which was going to be ‘you can’t be serious, can you?’ “No! I guess that explains why he’s after you… I assume the rumours are true?” “That phoenix hearts bring everlasting life? Yup.” “And so he wants…?” “My heart, yes.” “Oh…” There was yet another awkward pause. I didn’t know what to say, how to react, anything. Thankfully I was saved by some movement coming from down the street, where we looked to see three men and a woman, all wearing black coats, heading right towards Sera’s house. “Here we go… remember, stay here…” I whispered to her as I steadied my nerves.   “Where the fuck is she?” ‘Chris’ said, looking at his watch, clearly impatient that his prey hadn’t turned up on time. “Oh dear… Did she not come home?” I said, taking him by surprise. As he spun around, I noticed a tranquiliser gun in his hand, which confirmed it all… they wanted her alive. I guess if they shot her dead… she’d just resurrect again, bursting into flames. That’s if the stories are true anyway. Tranq her… move her to a safe location… remove her heart… that’s how I’d do it. If I was a monster, anyway.  “Where the fuck is she?” he asked, panic in his voice. “And why the fuck are you here? Shouldn’t you be…” “Keeping her out of the house so she’d return on her own to a house full of creeps who want to steal her heart?” I replied, shrugging. “Hmm… sorry, I changed my mind.” “That’s fine. We’ll just kill you too, then find her ourselves, bitch.” “Language!” This took him by surprise, and it appeared to have taken his words too. “Clearly your mother didn’t raise you right… maybe she should… start over…” Raising his hand, the one with the gun in it, he aimed it directly at my head. “Fuck you, you fucking dyk-” With a flick of my wrist, he was no longer an issue anymore. Now… I don’t like killing people. I’ve avoided it most of my life. You know this, Nia. I… I’ll always choose a fitting punishment rather than a drastic one. So when he squeezed the trigger… “Bubbles?” he said, surprised, before looking at his gun to realise the sleek design of the tranquiliser gun had been replaced by one that looked more like a kid’s water pistol. That's when he realised his words were muffled. “Wha… wha deh…?” Taking a page from my sister’s book… I thought I’d disarm the guy in a way that fit this deceiving, cruel bastard. Or maybe I just felt like my Mummy side needed a way to express itself… I mean at that point I had come to the conclusion that I was very much into all this stuff, just like my sister. I had already accepted that I was both a little and a Mummy… I just hadn’t had anyone I trusted enough to try it with. So maybe my Mummy side did need to vent a little… With a snap of my fingers, the poor guy was filling the back of his pants, crying like a baby, sucking his dummy, as the world spun around him, making him feel dizzier and dizzier. You’d have been proud of me. “WAAHHHHHHH” he cried, alerting his friends as they came rushing in from the back room. But before they could aim their weapons… they too shared the same fate. Part of me felt bad for them as they rolled around on the floor, crying like babies. So, being the nice Mummy I am… snapped my fingers again…   “Is it safe to come in… I… umm…” Sera said as she walked in, to see me standing over four adults, all dressed in onesies, all with thick nappies wrapped around their waists, all sucking on bottles happily. Okay… I had hoped to have humiliated them and then returned them back to normal before Sera came in… but she caught even me by surprise. “I… thought I told you to wait outside…” “And now I can see why…” she said, before she started giggling. “Is this what the big scary Beatrice does to bad guys?” “I… umm… not usually…” “They look… weirdly adorable actually…” she said, much to my relief. “Really?” “Oh yeah! I mean look at the woman… she looks so happy and…” “Carefree… and blissful… and safe… and protected… and…” That’s when I felt a hand on my shoulder. “Sounds like someone may be projecting…” she whispered in my ear. My cheeks turned red in an instant. My gasket blew. If this was a cartoon, steam would’ve been coming out of my ears and a whistle would be blowing. “I…” “Good to know. I’ll remember that for our date… don’t worry, I’ll keep your secret…" Then she instantly stopped her teasing voice and turned to our four intruders. “So… you four want my heart? Sorry to say, it’s mine. And it’s mine to give to whoever I want…” It was at that point that she turned to me and winked, before quickly turning back. “What do we do with them now?” I asked. “I can’t keep them like this.” “Shame… because they’re so cute! But yeah… I suppose you’re right. I’ll have to move… again,” Sera sighed. “I… could help you find a place…?” “I… I’d love that…” she said, smiling and blushing herself this time. “For now… why don’t I cast a little memory spell…?” “What, make them forget about all this?” “And about you. That you even exist,” I explained. “You can do that? Wow… witches are sooo cool.” “It’s risky… I’d not normally do something like that as it could erase them completely… but for these creeps? Let’s try it.” “And then our date?” she asked, smiling innocently. “I… sure… yes…” Turning back around, she walked up to me, put her hand on my shoulder once again, leaned in closer to my ear… “That’s yes Mummy, to you…”   It took every ounce of willpower to not let my knees give way and to collapse on the floor as a little blushy puddle. She knew my weakness. The one secret I had kept from everyone, my sister included. All because I made some silly rash decision whilst punishing those trying to harm her. I never told my sister because… well… look, we found out early on what we were both into. And we stayed outside of our main circles to prevent us crossing over and it being really awkward due to us being siblings. It was one thing being openly kinky around her, but we kept it vague and distant. Problem was… my circle was the same circle as hers, but she had already claimed it before I got to tell her what my true interest was. Sure, I love maid uniforms… but that’s more of a hyperfixation than a kink. Sure, someone wearing one is hot as fuck, but I just love the various styles of them. Ageplay is my main thing, like Beth. So I stood aside and let her claim it, never telling her the truth that I too shared an interest, though I was very much accepting I was a switch at that point, unlike her, who is only a Mummy. But now someone else knew. Which was scary as fuck… but also… relieving? Like… I was actually okay with her knowing… I mean the way she called herself Mummy… I mean you know what it’s like, Nia, I would’ve done anything for this woman… Anyway, once I cast a memory spell on ‘Chris’ and his goons, I took Sera out on a date. Problem was… word had spread at that point that there was a phoenix, so we cut it short and I let her crash at my place.   We hit it off instantly though. She made me turn all shades of red with her words, I submitted to her… you know how it goes. She was very much into BDSM, having this switchy personality already, and ageplay had always appealed to her though at the time she wouldn't have thought she’d be this into it. This was also the start of the lie… I started dating her in secret, but pretended to date others outside, to avoid suspicion. If I had suddenly changed my behaviour, people would ask questions, so after Sera suggested that I pretend to date others… Using the memory spell that I had used against those who hunted her, I managed to live a double life. Part of the time I was this usual badass who went out and slept around… though in reality I made them fall asleep and they had this amazing dream about us being together in bed. The other half of my life was spent with Sera at my apartment. But after a few narrow escapes… we decided we’d move. Or at least I’d get us our own place, in the middle of nowhere, with a steady portal that allowed me access to and from home whenever I wanted. All this within a month… and everything was going perfectly… Until she died for the first time.   “So… what happened when she died?” Nia asked, fully engrossed in my tale. “I panicked, but she had assured me, once she had started getting sick… that this was normal for her. That it was painful, sure, but she’d only be ill for a little while, pass away, then come back. She also warned me that she might be slightly less… dominant…” “So that’s the whole switchy thing?” “Yeah… Which took me by surprise, despite being warned. Suddenly having this absolutely adorable little girl to take care of… it was a bit of a headspace switch after weeks of being her babygirl…” “So you… adapt to her?” “Yeah, we’re not like a normal switch couple. I adapt for her. I have to though, her headspaces are very much reliant on her rebirth cycle.” “And… are you okay with that? It must be horrible if you’re not feeling particularly domme-y… being forced to be Mummy because it's that month again…” “I deal with it. She’s the love of my life, Nia. She completes me. She’s my whole world. I would do anything for that woman.” “I’ve never heard you talk so passionately about anyone before, not even your sister… she must be special.” “She… she is…” “Then we’re going to get her back!” Nia exclaimed, jumping to her feet like a cat. “Come on, tinklepants… let’s go…” “W… where though? I thought Beth was figuring things out…?” I asked, hesitantly. “She can do that, whilst we follow some other leads…” “I… thank you, Nia,” I sighed, but in relief. “Look, I’m going to tease you until you’re as red as I am… but only once we get your girl back. You’re one of my closest friends, Bea. I would do anything for you. We all would. Now… before we go… Do you need a change?” I sighed in a much different manner this time and walked past the demon, who just stood there, grinning at me. “Hey! Wait up! Don’t waddle off too quickly!”           ===================================================== If you want to read a month in advance (that's 8 chapters), or just want to support me and my writing, you can do so through Subscribestar! Subscribers get 4 weeks (8 chapters) early access to chapters, and exclusive short stories (Nessa's Tale is currently the only available one). ======================================================== I hope everyone enjoys this chapter! Please leave likes and comments and all that fun stuff, I love reading them! If you want four weeks early access to my main story and also soon-to-be exclusive access to short stories, why don't you check out my SubscribeStar?  Thank you to all my subscribers for their support over the past few years! Seriously, your support means the world to me. New chapters of my latest story every Wednesday/Sunday!  Also just a quick note: I don't mind people saving this story for personal reading. But I'd appreciate it if people didn't post it elsewhere, even if you're just suggesting it to other people. If you want to show others, please send them a link to the first page of this post. And it goes without saying, my story is not  to be used in any way to create AI work. Thanks! 
    • @Jamie Rufflepants I would love to see this story continue. Any plans for this? cheers
    • The story has really caught my attention. Designation without genetic regression. It feels so unfair. So wrong. Yet something many ABDL with a sub tendency might long for. The story leaves you with a lot of options. Is Kate turning into a big that just accepts her brothers fate? Or will she try to do something about it? Looking forward to more 
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