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  1. Critiques and Writer's Discussion

    For more in-depth critiques of stories and story writing discussion.

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    Area for Finished Stories. Message Elfy to have your story moved here.

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    For Pictures, Comics and Anything Else Artistic.

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  5. AI Stories

    For any story that uses AI in any significant fashion. See rules inside if you have used AI to decide if your story belongs here.

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  3. What Emma Wants 1 2

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    • I hope he survives the day at school. I fear he may not though! 
    • I started watching because a friend recomended it 15 years ago. Once I finally caught up (3 years ago) I started to read the manga) It will be a very weird feeling when it ends.    Almost forgot about Tintin. I read those comics once every 6 months orso. Really loved the vibe of it and of the cartoon.
    • Great update, and very much worth the longer than usual wait. The worst news for Liam is that now Grace fully bypasses him and goes straight to Millie to get her wishes executed. There are some small inconsistencies in the final part of the update: Millie first tears the pull-ups open after Liam hesitates to undo his trousers, but then the same pull-ups magically go back in place after the cleaning is over; or, Millie disappointdly complaining that Liam "did not say anything, for Christ's sake!" after he voids in the toilet does not seem to fit with what was said immediately before or after; and them Millie just applied the medical grade barrier cream in the bathroom break right before the other guests arrival, but at the next toilet break it's totally gone "aftre hours of friction".
    • Great ending, just kind of disappointed that potentially the best part had to be left to my own imagination.
    • Always a relaxing time 
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