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    • "Or better yet I'll teach you how the crawl." Alice whispered to Madison to get a rattle from the toy box and go to the other side of the room with it, getting the idea Madison did just that, sat down and shook the rattle, Alice then demonstrated how to crawling. Going over to Madison, the site was both ridiculous and adorable watching Alice in her Care Bear pajamas and double padded bottom happily swing this way in that as she called over to Madison who immediately praised her. She then shook the rattle again Madison coaxing her, with a sigh Emily started to do what Alice did, it didn't take her long to get to Madison and Alice. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ As Camilla walked upstairs to get Emily, Alice and Madison she heard giggling from the girls room, slightly opening door a jar she had to cover her mouth to stop herself from cooing as she watched Emily crawled around the floor with Alice and even Madison took part in it. Quickly she took out her phone and took a video of it to send to her girlfriend.
    • Of course. The first change was when Lucas went to bed on the Sunday after moving in. The original text was: The edited text is: The new text does not correct an actual discrepancy, but it fits better with the theme of bedtimes in Chapter 23. The second correction was removal of talk about babysitting. The original text was: The edited text is: Elisabeth and Jonas had only seen Lucas once, so I thought it was too soon for them to ask Lucas to be their babysitter, especially since Line is only 14 months old. Instead, they offer him the job a week later in Chapter 20, and make it a condition that Lucas first try caring for Line while they’re still at home until she’s gotten used to him.
    • I regularly fly in Europe and have never had any issues at all. I always wear at least a discrete pull-up and try to be dry when going through the scanners. I think that the latest body scanners in the UK can pick up my ‘padding’ but it’s never been an issue and I have not (to date) been pulled over. I also always have spare nappies in my cabin bag and again never been subject to additional checks.
    • Alice wanted to start playing tag with Maddison, but when they saw Emilly try to take a few steps and land on her bottom—unable to walk because of the spikes—they sat back down next to her and heard Emilly grumble, "Stupid boots." Alice immediately gave her a hug and said, "It's all part of being a baby; I wore them too. Mommy will probably let you walk if you're holding my hand or Maddison's." ================================== Camilla never imagined this would happen; ever since Emilly had arrived, she had thought it would just be Maddison, but now the universe had granted her wish to have a baby. Having a baby in the house was a new experience, and she didn't want to miss a single moment of it. Camilla realized dinner was ready and went to call the girls.
    • "Oh so Alice was able to tell you that she likes you?" "Emily you promise not to tell Madison I like, like her." Alice said but then Madison gave her little girlfriend's double padded bottom a good hard Pat making her yelp. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Camilla then thought that if things worked out with Ana then she would also have a mini teen, a toddler and a baby, definitely she would need to stock up on diapers.
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