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    • Yeah Sarah is a complicated character and I'm realizing how difficult it to to investigate that authentically because of how much fear there is ABOUT her.  Yay about Kelly!! 💜 💕 Thank yooou 💜 Thank you! 💜 I do love the trio's dynamic 💕 And like I said above.. I am finding Sarah difficult to navigate / showcase / dig into when there's so much hesitation and fear around her. BUT that should be changing soon.  Ahaha re:Axiom... a delightful pattern of Greg's... initiate something, then AVOID FOR CHAPTERS. 😂🫠
    • I feel like my confusion is kinda by design, like, inteded in your writing. Cuz i dunno what's actually happening and the worldbuilding has lots of mysteries that are very well hinted, but nothing is clear yet. It's not a bad confusion, more of a too much unclear mystery and that makes me even more curious. But I'd advise for more clear divides between PoV changes. Helps a lot with readability.
    • 🥺Sofia is sorry... It feels very weird to not have a chapter today. On the positive side of things, Sofia feels like this week might be a good writing weekend. Maybe the 4.3 chapters she needs to write will come quickly!     
    • HAHA yes, spot on 😂  Glad this chapter was less uncomfortable in that way! 😁 💜 But I meant to 🥹 I like giving credit where it's due. I was just SO EXCITED ABOUT MEANIE AUNTIE. I suppose there is merit to the idea that there are so many players in this sandbox that there are likely to be multiple 'creators' of an idea, especially given a staple in the genre, such as a pacifier. See, that's why it's even more important to give credit -- so I can officially declare who I'm ripping from 😆😁💕 Oh also! With all spouses named, though Gael hasn't been 'met', I can upload the last height chart! As always, Adam for scale 😆 (edit 1: Oops fixed - uploaded the wrong one with an outdated / changed name) (edit 2: Also also, I thought about removing the heights because I THOUGHT I kept this story generic enough to account for everyone's preferences, aka whether or not Amazons are our height or Littles are... but I realized I started off Adam's journey with his passport description with a height so... yeah. Oops.)
    • Hey little lamb! Thanks for your interest! Please let me know where your confusion roots! It could help me be a better writer knowing where I loose people!!  and Yes! Crinkle butts stay away from the oven!!
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