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    • Emily and Alice happily cheered wanting to ride on the horses in their room, Alice saying to Emily that there were so many fun games that all three of them could play. When they got into the nurseries Ana smiled as she saw Maddison rocking on the rocking horse giggling and laughing like a little girl. Alice happy giggled along with Maddison, after she was set on the floor Alice went over to the clothes drawer and pulled out a baby bonnet and tied it around her head before asking Madison to play house with her.
    • @Richie boy:  in my opinion, it is better that you find and reply to an old thread than start a new one with a similar subject.  I say good to you for finding an item of interest to you.  Don’t be overly concerned by the comments about reviving an old thread. Welcome to the site.
    • Maddison beamed with joy in her new plaything; she knew just how precious these childlike moments were. Ever since her transformation, Maddison had come to truly value these small instances of affection and happiness. Ana tried to keep Camilla at ease—knowing that if the children misbehaved, they would end up right back in their laps—though she also harbored a slight fear that Maddison might become the target of some roughhousing. Walking over to the playpen, Ana said, sounding cheerful: "Is someone excited to hop on the little horse? Maybe your baby sister is already there—you wouldn't want to spoil her fun, would you?" With that, Ana scooped the girls up into her arms.
    • Madison looked at the rocking horse, she knew she should wait for her sisters but Madison just couldn't wait any longer so she got on the horse and started riding it going back and forth giggling and laughing as she went up and down on it. When Ana came downstairs Camilla was already at the bottom waiting for her girlfriend, after a hug she explained that Emily drank her bottle like a good girl, but also voicing her concerns that Emily and Alice would be up to something the moment they left after lunch for their big date.
    • Emilly, who liked the plan, said, "Let's do it when the nanny is here; that way, it will look like she’s the one who made a mess in the diaper." Both girls laughed, which made Camilla suspect that, before long, the two of them might well be receiving a good punishment. ================================== Maddison receives some affection from her mommy, Ana, who says, "Even though you’re our teenager, we’re still going to spoil you a lot—are you enjoying it?" Maddison replies, "Yes, Mommy, very much." Ana then glances at the little rocking horse and asks, "Do you think we’ll be able to use it today? Will your sisters know how to share?" Maddison says, "I think so." Ana then heads off to fetch the other girls.
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