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    • I wet the bed until I was 15, so if you count that, I was in Goodnites for most of my childhood. I stopped wetting the bed in high school and didn’t wear diapers again until I was 18 when I ordered a pack of Tykables overnights.
    • @LilRugrat your all day win just lost!  I am now the official winner! Wait till tomorrows Win I got a hidden surprise lol.
    • hat was an interesting comment, and I can see the point.  TBH, it the reason I asked about mom’s motivations in the first place, although I commend you for being more direct about it than I was. For me, the why is far more interesting than the what.  It’s why I read episode summaries before I watch a show. I can’t tell if @Elfy is being intentionally vague about either character’s motivations, or it’s not a priority for him.  TBH, that happens in most of the movies that I watch (ie- Star Wars 1-3 & 7-9 versus 4-6). Your comment caused me to think about this story.  While I was in the shower, I came up with interesting hypothesis that might explain Alice’s motivations.  Maybe Alice is avoiding adulthood on a subconscious level, knowing that her mom is going to overreact to her issues.  Part of what makes this story so frustrating (which why I’m connected to it) is that Alice is letting herself be browbeat by her mother. At the beginning, Alice appears to be capable of handling her issues without her mother’s help. She clearly could have used the bathroom at church (or go before the service).  She was within her rights to demand mom not be present when she visited the doctor (minor criticism, but that was an unrealistic medical appointment).  She knew that she was having issues with bladder control, yet still chose to drink.  Worst of all, she did it in situation where her mother was sure to find out. Maybe, on some level, Alice wants to be treated this way, and avoid the responsibility of being an adult.  It’s finally time for her to be a true adult, and she doesn’t want to take on the responsibility.
    • I think there's your answer. If you regularly go home for lunch, that's where you do your business so you don't have to use that nasty restroom, for any reason.
    • Yes and... ew, but yes.  BTW - the reason I'd have to have conversations about it is because it was NOT my original plot idea, though I certainly helped shape it in the incubator stage, so it's not something I could just go hatching with different writers and have everything be coolio. 
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