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    • IMO, that's believable.  Once it becomes known by a few, it's hard to keep a secret. The common trope in these stories is: the threat of being exposed is enough to force the one wearing diapers to do anything they want.  I've used a different approach withh a lot of my stories: diapers get exposed, and it's a big deal until it's not a big deal.   In other words, once kids get it out of their system, they move on to something else.  Eventually, the natural empathy (even teenagers are empathetic) takes over, and kids move on to something else. I think that's likely more realistic than constant bullying over it. I like how Jacob and Olivia interact with each their classmates. It will be interesting to see where this goes.  Right now, Jacob's mom is trying to contain Jacob's attraction to diapers, while for Olivia, it's more practical.  She is old enough now, and I'm sure it's been a problem for her ever since she was 'potty trained'.  For her, diapers are a chance to take a break for those pressures, and I like that idea. I've done some work in behavior therapy (Functional Behavior Assessment), and we've learned: Every behavior has a function. Not to overly simplify it, but comes down to 4 basic needs: Escape, attention, tangibles, or sensory.  With Jacob, it's not escape or tangibles. I think Olivia's function might be escape, since she is escaping the pressure. Jacob's mom is interesting because she appears to be getting something from Jacob's baby time. I've to commend you, you set out to make this a simple story, but you've made the characters complex enough that it's gone beyond that.  
    • Camilla was angry but she kept a cool head, after she walked into the nursery went over to the arm chair and sat down she quickly removed Emily's PJs leaving the girl naked and laid her cross her lap, "Madison can you be a good girl and get Emily's paddle?" Madison nodded her head as she walked over and grabbed Emily's paddle that was situated next to Alice's and quickly walked over with it, "Thank you Madison." Camila said as as took the paddle and delivered the first hard strike to Emily's bottom which made the little adult woman yelp.
    • I have seen more of north shore adult diapers ads or reels.  https://www.facebook.com/reel/1602168081707770
    • Camilla was truly shocked to see Emilly in only her pajamas, without a diaper or diaper cover, trying to push Maddison, who was watching and pleading for help. Camilla, very angry, easily picked Emilly up from the floor and carried her towards the bedroom. Ana had already changed Alice, who was looking for Emilly. Ana decided to change her little snowflake because what was about to happen in that room would be serious.
    • I feel like I'm pretty experienced with leaks and blowouts, thankfully well I have leaked good enough to get my shoes wet, thankfully never messed enough for it. Pretty confident I'm just going home at that point haha.
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