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    • I binged this story so hard I ran out of likes 🥺 I have 2 questions: 28 chapters, most of them quite long, is a real achievement. Do you know how long (word count) the story is now? I've noticed you consistently refer to the protagonist as Lucas and he/him even in POV chapters for characters who do not. It's a very interesting choice, why are you doing that? - Diaper Dimension and "hapless boy turned into helpless princess" are two of my favorite micro-genres. I can't remember if I've ever seen them combined, but Littlest Royal is some of my favorite work in both genres.  I love love looooove Lucas. Most (not all) DD protagonists either avoid the worst of regression by being Special and Clever, or they're tragic victims who get the full firehose and go full baby brain in an instant. Lucas is in pretty much the worst case scenario: no solid foods, full incontinence, physical modifications, increasing hypnosis. But it's all coming so slowly. Each chapter takes a little more from him, bringing him to a new low, but giving him just enough of his old identity to cling to. Your supporting characters are so well-developed and great to read. Hazel and Charlotte have such a complex, fraught dynamic: Charlotte plays into Hazel's powerlessness, Hazel plays into Charlotte's insecurity. At all times you truly get where both are coming from. And both are equally responsible for robbing Lucas' autonomy, transforming him more and more into Lucille.  Leo's gradual transformation from snide conspirator to protective older brother is so fun to watch. I love that Juliette managed to find a way to give Lucas some autonomy again. Angie is slowly developing from a one-note thorn to a real character. Even Alexander's absence from Lucas' life feels very intentional (I suspect Lucas isn't the only kid he ignores). And I love it when other Littles show up: Noah's crush on Lucas is such a fun and unexpected wrinkle, highlighting his forced gender role more than his forced age group. "Peak of the pyramid socially but absolutely devoid of respect and autonomy" is such a delicious dynamic, and you explore it so well. I cannot wait to see what happens next (particularly how Charlotte cooks her baby's brain on iPad).
    • How long  is ok to  wear a wet nappy  for  .I have  been  wearing  nappies  for  the last  4 days  . And  I'm wearing  nappies for around  24 hours  before  getting  checked   is that to long  . I'm not wetting  that  much  in each  nappies  
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