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    • I started to read this just recently, and just got caught up.  It is a good well written story about someone who really belongs in diapers for many reasons.  It seems to be going off in a new direction now, which is maybe not as good.  I was hoping to see his wife cuckhold  him a bit more, but still be there for him.  I would also like to see more of a day care provider be brought into his new home in the new location, someone to keep him in diapers during the day, and push him more into a child like daily life, but still have his wife use him for her pleasures at night. Will be watching for updates!!
    • Wow ... what a great chapter again. Quiet a lot of new information here to process ...  I loved the talk with Chana ... it was quiet insightful .... her deflection, just solidified my opinion, that the snake is Shik (it could just be masterful manipulation and feeding of my bias though) ... and the revelations about the ones she revealed was really interesting if not that much surprising ...  I liked the talk with Boja ... i am looking to that private talk that much more though. The chat with with the shaman was exactly what i generally love the most in stories ... naturally feeling exposition and massive expansion of world building .... it made me want to start a deep dive into eastern cultures ... (too bad i do not have enough time for that) ...  His choice was really touching, made that much more powerful by his reasoning. I really love he feels like part of the family and that he wants to be a part of the family. Though i will have to spend some time rereading and wondering, as it almost seemed, like he made the best choice from the spiritual perspective - choosing the element most missing in the place for his new family. Maybe i am reading too much to it, but the mention of the north placement, the tree being from wood etc. seemed intentional ...  There is too much in this particular chapter, that i have to myself from gushing and theorizing more. Just a few reactions: this made me drop my jaw. I did not read it like that in the previous chapter at all. It does make sense, but i read the transcending death as immortal entity not bound by it ... i really love your writing for make these nuances and different understandings easily possible. these had me cackling out loud ...
    • Something that frustrates me with a lot of onesies are the crotch snaps which chafe seriously badly when walking a lot. I'm quite active so the back zip onesies look good.  disabled-clothing.co.uk seem to have some onesies with the snaps at the belly which might provide some relief if anyone has tried these?
    • Under the glow of Coral Gables on a Friday night and the quiet heat of a Miami Saturday, Sally finds herself pulled between attention and identity, between the life others now see and the one she is still trying to shape for herself. From the unsettling thrill of arriving at Zucca behind the wheel of the M5, to the small private disappointments and victories that no camera can capture, this chapter follows her through a world that is becoming bigger, brighter, and more public by the day. Yet beneath the glamour, something deeper is taking form: the first real outline of her Foundation presentation, where she will have to stand before others with purpose and poise, and the approach of her baptism, a far more solemn step that asks not for confidence, but conviction. As Sally begins to understand that money may open doors but cannot choose what matters, she faces the harder challenge ahead: not just building a future, but getting it right.   Chapter 167 – Getting it Right Sally kept both hands on the wheel, sitting straighter than usual as the BMW glided along the shaded streets toward downtown Coral Gables. The M5 felt different from the Fiesta. Different from the Range Rover. It had weight, presence. Even at barely twenty miles an hour, the car seemed to carry a quiet authority with it, the kind that made other drivers look twice.  And they were looking. And listening. Sally noticed it first at a red light on Ponce de Leon. A man crossing the street slowed down. Another car crept past them, the driver turning his head just a little too long. Then she saw the phone. “Dad,” she muttered under her breath. “Yes?” “People are staring.” Adrian didn’t even look up from the street ahead. “They’re not staring at you.” “They’re staring at the car.” He paused. “Which, unfortunately for you, you happen to be driving.” Sally made a face and eased the car forward as the light turned green. They rolled toward Miracle Mile, where the evening crowd had already begun to thicken. Outdoor terraces were filling, valet stands were busy, and the street had taken on that particular Coral Gables rhythm—slow traffic, polished cars, and people walking as if the night had just begun. A bright purple Lamborghini idled a few cars ahead. Sally stared at it. “That color should be illegal.” Bridget leaned forward slightly from the back seat to see. “Oh dear.” “Right?” Sally said. At that exact moment a yellow Ferrari slid up beside them, its engine rumbling softly. Sally kept her eyes forward. “This street is ridiculous.” Adrian chuckled quietly. “It’s Friday.” She rolled the M5 forward again, smooth and careful, feeling the heavy engine purring beneath her feet. Then she noticed them. Two young guys standing near the sidewalk, cameras hanging from their necks. One of them lifted his camera. Sally felt her shoulders tighten. “Oh no.” “What?” Adrian asked calmly. “Spotters.” The lens turned toward the BMW. Sally tried to look as normal as possible as they crept forward in traffic. Her father casually pointed ahead. “Take the next left.” She nodded, turning the wheel gently as the light turned red again and the car came to a stop. The camera clicked again. Sally winced slightly. “You should have installed tinted windows,” she muttered. Adrian looked at her with mild disbelief. “What do you want, to look like a gangster?” “Privacy,” Sally replied quickly, annoyed. Adrian shrugged, completely unbothered. “We’ve got nothing to hide.” Another camera click. Sally sank slightly lower in the seat. Her father chuckled softly. “Get used to it.” Sally exhaled through her nose and glanced ahead again as Miracle Mile opened up before them, restaurants glowing under warm lights and valet attendants waving cars forward. “Next time,” she muttered, “I’m bringing the Fiesta.” Bridget laughed quietly from the back seat. “Oh no you’re not.” Sally turned the wheel toward the valet stand where Zucca’s entrance glowed warmly on the corner, the M5 rolling forward through the slow parade of Ferraris, Lamborghinis, and curious onlookers. And somehow, despite her best effort to look invisible, the cameras followed. -- The BMW had barely rolled to a smooth stop before a valet attendant appeared at Sally’s door. She hadn’t even had time to put the car in park properly. The man reached for the handle automatically, then paused. The door opened. And he froze for half a second. His eyes moved from the car… to Sally… then back to the car again. The realization registered. Young girl. Driver’s seat. BMW M5. He straightened instantly. “Uh—welcome to Zucca, miss.” Sally blinked, suddenly shy under the attention. The engine turned off quietly as she unbuckled and stepped out of the seat. “Thanks,” she said, offering the keys with a small, polite smile. The valet took them carefully, almost ceremonially. Behind him, another valet had already stepped around to help Bridget out of the rear door while Adrian emerged calmly from the passenger side like a man who had done this a thousand times. Sally smoothed her shirt instinctively and turned— —and spotted the camera. One of the car spotters stood near the sidewalk, phone raised, filming the scene with obvious enthusiasm. When Sally looked his way, the young man gave her an excited wave. For a brief moment she hesitated. Then she smiled. She lifted her hand in an easy salute and gave him a friendly grin. Something about him reminded her of Charlie—same eager energy, the same look of someone fascinated by machines and the stories behind them. The spotter beamed. Behind her, the valet leaned into the BMW to adjust the seat. “Nice car, miss,” he said with genuine admiration. Sally glanced back at the M5 as if seeing it from the outside for the first time. “Thanks,” she said softly. Adrian stepped beside her, resting a light hand on her shoulder. “You did well.” She exhaled, a small laugh escaping her. “I thought my heart was going to explode at that red light.” “That means you were paying attention.” Bridget joined them, adjusting her shawl as the warm evening air wrapped around the restaurant entrance. The glow of Zucca spilled out onto the sidewalk, the murmur of conversation and clinking glasses floating through the open doors. “Come on,” Bridget said gently. Sally nodded. The valet was already driving the M5 away with careful respect, easing it into the line of high-end cars waiting along Miracle Mile. Sally took one last glance back at the street—the Ferraris, the Lamborghinis, the small crowd of curious onlookers and cameras. Then she slipped her arm lightly through her mother’s and allowed herself to be guided inside. For a moment, she was no longer the girl driving the M5. Just a fifteen-year-old heading to dinner with her parents. -- The warmth from the restaurant spilled onto the sidewalk as the door opened. Inside, Zucca was alive with the comfortable hum of a Friday evening — soft Italian voices from the bar, glasses clinking, the smell of olive oil and grilled fish drifting through the room. Sally stepped in beside her parents and instinctively glanced around. She was glad she had chosen wisely. Blue jeans. Her Milano t-shirt — the one Erika had given her — elegant without trying too hard. Just fitted enough to feel grown up, just casual enough to still feel like herself. Perfect for Miami. Her parents, of course, looked a little more polished. Adrian had changed into a lightweight blazer despite the heat, and Bridget carried that effortless dinner elegance she seemed to produce even when claiming she was “just going out.” Even if the restaurant had been a neighborhood mom-and-pop place, they would have looked exactly the same. The hostess stood behind the small marble podium near the entrance, finishing a note in the reservation book. She looked up with a professional smile. “Good evening. Welcome to Zucca.” Her eyes moved across the three of them politely. Then paused. Just slightly. Recognition moved across her face in stages — not dramatic, not surprised. Just the small widening of the eyes of someone connecting something she had seen before. A headline. A photo. A story that had circulated everywhere. Her smile warmed immediately. “Mr. and Mrs. Weiss, I believe?” Bridget gave a friendly nod. “That’s right.” “Welcome,” the hostess said warmly. “It’s wonderful to have you here.” No fuss. No spectacle. Just polished Coral Gables professionalism. Sally noticed the shift immediately. Her eyes flicked toward her parents as they followed the hostess deeper into the dining room. “Do they know us already?” she whispered. Adrian’s voice came back low and calm beside her. “We may have been mentioned when we made the reservation.” Sally narrowed her eyes slightly. “That sounds suspicious.” Adrian allowed himself the smallest smile. The hostess led them past the main dining room toward the terrace corner, where a small table overlooked Miracle Mile through open windows and soft evening air. “We thought you might enjoy this table,” she said. It was perfect. Sally slid into her chair and glanced around again. At a nearby table, a couple had clearly recognized her. The woman whispered something quietly to her husband, who glanced over briefly before catching himself and lowering his gaze again. At another table, a young man who had been holding his phone quickly set it down on the table when Sally’s eyes passed in his direction. Not awkward. Just awareness. Sally exhaled slowly. For the first time she realized something quietly strange. People knew her. Not as Adrian Weiss’s daughter. Not only because of money. Because of her story. Because of the plane. Because somehow the whole country had watched her life change. The hostess placed the menus down gently. “Your server will be with you shortly.” “Thank you,” Bridget said warmly. As the hostess stepped away, Sally leaned back slightly in her chair and looked around the softly lit restaurant again. “This is weird,” she murmured. Adrian raised an eyebrow. “Miami?” Sally shook her head slowly. “No.” She smiled faintly. “Being recognized.” -- They had barely settled when the server appeared with menus and a quiet confidence that matched the room. “Good evening. My name is Matteo. May I begin with some water for the table?” “Sparkling,” Adrian said. “San Pellegrino.” Matteo nodded. “And an Orangina for me,” Sally added, raising a finger slightly. Matteo smiled. “Of course.” As he stepped away, Sally looked around again, still adjusting to the atmosphere. The restaurant buzzed gently — not loud, but full. A warm Friday rhythm. She leaned back in her chair. “This place feels very… Miami.” Bridget smiled. “Miami pretending to be Milan.” Adrian closed his menu halfway. “That’s Coral Gables.” Matteo returned with the drinks, pouring the Pellegrino with quiet precision while placing the Orangina in front of Sally. The glass bottle caught the light. Sally immediately took a sip. “Perfect.” “Shall I bring something to start?” Matteo asked. Adrian nodded. “Yes. Let’s begin with olives.” Bridget added, “And a platter. Salamis, cheeses, Parma ham.” Matteo scribbled lightly. “Excellent.” He glanced politely toward Sally. “Anything else to start?” Sally shook her head. “That sounds perfect.” When the server stepped away, Adrian rested his arms lightly on the table. “This weekend will be our last quiet one for a while.” Bridget nodded slowly. “Roberto begins with the new gardener tomorrow morning.” Sally perked up. “Oh right. Landscaping.” “Yes,” Bridget said. “We need the garden ready next week.” “Foundation kickoff Friday evening.” Sally counted on her fingers. “Then Saturday…” She paused. “…baptism.” Adrian nodded quietly. “In the pool.” Sally smiled at the thought. “That’s actually pretty cool.” Bridget leaned forward slightly. “The church group will be there. And your youth group friends are invited too.” Sally blinked. “Oh.” “Is that a problem?” Adrian asked. “No,” Sally said quickly. “Just… they meet Thursday evening too.” “Same house?” Bridget asked. “Yeah. Same place.” Adrian nodded approvingly. “That’s good.” The appetizer platter arrived just then — glossy olives, thin slices of salami, curls of Parma ham, and wedges of cheese arranged beautifully on a wooden board. Sally leaned forward immediately. “Oh wow.” Matteo placed it carefully in the center. “Please enjoy.” He stepped back politely. Adrian speared an olive. “Now,” he said, “tell me about these stars.” Sally froze. Bridget tried not to smile. “Oh no.” Adrian continued calmly. “How many now?” Sally took a slice of salami to buy time. “…several.” Bridget lifted her eyebrow. “Specific numbers exist.” Sally sighed dramatically. “Fine.” She held up her fingers. “Five this week.” Adrian nodded slowly, clearly impressed. “That’s discipline.” Sally shrugged modestly. “I had to wake up in the middle of the night twice.” Bridget laughed softly. “That’s new.” “Very,” Sally said. “But it works.” Adrian raised his glass slightly. “Progress deserves recognition.” Sally narrowed her eyes playfully. “You’re just trying to justify the Porsche.” Adrian smiled. “The Porsche is absolutely justified.” Matteo returned to take their main orders. Adrian closed his menu. “I’ll have the branzino tonight.” “And a bottle of Barolo,” he added. Bridget gave him a look. “You’re not sharing.” “I know.” Bridget turned to the waiter. “I’ll take the grilled fish.” Matteo nodded and turned to Sally. “And for you?” Sally studied the menu one last time. “The burrata… and the pasta.” Matteo smiled approvingly. “Excellent choices.” Sally took another sip of her drink, watching the warm light of the restaurant flicker across the room. Outside, Miracle Mile glowed softly. Inside, for a moment, it was just dinner. And family. -- Waking with a full bladder was a routine part of Sally’s mornings. With a practiced sigh, she slid out of bed and made her way toward the bathroom. As she sat, her diaper slumped down to her ankles—a light, slightly awkward weight. Though the sensation was still strange for an grown kid, she leaned into the feeling; to her, the transition back to "potty training" felt like a hard-won step toward reclaiming her life. The relief, when it came, was sudden and soothing. But as she let go, the familiar splash of water against the porcelain never followed. Instead, a blossoming warmth engulfed her, the wetness clinging to her skin with a weight that didn't make sense in the bathroom. Then, the world shifted. Sally’s eyes snapped open. She was still in bed, lying on her back, having fallen for the mind’s oldest, cruelest trick. She pulled up the bedsheets and sighed, curling onto her side, the thick padding of her diaper now heavy and warm against her skin. It was comfortable, in a way, but the disappointment stung. There would be no gold star on the calendar today. With a quiet breath, she closed her eyes again; she could live with the setback, as long as she kept moving forward. -- Sally knew she would eventually have to get up. Saturday or not, there were things to do — even for what Theresa insisted on calling a pampered princess. The house was quiet in that particular way that meant morning had already begun without her. Her parents, she guessed, were still in their bedroom. Sleeping in, most likely. Or at least pretending to. Her mother had been moving a little slower these days, and her father seemed determined to protect those quiet mornings before the baby rearranged the rhythm of their lives. Sally lay on her back for another moment, staring at the ceiling. The faint clink of something metallic drifted in through the open window. Voices outside. A truck door closing. Roberto. Her father had mentioned the gardener team was coming this morning. Some new landscaper from a church contact. So the house was already awake. Just not her. She sighed, rolled onto her side, and pushed herself upright. Bare feet found the cool wooden floor as she shuffled toward the bathroom. Fully awake this time. Which meant she noticed the toilet immediately. She stopped in the doorway and eyed it suspiciously. It stared back at her with the same quiet neutrality toilets always had. Sally narrowed her eyes. “You again.” She nudged the porcelain base with her toe. Cold. Smooth. Unimpressed. She made a face at it, then stepped into the shower and turned the water on. The quick rinse wasn’t about cleanliness so much as waking her body up. Warm water over her shoulders, a few seconds under the spray, then out again. She carefully avoided her hair — today was not a hair-washing morning. Five minutes later she was towel-drying her arms, already feeling more human. Shorts. Loose t-shirt. Done. She padded barefoot into the hallway, following the smell that had begun creeping upstairs. Coffee. Real coffee. Not the timid machine kind. Mia’s coffee. By the time Sally reached the staircase she could hear the house properly alive now. Voices outside. A low engine idling somewhere. Roberto speaking to someone in the yard. Sally descended slowly, rubbing her eyes once more. When she stepped into the kitchen doorway the warm air hit her immediately — coffee, toasted bread, and something faintly sweet baking in the oven. Mia stood at the counter, moving with her usual calm efficiency. She glanced up and immediately smiled. “Good morning, Miss Sally.” Sally leaned against the doorway dramatically. “Morning.” Mia eyed her. “You look like someone who negotiated with sleep and lost.” “Sleep cheated,” Sally muttered. She wandered to the coffee machine and poured herself a cup. The first sip brought her fully back to life. She blinked toward the window above the sink. Bright sun. Blue sky. Palm trees moving gently in the breeze. Eighty degrees, easily. Her brain took a second to reconcile the date. End of February. She blinked again. “Wait,” she said aloud. Mia glanced over. “What?” Sally frowned thoughtfully. “It’s the end of February.” “Yes.” “In Hartford it’s probably freezing.” Mia smiled knowingly. Sally slowly lifted her phone from the counter and opened the camera. She framed the shot: bright backyard, palm trees, sunshine. For a moment she considered it. Katrina. Clara. Still in Connecticut. Still in winter. Her finger hovered over the send button. Sally pressed her lips together. Then lowered the phone. “…that would be cruel.” Mia chuckled quietly as she returned to stirring something in a pan. “Very cruel.” Sally took another long sip of coffee and leaned against the counter, listening to the sounds of Roberto directing the new gardener outside. The weekend had begun. And for once, she wasn’t in a hurry. -- Sally was halfway through her croissant when she heard the familiar slow rhythm of footsteps on the stairs. She looked up from the kitchen counter. Her father appeared at the bottom landing, tying the belt of his housecoat with the quiet dignity of someone who somehow still looked executive even before breakfast. “Morning, dad,” Sally said through a mouthful of croissant before remembering her manners and swallowing. Adrian nodded toward her. “Morgen, Liebling. Hast du gut geschlafen?” Sally shrugged lightly. “Nicht schlecht, dad,” she said with a small chuckle. He leaned down and kissed the top of her head in passing before heading toward the coffee machine. The kitchen filled again with the rich sound of coffee pouring. Adrian took two large mugs and placed them on the counter, then reached for the basket of freshly baked croissants Mia had just brought out of the oven. Sally watched him assemble a small plate. Two croissants. Carefully chosen. She raised an eyebrow. “Breakfast in bed?” Adrian nodded, the faintest stiff smile appearing. “She deserves it,” he said simply. “She worked too hard this week.” He lifted the plate and mug together like a small ceremonial offering. Then he paused and glanced sideways at Sally. “Don’t forget to do your chores,” he added with a wink. Sally frowned suspiciously. “As in gardening?” Adrian turned back to her slowly, leaning one elbow on the counter. “As in hosing down the yard,” he said calmly. “The stone steps. The pool edge.” He gestured vaguely toward the backyard. “That is still your job, princess.” Sally made a face. “And then,” Adrian continued smoothly, lifting his coffee, “maybe you can do your own projects.” She sighed but couldn’t really argue. Besides, the power hose was actually fun. The white stone around the yard looked beautiful when it was freshly washed, and if you didn’t keep up with it, moss and little weeds tried to claim the cracks. It was oddly satisfying blasting them away. Mia appeared beside her again with another croissant already buttered. She placed it firmly on Sally’s plate. “This is for energy,” she said. Sally blinked. “I already had one.” “You will need it,” Mia replied calmly. Then she pointed gently toward the bright backyard beyond the glass doors. “And use a hat.” Sally followed her gaze. The sun was already blazing across the pool and stone patio. “It’s already hot.” Sally sighed dramatically and picked up the croissant anyway. “Yes, ma’am.” -- The sudden blast of the power hose felt fantastic. Sally stood barefoot on the white stone patio, leaning slightly into the pressure of the jet as she swept the water across the surface in long practiced arcs. She angled the stream carefully so the debris would slide away from the pool instead of into it. The stone darkened instantly under the spray, clean paths appearing wherever the water passed. Cutoff jeans. Loose t-shirt. Black Gulfstream cap. She almost wished she was wearing a Goodnite – water always made her want to pee. Strands of loose hair had escaped the cap and stuck to her damp temples. Sweat rolled slowly down her forehead and along the back of her neck, but the mist from the hose cooled her every few seconds. She paused, released the trigger, and reached for the bottle of mineral water sitting on the edge of the steps. A long sip. Then back to work. Beyond the patio she noticed one of the new gardeners moving slowly along the hedge line, gathering dry leaves and branches into a large plastic bag. The bag dragged along the grass as it filled. Sally watched him for a moment. There was something oddly satisfying about it — both of them working in parallel, each clearing their own piece of the yard. Only she had the advantage of the cooling spray drifting around her. She resumed the sweeping motion of the hose, guiding the water across the stone. The gardener moved forward. Sally moved forward. The bag grew heavier. Her arms grew slower. Eventually she looked up to acknowledge him with a quick nod. Then she froze. The young man lifted his head at exactly the same moment. Dark complexion. A faint shadow of hair along his chin. A ponytail damp with sweat. Alejandro. He blinked. “Sally?” “Alejandro,” Sally said. Not a question. Just recognition. He broke into that easy smile of his — the one that always reminded her faintly of Antonio Banderas. “I saw someone with the hose,” he said, pushing a strand of hair off his forehead. “I didn’t realize it was you. I mean… I knew it was your house, I just didn’t expect…” He gestured vaguely toward the hose. Sally gave a crooked smile and wiped sweat from her cheek with the back of her wrist.  “I do chores,” she said. “I earn my keep.” Alejandro nodded slowly, recovering. “Yeah…” He looked around the yard again, then back at her. “Yeah, you do.” Movement to the side caught Sally’s attention. She turned her head. Diego stood near the truck parked by the driveway, arms crossed, watching the progress of the work crew. Sally recognized him immediately. Her youth group host. Alejandro followed her gaze and chuckled quietly. “My uncle,” he said. “I work with him when I’m not at school.” Diego noticed them talking. His eyebrows lifted slightly. He waved at Sally with an easy greeting, then pointed at Alejandro with a familiar gesture that translated clearly into: back to work. Alejandro sighed softly and lifted his hands in surrender. “Sí, jefe.” He turned back to Sally with an apologetic half-smile. “See ya.” “Nice to see you,” Sally said, giving a small wave. Alejandro grabbed the heavy bag again and dragged it toward the truck. Sally watched him for one second longer than necessary. Then she turned back to the stone patio, lifted the hose, and squeezed the trigger again. The jet of water roared back to life, sweeping across the bright white surface. Her heart was beating fast. And it definitely wasn’t from the work. She was suddenly glad she wasn’t wearing her Goodnites. -- Sally pushed the glass door open with her shoulder, slipping back inside with the faint scent of sun, water, and warm stone still clinging to her skin. Her bare feet left soft, damp prints across the floor as she crossed into the cool shade of the house. “Mission accomplished,” she murmured to herself, brushing a loose strand of hair from her cheek. She had barely reached the base of the stairs when Bridget appeared, descending lightly, one hand grazing the railing. She looked… rested. Soft. Composed in that effortless way that made everything around her feel calmer. “Chores all done, honey?” Sally nodded and stepped in without hesitation, leaning into her mother’s side as Bridget kissed her forehead. Her hand moved instinctively, resting gently against Bridget’s stomach. It was becoming second nature now. A quiet check-in. A connection. “Forced labor, yes,” Sally said, tilting her head slightly. “Very intense working conditions.” Bridget smiled, amused. “I’m sure.” Sally exhaled and leaned back, rolling her shoulders. “But I want to go to the studio.” Bridget’s eyebrows lifted. “Forced labor inspires you to paint?” Sally shook her head, already turning slightly toward the stairs. “Not paint. Not today.” She made a small face. “It’s… messy. I need to organize some stuff. It’s kind of turned into chaos.” Bridget nodded knowingly. “That happens.” She stepped aside, giving Sally space. “Well, the day is all yours.” Footsteps sounded again behind them. Adrian appeared, this time dressed — jeans, pressed t-shirt, casual but still unmistakably put together. He looked like a man who had decided to relax, but only halfway. “Productive Saturday?” he asked, glancing between them. Sally shrugged, halfway up the first step. “Half and half.” She paused, turning slightly. “I’ll grab some things from my room.” A small grin tugged at the corner of her mouth. “And I’ll be in the studio if you need any more forced labor.” Adrian crossed his arms lightly, watching her. “I’ll keep that in mind.” Sally nodded once, satisfied, and continued up the stairs — already mentally shifting from sunlit chores to quiet, messy creativity waiting for her just above the garage. -- Sally stood in front of her closet, one hand on her hip, the other already halfway through a drawer she had opened without thinking. “Okay… what do I actually need?” She pulled out an old t-shirt — soft, worn, perfect for paint — and tossed it onto the bed. Then a pair of loose shorts. Practical. Comfortable. Studio-approved. A small pile began to form. She moved with quiet purpose now, assembling a version of herself that belonged upstairs, above the garage — not the girl of dinners and meetings, but the one who lost track of time with a brush in her hand. Her pencil case came next. “That definitely belongs there,” she murmured, dropping it onto the pile. A couple of blank sketchbooks followed. She flipped one open briefly, ran her fingers across the untouched pages, then closed it again. “Soon.” Her gaze drifted downward. The neat rows on the closet floor caught her attention. Diaper packages. Stacked. Organized. Almost… excessive. Sally made a face. “Katrina…” The care packages. And her mother’s additions — the more clinical, efficient ones. She crouched down and tapped one of the packs lightly. “So many.” For a second she just looked at them, thoughtful. Then she exhaled. “Well… might as well decentralize.” She reached for one of the softer packs — the LNGU ones, the ones with the absurdly cheerful little animals printed on them. She held it up and smirked. “Musical zoo edition.” Adorable. Also… comfortable enough. “Studio stash,” she decided. She gathered everything into her arms — clothes, sketchbooks, pencil case, and the colorful package tucked under one elbow. Balancing the pile carefully, she stepped out into the hallway. The house was quiet. Perfectly quiet. Outside, she could faintly hear the distant rhythm of work — voices, the low hum of tools, Roberto somewhere near the garage. She moved lightly down the stairs and toward the side entrance, slipping out without drawing attention. The garage door was open. Roberto stood beside one of the cars, methodically washing, his movements precise and almost ceremonial. Water glided across polished metal, reflecting the bright Miami sun. Sally slowed instinctively. Stealth mode. She tiptoed past the cars, hugging her pile closer, careful not to interrupt the sacred ritual of Roberto and his machines. Up the narrow stairs. Step by step. Her studio. Her space. She pushed the door open with her shoulder and stepped inside. The familiar stillness greeted her. Canvas. Paint. Light. And the unfinished work waiting where she had left it. Sally set her things down on the table, letting the pile collapse into a small, controlled mess. Her eyes moved immediately to the painting. She knew exactly what it needed next. Where the color had to deepen. Where the detail would take hours. Where the exhaustion would come before the satisfaction. But her chest felt… restless. Not settled enough. Not quiet enough. She exhaled slowly. “Not yet.” She turned instead, opening the small cabinet in the studio bathroom and placing the colorful diaper package inside. Tucked away. For later. She closed the cabinet gently and leaned back against the counter for a moment, listening to the faint, distant sounds of life below. Then she glanced back toward the canvas. A small smile formed. “No stars required up here,” she murmured softly. She pushed herself off the counter. “In here…” A quiet breath. “I’m the star.” -- Sally stepped out of the studio with a quiet sense of satisfaction. It wasn’t finished. Not even close. But it was ready. She paused at the top of the stairs for a moment, mentally adding to her list. “A sofa,” she murmured. “Something soft… not too big.” She stepped down carefully. “A small fridge. Drinks. Definitely drinks.” Another step. “And better lighting. Warmer.” By the time she reached the garage floor, she had already started arranging it in her mind — not just as a workspace, but as a place people could step into and stay. “Good morning, miss Sally,” came Roberto’s voice. She turned. He stood beside her Ford Fiesta, pressing a drying cloth carefully along the hood with the kind of attention usually reserved for much more expensive cars. Sally’s face lit up. “My car.” Roberto smiled. “You have your car back. Thank you for letting us use it.” He leaned slightly closer, lowering his voice with a conspiratorial tone. “Mia was tempted to just steal it.” Sally laughed. “Oh. Do you have a car already?” Roberto gestured toward the side of the driveway. A modest grey Nissan Sentra sat parked neatly in the shade. “Mia says it’s too flashy,” he said with a straight face. “But it will do.” Sally raised an eyebrow. “Too flashy,” she repeated dryly. Then she glanced back at the Fiesta, running her fingers lightly along the clean surface. “I’m glad you liked it. I was starting to miss it.” She looked up at him again. “And thank you for washing it.” Roberto gave a small nod. “Anytime, miss Sally.” Sally turned toward the house, but her steps slowed as she noticed movement near the pickup truck. Alejandro. He was loading tools into the back, his movements steady, efficient. She hesitated for half a second. Then walked over. “Finished?” she asked. Alejandro looked up and smiled immediately. “Never finished,” he said. “But it’s a start.” He wiped his hands on his jeans and glanced around the yard. “My uncle Diego will be back during the week. Some trimming, flowers… details.” His eyes swept the property again. “You have a nice house.” Sally shifted slightly, suddenly a bit shy. “Thanks.” There was a small pause. Then Alejandro tilted his head slightly. “I hear you’re getting baptized next Saturday.” Sally’s gaze dropped for a moment, then lifted again. “Yeah.” She smiled, softer this time. “And you’re all invited. The youth group…” Alejandro nodded. “We’re meeting Thursday. Same place. Six o’clock.” Sally’s smile came easier now. “I’ll be there.” Alejandro’s grin turned a little crooked. His uncle was approaching. “I’ll see you there, then.” He reached for a hedge cutter and slid it into the truck bed. Diego walked past them, offering Sally a warm nod. “Hi, Sally. Nice to see you.” He chuckled lightly. “Megan said to say hi. She specifically told me to tell you.” Sally laughed. “Tell her hi back.” She glanced between them. “Alejandro says there’s youth group on Thursday…” Diego nodded. “Yes. We heard you had a busy weekend coming up, so we moved it to a weekday. Happens sometimes.” Sally tilted her head, pleasantly surprised. “That’s… really thoughtful.” Diego waved it off. “Not at all. The girls enjoy having you around.” He gave her a knowing look. “Besides, you’ve got a bit of a fan club.” From the other side of the truck, Alejandro smiled without looking up. Sally felt the warmth rise to her cheeks. “I don’t know about that,” she said quickly. “I’m just… me.” “And that’s good enough,” Diego replied simply. He clapped a hand lightly against the side of the truck. “We’ll get going. Have a great weekend.” Sally nodded. “You too.” Diego climbed into the driver’s seat. Alejandro followed, closing the passenger door with a solid thud. The engine started. Sally stepped back slightly as the truck rolled out of the driveway and disappeared down the street. She stood there for a moment longer than necessary. Then turned back toward the house. Weekend. Still unfolding. -- Saturday wound down exactly the way it should. Unhurried. Warm. Unremarkable in the best possible way. They gathered by the pool just past noon, the sun sitting high but softened slightly by a light breeze coming off the water. The stone Sally had washed that morning now gleamed clean and bright, almost reflecting the sky back at them. Lunch was simple. Grilled chicken, fresh salad, bread, fruit. Nothing elaborate. Everything good. Sally sat on the wide upper step of the pool, her feet submerged, toes moving lazily through the water. It was warm, but not quite warm enough to tempt her into a full dive. This was better anyway — half in, half out, suspended between effort and rest. Adrian sat nearby in a low chair, sleeves rolled, plate balanced casually on his knee. Bridget rested under the shade of the umbrella, one hand absentmindedly over her stomach. “For the record,” Sally said, swirling the water with her foot, “this is the perfect temperature for doing nothing.” Adrian nodded. “Efficient.” Bridget smiled. “You’re practicing for next week.” Sally groaned softly. “Don’t remind me.” Adrian raised an eyebrow. “Foundation kickoff, Friday evening. Key Biscayne.” “Then Saturday… baptism.” She glanced at her mother. “All of us.” Bridget met her gaze and nodded gently. “Family. Friends.” “Two events,” Sally added. “Connected… but not the same.” Adrian leaned back slightly. “Different meanings. Same importance.” Sally let that sit for a moment, then splashed the water lightly with her heel. “Also… I have a request.” Bridget’s eyes lit with amusement. “That sounds formal. And dangerous.” Adrian took a sip of his drink. “Proceed.” Sally straightened a little, suddenly businesslike. “My studio.” Adrian made a small gesture. “Go on.” “It needs a sofa,” Sally said. “Not big. Just… comfortable. For sketching. Or if someone’s there.” Bridget nodded slowly. “Reasonable.” “A small fridge,” Sally continued. “For drinks. Maybe snacks.” Adrian tilted his head. “Functional.” “And…” Sally hesitated slightly. “Some extra lighting. Warmer. Not the overhead kind.” Bridget glanced at Adrian. Adrian looked back at Sally. “Anything else?” Sally thought for a second. “Maybe a few things for the bathroom. Towels. Storage.” A small pause followed. Adrian set his glass down. “Approved.” Just like that. Sally blinked. “Wait. That’s it?” Bridget smiled. “Not quite.” Sally narrowed her eyes slightly. “Of course not.” Adrian leaned forward slightly, his tone calm but firm. “You will research everything.” Sally nodded slowly. “Okay…” “Select properly,” he continued. “No impulse decisions.” Bridget added gently, “And you send the list to Theresa.” Sally sighed, but there was a smile underneath it. “So… homework.” “Responsibility,” Adrian corrected. Sally leaned back on her hands, letting the sun warm her face. “Money’s easy,” she murmured. Bridget glanced at her. “Yes.” Sally turned her head slightly. “Getting it right isn’t.” Adrian gave a small nod. “Exactly.” Sally let her feet drift in the water again, slower now. The list was already forming in her mind. Sofa. Fridge. Lighting. Details. It wasn’t about buying things. It was about building something that made sense. She smiled faintly to herself. “Okay,” she said quietly. “I’ll do it right.”
    • Great job on this chapter! I love how therapy went and it was so needed right now. I wish Amber could hear how scared and how much Paul was really going through
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