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    • for a moment I thought this story was back.  
    • Merci! I hope you have finished reading the chapter. Thank you for your words, It's nice to have Sally back and be able to reimagine the story. Yes, technically a new book, but in the same story. I didn't want to lose the thread and the context that comes with it. Sorry for the long chapter! Oskar is almost home, and yes, some ideas are coming up for Sally so she can enjoy the summer. True! Sally always finds her way back. I hope you enjoy the story. I have loved your contributions!
    • My current wetness indicator is the expanded SAP bulge in my wet morning diaper while my messy indicator is the squishy feeling in my diaper and my nose. I am very good at knowing how wet I am and when I need to change before I leak.
    • I am very very wet and messy this morning in a Kiddo Premium Night diaper. The front of my diaper is bulky and expanded from wetting during the night while the bottom of my diaper is warm and squishy sitting here with my poopies in my diapies. Both sensations are radically satisfying and I just wet a little more sending a pee pee shiver throughout my body. ahhhh!! Today is also diaper delivery day for Kiddo's Teddy Ultra 2 tape diapers. I have never tried them so I am looking forward to the new diapers with bated breath and a wet, messy diaper. I ordered the Teddy Ultra diapers on Monday with delivery from Fed Ex scheduled today, great service, and the reviews I have read, a great diaper, but I will be conducting my own rigorous wetting and messing protocol.
    • Chapter 8: Lunch Tales of the Sanctuary: Book 2 - Anger – LittleFallenPrincess     A week later…   “MAMA?” I cried out through the Manor. Then my phone buzzed. Mummy: Baby, the Manor is huge. I’m not shouting back, I’ve told you this over and over again. Just text me or come find me in my office if you need me. What is it? Nia: But where’s the fun in that? Mummy: What do you want, babygirl? Nia: Dummy. Can’t find it. Mummy: Have you looked in your nursery? On the sofa? In the movie room? Kitchen? Nia: Yup. Yup. Yup. Yup. Not there. Can’t find it. Mummy: We’ll just get you a new one. You can go a day without it, right? I’ll order one now so it arrives tomorrow. Nia: But I want it noooooooooow! It was at that point that the doorbell rang. Mummy: Mind answering that, baby? True, I was technically closer to the front door, being in the enormous main hall of Vic’s Manor. And I was already up and walking about. But as I looked down, I knew there was no way I should go answer the door. Nia: Can’t. Mummy: Why not? Nia: Nakey. Except nappy. Mummy: If you’re like that, why aren’t you in my office? Don’t you think your Mummy should get to appreciate such a wonderful sight? Nia: Get the door and we’ll talk. Mummy: This is what I get for wanting to marry a brat. Fine. I’ll answer the door. Go hide somewhere, maybe get changed too, it could be one of our friends. But you owe me a cute, mostly nakey baby demon on my desk whilst I work tonight… The doorbell went off again. “I’M COMING…” Vic cried out, as she rushed from one end of the Manor to the other, whilst I slinked off into the shadows… into my nursery to get changed.   After putting on something a bit more… age appropriate (though others, like Mama and Bea would argue is the opposite for me…), just a simple black sundress, I put on my glamour to appear human and dashed back downstairs to see who was at the door. Running across the balcony, skidding across the floor as I tried turning on the spot, I dashed forward, down the large staircase, jumping onto the bannister in mid-air and doing a sick slide down the whole thing, landing on my feet at the bottom. I bowed and waved my arms as if I was being cheered on and celebrated… but there was no one to witness my cool little thing. Fine. I’ll cheer myself then. Go Nia! Sighing, I calmed myself down a bit before heading towards the front door, where I quickly found Vic still standing there, talking to whoever it was that called by. I wasn’t quick getting changed, by any measure, but I was surprised they were still talking by the front door. “Hey Vic,” I called out. “Who’s-” Vic moved out of the way, turning around to face me… revealing… “Hey sis!” “Gabriel? What are you doing here?” I asked her, still wondering how she looked so glamorous and immaculate no matter what she’s doing. Her white coat, her white slacks, even her hair didn’t have a single issue. No creases, no loose ends, nothing. Not even a speck of dirt. “Here to see my sister, duh! And to ask her out for lunch.” “I was just chatting to Gabriel. Your sister is so lovely,” Vic said to me, smiling warmly. “Thank you, Victoria,” Gabe replied, beaming with happiness after the tiny bit of praise my fiancée gave her. Typical Gabriel. Even more of a slut for praise than me… and that’s saying something. “Well I’m busy with wedding planning, but Nia isn’t required for any of the things I have to organise today, so if you want, sweetie, you could go have fun with your sister. Have a nice lunch. I’ll even cover the bill.” “I… sure…” I replied, confused by this sudden change in plans. I was originally planning on lazing about the Manor in just a nappy, watching some cartoons, bothering Vic and teasing her. But I guess it was nice to spend time with my sister, just hanging out, catching up after millenia of not speaking. Sure, we’ve spoken since, but it was only Christmas and the other week when I called her to the Sanctuary to talk about my wings situation, we’ve not actually spent any time together just the two of us for fun. “Where did you want to go?” “I was thinking about that cafe in the city. I think someone recommended it… Teles’ place, right?” Gabe suggested. “Ah yeah. Sure. We can go there.” “Unless you had somewhere else in mind?” “Nope. The cafe is great.” “Fantastic! Ready to go?” I nodded, before turning to Vic. “I’ll be back later, babe. I’ve got my phone on me if you need me…” “Have fun, take your time. You haven’t hung out with your sister since Christmas, so enjoy it!” “I… uh… yeah… okay, I love you, byeeeeee!” I said, quickly rushing out, grabbing Gabe’s arm and pulling her along the driveway forcefully. “Still haven’t told her, huh?” “Shush. Don’t say a word of anything to her.” “I won’t. Promise. But you really should-” “Gabe, I appreciate you wanting to help. But I’ve had it up to here with people telling me what I should do.” “Fine. Just give me a heads up when it all blows up in your face, so I can prepare some popcorn…” Gabe grinned at me. “You’ve changed since I was last in Heaven. You’re much sassier…” “And you’re much brattier. Which is funny, because you were the biggest people pleaser in Heaven. Daddy’s goodest girl. It’s what got you cursed in the first place, with you seeing what was happening to Lucifer and feeling sorry for her.” “I still don’t regret it. What Dad did to her was wrong.” “I’m not here to argue, Nia. Just here to take you to lunch.” I took a deep breath, and let go of all the pettiness that was stored up inside, waiting to explode. Because I have learned not to be petty anymore. At least… less so. I’m not the brat I used to be. I think. Maybe. Fuck… I don’t even know that. I don’t know who I am anymore. I’m a shadow of my former self. First I was Niazriel the angel, the good girl, the people pleaser. Then I became Niathuxzon, Hell’s biggest brat. Then I came to Earth and Vic ‘tamed’ me… and I’m not the brat I once was… but I’m still not the ‘good girl’. I am a good girl… for Vic… because she gives me praise and headpats and I love her… but I’m not a good girl. I think. Maybe. I’m sort of half way between an angel and a demon. Between a brat and a good girl.  And it’s screwing with my sense of identity. So when my siblings or people who knew me in Hell start to talk about how I used to behave… I get pissed off. Because I’m not that person. But also… I am. But not quite. Fuck. At least I’ve learned how to let go of things for the time being. Otherwise I’d have ruined a bunch of friendships with people by letting all my emotions burst out. “Fine. Let’s go. How are we getting there? I can go back and grab one of Vic’s cars. Unless you suddenly took up driving…” I joked, knowing there was no way in Heaven Gabe would take up driving. “I thought we’d fly there…” “Nope. Nooooope. No. No. Not at all. Nope.” “Niaaaaa…. Whyyyyy not?” “Because… if anyone sees me land outside Teles’ place… my secret is out there for all to see.” “Then we’ll land on a rooftop or in an alleyway nearby. Come on… I bet you haven’t even tried your wings out since you got them back! Let your big sis give you a few lessons…” “Actually…” Gabriel stopped in her tracks, turning and looking at me, with the biggest disappointment on her face. “Wait… what? You’ve already flown? When? How?” “With my friend.” “Who? Is she another angel? Bird person? Don’t tell me Lucifer flew with you…” “She’s… something. And it’s not our sister, I promise. And we had a lot of fun. So fine, I’ll fly there. But we land in an alley a few streets away, okay? I’m not having anyone recognise me when landing.” Gabriel clearly looked upset that I hadn’t allowed her to be the one to give me flying lessons again, that it was stolen from her by Jen. But it was clear that this lunch was more important to her than that, so she shrugged it off, putting on her happy face once again (though it was clear she was 100% faking it), and looked back to the Manor. “I think we’re out of view. Ready?” she said, pulling out her dazzling white wings, much like mine. I nodded, unfurled my wings, and launched myself upwards, with my sister following just seconds later.   I landed in an alleyway a couple of streets away from the cafe, because I’m not having anyone recognise me whilst flying. Not that many of my friends come here or even very often… but you never know… Susie occasionally pops in for a coffee when she needs some time away from the Sanctuary. Apparently it was one of the first places she came when she got resurrected by Beth. She told me the story a while ago, but I only remember bits of it, it involved getting attacked by a hunter and stuff. It sounded cool at least, though I found it a bit weird that the place her and Lucy were attacked ended up being a fond memory for her. But hey… given our lives and our interests and what’s happened to all of us… I can’t judge. My Mummy tried to end the world. We all have weird quirks. Gabe landed a few seconds later, adjusted her immaculately perfect coat, then smiled at me. “Ready?” Walking in silence to the cafe, the tension was a bit… awkward. And I hate awkward moments like this. I wanted so badly to make a joke or lighten the mood, but from what I remember, my sister is lovely… but she’s also a bit serious. Not all the time, but it’s clear now is not one of those times, as she was definitely in a rush to be somewhere by the pace of her perfect footsteps. And just as I was about to open my mouth, just as we reached the cafe, I thought it was safe to say something without her leaving… my mouth was left open as I stared at the judgemental face staring back at me from a mostly empty table at the back of the cafe. I stopped in the doorway, grabbed my sister’s arm, stopping her in her tracks, and making her face me. “What’s he doing here?” I asked. “He’s joining us for lunch… oh, did I not mention it? Oops…”  she grinned. “You have a terrible poker face, Gabriel.” “I told you… he probably knows more about the curse than anyone. He’s Dad’s right hand.” I thought back to the promise I made with Jen… and I hated that I was a woman who kept her promises. Just for once I wish I could be the brat most people see me as. But if I make a promise… I’m like my sister, Lucifer… I can’t back out of a promise or deal. Jen won the race… I promised I’d talk to Michael. If I ever saw him. And now here he is. I was hoping I wouldn’t run into him for maybe another… millenia? But no. Not even a month. A week. That’s it. And now I’m going to have to walk over there, suck it up, and be… nice… to my brother. Eww. “Fine. But if he starts acting like a dick…” “Then you can kick his backside or leave. Just… try for me? Please?” Obviously I’m not going to tell her there’s no way I’d do it for her… not when she and I still have a rocky relationship. She thinks now I’m getting my memories back that we can go back to how it used to be, before the fall. But those memories reminded me… she was on the other side of that conflict. She backed Dad. Not once did she stand up for Lucifer… or even me. She watched silently as we got turned into demons. So no, I won’t do this for her. I’ll do this for Jen because I promised her, and for me, because I want some fucking answers to Dad’s bullshit.         ===================================================== If you want to read a month in advance (that's 8 chapters), or just want to support me and my writing, you can do so through Subscribestar! Subscribers get 4 weeks (8 chapters) early access to chapters, and exclusive short stories (Nessa's Tale is currently the only available one). ======================================================== I hope everyone enjoys this chapter! Please leave likes and comments and all that fun stuff, I love reading them! If you want four weeks early access to my main story and also soon-to-be exclusive access to short stories, why don't you check out my SubscribeStar?  Thank you to all my subscribers for their support over the past few years! Seriously, your support means the world to me. 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