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    • I'm sure this statement is full of sarcasm, coming from you For those not in-the-know, the technology exists (nuclear reactors), but the politics precludes any reasonable attempt here in Australia to even think about spending any money on determining whether such tech would be possible, let alone actually build one.  
    • "So, if I offered, then you would jump at the chance?" She scoffed, hand on her hip. It was a dangerous game she was playing...She just didn't know it yet. She was CLEARLY teasing, she thought it was OBVIOUS! But clearly, it wasn't as obvious as she thought. 
    • Yeah they sure are absurdly confident. You'd think making sure not to have any cameras present at their meetings would be a no-brainer 😄
    • “It’s not that I’m melting at the chance!” Louise explained. “I’m simply that if the opportunity was presented to me, I would simply give it a try. That way I can know if it is something I truly want for myself. You’re blowing this out of proportion!” She argued, being equally unproductive. This couldn’t continue any longer!
    • Emotional Response: To misappropriate a Grinch quote; I "Hate, hate, hate. LOATHE ENTIRELY!", Harley! I get why she needs to be here. I get her purpose in the story, but so. many. damn. alarm bells! like a Dommie who says "you're too little to make choices" and it isn't to deepen the scene in a Roleplay but, rather they think the CG Role is getting to unilaterally set the limits of a scene. (the R.A.C.K. & S.S.C. red flags in my head are going nuts over her)    And Her talking to Amber Like Paul's "Wittle Fwend"! Rwar! no...I...grrr!  Amber leaving Paul in that moment was the Dumbest...Most human, and honestly, most realistic thing that could happen but... bad Amber! ** squirt bottle ** glad Savanah is back on scene. Let's hope she is as "Savvy" as her nickname!🤪 I think her providing a medical style care is a bioethics minefield for a romance. (I say that as someone who dated CNAs responsible for providing direct care to me in my 20's) still I foresee a CG war over Paul with Bryan and Lilly backing Harley. I think my theory with Paul & Amber holds out still! Reader Response: superb! the characters you write feel real, whole, and living. They breathe. You are a powerful writer.  
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