Cute_Kitten

For closely working off an existing work, it's always best to have the author's permission if you can. Now, if the story is like 20 years old, the author hasn't been posting or been seen around in those 20 years, then I'd say it would be okay to do take that story, make a clear note that Author X wrote the story, and you're just continuing it, cleaning it up, etc. Current authors with current works might not be too thrilled with someone just taking their story and rewriting/ continuing it, etc. I know of one author who wrote a popular story, and a few years later they caught someone writing a sequel to that story. Author was not amused- they contacted the site the sequel was on and asked it to be taken down, since the author had not given permission for their work to be messed with. So, in a nutshell, is it okay? Sure, it's okay if you can get author's permission (or if it's a very old work and author has been long gone from the diaper scene)

Thank you for commenting! I'm blushing! I'm really glad you're enjoying the story so far. Thank you for commenting. I'm glad to hear Chloe is relateable

I wear the ABU solid color onesies. The cotton is thick and soft and the top looks like a regular t-shirt while the crotch is nice and wide to fully cover my diapers and prevent diaper sag. https://us.abuniverse.com/product/abu-diapersuit-color/

The Rearz Inspire Incontrol are one of my favorite diapers. I've gotten through 10-12 hours out of the house without needing a change. Some of my other favorite plain diapers are the Dry 24/7 and the ABU Ultra (plain version of the ABU Peekabus). Crinklz are very good, about on par with the Dry 24/7s but in my experience the Rearz hold a little more. Tranquility ATNs have leaked on me a few times during the day. Though as others have stated, the amount of fluid in and fluid out also plays a role in how long a diaper can last.

I wear printed AB diapers at home, but I prefer plain white for going out. Plain purple is a nice change though

I like the tips for cutting or for pulling it down like a pullup. I'm not sure a diaper would be the first explanation for a noise that would jump to someone's mind. Baby diapers today are cloth backed with velcro tabs.

Travelling is usually fun. I remember when I spent part of my senior summer in highschool in Germany- we also had to pay to use public restrooms, but those rest rooms were so much cleaner than back in the States.

This story is complete and is available on kindle or my patreon, along with other stories (Bad Seed, Beach Baby. There's 4 new, ongoing stories there for first tier patrons and 6 for second tier members- the first 4 same as the first tier in addition to 2 short stories. Fun in The Sun featuring more adventures of Liz and Chloe, and Up and Away, two diaper boys on a hot air balloon adventure) https://www.patreon.com/Cute_Kitten https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B07WH7V8WT/ref=dbs_a_def_rwt_bibl_vppi_i5 PUMPKIN PATCH by CK “Come on, Lizzy. Let’s go to the pumpkin patch. Please? Pretty pumpkin please with whip cream on top? It’s Halloween- today’s the last day to go.” Chloe begged her best friend and roommate. She clasped her hands like an excited little girl and put her best puppy dog pout. “I thought you were going with your club? They rented a bus, and you know I have a paper due.” Elizabeth looked up from her laptop, unswayed by her roommate’s childish antics. Chloe dropped her eyes and fidgeted, tapping the tips of her pointer fingers together. “Well. I was gonna. But June was there and she-Sorry! I mean xie!” Her eyes widened as if she’d made a grievous, unforgivable mistake as she stumbled over the pronouns, terrified June would pop out of nowhere and holler at her even though she was alone with Liz in their dorm room. “Xie wanted me to sit with xim.” Liz snorted. “So, she was bothering you again? You need to tell that unhinged loon to piss off.” “Liz!” Chloe’s cheeks turned red. “It’s not so easy. I don’t want to hurt June’s feelings.” As a pre-op transgirl herself, Chloe could empathize with June’s feelings of being uncomfortable with her body. She was not as good at asserting herself as Liz was; that’s why she admired how confident and self assured as her best friend was. She wanted to be more like Liz. She wanted to speak up when June made her uncomfortable; June flirted with her and often got handsy. She never protested, never told June to stop; she never encouraged it, either. She was too self conscious and scared, especially after witnessing June’s spectacular, screaming meltdowns whenever someone upset xer. Some of June’s public tantrums had found their way onto Youtube. Chloe had no proof, but she was pretty sure Liz was behind a few of those postings. “Sure, it’s easy. You just open your mouth and tell her to stop and leave you alone.” Liz went back to typing on her laptop. The clicking of her keys filled Chloe’s ears. “I’ve tried, but she-xie scares me. I couldn’t take being trapped on a bus with xer, so I came home. But I really, really wanna go. You know how much I’ve been looking forward to Halloween.” It was all she’d been talking about for the last two weeks. It was her favorite holiday; it was also Liz’s. The keyboard stopped clacking. Chloe bit the inside of her cheek to keep from smiling. “Besides, like I’ve been saying all this time, it’ll be more fun if you’re there with me. We don’t have to go anywhere near that group. It’ll just be the two of us. So, please?” “I have to work on my paper.” “I’ll do it. Take me to the pumpkin patch and I’ll write your paper. You know I’m good at writing papers. I always get A’s.” “I don’t know….” Liz debated, running a hand over her buzzed head. Chloe loved rubbing her head- the short hair was soft and fuzzy, reminding her of a teddybear. “Oh, alright.” She caved when she couldn’t come up with any more good excuses. “Yay!” Chloe cheered, twirling in excitement. Her flowy orange skirt flared out. Black leggings hid her diaper from view but could do nothing to conceal the obvious, tell-tale bugle of such a thick diaper. One quick glance and anyone could see her heavily diapered state. The crinkle of her diaper filled the room. She wore a fuzzy black sweater with a ghost and a smiling Jack O Lantern. Liz smiled in amusement at her childish antics. “Are you ever going to grow up?” She teased. She felt too old to go to the pumpkin patch, but that was just the kind of place an overgrown nineteen year old like Chloe loved. Liz knew she could easily put her foot down and refuse and Chloe wouldn’t argue. Chloe never did. Whatever Liz truly wanted or insisted on, Chloe caved like a house of cards. She always sought to please, even at the expense of her own feelings. Other people- like June- often took advantage of her. Liz felt a little guilty for the rare times she took advantage of Chloe. But she tried to make up for it by being protective and looking out for her. And letting Chloe feel safe enough to indulge her little side, like she was doing now. Liz stared at Chloe, at her carefree smile, brown eyes lit up in excitement. She really was like an overgrown child, filled with innocent wonder. Watching her made Liz almost nostalgic for the few good moments of her own childhood. It almost made her want to be a kid again. Then she remembered the bulk of her unhappy childhood- screaming parents, her father diagnosed with a fatal glioblastoma brain tumor, her grieving, alcoholic mother. The only good memories she had were of her times spent at the stable for her weekly riding lesson. Dizzy from twirling, Chloe collapsed to the floor with a giggle and a crinkle. She’d had a tough childhood, too. She was the only child of failed Las Vegas showgirl turned single mother. Her mom became a dancing instructor. She’d been accepting of her son-turned-daughter, but she’d also micromanaged Chloe, determined to have a daughter accomplished in tap, jazz, and ballet. Chloe had been kept on a rigorous training and competition schedule; she felt like she never had much of a childhood. Perhaps that was why she indulged in her AB side so much. She wore diapers 24/7, and had for the past year, ever since coming to college. She didn’t own any panties; diapers were her underwear. The thick padding gave her a sense of security and comfort, plus she liked the way it hid and flattened out her boy-bits. She was pre-op, but she’d started HRT. When she looked in the mirror, all she could see were the parts of her that screamed BOY; the width of her shoulders, the V of her torso, her too narrow hips, flat chest. She wanted the soft, womanly curves like tough girl Liz had. Chloe hid what remained of her masculinity behind lace, frills, ruffles, and a smile. Her padding gave her a confidence boost. Liz stood up, closed her laptop, and stretched. Chloe looked up at her from the floor and admired the curves of Liz’s body, both attracted to her and jealous of her at the same time. Being jealous made her feel guilty, so she looked at her toes up in the air. With her legs splayed and up, her diaper bulge was on prominent display. She did her best to hide her diapers out in public, but with such thick, noisy padding there was only so much she could do. “Do you need a diaper change before we go? How wet are you?” Liz reached for her wallet, leather jacket, and motorcycle keys. Chloe scrunched her face up, blowing blonde bangs out of her eyes. These days, she wasn’t always aware of the status of her diaper. She knew when it was saturated and she needed a change before she leaked, but that was it. She’d been padded for so long, so used to wetting and messing herself, she hardly paid attention. She only knew she was peeing after the fact, when she felt her diaper swell warm and wet. A lot of times, she failed to notice that. She only became aware of her diaper once it was so full and saggy with pee it squished when she sat down. Bowel movements took her by surprise too- most of the time she didn’t know she had to mess until the back of her diaper was full and heavy. She hadn’t had a dry night in over a year. Six months ago, on a dare from Liz, she put on a pair of Liz’s panties. She hadn’t even gone 30 minutes before she’d peed all over the carpet. Now, she couldn’t be out of her diapers even if she wanted to. She’d never set out to become diaper trained but, maybe, subconsciously she had. Maybe, deep down, she wanted her emotional need for diapers to turn physical. Either way, she had no intention of ever giving up her diapers. She stuck her hand with black and orange nail polish down the front of her leggings. Inside her diaper didn’t feel wet, but that didn’t mean she hadn’t peed. It just meant she didn’t know if she’d peed. Messes always announced their presence, but pee was sneaky. The pink plastic shell was warm and only a little swollen over her crotch. “Just a little wet. My diaper can hold a lot more, so I’m good.” “Then grab your jacket and let’s go.” Liz waited by the door. “Kay!” Chloe rolled to her hands and knees, oblivious to how visible her diaper bulge was. She got to her feet, grabbed her heavy double knitted cardigan jacket and crinkled after Liz. tbc...

I haven't tried them yet, but I'm super excited about them. I usually wear plain white diapers like the Dry 24/7 or the ABU Simple Ultra for going out and about, but I could wear these all the time since they're in a plain color.

I do like the Burt's Bees, but lately I've been using Tena Protective Cream.

I didn't mean that as a critique of how things are done here. Every website and forum is different and does their own thing. Your playground your rules etc. Which is why I emphasized what WB said. The abdlstoryforum is geared towards writers who do like feedback and critiques. It always has been- there's even a notice\ warning that posted stories will be critiqued. As you said Elfy, not everyone wants critiques. Some people even get upset over them. There have been episodes in the past where new posters ignore the warnings, get critiqued, get upset over said critiques and throw an epic tantrum. So I echoed WB to let any new posters know that critiques are part and parcel of the abdlstoryforum so they'd know what they were signing up for.

Quoted for truth and emphasis. That said theres also posting on wattpad.

I'm looking forward to trying these. Hopefully they'll be another super absorbent option for going a long time between changes. Holidays and everything are coming up soon, very busy times.

Reading this on the site makes me think they might be comparable with the Dry 24/7s, ABU Peekabus or Rearz Incontrol+Inspire. If so, they just might be another go-to everyday diaper for me. https://www.northshorecare.com/diapers/fitteds1/northshore-megamax-briefs.html Description: With a near limitless absorbency and quick wicking core, NorthShore MegaMax Briefs are the total package when it comes to protection. Starting on the inside, the extra-wide and extra-long absorbent core compares to other diapers with a 6500ml capacity- that's almost 2 gallons of liquid! The extra-large core also provides excellent coverage in the front and rear even for side sleepers. Tall stand-up leak guards, leg cuffs, and waistband elastics protect against leaks from the leg openings as well as around the waist.

That was a lot of padding. The closest I've come to going out double diapered is wearing a Dry 24/7 well hidden under my clothes.

It was very nice of you to spend time and emotional effort to make others feel welcome.

They're some of the most delightful diapers I've ever worn. They certainly do stand up to the test.

I was just going to suggest that lol! But glad you got away unscathed. Just imagine the look on the jerk with the knife's face if you'd held a gun up in response to his knife! (Just joking on that part). I hope the creeps do get caught by the cops!

I've cut off toxic family members. I know it can be hard- but you also have to remember to look out for yourself and take care of yourself. Users won't care if they bleed you dry- they'll just dump and move onto the next person they can take advantage of.

A lot can happen, so I'd take a wait and see approach. Even if a hypothetical ban did come to pass, it might not be permanent. Bans can be lifted. Like with the American Prohibition. Now I'm getting amusing mental images of diaper riots and baby diapers on the black market. ?

I like the peek abus- I like the fit, to me it feels about the same as other ABU diapers or a Rearz, and the absorbency was up there with the dry 24/7 ,which is my go-to day diaper.

I love the print on Little Monsters, but haven't tried them myself. I know the Princess and Safari are comparable to the 24/7s, as are the inspire incontrol

Thank you for commenting. I'm glad to hear it- it means I've been doing my job as an author and keeping readers on their toes, though I do hope the unexpected still feels organic/ naturally unfolding and not coming out of nowhere. We're entering the climax of the story, so if I worked things right, the tension (and the drama, always fun!) will be ratcheting up. Thank you for commenting. I always enjoy hearing reader thoughts and speculations. I don't want to give away any spoilers, but being a big boy is something Cameron's going to have to fight for. But he's got Lili on his side, so that can either help him, or blow up in his face.

I enjoy the sensation of being thickly padded. It's a comfort and security thing. I also like the feeling of a warm, wet, soggy diaper in need of changing. Then changing my wet diaper for a fresh, dry one.

yes, easily.