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    • Another excellent chapter! I especially loved the part where Lana asks for milk in his bottle at the drive-thru (milk is the perfect drink for the baby, I would pass the juice jajaja). But I have to say, this time a few inconsistencies in the chapter took me out of the story a bit. They start in the second part, after they arrive at the store, and I felt the chapter became a little confusing because of them. 1) At the beginning of the chapter, he seems to be holding back a mess (which would be a first for him in this situation), but by the end of the chapter, all he does is wet (which he had already done several times in his diaper, making some parts of the text not make sense). 2) Is he actually sucking a pacifier or not? There are moments when he is, but that’s contradicted by moments when he isn’t. I thought it would have made more sense if this were a looming threat throughout the chapter—something that only actually happened near the end—but the writing ended up being confusing. 3) At one point, Lana mentions remembering to bring his bottle with juice. But the story established that he only has one bottle—the one she had already used for milk at the drive-thru. So, it wouldn't make sense for her to have a bottle with juice in her bag, because it was already used sooner (and she didn't have any opportunity to rinse it since then). It would actually be a good opportunity to buy more bottles while they're at the store, jaja. Anyway, I apologize if I’m being a pain, but I only pointed this out because I’m loving the story and am so hooked that it’s hard not to pay attention to every detail. Please keep up the great work!
    • Really enjoying the progression here!
    • I will eventually 😌 I promise! I will also post the channel here when I do, but maaaaaay be working on a few more things for the channel
    • Morning Di, Waking up wet is basically a daily occurrence anymore. Sometimes I’m aware of the need to pee, other times I don’t remember wetting myself but my heavy diaper tells a different story. Have a Great Day! 😊
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