diaper dimension Book 1: Little in Love

[YourFNF]

Yeah I don't think Charlie's mom is forgivable...... She knowingly engaged in "crimes against humanity" level torture on at least two different individuals over a span of decades and shows zero remorse or regret over her actions. Charlie's Dad is complicated... He was an enabler but at least shows remorse.... But yeah.... Mom needs to get the full Hague treatment.....

[BabySofia]

I think that connection worked out really well! I do need to go back and re-read this from the beginning at some point... Probably have to be next month I'm guessing! (Or whenever you finish this)

I suspect they're going to get a nice night and then all hell is going to break loose as her mother or someone else barges into their lives and forces a 'permanent' change. Curious to see what her dad says when she tells him about what she does!

[Guilend]

9 minutes ago, BabySofia said:

Curious to see what her dad says when she tells him about what she does!

???? I just had a thought. What if she actually wrote porn like we had predicted. That would be an awkward conversation. “Hey dad, I write porn for a living. Maybe you’ve read some of my work?” ?

[LittleFallenPrincess]

56 minutes ago, Moon3ye said:

To the picture of Liv and Charlie I must say really nice also the hair color of Liv interesting. 
What annoys me about it is that she with 5.10 feet is actually quite a bit taller than me with my 5.4 feet. 
But the topic I had already times in another story my size and the fact that I can not keep my mouth shut even if it would go to my life would make the DD very dangerous for me.

I like that I was right about Dylan/David. I can also totally understand that even if he knew, he didn't tell. Fear and trauma can never really be overcome.
It did scare me a bit how quickly Charlie went into that sister mode. Of course it could be because she had to deal with so many Littles today and other stresses that the hormones just ran through her body.

I'm really curious what the next chapters bring and when the long-awaited catastrophe will be and when it comes.

 

Thank you! As for Liv's hair, I think I've made a few references to it being ashen/silvery blonde. ?

As for a catastrophe... maybe there won't be one? ?

32 minutes ago, Guilend said:

I think her going into big sister mode was mostly because for many years David was her baby brother and interacted as such so it was mostly due to automatic mode then anything else I imagine. 
 

charlie is going to thank Liv over and over again, probably going to thank her most of the night. ?

What would be funny is if Liv made one of her little girl dresses big enough to fit Charlie and give it to her as a prank gift ???? Liv can say that since she loved them so much she thought she’d love one in her size ????

 

Now that’s out of the way I do wonder how Charlie’s friend is doing and if her two ex friends actually left her alone. I can see them going over there at some point and punishing her for siding with Charlie and not doing as she was told  and of course Charlie would jump in afterwards and save the day

 

That would be amazing! ?

15 minutes ago, Moon3ye said:

Jo @LittleFallenPrincess you said you still have 5 chapters to go. Can you include that then both are in a partner look dress. SO really extreme and as "bad" as Liv could make it, so bad from a Little's point of view. Can someone paint that then. Oh god I think the idea is so good.

It is a pretty good idea!

6 minutes ago, YourFNF said:

Yeah I don't think Charlie's mom is forgivable...... She knowingly engaged in "crimes against humanity" level torture on at least two different individuals over a span of decades and shows zero remorse or regret over her actions. Charlie's Dad is complicated... He was an enabler but at least shows remorse.... But yeah.... Mom needs to get the full Hague treatment.....

They're not crimes in their universe, although they should be. I wouldn't say she's not redeemable, but she'd have to work hard to do so.

4 minutes ago, BabySofia said:

I think that connection worked out really well! I do need to go back and re-read this from the beginning at some point... Probably have to be next month I'm guessing! (Or whenever you finish this)

I suspect they're going to get a nice night and then all hell is going to break loose as her mother or someone else barges into their lives and forces a 'permanent' change. Curious to see what her dad says when she tells him about what she does!

Thank you!

72 Chapters including epilogue... that's 10 weeks to go roughly if I continue to post 4 a week like I said I would.

My next story is planned to be much shorter at about 40 chapters.

And you'll just have to wait and see what happens ?

8 minutes ago, Guilend said:

???? I just had a thought. What if she actually wrote porn like we had predicted. That would be an awkward conversation. “Hey dad, I write porn for a living. Maybe you’ve read some of my work?” ?

Oh no. That would be horrifying! ?

[Moon3ye]

31 minutes ago, LittleFallenPrincess said:

As for a catastrophe... maybe there won't be one? ?

WHAT not a disaster?

In the DD but ... but you can't do that *Looks at the others who are reading this* Is she allowed to do that?

A DD story where there is no disaster and dangers for the Littles?

Is that allowed?

*looks at Princess again* you can't do that to me and my little evil hearts *looks at Princess with big puppy eyes* please ????

[kerry]

Small world department, or Six Degrees of Charlie and Olivia:

I love the fun twists and reveals here, but it does strain credulity a bit that Madison (Liv's amazon nemesis) turns out to be Charlie's ex AND that Liv's computer guy turns out to be Charlie's lost "brother." I know: this could happen in real life, but (as Mark Twain said), "It's no wonder that truth is stranger than fiction. Fiction has to make sense." ?

[BabySofia]

14 minutes ago, Moon3ye said:

WHAT not a disaster?

In the DD but ... but you can't do that *Looks at the others who are reading this* Is she allowed to do that?

A DD story where there is no disaster and dangers for the Littles?

Is that allowed?

*looks at Princess again* you can't do that to me and my little evil hearts *looks at Princess with big puppy eyes* please ????

I say happily ever after is allowed! To each their own type of diapers! Mind you, the real rule is that diapers must be involved... a good little should always nurse of course too! 

She's good ?

[Moon3ye]

3 minutes ago, BabySofia said:

I say happily ever after is allowed! To each their own type of diapers! Mind you, the real rule is that diapers must be involved... a good little should always nurse of course too! 

She's good ?

I know Sofia but still you can wish for something.

And you know me but I like it when it's a little meaner.

In the end, I celebrate everything that the authors write.

[LittleFallenPrincess]

17 minutes ago, Moon3ye said:

WHAT not a disaster?

In the DD but ... but you can't do that *Looks at the others who are reading this* Is she allowed to do that?

A DD story where there is no disaster and dangers for the Littles?

Is that allowed?

*looks at Princess again* you can't do that to me and my little evil hearts *looks at Princess with big puppy eyes* please ????

Would it be more evil if I did exactly that? Or if it was nothing but disaster and dangers? Just 39 chapters of happiness and NO danger or bad situations?

?

10 minutes ago, kerry said:

Small world department, or Six Degrees of Charlie and Olivia:

I love the fun twists and reveals here, but it does strain credulity a bit that Madison (Liv's amazon nemesis) turns out to be Charlie's ex AND that Liv's computer guy turns out to be Charlie's lost "brother." I know: this could happen in real life, but (as Mark Twain said), "It's no wonder that truth is stranger than fiction. Fiction has to make sense." ?

I can see your point. I wanted to do a lot more twists and stuff but I limited it down to a handful ?
I wanted it believable but not boring.

1 minute ago, BabySofia said:

I say happily ever after is allowed! To each their own type of diapers! Mind you, the real rule is that diapers must be involved... a good little should always nurse of course too! 

She's good ?

? yay! I'm good!

1 minute ago, Moon3ye said:

I know Sofia but still you can wish for something.

And you know me but I like it when it's a little meaner.

In the end, I celebrate everything that the authors write.

 I never said if I was going down the happy ever after route or not. There's still another 39 chapters to go! ?

[Moon3ye]

53 minutes ago, LittleFallenPrincess said:

Would it be more evil if I did exactly that? Or if it was nothing but disaster and dangers? Just 39 chapters of happiness and NO danger or bad situations?

?

 I never said if I was going down the happy ever after route or not. There's still another 39 chapters to go! ?

*Sits pouting in the corner*.

People are constantly making fun of me. ????

And then constantly these stupid devil smileys that laugh at me.

*Turns around and sticks his tongue out at everyone*????

[Eagle0769]

9 hours ago, LittleFallenPrincess said:

 

So instead of writing I figured I'd do a bit of artwork. Meet Liv and Charlie!

I really need to look into commissioning some artwork of the two of them. But hey, I can update the banner now!

Now to actually get started on writing and editing.

So if it was me I'm 5'2" there would be a big difference.

I like that ?

[Eagle0769]

I have to admit I had tears in my eyes when David and Charlie were left alone in the workshop.

[AdultInnocence]

3 hours ago, LittleFallenPrincess said:

72 Chapters including epilogue... that's 10 weeks to go roughly if I continue to post 4 a week like I said I would.

My next story is planned to be much shorter at about 40 chapters.

You say that now! I wonder how close to 40 chapters it'll stay lol

[SGTbaby]

Awesome update and twist!

[Moon3ye]

Since I am now already privately written to I must clarify one thing briefly also here under this story.

I love what Princess writes absolutely, the wishes and hopes that I express have to do mainly with my character and are often, and I know that, not realistic but I like to write them down just like a valve it gives me a good feeling.

I absolutely adore the previous chapters and currently this story is one of my favorites.

Princess should not let anyone influence how the story develops.

And here again the notice especially for Princess should my comments somehow offend you or make you feel uncomfortable so please tell me and I will change this. For me this is all just fun.

[LittleFallenPrincess]

12 hours ago, Moon3ye said:

*Sits pouting in the corner*.

People are constantly making fun of me. ????

And then constantly these stupid devil smileys that laugh at me.

*Turns around and sticks his tongue out at everyone*????

Awwww ??

10 hours ago, Eagle0769 said:

I have to admit I had tears in my eyes when David and Charlie were left alone in the workshop.

?

10 hours ago, AdultInnocence said:

You say that now! I wonder how close to 40 chapters it'll stay lol

Well this was planned for 60 and its ending up at 72. But I'm not planning such a massive story with the next. I doubt I'll have to add any more chapters (I'm probably going to regret saying these words later ?)

5 hours ago, SGTbaby said:

Awesome update and twist!

Thank you!

3 hours ago, Moon3ye said:

Since I am now already privately written to I must clarify one thing briefly also here under this story.

I love what Princess writes absolutely, the wishes and hopes that I express have to do mainly with my character and are often, and I know that, not realistic but I like to write them down just like a valve it gives me a good feeling.

I absolutely adore the previous chapters and currently this story is one of my favorites.

Princess should not let anyone influence how the story develops.

And here again the notice especially for Princess should my comments somehow offend you or make you feel uncomfortable so please tell me and I will change this. For me this is all just fun.

Don't worry, I like seeing your comments and suggestions and theories, even if they are mean. ?

And I wrote ahead not only for my benefit in case there were any periods of time I couldn't write, but also so that people can't influence my story.

I had a clear goal when coming up with this story, and as I near the end, I feel like I've met this without any influences affecting it.

So dont worry, the base story was set in stone from the start. The odd chapter got moved around or changed, some ideas I had were added as I was writing, but the basic essence of the story never changed.

[LittleFallenPrincess]

 

Chapter 34: Headspaces

After we got home from dinner with her parents, Charlie had decided that for the rest of the weekend I should have some adult time with her, as the past week was mostly me getting used to my new public role with her. As much as she enjoyed taking care of me and making my baby side happy, she wanted some time with her girlfriend.

So Saturday night we cuddled up together on the sofa watching TV and having a couple of drinks. Followed by some ‘adult’ time with my girlfriend before we fell asleep in each other’s arms (well, more like me in hers due to our size difference).

Sunday was a nice relaxing day in. We sat around, doing nothing pretty much. Just acting like normal girlfriends. I got a bit of work done on my computer, designing some outfits for clients.

We did sit outside in her back garden for an hour or so when the sun was over her house, with me in her arms as she lay on a sun lounger. And I blushed a lot when I realised my thumb entered my mouth without me realising. It had taken her to notice it and point it out for me to realise.

Whilst I was enjoying the baby treatment, which still scares me when I say it out loud, I was so glad that it wasn’t full time. I had an amazing girlfriend who let me choose when and where I wanted to be in ‘baby mode’, so I could enjoy the feeling of being tiny and safe and loved, whilst also getting adult time like this. The thought of being a full time baby still scared the shit out of me, but for now, I can enjoy having control over when I am a ‘baby’ or ‘little’ or whatever you want to call it. I’m going to have to come up with a term for that, apparently Amazons into this call it ‘littlespace’ but obviously, being a little myself, I needed a new term.

 

Monday morning arrived and Charlie helped me get dressed into something more adult appropriate for work.

“I love that you still want to work. Not just to help littles, but because you enjoy working.”

“I don’t love working, but I love having my own store and I love designing clothes, even if they are humiliating to wear.”

“Yeah but the fact you could stay with me and never have to work again, but you still want to go in, makes me love you even more. Not only could I say you’re adopted full time so you never have to work, but also that I can easily afford to cover living expenses for both of us... you continue to impress me each and every day.”

“Yeah well the fact that you keep writing despite having made all that money impresses me. Talking of which, you never told me about those meetings or what you’re actually working on.”

“You’ll have to wait and see, sweetpea. I promise you I’ll tell you when it’s developed a bit more.”

“You better! I want to be the first to read it!”

“Promise. My baby gets her eyes on it first. Now, ready for work? I’ll drop you off.”

“What are you going to do whilst I’m at work?”

“Probably come back here. Remember we’ve got your playdate this evening after work.”

“How can I forget? I finally get to ‘unlock my littlespace’ or whatever.” I did a funny voice which made Charlie smile.

“Oh you silly little thing. You just get to enjoy being little with no threats or worries. Which up until now, you’ve not had. It’s been one scary thing after another since we started. This will allow you to be little and find your headspace. Side note, we really need to come up with a term for your headspace. And I know you have it in you, I can tell. You’re very similar to that Amazon I tried to baby.”

“I am?”

“Trust me baby, you really are. You are the most independent little I know, you’re strong and fierce, you’re capable of looking after yourself and others, you are smart and witty and snarky. I love that about you, you are thoughtful and kind and loving. You’re just the perfect girlfriend and I love you. But at the same time, you have a sensitive side that really needs taking care of. Sure, not all the time like other Amazons may believe, but I think now and again you need that baby time to help you escape this cruel world and the fear you carry around every day. You need it to allow your sensitive side out, to live and not be afraid, to let you be vulnerable and not on guard every moment of every day. And I feel so honoured that you trust me to be the one to help you with that.”

Charlie started tearing up.

“You are a pro at making me feel all soppy and loved.” I felt my eyes start to tear up too.

“Good. That’s what Mummies/girlfriends are for!”

“I love you Charlie. And I love you Mummy.”

“I love you Liv. And I love you baby.”

“Shush! Before my makeup runs. Let’s get going, I don’t want to annoy Mal after spending the last week away so much.

 

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Charlie dropped me off at work and drove off back home. I walked into the store to see Mal waiting for me.

“Well turn the sign, we’ve got orders. You need to catch up a bit otherwise they’ll cancel them.”

“On it, don’t worry Mal. Already done the designs they asked for at home. Just need to print.”

“Oh wow, you managed that between sucking your girlfriend’s tits?”

I looked at him with a completely straight face.

“Wow... it’s like you’re not even trying with your teasing now. That was lazy Mal, do better!”

“Sorry Liv, I’m tired after last night. And maybe slightly hungover.”

“Oh dear. How?”

“Well it was late on Saturday, but David wanted to have a few drinks after all that stuff with Charlie.”

“Yeah, okay, but that was Saturday night.”

“Yeah but we didn’t stop until last night.”

“Fuck Mal, you’re bad enough after one night, but a whole 24 hours of drinking? Why?”

“Hey it got super emotional!  I miss you and I haven’t hung out with David for so long, and he was dealing with a lot after Charlie met up with him. So we just... kept going.”

“You sure you should be in today?”

“Umm... probably not, haha!”

 

An hour after opening, I was in the storefront with Mal, waiting for some designs to print.

“So what else have you been up to whilst I’ve been busy?

Before he could answer, his phone rang.

“One sec Liv...”

Malcolm answered his phone and I could only hear his side of the conversation.

 

“Hello? ...Oh hey, what’s up? ...No, it’s pretty quiet in the store today, why? ...OH. Haha, yeah that’d be a good idea. Yeah it’s no problem, I was thinking of shutting up early today anyway. ...yeah... okay I’ll see you at 2. Bye!”

 

“Who was that?” I asked.

“Oh just someone I said I’d do a favour for. Sorry about this Liv, but is it okay if we shut the shop early at 2?”

“Sure, but are you sure you’re not too hung-over to just close up now?”

“Nah, they’re going to meet here at 2, but don’t worry, the past week has been pretty quiet. Still no potential rescues or anything.”

“That’s sad. But I guess I should call Charlie and tell her to pick me up then.”

Malcolm quickly interjected as I pulled out my phone.

“Don’t worry about it kiddo. I’ll give you a lift home. It’ll be a nice surprise for Charlie.”

“Oh okay, if you’re sure?”

“Yeah it’s no problem.”

 

I spent the whole morning working on a surprise for Charlie’s birthday. It was going to be a beautiful white dress made just for her, with a little ribbon inside that says ‘I love you forever and always, your Liv’. I put my heart and soul into this design, and it showed. It was probably the most beautiful thing I had ever made.

I got it printed and packed it away gently in my bag, I planned to take it home and hide it away until her birthday next Monday.

I also spent the whole time wondering who this friend of Mal’s was and what favour they had promised. But it was now 1.55pm and my questions would be answered soon.

The bell above the front door jingled and I quickly rushed over to the workshop door to sneak a peek at who Malcolm was expecting. As I was trying to focus, Malcolm walked in between the door and his friend, obscuring my view. I was trying to reposition myself by opening the door slightly, when he moved out of the way and the door flung open, causing me to stumble forward into his friend.

“Baby, be careful!” said a familiar voice.

I looked up to see the beautiful ginger hair that made my girlfriend stand out so much, complete with her gorgeous, kissable face and the smile that made my heart melt.

“Ch...Charlie? Buh?”

“Shush you. I saw you trying to sneak a peek through the door.”

“But... what’s going on?”

“I was at home, and I was very bored. Wandering about the house I saw the crib and I had an idea. So I called Mal, he said it was okay, and so I’m here to pick you up early.”

“So there’s no favour or anything?”

“Nope,” Malcolm said, “Just a very hungover business partner and a girlfriend who wants to take you home to get you ready for your playdate tonight.”

I blushed.

“What was this idea Charlie?”

“Well you haven’t even tried your crib yet. And I want to help you get into the headspace even before we see Alice and her Daddy. And that got me to thinking that maybe... Baby Livie needed a nap before all the excitement...” Charlie said, smiling.

“You two are way too good at working together to humiliate me...” I sighed.

“Yes we are. So be careful baby!”

Charlie picked me up and kissed me on the cheek.

 

After grabbing my bag and saying goodbye to Malcolm again, we were back on the road and home in no time. Honestly I don’t know why I even bothered going in at this point, I could have just sent the designs to print from home and got Mal to check on them. But hey, I’m not going to complain that my girlfriend wants to spend more time with me, even if it is to put me in a nappy and my new crib for an afternoon nap.

Closing the front door, Charlie turned to me.

“Sorry about all this baby, I just missed you. And I thought maybe a baby nap would help you get into the right headspace for your playdate this evening.”

“Nah it’s okay, I understand. I was missing you like crazy. Plus my oral fixation is bad today.”

“Aww sweetie. Do you want your dummy?”

“Any normal little would refuse... but yes please Mummy.” I said in my most babyishly cute voice.

“There’s my little princess. One dodie coming straight up.”

I walked over to the sofa as Charlie went off into the bedroom. Sitting down, I took my shoes off and started to get out of my work clothes. I quickly got up and ran over to the closet near the door, hiding her birthday surprise behind some boxes.

“Liv, can you come in here please?”

I closed the door quickly, but quietly, and rushed into the bedroom.

“What’s up Charlie?”

“No, no more Charlie for today. It’s Mummy for now. Got it sweetie?”

“Yes Mummy.” My voice instinctively raised in pitch, becoming slightly more childish sounding. Charlie had also noticed this; the grin on her face grew.

“D’aww there she is! There’s my little babygirl! Now, let’s get you into something more age appropriate shall we?”

I nodded, at which point Charlie quickly slipped my dodie into my mouth and I instantly felt a lot less apprehensive about everything.

“I can see you struggling against your headspace. I can see your adult mind pushing back and making it so you can’t just let go and full enjoy yourself. That’s what I’m hoping today will do, I’m hoping it’ll help you relax and let go, letting yourself give in to the babygirl inside you. Maybe if we can break that wall down, it’ll be easier in future.”

“Thanks Char... I mean Mummy.”

“Good girl. So just trust me okay? I’m going to make you feel as small as possible before Alice comes over with her Daddy, and then you can really unlock your headspace and enjoy yourself.”

“You sure aboud dis? Aboud me having dis headspathe?” I said from behind my dummy.

“I am. I can tell. You can tell can’t you? I see the way you look at me when you’re enjoying the baby treatment, I’ve seen how much you enjoy it and how happy it makes you. I also sense the fear at the same time; you’re worried this is all you’ll ever be. So that’s why I’m going to help you with everything, to prove to your brain that this isn’t forever. It’s just whenever you need it.”

“I guess.”

“Now, stop worrying, it’s time for Mummy to put you down for a nap. I think I’ll get you dressed up properly after your nap, for now I think you’d look adorable in just a nappy and your dummy!”

I blushed.

“Buh... wha aboud my...” it took me a second to think of a babyish term, “...boobies?”

“Oh shush, I’m both your girlfriend AND your Mummy. And it’s warm today, despite it being October. So you’ve got no reason to cover up.”

“Hmph. Fine. You just love looking at my boobs!” I said, pulling my dummy out.

“What if I do? My girlfriend is gorgeous, I can’t help it. Now, dodie back in baby.”

I pushed my dummy back in and Charlie proceeded to undress me, throwing all my adult clothes into the corner.

“So let’s get you padded, and then once I’ve put you down for a nap, I’m going to clean the apartment so it’s ready for our guests.”

“You sure you dun wan help?”

“Shush baby, your job is to have a nap with Luna, then Mummy will get you dressed and then you’ll have a super fun playdate with your baby friend Alice.”

“Hmph.”

“What was that baby?” Charlie gave me a stern look.

“Nuffin Mama.”

“Good. Now up you go!”

Charlie lifted me into the air and placed me on the changing table. Expertly slipping the thickest kind of nappy we have under me, she quickly sprinkled baby powder around and rubbed it in. Bringing up the front of the nappy and taping it shut, she then proceeded to tower over me, and slowly getting closer and closer with that mean grin of hers... I knew what was coming and my body tensed up.

 

She blew raspberries on my tummy until I could take no more and I was crying for her to stop, in between all the giggling coming from me.

“How’s your changing table? I chose not to use the straps this time, but I may use the tummy one next one.” Charlie smirked.

“It... weird. Buh I definitely feel more babyish den when you change me on deh bed or deh floor. I’m also not used to being so high up when not in someone’s arms.”

“But do you like it? Remember, just say the word and I can stop.” Her face turned serious for a second.

“I... may wike it. Maybe. Fine, yeah I do. Happy?”

“Very much so. Now, do you want feeding before I put you down for a nap?”

“I guess it would hewp me wegwess a bih tonight, and would knock me out. I not used to sweeping duwing deh day.”

“We’re going to have to find a way to limit this.”

I took my dummy out so I could speak properly.

“I was thinking... maybe we could ask Eve? Surely she could come up with a way to make it so we can nurse but limit the side effects or maybe save my potty training or something?”

“Why don’t you ask her next time you talk to her? I think that’s a brilliant idea. Good girl!”

And right on cue, my face turned bright red. Being called a good girl by my girlfriend was a clear weakness of mine.

“Okay, so for now, let’s have one more feeding. But how about no more for a week?”

“The cravings are horrible, but I’m going to have to get used to it unless I want to lose all potty training. So sure. This one last time for now.”

Charlie carried me over to the bed and sat down with her back against the headboard. Positioning me in her arms, lay back, she unclipped her nursing bra and gently guided my mouth to her breast. I latched on and all the amazing feelings I had experienced before rushed back. Honestly, I’m not sure what it was about Amazon breast milk, but it tasted better than any juice, any alcohol, any food. It made me so relaxed I started to lose all strength in my arms and legs.

 

After feeding from both breasts, Charlie pulled her bra back up and stood up, being extra careful with me in her arms. She carefully and quietly walked over to the crib... my crib, and gently lay me down and covered me up, kissing me on the head and closing the curtains before leaving and closing the door behind her.

I felt so loved at that moment. So happy. So... safe. If this was just the start, I couldn’t wait to unlock parts of me that could truly enjoy all this stuff.

As the effects of the milk started taking effect more, as my eyes started getting heavier and heavier, I snuggled up to Luna underneath the blanket and smiled behind my dummy.

“I wuv you Mummy...” I said before drifting off to sleep.

 

 

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I hope everyone enjoyed the latest chapter!

Please leave likes and comments and all that fun stuff, I love reading them!

I've only got 3 chapters and an epilogue to write now, then I can focus entirely on my next story, which I'm really looking forward to doing.

Next chapter tomorrow. Then Thursday and Saturday for the remaining 2 chapters of the week.

 

 

[Moon3ye]

This was a really nice and relaxed chapter. No hustle and bustle, no roller coaster of emotions. Just super sweet fluff. I find that nice too.

[Guilend]

Too darn cute

[the diaper mike]

It is a great chapter your style is excellent you write with the littles you naturally put them in the place to allow them to become who they are

[Genossin]

Nice to have a couple chapters without cliffhangers!  Nice, relaxing, shows what a mummy like Charlie can do for a little.

 

The Dylan/David reveal has potential.  I'm not sure it was built up enough before- we haven't even seen the character before this.  But the story is still young, (less than halfway through, right? ) so with it almost as part of the premise not just the narrative, I bet it can work well.  You're an amazing writer, and i bet you've got an interesting plan for this.  I say "plan" but i know it's almost done!

 

Thank you so much for the bonus chapters- two today and a third tomorrow?  YAY!  But I bet LPS is coming in the next chapter- no parent like Charlie's mom will ever forgive their child for being gay, much less treating someone she sees as a child with dignity.

[LittleFallenPrincess]

4 hours ago, Moon3ye said:

This was a really nice and relaxed chapter. No hustle and bustle, no roller coaster of emotions. Just super sweet fluff. I find that nice too.

Yeah I figured after a few chapters of cliffhangers, a nice relaxed chapter is what everyone needed. I'm glad you liked it!

4 hours ago, Guilend said:

Too darn cute

Thank you!

3 hours ago, the diaper mike said:

It is a great chapter your style is excellent you write with the littles you naturally put them in the place to allow them to become who they are

Aww thanks! ?

2 hours ago, Genossin said:

Nice to have a couple chapters without cliffhangers!  Nice, relaxing, shows what a mummy like Charlie can do for a little.

 

The Dylan/David reveal has potential.  I'm not sure it was built up enough before- we haven't even seen the character before this.  But the story is still young, (less than halfway through, right? ) so with it almost as part of the premise not just the narrative, I bet it can work well.  You're an amazing writer, and i bet you've got an interesting plan for this.  I say "plan" but i know it's almost done!

 

Thank you so much for the bonus chapters- two today and a third tomorrow?  YAY!  But I bet LPS is coming in the next chapter- no parent like Charlie's mom will ever forgive their child for being gay, much less treating someone she sees as a child with dignity.

Thank you so much! ?

From here on, I'll be posting one on Monday, Tuesday, Thursday and Saturday. So 4 chapters per week. Should last about 10 weeks or so.

LPS is in another country within the DD. Little Social Services (LSS) are in the country I created ? And as for them turning up... you'll just have to wait and see.

[Guilend]

54 minutes ago, LittleFallenPrincess said:

LPS is in another country within the DD. Little Social Services (LSS) are in the country I created ? And as for them turning up... you'll just have to wait and see.

I don’t see them turning up in the next chapter, but definitely by the third one. Then her father finds out what his wife has done and decides that his wife needs some lessons on how to behave.  But that won’t happen till LSS has turned Charlie’s life upside down.  That’s my prediction. 

[SGTbaby]

Love the simplicity of this chapter 

[AdultInnocence]

4 hours ago, SGTbaby said:

Love the simplicity of this chapter 

I agree