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kerry

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  1. I agree with AndTheChips. I have had a very hard time trying to fathom Nancy's character change as well as why Nurse Bee was tolerated at what otherwise appeared to be a generally kind daycare.
  2. You've accidentally repeated a few ΒΆs here. Also: why is the text so very light? It's hard to read...
  3. Though it is well-written, I'm not enjoying this one as much as the "rules" series. One of the reasons is that I want to like the MC but I'm finding it very hard. I know that kids this age can be cruel and unfeeling, but how is it possible for someone who is actively trying to get put into diapers to be so judgmentally negative about a girl she meets who actually wears them? I mean the girl is utterly obsessed by them; this reaction is not very likely. It would be one thing if she were just going along with her friend, but she is clearly thinking these thoughts on her own. I'm not suggesting that kids need to act or think in a consistent manner, but this just seems incomprehensible to me.
  4. This was five years ago??? I don't remember seeing it at all, but Poco's bump unveiled it as a very promising piece. πŸ™‚
  5. I have not commented yet because I am just catching up on this story, but I do want you to know that I enjoy it thoroughly. It is sweet and adorable, and among the best of the "arrested growth" genre of ABDL stories. πŸ™‚
  6. I can confidently say that this is the first time I've ever heard butterflies called "vicious." πŸ˜‰
  7. Wow. This is a very powerful chapter and so well-written. Great work!
  8. I am another one of those people who glommed onto this story right at the beginning and continued to enjoy it all the way to the end. It's a thoroughly enjoyable piece of fiction whether or not the reader happens to be ABDL. Thank you for it, MW. I also enjoyed The Baby Once Again, and I'm about to procure All My Girlfriend's Rules. πŸ™‚
  9. Just curious: how do measurements work here? For instance, how would the agent know what John meant by "miles"? Surely, even if they use the same units in that world, they mean vastly different things.
  10. Wow. I somehow had fallen three chapters behind in this, one of my favorite stories! But now I am caught up and (of course) loving every page! One thing I really admire is the way that you allow the tension to settle down and remain in lull for extended periods...as it obviously would in real life...before suddenly erupting again. And you handle both so well. πŸ™‚
  11. Just a theory, but I'm thinking that you have set up a denouement (still a bit down the road) in which Ian and Priscilla are the only "happily ever after" we'll see. Julia will warn her off, but we all know how well that sort of thing goes. And as for the Kink Squad, all three of them seem to want Ian in order to fulfill fantasies of their own, rather than true love. For a while now I've been of the opinion that Sarah is incredibly selfish and controlling, and she doesn't deserve him. Vickie seems to love him, but she is more into the kink as well. And Rita? I'd say she's just consumed by FOMO. All three want to control him: they'd take away his independence and ultimately make him into a different person who, though he would be the sperm donor for their babies, would be more likely to find himself in the nursery with them than out in the world as he has been. His own inability to say no to a strong woman has led him toward a life in which he could be totally dominated by three of them, but I've seen no real tender feelings from him for anyone other than Priscilla. I think it is only with her that he has the chance to be happy.
  12. You have not mentioned what the outcomes of this trial might be, have you? I mean: what would happen in the case of an unmitigated guilty verdict?
  13. At this point, I rather wish you had not allowed Darlene to succumb to the temptation to use hypnosis. There is something precious that is budding now, and maybe it would have happened anyway. (I think it easily might have.) but when/if he finds out about the hypnosis...well, all bets are off.
  14. I was a tad worried about this at the start, as it had the potential to go dark. Instead, it went cute, and it's so fun!
  15. I like pretty much everything about the way this is wrapping up. However, I'm finding it hard to understand why her friends have not visited her in hospital. It makes no sense to me, especially for Lisa. She's been there more than a week and no communication at all?
  16. Another intense chapter...and that think with Beth!? I hope she isn't being kidnapped. πŸ™
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