Book 4: Thief in Service

[LittleFallenPrincess]

Chapter 40: One Year Later...

Thief in Service - by LittleFallenPrincess

 

Emily carried me over to the changing table as I was still waking up, gently settling me down and smiling.

“There’s the sleepy little princess! Oh dear... someone left Nanny a present! Let’s get that icky nappy changed, shall we?” She said.

I rubbed the sleep from my eyes as Emily went about changing my messy nappy.

Messy ones had become a frequent thing lately, I’ve been getting more and more comfortable with messing, whilst Emily has gotten used to changing them.

“Your Mummy won’t be back for a little while, she’s got an icky work appointment, taking Jack with her this morning, and you ended up sleeping in! But we’ll make sure you’re ready for your date later tonight. But for now, your big sister is waiting for you in your nursery!”

I giggled and wriggled about as Emily taped me into a clean nappy, blowing a raspberry on my tummy and carrying me over to the wardrobe.

Picking out a cute little babyish tee and some socks, she quickly got me dressed, ready for the day.

“Let’s go put you with your sister.”

I nuzzled into Emily’s chest as she carried me downstairs.

 

“Mowning Paige!” Mimi waved from the playpen.

Waving back, I couldn’t believe how quickly this past year had flown by. And how drastically everything changed.

Alex kept her promise, and released both Emily and Jack from her service at the end of the six months.

Jack was given a cute brunette wig and a maid’s uniform and his job was to clean and cook for the rest of us, as well as tend to the shop like I used to have to. At first, he hated it.

But over time... he got into it, enjoying having a stable job that paid well, even if he was humiliated a bit and forced to work like that. After the six months, Alex told him he was no longer needed as our maid, and instead offered him a job at her company as an IT specialist. He took the job, of course, and ever since has been working his arse off more than I’d ever seen him do so in the past. I’ve never seen him happier either.

He did, however, end up staying with us in the building. We gave the three of our new ‘employees’ a spare apartment downstairs, converting the old guest rooms into their new apartments. And after the six months, Jack didn’t want to move out, so Alex told him he could stay.

...And occasionally he likes to put the old maid uniform back on and do a bit of cleaning. I never would have believed it, but that first time he walked past me wearing the uniform after he had been given the new job... priceless.

Emily however... she didn’t adapt to the initial job so quickly or so easily. At least not for a while anyway. She was disgusted by every wet nappy she had to change, she hated the traditional Nanny uniform she was made to wear, she hated having to call Alex ‘Miss’. But I think seeing me acting little, being happy and giggly and innocent... something about that must have awoken something in her, because she became more maternal, more... Nanny-like. Wet nappies were just a normal thing for her after one point, and messy ones quickly followed as I became more comfortable making them.

After the six months, Alex told her she was no longer needed as Nanny and offered her a job as a driver. And both Alex and I were surprised when Emily gave her a counter offer.

“How about I become your personal driver... but I stay as Paige’s Nanny too?” she had suggested.

So Alex agreed, of course. Emily stayed at the building, becoming my full time Nanny, whilst also chauffeuring us around wherever we needed to go. Unless Alex had to go in alone, like today, in which Emily would stay here and be my Nanny, and Alex would call John for a lift to work.

Emily and I bonded more than the years we spent as crew mates, she really found the thing that brought her happiness in life. We suggested to her to find her own babygirl, but she refused, telling us she didn’t want to, she was happy where she was.

Naomi... Naomi was originally given three roles by Alex, after the fire. But over the year, she’s kind of jumped around multiple roles, including ones she wasn’t originally given.

She too, moved in, and never wanted to move out. We became this weird, kinky, happy family. It was weird at first... but it felt right, and everyone seemed happier.

Mimi at first switched between being my dolly to play with, and my big sister playmate who wasn’t much older than me, so still wore nappies. At first, it made her uncomfortable, but she quickly learned to love them and gets into the role very easily.

It was a lot of fun. Then one day, Emily had to attend a family thing elsewhere, so she was given the day off, and much to mine and Alex’s surprise... Mimi volunteered to babysit me whilst Alex was at work. So we gave it a trial run and... and it worked out really well actually.

So baby playmate, dolly, babysitter, shopping assistant... Mimi even helped Alex design and decorate everyone’s apartments and my new nursery. On top of that, she started attending the events we held... by choice. Emily, Jack and Naomi weren’t forced to attend our little monthly kink events, but Emily and Naomi ended up attending one or two at first, before becoming regulars. Jack... Jack tried once, but quickly left, saying it wasn’t for him. I think he was happy dressing up occasionally, but no more than that.

Alex and I... well our bond strengthened after the fire. Our dynamic flourished and we got closer and closer, to the point where we were inseparable. We did eventually move in together, into the same room, I got my new nursery, we continued the events every month, and everything was just perfect between us. I had never been happier.

And if you’re wondering what that new job she had for me was... well she told me I was to be a full time baby for her... which at this point, I pretty much already was, outside of dates or other kinky fun, but then she surprised me by saying I was also to be her research assistant as she rebuilt her collection after the first was destroyed in the fire. She said I had a knack for finding rare objects, so I often went to auctions with her. Over time, we rebuilt about a fifth of her collection with new items.

And so the five of us became our own little weird, kinky family in a way. We had movie nights, we loved and supported each other... it was great.

Until the day we were to get the final report on Christian.

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“So what’s it say?” I asked, shuffling up to Alex on the sofa in the new living room.

After a day of playing with Naomi in the nursery, and even with the nap earlier, I was exhausted. But I got a second wind now that Alex was home. We had our date planned for later, but for now, the final report on Christian had arrived from the other side of the portal and all five of us were eager to hear about the recommendation his ‘parents’ had given him.

‘A year in that place... I mean I’m pretty much little most of the time these days, but that’s by choice. I’d hate to be stuck like he was. At least he deserved it. And hey, at least he wasn’t subjected to any of those hypnosis things or modified.’ I thought to myself.

Alex unfolded the letter and read it aloud to all of us.

“Dear Alexandria, we’ve been Christian’s foster family for twelve months now, and have treated him as our baby boy as discussed. And as agreed, we have not subjected him to hypnosis or any modification of any form.”

“Thank god.” Emily said.

“We are happy to report that whilst his behaviour was disgusting for the first month, he opted to play along after that, and his behaviour has been steadily improving. I would like to give my official judgement. That he has learnt from any past mistakes he may have committed.” Alex continued.

“Oh, so he’s coming back?” Jack asked, dusting the fireplace. Today was one of his ‘maid days’ as he called it.

“Wait... there’s more...” Alexandria’s face turned serious for a second. “But whilst I am happy to report the baby treatment has improved his behaviour... he is not in any position to return to your society as he is.”

“Wait, did they modify him after all?” Naomi asked.

“Whilst the baby treatment improved his behaviour, he quickly became dependent on it. Through no hypnosis or modification... he has no wish to return to being an adult, and no wish to return through the portal.”

“Wait... what?” I asked.

“Alexandria, you know how progressive we are with littles. Even before the whole GLC thing exposed all the cruel practices last year, we would always fight for little’s rights. My wife didn’t even breastfeed Christian at first. We know the addictive properties, as well as the other side effects it may have, and as per our agreement, he was not to be changed in any way, so we refused to breastfeed him. But after a few months... he begged and begged, crying until we gave in and my wife nursed him.”

“Wow...” I responded, saying out loud what we were all thinking.

“So whilst we will follow any instructions you give us in regards to returning him to your world, we would advise against doing so, as he would no longer be able to function in your society without help. He would also need to be weaned off breast milk, which could be difficult.”

“So... he’s not coming back?” Jack asked as he collapsed into one of the chairs.

“If you would like us to return him, we will do so. If you would like us to adopt Christian and keep him as our own... he’d be a welcome addition to our family. Our kids love him already, and I think he feels safe and secure having a loving family around him. The change in him over time was phenomenal; you should have seen him, especially when it came to his birthday party. Anyway, please get in touch so we can discuss what the plans are for him.”

Alex put down the letter and looked at us all.

“I...” was all she could say. For the first time ever, she seemed speechless.

“He... he seems happy.” Emily spoke up.

“What if they hypnotised him, but lied to us?” Jack suggested.

“I’d have known. I trust them both, but I’ve had my contact keeping a close eye on them the entire year. His last report is similar to that of Christian’s adoptive parents. He... he’s actually happy there.” Alex replied.

“Christian was a dick, but maybe a happy family and a chance to grow up with one this time... maybe that’s what made him want to stay?” Naomi’s theory made sense.

“Maybe. Maybe we’ll ask him sometime if we ever see him. But I’ll put it to a family vote.” Alex said.

I loved these ‘family votes’. It made us feel like an actual family, which just made my heart happy.

“Everyone in favour of letting Christian make the decision to stay with his new family or not, which in this case, is staying... raise your hand.” Alex called out.

Everyone raised their hands, including Alex.

“Matter solved. I’ll get back in touch with them. Maybe we could video chat with them and with Christian at some point, see how he’s doing.”

We all nodded. Emily and Jack walked off, to resume their duties, Naomi had a date to get ready for, which just left me and Alex in the living room together.

“So babygirl... we’ve got our own date to go to. Emily will get you dressed whilst I’m getting ready, but first... I want to show you something.”

“Huh?” I said, before getting whisked off my feet and settled on Alex’s hip.

“It’s regarding our collection...”

 

We walked down to the first floor, to the rebuilt storeroom where our collection of rare artefacts, artwork and books has been built up.

“What about it?” I asked as she shut the door behind her.

Walking over to the wall, she put her hand against the beam running around the side of the room, when I heard a click.

Suddenly part of the wall moved slightly, then slid away into itself.

“What the...?” I gasped.

“This is my vault. I hid it a bit better this time.” She said, placing me back down on the ground.

“Why are you showing me now? What’s in there?” I asked.

“I’ve been working on a project for years now.”

“Huh? Project?”

“Ever since I was a kid, I always loved the story about the Two Goddesses.”

“I don’t think I read that one.”

“The Zadri? Heard about them?”

“Oh, I remember, we had that customer last year come in for books on them!” I suddenly remembered that weird black-haired woman who did that weird hand motion thing.

“Exactly! Well yes, I’ve loved that story since I was a kid, so as I got older... I started collecting what I could on them. It became a bit of a hobby... a bit of a project. It was going well, I got whatever I could on it, when one day, I saw a jewel... a jewel that it was claimed to be from the capital city of the Zadri, Aenonnos.”

“Where have I heard that before...?” I wracked my brain, but couldn’t remember where I had heard it from.

“Well anyway, I want you to help me find more about the Zadri.”

“Why?” I asked.

“Because it fascinates me! Two Goddesses, ruling an ancient kingdom, ripped apart from each other... and what’s even more interesting, is that aside from the statues and jewels and stories passed down through history... there’s no evidence that the Zadri actually existed.”

“Yeah, because it’s all mythological rubbish! Of course it didn’t exist.” I replied.

“But we have all these relics... yet no ruins from which they originate from. It’s like the place never existed but did at the same time.” Alex seemed so enthusiastic as she talked.

“I mean, I’m happy to help, you know I love working with you, finding stuff. But how do I fit into your plan?” I asked, confused.

Alex pressed a few buttons on the keypad and the vault door opened, revealing a small collection of artefacts. Statues, artwork, books... not as large as her other collections, but as it was being stored inside a small vault... it was a lot more valuable to her than everything else.

“And this... I’ve got a feeling you’ve seen before...”

I looked in to see something I hadn’t seen in a year or so now.

“That... that jewel! That’s... that’s the one I stole just before I got hired to take the statue from you!”

“I figured it was you. Well now you know who the client was...” Alex smirked.

“You? You wanted the jewel of... FUCK! That’s where I know the name from! The Jewel of Aenonnos! Wait, so you hired Tony to hire me?”

“I hired a guy to find a thief. He found Tony, who got you to steal it. I only found out when I went to have a word with Tony last year after the fire.”

“You never said what happened then... he never once showed his face or anything since. What exactly happened?”

“I may have... threatened him a bit... maybe put a couple of his goons in the hospital... and maaaaybe used a picture of Christian in the other dimension to make some threats in Tony’s direction...” She shrugged her shoulders, trying to act all innocent.

“You didn’t!”

“I... I did. But hey, it worked. He backed off. He did tell me that he was the one who stole the Jewel for me, trying to beg me not to do anything to him... but I knew better. I knew he wasn’t the actual thief, which made me realise it must have been you.”

“Why didn’t you tell me before?”

“Because I didn’t want to ruin everything. I figured it wasn’t important, especially after everything that went on.”

“Why now then?”

“Because I want you to help me with my project, and I’m being completely open here. I want you to know every part of my life, I want you to work with me... I want you to...”

I turned around to see Alex get down on one knee and produce a box.

“...I want you to marry me.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Epilogue

Thief in Service - by LittleFallenPrincess

 

I was working in the store today.

Jack was busy attending some convention like the nerd he was.

Emily was out with Naomi. Naomi had wanted to pick out some new clothes for her, something a bit more feminine to go with her Nanny aesthetic.

And so it was just like old times, Alex and me in the shop, working together.

Well, I say working together... I’m working, she’s got her feet up whilst reading a book.

“You could always help, you know...” I groaned.

“I know. But I’m enjoying the view...” she grinned back at me.

And so I bent down to tease her once again, flashing my padded bum off from underneath the maid uniform.

“It’s been way too long since I’ve seen you in that uniform. I mean, don’t get me wrong, Jack pulls it off well... but it’s your butt I love the most.” Alex laughed.

I turned around and curtseyed, smiling at her.

“Your wish is my command... Mistress.” I joked.

“Don’t say that, you may regret it...”

 

The door swung open for the first time today, the bells above the door signalling a customer.

I quickly straightened my uniform so my nappy wasn’t showing, and hid behind a bookcase a bit.

“Can I help you?” Alex asked the new customer. “Oh wait, have we met before?”

“Years ago now, but yeah.” They replied. It was a woman, from what I could tell from their voice.

“Oh yeah! You were the customer who wanted the books on the Zadri!” Alex said, relaxing her voice a bit.

“I am! And I’m glad to see you’re still in business!” The woman replied.

“That we are.”

“Oh... and congratulations are in order!” The woman’s voice lifted a bit.

“Huh?” Alex responded.

“I see you’ve gotten married since the last time I was here. Who’s the lucky person?”

“You’re very observant!” Alex chuckled, showing off her wedding ring. “Paige? Come over please.”

I nervously came out from behind the bookshelf and kept looking at the floor as I neared the new customer. Looking up, I recognised the woman who wore a long black coat with black clothes underneath, had black glasses, freckles similar to Alex’s... her face was... just like...

“Oh, so you did end up with her! That makes me so happy! When did you get married?” She broke my train of thought and I shook my head a bit.

“Thanks. Yeah, I proposed to her about... 5... 6 years ago now? I can’t remember. We got married the year after.” Alex replied.

“Well congratulations to the both of you, even if it is a bit late now.”

“Thank you.” I mumbled.

“Thanks, now what can we do for you this time? More books on the Zadri?” Alex asked, changing the subject.

“No thanks. But I do hear... you have a certain Zadri artefact...?”

“I’m sorry, I don’t know what you’re talking about.” Alex’s face went serious all of a sudden.

“You don’t have to lie. I just want to look.”

“I’m sorry, but we have no such thing.” Alex lied again.

“Please. I need to inspect it. I’ll pay anything. You can keep an eye on me the whole time.”

For some reason, I felt like I could trust this strange woman, despite how desperate she sounded. So I nodded to Alex, who sighed and rolled her eyes.

“Okay, but you have to tell me where you heard about it from. And I’ll be keeping a close eye on you...” Alex caved, putting the marker back in her book and putting it down on the counter.

“Deal.” The woman replied.

“Paige, please turn the sign around to closed, and follow me and our customer upstairs to the vault.”

I nodded, rushing over to the sign and flipping it before rushing back to catch up with the pair of them.

 

“So...” Alex discreetly entered her pin into the vault keypad, unlocking it and pulling the vault door open. “Here it is. The Jewel of Aenonnos.”

Alex held the jewel up in front of her, the woman whose name I couldn’t remember went to touch it, when Alex stepped back, pulling it away from her.

“Ah ah. First, I want to know two things. Firstly... where did you find out about this? And secondly... what interest do you have in the Zadri?” She asked the strange woman.

“Just let me touch it and...”

In one swift motion, Alex pulled the jewel back, out of reach and lunged towards the woman.

‘Oh shit. She’s done for.’ I thought, as Alex grabbed the woman’s arm, no doubt attempting to throw her to the floor like I had seen her do many times before. In the years since we got married, she had taught me a few moves, how to defend myself and all that, hence how I was able to figure out what was coming next.

But just as she spun around, ready to throw this woman over her shoulder, the woman threw off her long black coat, causing Alex to stumble forwards, falling on the floor.

“Ah ah.” The woman waved her finger at Alex, which just pissed my wife off further.

Standing up on her feet, Alex was too pissed right now to think clearly, so she lunged towards the woman. The woman put her hand up and waved it about a bit as Alex got closer and closer.

But it was as if time stood still.

Everything froze.

I couldn’t move, Alex was frozen in the air, everything was still. Except... it wasn’t... looking at the clock on the wall, it was still going... and the mysterious woman... she picked her coat up off the floor and put it back on, taking her time doing so.

“Please, no need to be so aggressive. I really do not intend to steal from you or harm you. I just needed answers. Now... please... calm down...”

Waving her hand, I was able to move again and Alex fell to her knees.

“What the...?” Alex was just as shocked as I was.

“Now... let me see that...” the woman in black waved her hand once more, causing me to brace for whatever was going to happen next. But all that happened was the Jewel floated up into the air, heading directly towards the woman.

And as soon as the jewel landed in her hand, the air around us erupted.

No fire, no explosion... but an unseen force knocked us all back to separate walls. Alex hit one wall, looking panicked, checking to see if I was okay. The other woman looked at the jewel in the centre of the room, then up at the two of us. And as I looked from Alex to this mysterious woman... the blur in my mind that I felt when I looked at the woman’s face... began to fade... until I was looking at what I could only describe as an identical twin of Alex’s...

Same eyes... same freckles... same faces!

The force kept us held against the wall, and as I looked back at Alex, I could see that she too could see what I was seeing in regards to the woman.

“What the... why do you look like...”

A searing pain entered my mind. It must have affected the other two, because all three of us screamed out in pain as flashes and images filled our thoughts.

I tried focusing.

I tried keeping my thoughts on Alex.

But it was so hard.

The pain was unbearable.

And soon... the whole room went black.

 

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I looked into the mirror. My long, blonde hair flowed down my shoulders, my bright blue eyes were illuminated by the moonlight.

I looked down and picked up a hairpin. One that she had gotten me for our birthday. One of my most prized possessions.

Looking back up, I saw her behind me, wrapping her arms around my waist and gently kissing my neck. Her wavy, mousey brown hair was pinned back by the hair band I had gifted her for our birthday, her gorgeous green eyes looked down at me, and she looked as beautiful as she always does.

“So my love, tonight is to be our last night together. I wish I could be there in person.” She said, gently brushing my face.

I wish I could actually feel it. What I wouldn’t give to feel her touch one last time...

“Doesn’t matter in what form you’re here, I’m just glad we aren’t truly alone.” I said, pretending to feel her touch on my face.

“The guards outside prevent me from seeing you face to face. And no doubt your guards will be doing the same. So I appear to you with this illusion. It’s the best I can do with my remaining power.”

“I’ve also felt the lack of power. But no worries, you’re here still. That’s all that matters. So let’s enjoy this last night, together. However that may be.” I smiled weakly at her in the mirror.

“I love you, babygirl.”

“I love you too, Mummy.” I replied.

“You’re so cute when you call me that.”

“Hey, we may be the only ones here who know of all that stuff... but that just makes it that much more special. It’s our thing.”

“You loved that universe, didn’t you?” She asked, despite knowing the answer.

“I wasn’t the only one!”

We both laughed.

We laughed and talked throughout the night, enjoying each other’s company for the last time until the morning would rise and we would be separated forever.

 

And when the sun rose, and the bells tolled... we knew what awaited us.

“I don’t want to leave you...” I cried.

“Do you trust me?” she asked, brushing my cheek.

“Always and forever...”

“Then trust me when I say... we’ll be together again. One day. I promise you that.”

“I hope so. Our love could never keep us apart. Of that I’m sure.” I smiled.

“I love you, my little Ophelia.”

“I love you too, my wonderful Mummy... Freya.”

Her illusion disappeared as the guards started unlocking my door.

Standing up straight, I braced myself for what was to come.

‘I hope you’re right, Mummy. I hope I see you again.’

 

To be continued in Book 5...

 

 

 

 

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[Moon3ye]

I really liked chapter 40 I liked that they all grew as a family.

I'm surprised about Christian's decision but frankly someone like that wouldn't be missed in our world.

Funny that the theory that Miss Carver hired Tony somehow turned out to be true, but for something completely different.

Too bad Miss Carver didn't just send Tony to DD, but at least he's quiet.

Nice that the two got married.

The epilogue is... Interesting.

I understand the hate for the Cliff Hanger.

But I find it exciting I think it's the first time the culture is named at least right from the beginning of this story.

I think when book 5 is finished and you read all the stories again (which I will definitely do) you will recognize a lot of things.

I think you should even know the short story you wrote for Christmas.

That was really so much that I can not really grasp the many thoughts.

I'm really looking forward to Wednesday for the release.

[TerranV]

Another one down. Well done!

Everyone's happy ending didn't really surprise me except for Christian's. I was 50/50 on him changing his attitude but him enjoying himself in the DD was something I didn't expect.

So this Zadri stuff is where this is all going? I'm guessing another two varients from another dimension except they're goddesses.

When Faith almost died in your last story, was her vision on that beach of this other dimension?

[Moon3ye]

In case anyone is wondering what a traditional nanny uniform looks like.

[LittleFallenPrincess]

3 hours ago, Moon3ye said:

I really liked chapter 40 I liked that they all grew as a family.

I'm surprised about Christian's decision but frankly someone like that wouldn't be missed in our world.

Funny that the theory that Miss Carver hired Tony somehow turned out to be true, but for something completely different.

Too bad Miss Carver didn't just send Tony to DD, but at least he's quiet.

Nice that the two got married.

The epilogue is... Interesting.

I understand the hate for the Cliff Hanger.

But I find it exciting I think it's the first time the culture is named at least right from the beginning of this story.

I think when book 5 is finished and you read all the stories again (which I will definitely do) you will recognize a lot of things.

I think you should even know the short story you wrote for Christmas.

That was really so much that I can not really grasp the many thoughts.

I'm really looking forward to Wednesday for the release.

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Yeah when people theorised that Alex had hired Tony, I was giggling. I mean... it wasn't completely wrong...

I hope you enjoy book 5! It's a very special book and I'm excited for people to read it!

49 minutes ago, TerranV said:

Another one down. Well done!

Everyone's happy ending didn't really surprise me except for Christian's. I was 50/50 on him changing his attitude but him enjoying himself in the DD was something I didn't expect.

So this Zadri stuff is where this is all going? I'm guessing another two varients from another dimension except they're goddesses.

When Faith almost died in your last story, was her vision on that beach of this other dimension?

Thank you so much! I think this book makes 500,000+ words in a year. I still can't believe it honestly. I'm so glad I got into writing though!

I'm glad I can still surprise! And yes... another happy ending. I may be mean with my cliffhangers, but that's 4 happy endings so far. Question is... would I be super obvious and make book 5 a happy ending? Or would I be really mean and have a bad ending after all these happy ones? Or maybe something in between...

Yup. Zadri are the focus of book 5. And these new variations the others are having visions of... these goddesses... its as if that word and the idea of them have been dotted throughout all my books so far... as if leading up to this... ?

And as for Faith's vision... the descriptions in both hers and this vision sound very similar right? Maybe there's a link...

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[kerry]

Thank you once again for these stories. I think this one and "Little in Love" are my favorites, though I have certainly enjoyed them all. 

What can I say about the ending? Like everyone else, I was surprised about Christian. Not unhappy, just surprised. As far as Tony is concerned, I wish he had a much greater punishment. A threat of one just doesn't seem enough. If anyone has ever deserved a DD orphanage more than him, I can't remember it. 

I for one loved the Zadri thing. It's lovely and mysterious and I like the fact that the twins are named for two goddesses from two different traditions, too. I'm looking forward to reading Book #5.

[TerranV]

39 minutes ago, LittleFallenPrincess said:

I'm glad I can still surprise! And yes... another happy ending. I may be mean with my cliffhangers, but that's 4 happy endings so far. Question is... would I be super obvious and make book 5 a happy ending? Or would I be really mean and have a bad ending after all these happy ones? Or maybe something in between...

As long as you don't just have a bad ending just for the sake of throwing us for a loop.

[TheJ]

6 hours ago, LittleFallenPrincess said:

"You? You wanted the jewel of... FUCK! That’s where I know the name from! The Jewel of Aenonnos! Wait, so you hired Tony to hire me?”

I was right! In a way... It counts!

So, these mythological people existed in another dimension? Sounds like we're going on a multidimensional tour guided by none other than the authoress in the fifth book. I've booked my tickets. (First time booking tickets means anything good in this thread.)

[LittleFallenPrincess]

11 hours ago, kerry said:

Thank you once again for these stories. I think this one and "Little in Love" are my favorites, though I have certainly enjoyed them all. 

What can I say about the ending? Like everyone else, I was surprised about Christian. Not unhappy, just surprised. As far as Tony is concerned, I wish he had a much greater punishment. A threat of one just doesn't seem enough. If anyone has ever deserved a DD orphanage more than him, I can't remember it. 

I for one loved the Zadri thing. It's lovely and mysterious and I like the fact that the twins are named for two goddesses from two different traditions, too. I'm looking forward to reading Book #5.

Eeeee I never thought about people having favourites out of my stories!

It makes me so happy that you and lots of others enjoy my stories so much and comments like this make me so glad that I decided to start writing. So thank you!

Tony... Tony may or may not get what he deserves. 

And thank you for the last bit! I've been so nervous about introducing the Zadri and all that... book 5 has made me so much more anxious. I'm a huge fan of mythology, so I was nervous to start my own. You'll find out a lot more about our mysterious new variations in book 5 ?

11 hours ago, TerranV said:

As long as you don't just have a bad ending just for the sake of throwing us for a loop.

Most of the story is already planned out (ending is figured out), so don't worry, this isn't influencing it. It's why I write ahead of what I post.

And hey, I wouldn't have a sudden bad ending. Any ending I write is (hopefully) well thought out and written for a good reason.

9 hours ago, TheJ said:

I was right! In a way... It counts!

So, these mythological people existed in another dimension? Sounds like we're going on a multidimensional tour guided by none other than the authoress in the fifth book. I've booked my tickets. (First time booking tickets means anything good in this thread.)

You were right!.... kinda ?

But also not.

And these 'goddesses' are mentioned throughout my books they appear in every story so far. It's one of the clues I've been talking about. Lots more information about them coming in book 5!

Book 5 is my most ambitious story. And I hope you all enjoy it starting next week! ?

[bje]

That was good history. I was nervous to read it because the previous story was so extreme and unpleasantly violent, but was pleasantly surprised that no one (except Christian) was permanently injured or killed. It was also fun to hear about the other kinks that were presented.

On the other hand, I'm disappointed to hear that Alex is a thief. I didn't think she was a criminal and I'm disappointed that she is. It's somewhat hypocritical that she was upset about being robbed and punishes burglars when she uses the same method to make her collection.

I am also stunned by the violent tone of some of the comments on the story. Death threats are never okay, even if they may have been made in jest. I will understand if some don't want to post their stories in this forum because they are afraid of the reactions.

[Moon3ye]

I would like to say that I never said that I wanted to kill her.

Yes I would have put her in concrete but I would have left her head outside and provided her with food etc..

Yes well and I would have painted her and made funny hairdressers to annoy her.

But never killed her.

[YourFNF]

On 2/23/2022 at 12:37 PM, LittleFallenPrincess said:

I turned around to see Alex get down on one knee and produce a box.

 

“...I want you to marry me.”

 

So happy to see them together!

And I knew that gem was going to be important!

Christian might have been the biggest shocker of all.

On 2/23/2022 at 12:37 PM, LittleFallenPrincess said:

Her illusion disappeared as the guards started unlocking my door.

 

Standing up straight, I braced myself for what was to come.

‘I hope you’re right, Mummy. I hope I see you again.’

So many pieces.... Starting to get the picture but...

[littlepinkdargon]

I'm a bit late replying to this, life has been butts.

 

Totally loved the ending. Opens up a lot that I look forward to reading in Book 5.

 

Yes we wouldn't really hurt our dear princess. But it goes to show how much her characters and story are loved by a few fan...atics.

[LittleFallenPrincess]

On 2/24/2022 at 6:20 PM, bje said:

That was good history. I was nervous to read it because the previous story was so extreme and unpleasantly violent, but was pleasantly surprised that no one (except Christian) was permanently injured or killed. It was also fun to hear about the other kinks that were presented.

On the other hand, I'm disappointed to hear that Alex is a thief. I didn't think she was a criminal and I'm disappointed that she is. It's somewhat hypocritical that she was upset about being robbed and punishes burglars when she uses the same method to make her collection.

I am also stunned by the violent tone of some of the comments on the story. Death threats are never okay, even if they may have been made in jest. I will understand if some don't want to post their stories in this forum because they are afraid of the reactions.

Which story? I've had one other apart from this one since the last one you commented on. If you don't like the odd bit of violence, I wouldn't recommend reading my future stories. None of it is 'extreme', but then what may not be extreme for me and many others... may still be extreme to you. Maybe just avoid my stories from now on, as they won't get less violent.

Also Christian wasn't permanently injured or killed. He is happy living his best life in the Diaper Dimension.

Alex wasn't a thief. She hired a guy to obtain a jewel. She never expected him to just steal it. And even if she was a criminal, you can still be upset about being robbed, even if you yourself are a thief.

And as for the comments, please don't take them seriously. They know me enough to make jokes and know that I'll play along with them. I like to tease my readers, especially those who comment on my chapters, and I like that people feel comfortable with me to make these jokes.

On 2/25/2022 at 5:28 AM, Moon3ye said:

I would like to say that I never said that I wanted to kill her.

Yes I would have put her in concrete but I would have left her head outside and provided her with food etc..

Yes well and I would have painted her and made funny hairdressers to annoy her.

But never killed her.

See! I don't take any of this seriously. If I did, I'd say so and tell people to stop. I like teasing.

Although don't you dare touch my hair!!!!!! ?

On 2/25/2022 at 6:45 AM, YourFNF said:

So happy to see them together!

And I knew that gem was going to be important!

Christian might have been the biggest shocker of all.

So many pieces.... Starting to get the picture but...

? I'm glad you liked it!

1 hour ago, littlepinkdargon said:

I'm a bit late replying to this, life has been butts.

 

Totally loved the ending. Opens up a lot that I look forward to reading in Book 5.

 

Yes we wouldn't really hurt our dear princess. But it goes to show how much her characters and story are loved by a few fan...atics.

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm just about to post the first chapter of book 5! I hope you enjoy that! Can't wait to read comments on it.

And yeah, I like the back and forth teasing

[Moon3ye]

11 minutes ago, LittleFallenPrincess said:

See! I don't take any of this seriously. If I did, I'd say so and tell people to stop. I like teasing.

Although don't you dare touch my hair!!!!!! ?

How are you going to stop me when you're encased in concrete.

I'll do one side purple and the other pastel rose and then you get pig tails with big matching ruffles bows.

[bje]

1 hour ago, LittleFallenPrincess said:

Which story? I've had one other apart from this one since the last one you commented on. If you don't like the odd bit of violence, I wouldn't recommend reading my future stories. None of it is 'extreme', but then what may not be extreme for me and many others... may still be extreme to you. Maybe just avoid my stories from now on, as they won't get less violent.

I meant Witch in Training. Sorry that I referred to it as the previous story which it is not. I found it extreme that a village and all its inhabitants were wiped out in Witch in Training, and as I wrote I was glad there is nothing similar in Thief in Service. So I have no problem with "the odd bit of violence" in TiS. Why should I avoid your stories from now on when I found it good, as I wrote as the very first thing in my comment? I find it logical to continue with the next story when this one was good in my opinion.

1 hour ago, LittleFallenPrincess said:

Also Christian wasn't permanently injured or killed. He is happy living his best life in the Diaper Dimension.

Well, incontinence from Amazon milk is a permanent injury even if he's happy with it.

1 hour ago, LittleFallenPrincess said:

Alex wasn't a thief. She hired a guy to obtain a jewel. She never expected him to just steal it. And even if she was a criminal, you can still be upset about being robbed, even if you yourself are a thief.

The person who orders and pays for a criminal act to be performed is just as guilty as the person who performs the act. And excuse me, but it's bullshit that Alex didn't expect the jewel to be stolen. She directly said "I hired a guy to find a thief" in the story. That makes Alex a thief in the eyes of both the law and me.

 

[diaperboymi]

Just got past chapter 29.  OMG..Rose ??????  The bib..."Mommy's little stinker" ?  i love the way you bring the series together.   And dynamic between Paige and Alex is Wonderful.   Can't wait to read the rest ???????

[diaperboymi]

OK....Just finished the Whole story and OMG.  It was Amazing.   I can't believe how Truly Wonderful your work is.  I couldn't stop reading and completed the whole story in about 3 days.  The crossovers, the the characters and the kink were totally enjoyable.  I can't believe there is only one move book in this Fantastic series.  I was so caught up in the story that (I can't believe I'm saying this) I actually had a tear at the ending.  Wow...NEVER saw that coming?  That's how good this was.  I've started the final book and it's Fantastic as well.  Please, do us all a favor...don't ever stop writing these Incredible stories.  I'll ready Everything you write.  Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Sarah Penguin]

I magical.,y curse you that your bottoms will always be replaced by concrete nappies and concrete diaper covers forever.

[dmavn]

 

I have to say that you are one of the most awesomest writers ever.. cough, (sorry babysophia) ?

I just started reading this book this morning and now it’s almost 3am and I have to get up for work in 4 hours… Soo tempted to start book 5 but then I know I will never get to sleep. Keep u

p the good work!

[LittleFallenPrincess]

11 hours ago, dmavn said:

 

I have to say that you are one of the most awesomest writers ever.. cough, (sorry babysophia) ?

I just started reading this book this morning and now it’s almost 3am and I have to get up for work in 4 hours… Soo tempted to start book 5 but then I know I will never get to sleep. Keep u

p the good work!

That is a lot of praise! Thank you! I'm really glad you like my books and I hope you continue to enjoy them in the future! ?

[FloridaKid]

Finished this book in one day…yep…I’ve got it bad. I simply love how you’ve woven this tale together. The goddesses linked with the statue…half expected Paige to experience something magical when she touched it just like Ellie in WiT.

I am now at the point where I originally saw your caveat about reading all of the other books first. Sooo happy I did. What a wonderful gift you’ve given this community. ❤️?

[LittleFallenPrincess]

14 hours ago, FloridaKid said:

Finished this book in one day…yep…I’ve got it bad. I simply love how you’ve woven this tale together. The goddesses linked with the statue…half expected Paige to experience something magical when she touched it just like Ellie in WiT.

I am now at the point where I originally saw your caveat about reading all of the other books first. Sooo happy I did. What a wonderful gift you’ve given this community. ❤️?

Wow, you're going through them quickly! I'm glad you're enjoying them all! One more major one to go and you're done! Don't forget the short story if you haven't read it! It's not super important, but it is part of the series.