Benjy Posted November 2, 2016 Posted November 2, 2016 (edited) Chapter 1. Edited November 2, 2016 by Benjy added text 2
ppbenn Posted November 2, 2016 Posted November 2, 2016 Not sure where you're going with this, but I am definitely interested in reading more. Thanks for taking the time to write and post this. 1
Benjy Posted November 2, 2016 Author Posted November 2, 2016 Chapter 2. That first afternoon together, Mary had manged to convince Peter to stay for some supper, with the promise that she would drive him and Timmy (the terrier) home afterwards. They talked and sat together for nearly five hours with Peter
1SissyAlice Posted November 5, 2016 Posted November 5, 2016 I like the direction this story is going.
Eagle0769 Posted November 5, 2016 Posted November 5, 2016 I like the story but I'm a little mixed up? Not sure of where it went or is going?
Crimson_Wolf Posted November 5, 2016 Posted November 5, 2016 1 hour ago, Eagle0769 said: I like the story but I'm a little mixed up? Not sure of where it went or is going? It's going from the present to the past to when they met. 1
CDfm Posted November 10, 2016 Posted November 10, 2016 It took me longer than it should have to get caught up but I am now. I really think you are doing a great job writing this story. I did think that the last bounce bavk in time was initially a bit confusing but I caught on. Please keey up the great additions, I am looking forward to seeing more.
ppbenn Posted November 12, 2016 Posted November 12, 2016 Fantastic addition. I like how you how you've incorporated so many characters into this story. Please continue soon.
Eagle0769 Posted November 15, 2016 Posted November 15, 2016 That was a very good story Benjy. Thank you for taking time to finish it. Eagle0769 aka Baby Jay
Britnee Posted November 18, 2016 Posted November 18, 2016 WOW! Awesome story! Thanks for taking the time to write and post it!
ppbenn Posted November 18, 2016 Posted November 18, 2016 Great story, thank you for taking the time write and post it here for all of b us to enjoy.
CDfm Posted November 21, 2016 Posted November 21, 2016 That was a good story. Thanks for taking the time to write it and share it with us.
Sammy9 Posted October 29, 2020 Posted October 29, 2020 But where are the chapters? All i can see are the titles of each chapter. Has the story been deleted or moved? 1
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