Personalias Posted March 11, 2014 Author Share Posted March 11, 2014 College or Cribs: Chapter 13- Just Go With It. Link to comment
Kaidus Posted March 11, 2014 Share Posted March 11, 2014 To Chris, that can't be a good sign; MORE PLEASE! Link to comment
Rockies Fan in Diapers Posted March 11, 2014 Share Posted March 11, 2014 That was a great...no a FANTASTIC chapter! You had me engrossed in the entire thing! Wow, just wow. I am starting to really almost wish I were Chris. How lucky is he? But who is the old man at the end & how does he fit into all of this? Go on please, I can't wait for more! Link to comment
whetdiaper Posted March 12, 2014 Share Posted March 12, 2014 Personalias- I just don't have much to say on this site. I'm on others, though. Link to comment
Ashleybabygirl667 Posted March 12, 2014 Share Posted March 12, 2014 More more please this is an amazing story Link to comment
diaperpt Posted March 12, 2014 Share Posted March 12, 2014 Wow! We want to find out exactly who that man is! We know what he's been doing. This is fun. Link to comment
fading.kitten Posted March 13, 2014 Share Posted March 13, 2014 Huh.. I find it kind of funny that you wouldn't think that your stories would be anyone's favorites. I loved Dante's Infancia (not just because that is one of my favorite tales ever. Ahem.) Your stories are always tight from what I've read and you take the time to develop characters. Heck, I'd say I'd be reading Jim Butcher with your Bagman story if it wasn't you. I guess I hope that is a compliment? Link to comment
PUP-E Posted March 13, 2014 Share Posted March 13, 2014 Dang! so close!, i always thought it'd be a funny scene if a mom let her older child unknowingly drink her breast milk. But i guess she's not that quirky of a mom!, thank you for sharing. P.S Great twist/cliffhanger by the way. Link to comment
Sarah Penguin Posted March 13, 2014 Share Posted March 13, 2014 This was an amazing update, hung on every word drinking my bottle *waves and hugs* Link to comment
Shawnie Posted March 13, 2014 Share Posted March 13, 2014 WOW is all I know to say it was wonderful chapter. Breastfeeding is a very nurturing to babies Just when he thought he was boobie blocked he gets his tummy fulll awwwwwwwwwww Link to comment
hawkeyejones63 Posted March 14, 2014 Share Posted March 14, 2014 Best. Chapter. Ever. Link to comment
whetdiaper Posted March 29, 2014 Share Posted March 29, 2014 Just wanted to remind you how much we love your story! :-) 1 Link to comment
Personalias Posted April 10, 2014 Author Share Posted April 10, 2014 Not as long as I'd like it, but I'd rather keep the story going, even if it means for now that I have to split up sequences into smaller chapters. 1 Link to comment
Kaidus Posted April 11, 2014 Share Posted April 11, 2014 That magician is definitely connected to Chris' situation; MORE PLEASE! Link to comment
LilNogee Posted April 11, 2014 Share Posted April 11, 2014 As an amateur magician myself, I am always bemused whenever a magician pops up in a story. Excellent addition. Link to comment
Sarah Penguin Posted April 11, 2014 Share Posted April 11, 2014 That was fun Looking forward to more Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted April 11, 2014 Share Posted April 11, 2014 I really enjoyed Professor Bumble. He's very charismatic and unpredictable. I wonder what he has in store for Chris. Also loved the wordplay. Great characterization and streamlined plot-but then that's kind of a hallmark of your stories! I must ask, do you do plot maps or plan in advance, or write as you go along? Link to comment
Ashleybabygirl667 Posted April 11, 2014 Share Posted April 11, 2014 More more more please Link to comment
Personalias Posted April 11, 2014 Author Share Posted April 11, 2014 I really enjoyed Professor Bumble. He's very charismatic and unpredictable. I wonder what he has in store for Chris. Also loved the wordplay. Great characterization and streamlined plot-but then that's kind of a hallmark of your stories! I must ask, do you do plot maps or plan in advance, or write as you go along? Link to comment
Rockies Fan in Diapers Posted April 11, 2014 Share Posted April 11, 2014 This continues to be Great! Sorry I don't have time to be descriptive right now...my life is kinda hectic right now & will continue to be for awhile. Link to comment
Shawnie Posted April 12, 2014 Share Posted April 12, 2014 Wow that had me on the edge of my padded seat ... I thought Chris was fixing whip a can of ass whooping on the "clown" . Ok OK Magician . Good thing for safety seats or the Magician woulda been pick his wand up off the floor Link to comment
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