Kingdark

I'm not asking for permission, not really, It's a lot of fun writing it, especially since most of my stories crash and burn. I can do the setup just fine, but then I just hit a metaphorical wall. I'm not expecting everyone to go like 'OMG please write the story' please OMG that's amazing. No, it's nothing like that. But posting a story you're proud off, to have zero reactions or worse, to have one word reactions like 'good' or 'amazing' are discouraging. Because if the only thing you can be bothered to write as a reply is 'good' or 'amazing' or other single word replies, then you clearly did not enjoy the story. At least, that's the way I see it.

So, I'm currently in the process of writing a Starfield x TES crossover fic with ABDL elements. I'm currently rapidly approaching a hundred pages, which is a complete and total record for me. (YAAY!!) I want to share that story with you guys, but I'm unsure if there's any interest in it. I'm also very picky and want my writing to be as close to perfection as possible. If you see a mistake, I want you to point it out. It's my dream to write an actual book someday and if I could actually publish it, that would be even better. (never going to happen though, that's why it's a dream.) Also, the story is primarily written in first person and I know that can turn a lot of people off if it isn't done right. (I think it is, but then, every author thinks it's done right.) But like I said, if there isn't any interest in it, then I won't bother posting it, although I will still cross post it on ao3. (archive of our own.) Also, since this is fanfiction, you won't have to worry about the full story being hidden behind a paywall. I really, really do NOT want to be sued, so yhea, that's not going to happen. Now, for those of you who don't know what Starfield or TES is, i will be explaining that briefly. Starfield is a video game made by Bethesda. It's their first brand new IP in a very long time (I believe it's 25 years) and it only released in September. Bethesda is the company who made The Elder Scrolls: oblivion, The Elder Scrolls: Skyrim and The Elder Scrolls: morrorwind. They're also the guys who made fallout 3 and 4 as well as fallout 76. So when I say: TES, it's an abbreviation of The Elder Scrolls. What does this mean for the story? It means that the races of TES will be present. It means that earth doesn't exist, but Tamriel does. Magic exists as well, but it is seen as outdated. Like how those one shot pistols and cannons are seen as outdated in the real world as well. (They still kill as effectively as modern day weapons though.) Anyway, you should at the very least, be vaguely familiar with TES lore. I will be referencing events from Oblivion and Skyrim. That won't happen often and it won't be a focus... Actually, now that I think about it, I suppose it would be closer to a fusion, rather than a crossover. Because a fusion mixes elements of both fandoms, while a crossover means that characters from one fandom, interact with characters of another fandom. Finally, I want to make one thing absolutely clear. If you are in the process of playing Starfield or have just gotten started and you want to read this story, then be prepared for spoilers. I will not be quoting game dialogue word by word, but it will follow the plot in broad lines. A few more things to know: The main character is a male Khajiit. (Because Khajiit is my favourite race.) There is something special about the MC. (No, he is not the Dragonborn.) Diapers will play a role, but keep in mind that while they play a role, I wouldn't say they are the focus. MC = main character Story summary: The story starts just after you make a character in Starfield, where a secret is immediately exposed. (Though it isn't the obvious.) MC and Lin negotiate a little and then they go out to meet Barret. Pirates attack and events go similar to they go in the game. MC goes out into space, does his thing, goes to the base, does more his thing and then goes to the lodge, where everything starts to go different. MC and Sarah go to Mars, where they're led on a wild goose chase, and they eventually track down their target. Then they obtain the artefact and it's from here out, that everything changes. (I can't believe I've essentially summarized a large part of my story in two tiny paragraphs. Suffice it to say, there's a lot more to it then what I've mentioned.)

I used to do it with toilet paper. I still have my teddy, but I don't have diapers that would fit him and I obviously won't buy a pack, just so I could fit one on him. Those diapers you can buy for dolls are too small I think and I don't want to risk buying them, only for them to be too big.

Why? let's start with the fact that it only uses a fraction of the space you have on your monitor. That's the first reason. (and my second biggest problem with the site) The second reason, (and my number one problem) is that a lot of the stories are, just plain terrible. Terrible grammar. Terrible spelling. just. Terrible. Stories that are literally one paragraph. NO punctuation or even quotation marks to show where dialogue starts and ends. Now, I know, everyone has got to learn, right? Sure. I agree with you. So, if I write a polite, constructive review, pointing out, that (real example by the way) names of characters should be capitalized, ergo, they need to start with a capital letter, and the author just plains ignores me and makes a point of writing a sketch to taunt me specifically? But if I write a polite review, pointing that mistake out, then I expect the author to correct themselves. The argument of 'I don't want reviews if I don't ask for them is WORTHLESS! If you don't want reviews, then post them on a corner of the internet where nobody will find it, but posting it on a website like wattpad will INVITE people to review, whether you like it or not. Ahum, the point is, that I have read on wattpad before. The example above is just one of many. A lot of the writers are immature angsty teenagers who think they are the man. Now, let me tell you something, I've written stories myself, and I take pride in them. I take a LOT of pride in them. I want them to be the best they can possibly be. Why would I even bother to write a story, if I didn't want to improve? I'm writing a story, because I LIKE to write and because I dream to publish a real book some day. -inhales deeply and breathes back out- Sorry, but I feel very strongly about that issue. I just don't understand how you can write a story and how you can whine about not WANTING REVIEWS because you're just WRITING FOR FUN????? How does that even make any sense!??? Anyway, that aside, there's the adds. They are an eyesore plain and simple. Now, I've been using an add blocker for years and haven't regretted it, since I discovered they existed. Now, I know wattpad wants to make money, but the way they're doing it, is terrible. Just show an add at the bottom or the top and be done with it. Not to the sides, where the add sometimes takes up more space than the story itself! Then there's my third complaint. The... Progress meter, I guess it is? It tells you how long you have left before the chapter is done. I don't want that. I don't. It's an eyesore and it distracts and it breaks immersion. I don't care how far I am in a chapter. I'm a fast reader, and when a chapter tells me I need TWELVE fricking minutes to read a chapter that's barely five thousand words!? I can read a story of roughly a hundred thousand words, in an hour or two TOPS! Bottom line, I want the damn thing gone, but that isn't going to happen any time soon. But aside from the terrible writing, it's the fact that it the story, you know, the thing you're visiting wattpad for? It barely uses a third of available space. If I read a story, I want it to take up as much space as possible with as few distractions as possible. In any case, to say that ALL stories on wattpad are bad would be a lie. I know for a fact that there are decentstories on wattpad. Point in fact, baby sophia's stories are a good example. Fanfiction.net is one website where I read a lot. It's meant for fanfics and not for original stories and definitely not meant for stories like the diaper dimension. But if you want the website with the most stories, hands down? fanfiction.net is your first place to be. If you want an alternative, because you want to post a story like this, then ao3 is the place to be. I know for a fact that it already has diaper stories, and you can mark your stories as explicit and you can mark it, that only readers with an account may read it. You can also add tags to specify what kind of story it is, you're going to read. Now, I can already hear the 'fanboy' accusations coming, so let me cut those off before they can be thrown at me. Are fanfiction.net or ao3 perfect? No. They aren't. Not by a longshot. Both have their own problems. Do they have terrible stories? Yes. I would bet everything in my wallet that they do have terrible stories. Do they have adds? Yes. But they are MUCH less of an eyesore compare to wattpad. But if that wasn't enough to convince you, then refer to the article I'm linking below. click here for the article So, yes. I'm most emphatically suggesting that you avoid wattpad like the plague. And I know I shouldn't, but I'm going to finish my rant about earlier anyway. Don't write if you don't have pride in your stories, or just don't bother to share them. If you do want to improve, then learn from what people say and don't insist that words like thru or anyways are words you should use in a story. The first is slang. It should not be used in a story, period. End of discussion. The second is informal and should be avoided. I don't care if you TALK like that and SAY anyways, you just don't in written stories. I apologize if my reply sounds angry to you, it just turned out that way. But I hope it answered your question.

No offense, but I avoid wattpad like the plague. Have you considered posting on archive of our own? Stories like these are permitted and it reads like a normal stories. No comments get in the way of things. And I suppose it could get cumbersome and confusing... Just consider crossposting on archive of our own and I guarantee a lot of people will thank you for it.

Hey, Lovely story, just like your other stories! But have you considered making several posts in a row so you can reserve them for updates? It is quite annoying to have to go forward several pages every time. Making several posts in a row, would let you update them and would make it more convenient at least, to read. That's just a suggestion though. An alternative, would be a separate topic, you can lock and unlock as needed, so only you could make additional posts. I do have a bit trouble remembering who the various characters are though, but it's getting better! Well done, is what I'm saying basically.

I'm not inco. Nor do I need them for medical issues or anything like that. I wear them for comfort for the most part.

So, I've caught up all the way to now and I'm really impressed. The story is well written, the grammar and spelling is good too. There were just a few (less than a handful) cringy-ish scenes, where I thought the whole baby-ing this was just a bit too forced, but it's all good. Very well done and I'm looking forward to the (eventual) confrontation with her old employer. And if I had to make a guess as to what you're planning with her old employer, then I would say, that he would find himself in another place where he would find himself a little fish amongst (literal) giants! Or if not that, then perhaps Alex knows someone, who may be able to teach him some manners...

That my means it's in your head. Don't wear for say two weeks and see what happens.

As a not native English speaker, I only needed to read it twice, to ascertain the difference. The first example, is where you say, you want to start eating, and the second is where you say you literally want to eat your grandma, thus becoming a cannibal.

Suit yourself. I'm at least glad that you took some of my advice. I checked it out and it's much easier to read now. And you do, what you do. Be yourself. That's definitely something I agree with.

@BabySpiderBoy Hey, I just checked your blog because I was curious about that story, but right now, your 'story' is literally unreadable. It's literally one huge paragraph. I would strongly suggest you go back, and divide it into smaller paragraphs of four to five lines on average. The second thing is to cut down on the emoji's, like a lot. It's one thing to add the occasional smiley face, but you're going overboard. But that's less important than the enormous paragraph. Seriously, have you tried reading it yourself? What do you think makes a story easier to read? If it is literally one enormous paragraph, or a bunch of small ones? Anyway, more relevant to the topic, I've never wore diapers to school, once I got into them. I must have worn some protection, when I got to school early in my life, but I was 'clean' pretty early, or so my mum tells me. Would I wear diapers to school, when I was younger? No. The risk just isn't worth it. Do you have any idea what doing that and being discovered would do to your social life? It's one thing to wear them to school if you're incontinent or don't have a choice, but wearing them when you don't have to? Definitely not going to happen. In that same breath, I will also tell you that I'm going to evening school for adults and that I have worn a diaper under my pants then. There's a major difference in doing it when you see them only once a week compared to if you see them everyday. Also, kids are cruel and do stupid shit, but if adults try to do any of that stuff, they could be in big trouble.

Welcome to the forum :)

If I have a messy diaper, I don't stay in it, I get rid of it as quickly as is practical. Though, I haven't changed another person's messy diaper, I have diapered a few people and honestly, I don't mind that. But I'm not sure how I would react if I had to change an adult's messy diaper.

Maybe it's short for something, but what does 'roids' mean? Why aren't you allowed to change yourself? I mean, fantasies aside, I would think that's something you would want to do yourself...?

Wouldn't that come up naturally when you start dating and getting to know each other? Unless it's a one night adventure, but in that case, I don't think you'd care much what some random partner thinks.

When I had surgery on my back to correct my scolioze a second time, (long story, I might get into detail later) I was really nervous. Anyway, I had a bit of a diarehea or at least the feeling that it was like that. Anyway, long story short, I asked the staff to put a diaper on me, because of that and that I wouldn't want an accident to happen in the middle of surgery. (That makes sense right?) The point I'm getting to though, is that I couldn't pee for a long time after. The nurses tried to put a cathether in me, but I was so tense that it hardly worked at all. I just couldn't relax. I asked the nurses to help me on the toilet a few times or for permission to go there on my own and eventually, I managed to go. I remember that it felt very weird, almost like burning. Conclusion: there are drugs that can prevent you from peeing after surgery. Though, I did ask if they could give me something, so I would HAVE to pee, but they had to get the doctors permission for that.

No offense meant, but shouldn't you be asking these questions to your doctor? Everyone is different after all, so you could get a dozen different answers.

I'm very impressed with the story so far. It's less about the 'fantasy' of things and tries to be more realistic. But if that one character is so upset about it, does that mean she realizes that baby-fying Littles is wrong, or is it more that he was 'able' to slap her hand away with no real consequences?

To what story are you referring to? The one you are currently reading? I'm rereading exchanged at the moment.

That's really nice! But do you think you could possibly draw a few things, like furniture, cars or other items? I have a much better idea now, thanks to these images, but just saying a tall amazon is xx meters or feet tall, is still hard to really imagine it. I was thinking that it might be better to avoid mentioning numbers outright and instead, to just stick to descriptions. Though, I don't think that I could get away with it for an entire story. Sooner or later, numbers would have to be mentioned, because some people have no trouble imagining it. See, I got a friend, and he's just about two meters tall. (That's 6.5 feet) I, on the other hand, am about one point seventy tall. (170 cm or 1 meter and 70 cm.) That translates to roughly five point five feet, give or take. I have to look up to him, like a lot. But just imagine someone that's smaller then me? While I'm slightly above average (I think) when it comes to height, I know there are adults that are 1.6m to 1.5m tall. Thankfully, I don't think there are any adults out there, that are 'only' a meter all, that don't have an illness of some kind. (Is calling it dwarfism correct?) While I'm very sure that we won't be seeing real life diaper dimension shenanigans (It would be terrifying it this would happen in real life) it's a scientific fact that humans are slowly growing taller. Just look at a few centuries ago! I literally just googled it, and in the early eighteen hundreds, average height was supposedly between 165 and 170 cm! But anyway, I've been rambling enough, I'm not artistic enough (not by a longshot, the best I can do are stick figures) to try and draw something myself. It doesn't need to be super pretty or anything, but just items so I and other people could have a better idea about scale. Thanks!

@BabySofiaYou might want to consider archive of our own as well. It has abdl stories and is a much better place to read. I honestly dislike reading on watpad and I avoid it if I can.

Perfect! That's exactly what I was looking for! Though, I think I've read exchanged, but I thought there was only 'one' book? Also, I didn't think it had any art? I haven't read the story for a few months, so I could be wrong. Anyway, I have what I wanted, so many thanks! Oh, and what I'm trying to write is a Harry Potter themed story with diaper dimension elements. I know this isn't really the place for it, but I figure I might as well tell you what it is about. I will make a separate topic for it at a later date. Criticism is welcomed and even demanded, even if you think it's nitpicking. I'm proud of my writing and I want to improve. My ultimate dream is to hopefully publish a real book someday, so I can tell the disbelievers in my family, "HA. HA. HA." Anyway, I haven't written much yet. The best I have are bullet points, I'm working on to flesh out the story and a summary. All of this is subject to change. The point is, that what I share below, may very well change completely from what I will write. --- Evans have always hunted those that would threaten humanity. Dark Witches and Wizards, those who believe themselves superior compared to ‘mere muggles.’ Magical beasts that would play nasty tricks on innocent folk. Man eating giants who would hunt, capture, enslave and eat Humans for breakfast, lunch, or dinner. Other terrifying beasts and beings from myths and legends who consider humans as humans think of ants. Insignificant, worthless and easy to kill. But what would happen when an Evans becomes that which they have hunted? When an Evans becomes a Witch? Politics, prejudices of idea's will be challenged. The idea to become a wolf with sheep's clothing seems easy, but as a wise man once said, no plan survives contact with the enemy, and this couldn't be more true. --- Below is the general idea of the story. I want to add that this is just a rough idea I have right now and that it needs to be improved a LOT. There was a war between giants and witches and wizards. The giants won, who then took the witches and wizards as slaves, since they won the war. There was peace for a while, but eventually, the giants tamed the witches and wizards, and then they set their sights on 'muggles' non-magical humans. There was another war, but this one ended in a stalemate. The statute of secrecy was signed that forces all factions to heed its terms. Over time, factions began to forget about the specifics until only 'generalities' became remembered. At the start of the story, the treaty is dangerously close to being violated, which would void the treaty, punishing the faction that did it first. That they forgot about the details is irrelevant. Okay, so to understand the next bit and to understand where the diaper dimension comes in, you need to know the following bits. Where before, the giants were many, now they are few. They have a low fertility rate, and few newly born giants survive to adulthood. All giants wield powerful magics, they are tough enough that not even high calibre bullets would do more than cause a bruise. Anyway, I'm leaving it at that, since I still need to figure out the details myself. If you're interested and want to know more, feel free to contact me, I love to talk about idea's with people. Sincerely, Kingdark

Yes, but I didn't think it was appropriate to post this in the art section. Isn't that meant for art alone?

Yes, I know that, but I would prefer to have an image, so I could imagine it more easily. It's easy to say, an amazon is that xx big, and a human is yy big, I just want something to put it into perspective, you know?