grandmaster342 Posted September 18, 2014 Share Posted September 18, 2014 This is so good!! Link to comment
Rockies Fan in Diapers Posted September 18, 2014 Share Posted September 18, 2014 Wow! This is amazing & what an unexpected turn of events...I can't wait to find out what's next! Link to comment
DiaperedDLinSouthFL Posted September 18, 2014 Share Posted September 18, 2014 Never disappointed. Love this story! Link to comment
minachan16 Posted September 19, 2014 Author Share Posted September 19, 2014 (edited) Chapter 9 Edited April 15, 2016 by minachan16 Link to comment
grandmaster342 Posted September 19, 2014 Share Posted September 19, 2014 I love how they finally realize that they both need each other. I can't wait for more! Link to comment
Kaidus Posted September 19, 2014 Share Posted September 19, 2014 That was by far the most tender-feeling filled sibling moment in any story I've ever read; I was in denial when my younger sister announced her own pregnancy when her junior year in high school was coming to a close. 1 Link to comment
babybruce Posted September 20, 2014 Share Posted September 20, 2014 amazing, This is very well written and wonderful. Link to comment
Rockies Fan in Diapers Posted September 20, 2014 Share Posted September 20, 2014 Wow! Amazing, tense, & tender all at the same time & indeed the bonding between Holly & Morgan was a great thing to read. Please continue. Link to comment
WBDaddy Posted September 20, 2014 Share Posted September 20, 2014 I'll just echo the sentiments above. Link to comment
minachan16 Posted September 23, 2014 Author Share Posted September 23, 2014 Chapter 10 3 Link to comment
babybruce Posted September 23, 2014 Share Posted September 23, 2014 absolutely wonderful, I enjoyed that very much. You are a very good writer. Link to comment
Kaidus Posted September 23, 2014 Share Posted September 23, 2014 And a "thank you" to you as well; this is one of those stories that stays with one for a good while. Link to comment
Rockies Fan in Diapers Posted September 23, 2014 Share Posted September 23, 2014 This was a GREAT Story & eventhough I'm sad to see it end, I understand that all good things must come to an end. Also I thank you & I appreciate you seeing this story through to it's completion. Unfortunately too many great stories here that people show a lot of interest in go unfinished & that is a shame. Thanks again, I really enjoyed reading this! Link to comment
booboobritches Posted September 23, 2014 Share Posted September 23, 2014 Great story and great finish, looking forward to your next masterpiece! Link to comment
mizuma Posted September 23, 2014 Share Posted September 23, 2014 Whenever I read a really good story I feel compelled to write something about. What I liked, what worked well, just about anything to let the author know that someone out there appreciated their work. Similar to life, I like to take my comments on a story as they go and let my fingers do the work and then view the after effect. Link to comment
WriteAndLeft Posted September 28, 2014 Share Posted September 28, 2014 Don't feel bad about having a shorter story. 1 Link to comment
Nat Posted September 29, 2014 Share Posted September 29, 2014 I liked it. I see it wasn't planned to have it be this short but oh well. Perhaps you can write another Morgan and Holly story. Link to comment
Kaidus Posted September 29, 2014 Share Posted September 29, 2014 My sentiments exactly Spokane. Link to comment
minachan16 Posted September 29, 2014 Author Share Posted September 29, 2014 Thank you, everyone. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Mizuma, your words especially really touched me. I printed out your third paragraph and have it taped to my desk to remind me I am a good writer on days where I think everything I write is awful. Thank you 1 Link to comment
Menaiya Posted September 30, 2014 Share Posted September 30, 2014 Thank you, everyone. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Mizuma, your words especially really touched me. I printed out your third paragraph and have it taped to my desk to remind me I am a good writer on days where I think everything I write is awful. Thank you Link to comment
Sarah Penguin Posted October 3, 2014 Share Posted October 3, 2014 Fantastic story *hugs and waves* Link to comment
Bigboy85 Posted July 6, 2016 Share Posted July 6, 2016 Wow. This is one of those Abdl stories that you come back to read every once in awhile cause it's so touching and beautifully written. The ones you know by heart. thanks for sharing such a great story. Link to comment
WailsLikeABanshee26 Posted August 14, 2016 Share Posted August 14, 2016 But.... Did Morgan keep the baby? Perhaps it'll be a girl, named Elizabeth after her Aunt? Sent from my LGL33L using Tapatalk Link to comment
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