Sarah Penguin Posted April 6, 2015 Share Posted April 6, 2015 Congratulations from me as well and thanks for the update Link to comment
BabyTau Posted April 28, 2015 Share Posted April 28, 2015 Its becomeing clear that Chris has a choice to make .Awsome story you never know whats gonna happen next Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted April 28, 2015 Share Posted April 28, 2015 This just gets more intriguing with each chapter. I love professor Bumble. I'll admit, I did laugh when poor Chris face planted. He's really out of sorts, poor guy. Link to comment
Sarah Penguin Posted April 28, 2015 Share Posted April 28, 2015 Enjoyed the update, it was fun Link to comment
Personalias Posted April 28, 2015 Author Share Posted April 28, 2015 Thank you all for reading it and bothering to reply. Link to comment
Shawnie Posted April 28, 2015 Share Posted April 28, 2015 We wouldnt hold it against you if you were talking to the wall, might put you in a stright jacket tho Link to comment
Kara Posted April 28, 2015 Share Posted April 28, 2015 Now that is interesting! Mind you, I still don't have a clue what the rules of the Game are, but that's part of the beauty, especially considering the nagging feeling that you have already given us enough information to figure out at least part of the pattern. I always did like a good puzzle. But what really surprised me in this chapter was what seems to me to be the reintroduction of hope. For a while now, I have been working from the assumption that the story was written on a premise borrowed from classical tragedies, in that tragedy was inevitable. It has certainly seemed that way, in light of the presumably impending choice. From the very beginning, all paths have seemingly been leading up to this choice, and this choice seems to be between a horrible fate and a worse one. The father's rejection took this to a whole new level, bringing Chris to a new low. At the end of the last chapter, the future started looking a little brighter again. Then along comes this enigmatic clown, with cryptic promises of insight and control; after all, a game can be won, can it not? And as if that wasn't enough, the story of emperor Norton seems to indicate some silver lining to one of the options that has yet to present itself in the equivalent scenario for Chris. In other words, I suspect you have a few more tricks up your sleeve for this one. Your writings always make for an interesting read; keep it up. Link to comment
Personalias Posted April 28, 2015 Author Share Posted April 28, 2015 Kara, thank you for the analysis and your kind words. Link to comment
DiaperBoy37 Posted April 29, 2015 Share Posted April 29, 2015 I just hope you update sooner. I have been craving to know what is going to happen next. Im past the edge of my seat because Im on the floor right now waiting to find out whats next. If I were you I would write a few books a.d have tbem published. You would definatly do well. Link to comment
Kara Posted April 29, 2015 Share Posted April 29, 2015 Professor? I think not. He doesn't exactly come across as a scholarly teacher. Clown? That's a bit more tricky. Clown until proven otherwise. Either way, you seem to really enjoy writing him, which is invariably a good thing. Link to comment
suzuki2011 Posted May 9, 2015 Share Posted May 9, 2015 so i wanted to let you know im on chapter 12 right now and i cant stop reading it. ive laid in bed all day reading this. Link to comment
Eagle0769 Posted June 29, 2015 Share Posted June 29, 2015 I'm really enjoying this story. Your writing is great, the way you explain the people in it is easy to see them in real life. I SEE MYSELF in the life as Chris. I wish I was that lucky. Been reading stories on DD for a very long time and this SO FAR is my favorite. I've written plenty of stories on DD and have enjoyed writing them. When members correct my errors I accept them. I would hope they just read the story and understand I'm just a amiture writer not an English major. (And by the way I don't see any errors in your story not that it makes a difference). I'm a little puzzled about no one mentioning he is still the same size. Eagle aka Baby Jay Link to comment
Personalias Posted August 7, 2015 Author Share Posted August 7, 2015 This isn't my best chapter, but I feel it's enough to get me back in the saddle figuratively speaking. Link to comment
Dannyl Posted August 7, 2015 Share Posted August 7, 2015 This is quickly turning into one of my favourite, if not my favourite abdl story. Thanks for making my day with the update, and for explaining how things were happening. It all makes sense now. Pls continue writing, and, once again, thank you. Link to comment
Dannyl Posted August 7, 2015 Share Posted August 7, 2015 This is quickly turning into one of my favourite, if not my favourite abdl story. Thanks for making my day with the update, and for explaining how things were happening. It all makes sense now. Pls continue writing, and, once again, thank you. Link to comment
SGTbaby Posted August 7, 2015 Share Posted August 7, 2015 So glad to see this update! I do enjoy this story! Link to comment
DiaperBoy37 Posted August 8, 2015 Share Posted August 8, 2015 Cant wait wait for the next update. Link to comment
Rockies Fan in Diapers Posted August 8, 2015 Share Posted August 8, 2015 Oh my goodness Two GREAT Additional chapters, Personalias! Thank you so much! I continue to love this story & oh how Christopher IV seems to think that he has figured things out, but something tells me that Wubby & the two guys behind the eyes (Hey that Rhymes!) & the old magician have some more unexpected Surprises (& maybe shock) in store for Chris. Please do continue & Soon! Thanks, Link to comment
Shawnie Posted September 8, 2015 Share Posted September 8, 2015 ****** chants update update update Link to comment
wetatnight Posted September 9, 2015 Share Posted September 9, 2015 more please I love this story Link to comment
Personalias Posted January 9, 2016 Author Share Posted January 9, 2016 Before and After and What happened Meanwhile 1 Link to comment
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