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Just curious but what happened to Rosie, the 16 year old sister and did Sally become Lucy?

A few grammar and spelling issues but honestly nothing worth mentioning, would love to see more if you have ideas

I think Terry got short changed on the last button because Cindy doesn’t seem to be a loving mommy lol

US has a new Pampers size 8, listed as +45 lbs I believe, haven’t tried them yet because I was disappointed with European Pampers size 8. It seems like baby diapers are getting bigger sizes but the diapers are actually getting smaller. I never received my free sample of boundless size 8 to try 🤷‍♂️

Stephen King’s Gerald’s Game is about BDSM that goes horribly wrong. There is even an ABDL reference in it

@ABDLSerria hi and welcome. Bambino’s aren’t bad and are almost always on sale lately. ABU Little Kings seem to be all the rage lately, if you haven’t tried them yet, I definitely recommend. You said your friends and family don’t know, what about your spouse?

I use to be a manager at Walmart, I absolutely guarantee you that as soon as they discovered the vandalism, they checked the tapes, if he did in fact do all he said, they will be on the lookout for him and will have him arrested and most likely be charged with public exposure and public masturbation which will require him to register as a sex offender and get him a lifetime ban from Walmart. They don’t mess around and if he ignores the ban, they will have him arrested again for trespassing. Serves him right if that all happens

It was either a Large Huggies or Luvs, can’t remember now as this was 1990. My girlfriend when I was 13 babysat for a4 year old and a 10 month old and the older kid wasn’t potty trained yet. I remember stealing one of his diapers when my girlfriend wasn’t looking. Eventually I started buying Pampers, which fit me up until about 2015.

I always worded it like “I am open minded and a big kid at heart” or something along those lines. I never really got close enough to anyone to actually be open about my ABDL side. It’s a delicate balance, for me at least, because ABDL is only a fraction of who I am and I need an intellectual connection with someone on the vanilla side of life. 🤷‍♂️

Pampers has had a size 7 since 2007, Huggies introduced their size 7 to compete with Pampers. Luvs had a size 7 now too but honestly, All the size 7’s seem small compared to the original size 7 or even the size 6’s from the late 90’s early 2000’s ?‍♂️

Rearz all in one penguin cloth diaper with critters caboose diaper cover

Not entirely sure lol but the ones I come across on Fetlife are all in NYC and Jersey, with a few in MA and NH

I honestly have never seen or heard of a female ABDL in upstate NY ?‍♂️ Seems they are all in NYC, MA, CT, and NJ

A zoomer is the opposite of a boomer, a young Gen Z’er If I had to guess ?‍♂️

Hi and welcome ? what did you pick for your first diaper?

No, I apologize that was me who said that, but that’s not what I meant. I only meant the structure was that of what you commonly see amongst new writers. I didn’t mean to imply you wrote like a third grader. There are definitely adult ideas and themes, and the story itself has a decent premise. There is just very little between the sentences. I am definitely not trying to criticize you or your writing, if that’s your style, then don’t let anyone change it. I am open minded to different styles of writing

Outside of Sherlock with his/her COVID is a hoax remark, I didn’t see any negative feedback. Only constructive criticism, which I might add, is part of the purpose of this story forum. I wasn’t, trying to tell him how to tell the story or rewrite it for him; nor do I believe anyone else was. My first reaction was “definitely one handed typing”, but I gave the author the benefit of the doubt and offered suggestions on how to improve the writing, not the story. If that was offensive, I apologize

I am not sure what prompted this reaction, all of the criticism was constructive and positive.

I originally went to college for English major but switched to psychology and ended up minoring in English. I definitely feel more comfortable proof reading and editing then I do writing

Definitely see improvements in this chapter, more dialogue, parts of it still reads like a 3rd grader wrote it though, with the single sentence paragraphs. It’s like an itinerary more then a story, “we did this, and then this and then this….etc.” “After breakfast Evelyn and I were released from our diapers. With it being Saturday we cleaned the house top to bottom. Evelyn and I had a few more opportunities to steal a few kisses.” try fleshing the shorter paragraphs like this one out more, give it substance and make the reader want to know more about the characters. “After breakfast Aunt Kathy changed Evelyn and then myself out of our wet diapers. I was still having mixed emotions over having intentionally wet my diaper; on the one hand, it made me feel closer to Evelyn, now knowing what it felt like for her to wake up in a wet diaper. It also didn’t hurt that it felt nice in a strange way and aroused me in ways I didn’t fully understand. Other parts of my brain however, were telling me that it was wrong to pee in my diaper. That’s not something 18 year olds were suppose to do. Part of me felt ashamed and naughty. I made up my mind, right then and there that I would try to talk to Evelyn about this, just to see how she felt; after all, she had been dealing with this her whole life. once we were out of our wet diapers and dressed, Aunt Kathy asked us to do some chores around the house. Nothing too overwhelming, it’s not like the house was dirty, but it definitely wouldn’t hurt from a little tidying and maybe some dusting. I wasn’t going to complain though, as it allowed me to spend more time with Evelyn.”…….. I ham not a writer and I am sure others here could provide better critique. But just the little fluff I added hopefully is a good basic example of how to expand a sentence, paragraph, chapter, etc.

Since comments are meant for feed back, I want to say I think that you Have the potential for a good story here but your chapters are too short. Flesh out the characters, add some scenery. Also, spell check or have someone proof read for you. Punctuation will be your best friend. Sometimes dialogue can help prolong a scene. I don’t want to tell you how to write your story, just trying to help you connect it better and flesh out what you have

The best lies always have a sprinkle of truth in them. Just my opinion but I prefer more realistic fiction. I find your comment quite presumptuous, let the author tell the story they want or write one yourself ?‍♂️

Since the second part has started there has been no progression in the narrative. None of the last 20 chapters have even come close to addressing any of the questions the readers were left with at the conclusion of part 1; instead it’s the same thing every chapter, Clark trying to prove he is smarter than the Amazons and the Amazons taking all of his rebellious antics as proof of his Maturosis. It’s actually kind of a sadistic cringe to read at this point. I am not sure if it’s just a matter of word count at this point or if the author just likes the idea of presenting a bit of a mystery and then spending the last 4-6 months ignoring the natural direction of the story to give everyone more wet and messy diaper content in new and humiliating ways. Honestly at this point it appears as though Clark is going to push Janet to mind fuck him and the how, what, why and where of how he ended up here will never be answered. As I said, I have no problem with the author’s writing per say, generally enjoy his work but this one has become a very slow moving story. I probably should have kept my opinion to myself, and I realize that now.

No, I prefer good long stories that are well written, and this started off as a good story. In fact I loved that there was hardly any diaper content in the first 1/2 and it felt like the story was going somewhere. No offense, because I genuinely love your writing and your characters and stories, but I pretty much gave up on this story about 15-20 chapters ago. It just seems to be in a repetitive loop.

30 more chapters of this? It’s been going no where for the last 30 chapters as it is ?