Lil_Eevee

Thank you kindly I'm gonna try to get another chapter or 2 at least written, but so everyone is aware, im probably not gonna post it for some time.. I wanna get a good lead on it first then see what i can do with it.. Im gonna shoot for at least a chapter every week on Saturdays... Not this one tho

Hey everyone! Still unsire about this, but i kind of like it so far as before, let me know what you think. Chapter 1 I woke up strapped into the back seat of what seemed a large pickup. I couldn't look out the windows, they were too tinted. We also didn't seem to be moving. I stood up and checked myself over, still my clothes, a headache, and I seemed to be mostly as I was beforehand. No car seat even. What's going on? Where did they go? Nobody was around, i couldn't see where I was, and the doors are locked. What's my next move? What can I even do? Nothing right now. So I guess get comfy and wait. --- It felt like hours. The truck stayed cool at least. I needed to use the restroom. I was going crazy, alone in the dark with nothing to distract me except my own thoughts. I knew either way i was trapped. What i didn't know was killing me. Did they want a child or a pet? Could it be worse? How long do I have to wait? Why did they leave me behind? Still, the darker my thoughts got, the more alone I felt. The more the time passed, the fuller my bladder felt. --- It was maybe another hour. I finally had wet myself. What was the point? If you're caught, you aren't seen again. At least, not as an adult. Shunk The doors unlocked? They're coming. Any moment now. 5 minutes pass. Nothing. Another 10. Were the doors supposed to be opened? 15 more. I slowly opened the door myself. I was very ill prepared. Outside those doors was... Nothing. Utterly nothing, it didn't even look like there were any walls or floor or anything... Just blackness. I was shocked to say the least. Clearly there must be at least a floor, right? Trucks don't just float. I grip the door the best i can and slowly climb my way down, reaching out with my foot I search for the ground. Its still too far away, so i have to grab onto the step bar and lower myself further. Why did these beasts have to be so freakishly tall?! Finally, stretching myself as far as i possibly could, i could just brush my toes against the surface. Taking a deep breath, i let go and fall that last inch or 2. Alright, first part down, now onto the next. I take a couple of steps forward, hands out in front of me. I just realize my shoes are gone and feel the cold ground beneath me. Where was I? Where was everyone else? Why is it so quiet? Another step, the ground feels different. Colder, smoother. Before i can process why, its gone. I'm falling, with no clear indication of a landing. How far was this drop? Land flat on your back. I try and steady myself, facing belly down to keep an eye out for anything to help. There's a faint light at the end and its growing fast. I flip around and relax the best i can. I land with a dull thud, and what i see is more what I expected.

Yeah.. I intended it to be more of a teaser actually.. Teaser prologue thing? Sure... Thank you for the feedback

Hello all, this is my first shot at a story. I'm not really a writer but I figured I could give it a shot. Currently this is all I have and I tried to keep it relatively vague because honestly, I don't know where its gonna go. I dunno, let me know what you think, and worse comes to worse, feel free to utilize anything here for your own inspiration. ----------------------- It all happened so fast. One moment i was enjoying my lunch at the sandwich shop downtown, the next i was locked in this... Place, hiding for my life. "Where did that little cutie go?" "I think they went this way, come on!" I could hear them, the footsteps were heading to me. I had to think fast. But its so dark, I can't even see where I am. Do i search for the lights or run? Where to? I don't see any windows or other obvious escape routes. I'm trapped. Maybe if I... "We know you're in there little one." "Why don't you come out? It'll be a lot easier if you don't try and fight us." Shit.. Took too long. I scold myself mentally. I only have one chance, I'm smaller than them, if I move quickly maybe I can get away. I just have to gun it. I open the door, noticing as the sunlight floods in that I was in the backroom of some kind of store. Good thing I didn't bother trying to find my way through this maze of stock. Looking ahead, I see them, amazons, possibly sisters? "There you are, you little bugger. I was afraid we might've had to...." I don't give her a chance, I dive between their legs and run as fast as I possibly can. Suddenly, I'm on the ground, my head smacks against the pavement and stars are flying around me. "Silly baby, you can't get away that easily." The blonde mocks me as she lifts me up. It's over, I lost.

Would it be possible to win the prize but delay when we receive it? Im in the same boat but am hoping to be "free" at least within the year

Well.... who cares what's already happen if we still don't know where it leads??? You know, like, the next chapter? Or 10?

Nooooooo.... I need my daily updates lol I am absolutely loving this story kimmy and I can't wait for aprils return

Well I hope they do make another one lol but if not, oh well :3 I'll just have to wait for BHBB to finish

Hey Elfy! Wanted to let you know I love all of your works, this one didn't get nearly enough comments as it should've and I for one am curious if this is the end or if maybe one more story could come from it lol

Hey Elfy! I absolutely love Nick and Sarah and I absolutely need to have them back.....

Hello everyone! I was just wondering if anyone knew of places/people that make and sell baby jumpers (Jolly Jumper, Johnny Jump-up, etc etc) scaled up for adults. I have been searching for a couple of days now and I could only find one at http://www.merrymuscles.com/ which is good i suppose, but I wanna make sure that there aren't other (hopefully cheaper) options available.

Yaaaaaaaay! I've been waiting for so loooooong

This was great! I noticed towards the end Chris's name became Tyler and then Nick one after the other.

I know I'm gonna try my hardest to go.

I have no words... That just touched my soul....

Colorado native here too, Jeffco

Even tho you two wrote both, A&S is still my by far favorite, but anything by you two of my favorite I kinda want to see Mac and Azzy meet Nala X3 that'd be just far too cute!! While I love that Mac is getting more used to her big sister side she might need little time more than she's letting on I can't wait for next update

Giant robots come to earth completely unnoticed, disguise themselves as expensive cars and fight other giant robots disguised as expensive military cars/tanks/helicopter/anything with actual weapons -Transformers (Michael Bay)

well, i forgot about my own post again XD but they arrived, and it was only a few days for them to arrive, and I personally have never loved a diaper quite as much as I have these ones, thick, comfy, cute, and above all else, absorbent as they should be Little Paws have now officially taken my #1 spot for diapers (but my quest to try them all is far from over!)

I have to say, I'm a bit disappointed there aren't more comments and I'm not even the one who commissioned it! For what it's worth, I do enjoy this story and seeing as there's only one more part to go I'm very curious as to how it will end. I love your writing and I personally would love to see him stuck in this situation with no rescue, but I have a sneaking suspicion that "daddy" has a daughter that has been wronged by Tyler? I'm not sure where this thought comes from, maybe I saw a hint to it earlier, but I can't seem to shake this feeling that said daughter wanted to have a baby of her own. Nonetheless, I am anxiously waiting for the end

Awesome

I just ordered some today so I will have my opinion when they come in, but how are they in your opinion? And how long do orders usually take? I've heard 3 days but just want to make sure (obviously business days so I expect them by Wednesday) But yeah, thoughts?

my my, quite the opening chapter and I can't help but wonder who or what is behind it? Is he gonna be trained in the nursery? does he escape? does someone come and take him and will they be good or bad? So many questions and we're just starting

I agree, your stories are just too good to read no matter what it is <3 You two could make a story about a man with constipation and I'm sure you would make ANOTHER story of the year