Gawain

Some people just can't avoid sharing their opinion when it's the last thing people want to hear, huh? I'm not trying to offend you, bigbabybilly, but you're coming across as bigoted and ignorant, and so far it hasn't been a lot of fun for anyone.

In my country no one has guns unless they hunt, and to do that you need to have special licenses and undergo classes and testing. So no, I don't have a gun, and unless I get a burning desire to go hunting one day I can't see a single reason why I'd ever want one. The police here doesn't even carry guns.

We all have our turn ons and turn offs, so... The ones that don't appeal to me will make me move over to something else rather than finish reading. I'm not an AB or a sissy, I'm not into roleplaying or dressing up, so those things will make me move on. I'm tired of stories where the main character is a "really pretty girl who's kinda small for her age", too, so. Yeah. And then there's the quality issues. A lot of stories out there aren't written by people who care about writing. It's a sad fact. Far be it for me to judge too harshly; I haven't published anything here, but for something to be worth reading it has to be up to a certain standard. The plot has to be well thought through, the characters believable and refreshing and the grammar up to scratch. Writing isn't just something you sit down and do one day, it takes time and practice. However many diaper changes you insert into the plot.

Not everything needs to be AB, you guys. Submissive behaviour does not an AB make, after all.

Obviously, we all want to be accepted for who we are. With fetishes it's something we can't really help, and this particular one has a lot of shame connected to it for a lot of people. Keep that in mind. You've already been more accepting than most people. ALSO keep in mind that despite you finding this interesting and fun now, you should take some time to think and not jump into this head first. What seems to be a good idea right now can later feel rushed and uncomfortable (I've been there). Ease into it, think it through and talk to each other.

Aw, that was a sweet chapter! Thank you.

A chapter! Thank you so much for coming back to finish this, it truly is one of the best stories I've read. I can imagine you would have gotten burned out on it, writing about regular people takes a lot of anyone, I think. To make characters believable, a certain amount of energy has to be poured into the concoction For me it does, anyways! ^^ Leaving without finishing isn't unusual for me at all (though I rarely publish anything, because I'm a wuss), simply because I find I don't have more to pour into the characters, and they're not telling me where they want to go anymore. I think those of us reading appreciate the effort. Thanks.

It's a sweet story, and I can tell you picture it while writing. You might try to turn some of the conversation you've worked into sentences into quotes. Have your character say "Sweet dreams", for instance. It'll give some variation to the writing, makes it easier to read. It also makes the characters come alive (both for yourself while writing and for us reading) a bit more, though I find it takes me more time to write out a conversation like that. Great work.

That's true enough, I suppose (), but his stories aren't updated daily even when they're being updated. Let's cross our fingers?

Indeed, a month and a half is nearly the same as a full year. I'm sure NewGuy20 wouldn't leave us hanging like that! Or.. I'm not actually sure, but I'm sure crossing my fingers.

Thank you. I'm sad to see the last chapter, but I'm rather grateful you finished it! Good work. I'm not an AB, but your writing still kept me reading.

Good to see you back! Your writing never fails to heighten the general quality of this subforum, so thank you for that.

Great job with Jess. She seems just a tiny bit more human now, I think. Writing a story where thought goes into character and story development means not just vomiting up words, so it takes some time. I'm sure NewGuy20 will put us all out of our misery as soon as he's able or willing. Be patient, even though there might be a bit of a wait between chapters it's updated steadily and surely.

Great chapter! Thank you.

I'm actually kind of relieved that there are still some stories that don't involve guys in frilly dresses, sucking pacifiers like they've never been separated from them, playing with baby toys and stuck in play pens. Your story is just fine (actually; great) the way it is, and if people want to read about different stuff they're free to write it themselves. Thanks for a great story, both this one and your last one. Hope you continue writing, I for one would love to see where it goes. Keep it up! You're just about the only reason I check the story forum anymore.

I don't really think that's the problem, but it's difficult to give feedback on such a short chapter.

I'm sorry, but I find this nearly impossible to read. Did you run it through some sort of translating site?

Funny so far! Hope you write more! Not to sound negative, because I really don't mean to, but I'd be careful with the kids. :S

I think it's safe to say that there are many of us who'd like to see more of this story, yes?

Unfortunately, there is a site with very disturbing material on it, encouraging disturbing things, which is what he's referring to. Without getting in too deep, the other site encourages and describes actions most of us frown upon. As far as I gather, both in stories and content of the site. They don't mean plagiarism, but they seem to think this story is offensive. I don't agree. There are no explicit sexual situations. To an outsider, this might be a very strange story, but it's not more sexually disturbing than any other show on TV showed to teenagers or adults. But yes, thank you for a very well written story. I hope you keep it going, despite the unfair accusations.

I don't know how much you already know, or what he's told you, but there are a few things you need to remember. This is a fetish. That's all. Some people like being tied up, and some people take liking to be tied up to an extreme. The same with people who are into this kind of thing, that doesn't mean it's anything more than something that just turns him on. He shouldn't push you into situations you're not comfortable with, like wearing diapers if you don't want him to or feel uncomfortable with it. Sometimes, people with fetishes have problem getting off on anything but that fetish. With time, that will more than likely work itself out. You should talk to him about it. Tell him you're not comfortable with being a part of his fetish. Hopefully he's able to respect that, and you're able to respect the fact that he's into something a bit more kinky than most people.

Honestly.. Obviously all those things are possible. You know that, I know that, everyone knows that. It's the combination that makes it sound a little like a bad plot from a diaper story. You have to agree with me there. If it should turn out to be true (which I can't help but doubt.. I'm sorry. If it's true, my deepest sympathies, it just looks fishy), it will still sound a bit like a lot of stories out there. I don't know a lot of diaper wearing fifteen year olds who manages to steal diapers from their wheelchairbound friend, and then get spanked with a hairbrush, either. Doesn't mean it never happens.