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You are a whole lot more sympathetic to her than I am, I'm afraid. -
By Wannatripbaby · Posted
An interesting choice of words... Or maybe I'm over thinking it? 😅 Is she using the term Animals because that's actually the culturally-acceptable word for "People" in this universe? Or is it because she, in one way or another, still considers these slaves as second-class citizens who need to be "rescued" by her? Curious how this works with her little "Our" slip-up earlier. Or do Dragons just tend to refer to themselves with such pronouns? 😅 -
By T the Switch · Posted
I see potential poly with team human and team wolf. Though the lamia might make for a couple spicy chapters and um.. imaginings 😵💫😍 indont predict the snake to stick around -
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By Wannatripbaby · Posted
I hate to start out with criticism, but I feel the overuse of commas and lack of any other punctuation in your writing is a bit distracting. It feels a bit clunky and hard to read, as in the section above I'm quoting to highlight what I'm talking about. It's not a huge deal by any means! And this is definitely one of the harder parts of writing for some people. I'm unfortunately not sure what to suggest to help in the future--I'm not an English Teacher or anything like that. 😅 But I probably would've written the quoted section more like this: "Unlike the secretary's bright demeanor, the floor was bare and made up of perfectly white tiles. The walls were just as bare and white. A waiting room--pristine and sterile without a speck of dust anywhere in sight." Of course writing styles will differ and sometimes it takes practice to find your voice. 😊
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