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WBDaddy last won the day on October 14 2025

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    39 is all I'll admit to.

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  1. WBDaddy
    I'm going to give you a bit of feedback here, and I hope you don't take it the wrong way. You have a nice idea here, starting with the future Mark and Katie, and winding us back to when Mark and Katie weren't even a thing yet, telling the story of how it all happened. But what you've written so far reads like a news website reporting what happened. Mark did this. Katie did this. Mark said something, but we don't know exactly what. Katie said something back. Things happened. Try focusing your lens a bit more, showing us interactions, dialogue, her thoughts when she's sitting there contemplating him and the thing that he's asked of her, his thoughts where he's cursing himself about being so forward, the tense phone call where she expresses a willingness to try. This is the good stuff, the stuff that plugs us in fully and makes us feel the story.
  2. WBDaddy
    It's hilarious to me what you're calling "not a chapter" when you've just posted 2500 words as half of a part of a chapter. Feels like you're determined to make part one 120 chapters exactly, to satisfy some sort of internal OCD about how many chapters this epic will end up having, when you're sailing into Tolkien territory with your word counts (not suggesting you're as laborious as Tolkien, mind you) (For the record, the one big epic I posted here, lost to one of several server crashes, often featured chapters that were barely 1000 words, because that was all I had to say about that particular set of thoughts)
  3. WBDaddy
    I mean, really, Lilly doesn't have any say in that. It's Martina's call - it's her show. Lilly helped her get the show, but she doesn't get to dictate what goes and what doesn't. That's between Martina and Hillary.
  4. WBDaddy
    As someone who wrote a fairly successful but much smaller story in that older age group, I'm here to tell you, you are succeeding. Unless the next chapter features him in a highchair, his wife feeding him baby food with a rubber spoon and baby formula with a bottle, shitting his diaper uncontrollably while he drools and babbles, you're succeeding.
  5. WBDaddy
    Unfortunately, sale fell through because shipping made it prohibitive. Anyone in Florida or southern GA/AL, I'd be willing to meet halfway to make an exchange (I'm in north central FL)
  6. WBDaddy
    Well, FWIW, Brown's is right on the beach, in an old shack, noisy as hell, seating is all benches and old wooden chairs, and all they do is seafood and coleslaw and fries. They ask you what you want at the counter, and ask how you want it cooked. When I get up there, I usually just grab a pint of steamed clams with a bunch of drawn butter and go at it.
  7. WBDaddy
    Oh my, you've been to Brown's Lobster Pound in Seabrook, NH, have you? Well, even if you haven't, that's exactly where my thoughts went.
  8. WBDaddy
    Obviously you intended Seo-ya to be diapered and babied by her husband as further punishment! The threat of "find someone else" clearly demands that he follows through and hires a babysitter for both of them!
  9. WBDaddy
    Well sure, that's why so many stories around here are unfinished - they hit the climax and forgot what they were writing about.
  10. WBDaddy
    IOW, this is your fap interlude.
  11. WBDaddy
    It's much better now.
  12. WBDaddy
    This was a classic. But it is a bit difficult to read without line breaks. Any chance you could fix that?
  13. WBDaddy
    Convincing herself that the diuretics and sleeping pills were Tess' idea was my first clue about unreliable narration.
  14. WBDaddy
    Your main character was "she", now suddenly it's "me" - that's a perspective change. 3rd person = "she". 1st person = "me".
  15. WBDaddy
    I can't imagine he'd put so much effort into her as a potential villain if she didn't have a significant role to play in the next arc of the story.
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