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  1. This was exactly the vibe I was getting from the narration. They're both excited by the diaper, though neither of them can figure out why.
  2. That was a sledgehammer on all of Lilly and Bryan's plans. The attempt to orchestrate "little" time right after they hit Paul with that news was so far beyond stupid.
  3. So he was held back in Elementary school once or twice? Because 13 is a bit old to be in 6th grade. And again, typical 6th-grade boys (age 11, sometimes 12) are around 4'6", so it's doubtful he'd be "the smallest person in 6th grade" at that height.
  4. Nailed that chapter. Smexy, smexy, smexy, then she manages to find enough confidence to reveal. And he embraces it, of course. My 30s and 40s would have been so much simpler if I'd stumbled across a Melissa instead of trying to coax women who didn't need diapers into letting me put them in diapers.
  5. I also love the vulnerability aspect. I'm going to make a suggestion, though. Read your dialogue aloud. Does it sound conversational? Would you say the thing the character is saying in that way? The last few bits of dialogue to close the chapter, those were the ones that felt most real to me. The rest felt very formal and trying very hard to be proper English.
  6. I've been around this forum for a long, long time. Anyone here will tell you, I wouldn't say it if it wasn't true.
  7. Like I said, it feels like our narrator is leading us someplace by announcing Amber's engagement and also Savannah's residency in Jax instead of Miami.
  8. But the ones Savannah has are far less so. If I were a betting man, I'd say our author here has set up a romantic CG/l with the two of them as Savannah will be spending her residency at the local pediatric clinic.
  9. Oops, little duplication there. Otherwise, wow, what a chapter. Also, you remind me of exactly the kind of pace at which I published "The Wannabe Hypnotist", a decade ago. Feels good to get on a roll that won't quit, doesn't it?
  10. I, for one, am greatly relieved that Lilly's human side, the one that recognizes that videos of her diapering Paul like a two-year-old would be the end of his social life and would certainly make him hate her for the rest of whoever's life ended soonest, won out over her insane influencer side. Though we don't really know how long that continues, so...
  11. I think a great many stories here are about MC's who are "new" to ABDL - it's just a question of how voluntary their introductions are. Does forced babying scratch your itch? Or are you looking for comforting stories where people maybe get nudges in order to discover their AB side on their own? I'm sure you're fully confused by now regarding content, but part of that is understanding that there is an incredible spectrum of story writing going on in this forum, and all anyone here is trying to do is narrow it down so we can make recommendations that you'll actually enjoy.
  12. OK yeah, nah, this isn't the place to advertise. It's a place for feedback from fellow writers. No one is going to buy your book just to give you tips on how to make it better - you published it, live with the results.
  13. Except he ran off to the shower, she didn't. It's a nitpick, but it also is kind of big because it's him that gets up, not her. But yeah, it's good to see you give yourself permission to write the smexy parts and be smexy about it.
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