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    • I have commented on other post, that I do like the urine smells , I like the dried pee smells, it can excite me and wish I could just have a bed that I can just wet it and leave it dry, and or get back in it still wet to sleep and play..  But even the baby blankets I use in my chair for diaper leaks, when they get kinda bad, and I wash them, they smell fresher when I can hang them out in the sun for a day. The sun seams to be its own air freshener ..
    • I generally check deliveries and keep something that can be "thrown over" such a  a sweatshirt and track pants at hand in case although my gas meter is outside with most other readings are estimates that I can phone an actual reading in when it suits me.
    • I had oral cancer back in 2007-11, and due to the cancer treatments, radiation etc, I have lost all of my teeth first they broke off one by one, then the roots started pushing out one at a time. They couldn't pull any of my bottom teeth since my jaw bone died with the radiation and pulling one tooth will be a chance of breaking my jaw, the repair of that is major surgery... But I had some TMJ, they did cut off the back part of my jaw on one side, for both the cancer and tmj ..Anyhow I can relate..
    • Andrej: I was working since the early morning like I always was. The work of a winemaker is a hard one. I had to tend to my vineyards since spring, watch them and finally harvest the grapes. However, it was not the end of the never-ending work. However, I liked that work and considered it almost a mission. Looking at the vineyards, healthy and spreading up the hills, and tasting the wine made my heart jump every year. My wine was famous in the widespread area; many customers came to me and ordered wine for events like weddings, graduations or even funeral feasts. My business was blooming. Anyway, a question kept hunting me. There were a few bottles in the back room, old and dusty. I didn’t know anything about them. My grandfather had told me about some mystery, but he passed away long ago, and the mystery persisted. According to the old rumors, there was a strange grape variety with unique features. Were the old and dusty bottles filled with wine made of that variety? I didn’t know. All of sudden, a man entered my yard. He looked like somebody who lost his way. He definitely wasn’t a local, and he tried to greet me in Slovak. I smiled at him when he tried to apologize. I didn’t have any idea about him, and I also didn’t speak any other language than Slovak. “Vitajte u nás. Vy asi chcete kúpiť nejaké víno. To ste prišli na správne miesto a verím, že neodídete naprázdno. Poďte prosím ďalej,” I gestured at him and pointed at the stairwell leading down to my wine cellar.
    • Day 10 of messing my overnight diaper. Is it still considered an accident when you know it's going to happen? 🤔 😕 
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