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    • Here in the Czech Republic, security camera recordings must be automatically deleted after 36 hours, except in cases where the police request that the deletion be postponed. It occurred to me that perhaps university security staff in Ames also have this authority, and that perhaps someone from security realized how important the conversation was and decided to stop the deletion of this footage and preserve it for later, when Lemoine would no longer have so much power to use in court. Otherwise, Dr. Nimitz's stupidity, who had to have a gold-plated sign on the door of his laboratory in a secret place where no one but crooks like him could enter, so that all future investigators would know that it was really his laboratory, still clearly leads the way.   Translated with DeepL.com (free version)
    • The story I'm trying to find is about a boy going on a camping/fishing trip with his family.  At the beginning, the borrow his grandfather's truck to tow the camper, and he wets himself on the seat before they can get to a rest stop. His dad is a bit upset that he couldn't hold it and messed up his grandfather's truck, but he is pretty understanding, and his mom puts him in one of his little sister's diapers, which he is surprised to enjoy. On a fuel stop, he goes inside with his dad, but the long line for the bathroom forces him to wait longer than he can, so he has another accident, and his dad is forced to change him. At this point, due to some plot device about his clothes being unavailable, he is put into some of his sister's clothes, which he doesn't resist, and actually enjoys. They eventually get to the camp ground, where the boy goes with his dad to the boat ramp and is mistaken for a little girl, but his dad doesn't correct them believing that the boy would be more embarrassed if he was outed as an older boy in a little girl's clothes and diaper. His mom is unhappy when she finds out, but understands when it's explained, so out of necessity and with the boy's agreement, they decide to keep him in little girl mode for the whole trip, which he is actually happy about, as is his little sister.  The story ends with them meeting up with the grandparents at the campground, and introducing them to their new "granddaughter," and everyone is very happy with the arrangement.   I may have mixed up the order or some details, but that is the basic idea.  I used to be able to find it by searching about the camping and the grandfather's truck, but I can't find it anymore.   Please help!!!
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    • Ethan looked down at her in the tub. He scowled at her outburst. ”You certainly aren’t acting like a grown woman. You’re acting like a spoiled little toddler. You’re acting like a little brat who is in need of a spanked bottom.” He paused and let his words sink in. ”Now. Would you like to try that again? Or should I drag you out of that tub and give you something to cry about?”
    • Yes.  They're based on probability but sometimes even the MOST probable answer is still improbable: an AI hallucination.   Quite a few of the platforms will now let you qualify your request with something like "If there is insufficient information to reliably answer this tell me, do not guess" (insert sound of bolting horse some distance away from locked gate here 🤣). I've heard about that.  You can get struck off (disbarred) for that kind of stuff down here.  It's a real risk though: people using AI tools without any idea how they work are liable to fall down some crevasses like that.  I recently had a BBQ conversation with a business owner who was encouraging staff to use AI despite having no clue how it ticked and where the landmines were buried.  I wonder... It's a powerful tool and I think we should use it but I agree, if we start blindly trusting it then s#$t will go down...
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