Critiques and Writer's Discussion

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1. Reference guide: Dialogue in stories 1 2 3

   By WBDaddy, January 27, 2019
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   • ValentinesStuff
   • August 30

2. Read First... No Excuses!

   By Repaid1, August 14, 2014
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   • WBDaddy
   • September 3, 2017

3. Site Rules

   By Bettypooh, August 1, 2014
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   • Bettypooh
   • August 1, 2014

4. Before Mommy Influencer hits Chapter 50… How’s the Journey Feeling to You? (Feeback)

   By Frostybaby, November 16
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   • Wittlebabiboi
   • 12 hours ago

5. Looking for tips on improving my writing

   By RogueDratini, November 29
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   • RogueDratini
   • November 29

6. special needs story

   By crink-L, November 24
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   • crink-L
   • November 24

7. Third Person Point of View Writing Practice 'William's Evening In The Nursery'

   By Blushing_Alex, November 23
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   • Blushing_Alex
   • November 23

8. Why Rabbits and Foxes Don't Mix

   By Smitty1991, November 21
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   • Smitty1991
   • November 23

9. New to writing for ABDL -- looking for critiques, suggestions, anything! 1 2

   By cipher12, November 1
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   • WBDaddy
   • November 12

10. Rendered incontinent but not AB

    By brucejedi, September 3
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    • Bobbyca
    • October 31

11. What Kills A Story For You? 1 2 3 4 8

    By PeculiarChangeling, October 20, 2012
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    • Babypants
    • October 28

12. Simon´s Dolly adventures critique

    By Baby-Dolly Selina, August 8
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    • WBDaddy
    • October 27

13. Ending a chapter with a minor resolution vs. cliff hanger?

    By spark, September 28
    • 13 replies
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    • WBDaddy
    • October 3

14. Some Going Up to Do- Preview Chapter 1

    By Little Dino, September 15   

    • preview
    • diapers
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      • wetting
      • advise
    • 7 replies
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    • Little Dino
    • September 21

15. help wanted Eli's diary

    By Regression School, February 14, 2024   

    • male
    • regression
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    • Bonsai
    • September 15

16. Have you heard this qoute? Who said this...

    By cbkid, September 13
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    • WBDaddy
    • September 14

17. Finding an Editor

    By Little Dino, September 11   

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    • editing
    • 2 replies
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    • Little Dino
    • September 11

18. Back to Writing

    By FreezMilo, September 5
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    • Babypants
    • September 8

19. Sites...?

    By BabySofia, September 2
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    • AbyMatt
    • September 3

20. Ash X Zoey revamp

    By holekine, August 23
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    • holekine
    • August 23

21. Ash X Zoey Abandoned daycare story Ideas ?

    By holekine, June 5
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    • holekine
    • August 23

22. Introducing My Writing Journey Into Diapers and Dread

    By DiaperedDarkElf, August 5
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    • rose94
    • August 13

23. Anyone Else?

    By Little Dino, August 10
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    • Little Dino
    • August 12

24. Going Up (Working Title) 1st Draft/Preview

    By Little Dino, August 12
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    • Little Dino
    • August 12

25. Update: Customer & Paypal - Venting

    By Elfy, May 22
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    • Yami
    • August 8