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    • I have a burning desire to become truly, and inreversibly, incontinent, and condemn myself to diapers for the rest of my days. I find it exciting to know the option exists, and will definitely check my options, cost, etc, before taking the plunge. I expect it can become very expensive very quick. (I haven't read every entries just yet, but I will do so in the coming weeks.) I already wear diapers 24/7, and been doing so for 120+ days. Currently by choice, but I dream of doing so out of necessity. I also don't own any "normal" underwear anymore. I cut them all up, and threw the shreds in the bin. That felt weird doing so. 
    • Did someone say Semper Fi?   Semper Fi! I am going to have read this on one of my upcoming trips. 
    • All of the mainstream ai's have filters.  Some more lax than others.  Sometimes its about how you approach things.  Running your own model is the best way to get around that.  Another is to use api features where you can turn off some of the content filters.   Its all about how you approach it sometimes as well.  My story that I am posting here is being written with ChatGPT.   On that, I use the AI tools to help with ideas and have characters react certain ways,  and then in editing I have it add 'flourish', the little details.  I generally start with a bulleted list of what I want to happen and then ask it to help build it out.  Sometimes it writes things that I like and somethings I dont.  I'll add my own parts and keep working through it until I get a complete draft.  Usually something without much emotion.  But it will have certain phrases or reactions I want.  I then put it through something that helps with style and editing.  ChatGPT has some great features built into the canvas for that.      The paid versions are better as you generally get access to more memory and better models.  Or at least not limited ones.  Continuity is a problem.  I am guilty of that in the story I am posting.    I am getting ready to explore the use of API and agents to help with that.  Their are some good writing platforms out there as well that will help with that.   This is my story:    
    • Hey-lo, I know it's been a while, but I've got a chapter of Semper Fi ready to go this Tuesday that I managed to push myself to finish. Now to answer Guilend's last reply; it's waited for too long, and I apologize profusely. It's been too long on the backburner, but there's been multiple stories ping-ponging in my head, each demanding attention like a pet. Anyway, the reply: Jyrgal fits in the whole "mature about it and enjoy the wedding, even though it's a little embarrassing" category. And thank you~ Granted, there's a little more plot when it comes to Clover (and for that matter, the couple as it is) this next chapter (as well as a...well, yeah). But I promise to get more into both families in the next few chapters afterward. I'm glad I could get you invested in Jyrgal and Axel with just a few character things; it makes me happy to know that you've made a connection. As far as the second theory, well...we shall certainly see how it affects the three's personal lives. I can neither confirm nor deny. And I will be honest: I'm going a bit off of Baby Sofia's Exchanged (along with my pheromone-DD-verse) because that and LittleFallen's are as much as I've dared to read DD stories (despite me being an unrepentant Princess of Darkness with most of my non-AR/AB/babyfur stories, and even with the absolute darkness in some of them - looks nervously at Fae Love's latest chapter and at some of - or, rather, all of - the skin-crawling moments of a certain hinted character in Wears Wear Everywhere - I tend to be much more softcore as a reader and tend to shy away from darker stuff). The three effects I came up with will be explained a lot more in the upcoming chapter~ Again, sorry for the wait. I just want to keep a schedule going as much as I can, so I promise, it'll be posted tomorrow.
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