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Finally at the mall, Anna just has to find a way to slip away from Mr. Sawyer and his goons. --- I'm only able to write as much as I do thanks to the amazing support of my readers. Writing is my only income and I appreciate everyone who reads my stories more than you all can imagine. If you enjoy my stories and want to see updates a week before everyone else PLUS read 35+ stories only available on my membership sites please have a look at the links below. All support is very gratefully accepted ❤️ https://reamstories.com/elfy https://subscribestar.adult/elfy --- When the doors opened, they were on the ground floor of a simply gigantic mall. The sounds of thousands of people echoed off the domed ceiling that was hundreds of feet in the air. For someone like Anna, who wasn’t used to crowds and much preferred to be left on her own, it was almost overwhelming, and she found herself gripping Ryan’s hand a little tighter. “Alright, you guys just do your thing.” Mr. Sawyer said, “We might stop you for questions a couple of times but otherwise we’ll be flies on the wall.” “Right.” Ryan replied, “Well, I guess we had better…” Anna nodded her head, and Ryan started to push the stroller forwards with Anna holding on to it. She looked around at the crowds and hated a lot of what she saw. There were a lot of women accompanying their various men. Many were dressed in some shade of infantile outfit but few if any looked quite so outrageously babyish as Anna. She noticed that some people were looking her way and whispering to each other. A majority of the women in the mall were walking next to or slightly behind the man they were with, some were in strollers similar to Jane and Anna wondered if they had all been re-educated in the same way. A few were on the end of toddler leashes. “Shall we go this way?” Ryan asked as he pointed at the nearest row of stores. Anna shrugged. It didn’t really matter to her where they went. For the next half an hour they aimlessly walked around and looked into shops. If it wasn’t for the oppressive atmosphere and the presence of the production crew it could almost have been a nice day out. It was only as they exited a shoe shop with a new pair of sneakers for Ryan that something out of the ordinary happened. “Wait... Aren’t you…” An excitable young girl’s voice said. Anna turned around to a family not far away. There was a man smiling as his young daughter ran forwards to Anna, Jane and Ryan. Anna looked from the child who was clapping her hands to the mother who was staring daggers at all of them. “You’re Anna!” The girl said as she reached them. The girl couldn’t have reached double-digits yet in age. She was dressed in something that would’ve been out of place for a girl her age in most places in the world and she crinkled with each step. It was difficult for Anna to take any of this in though as this child seemed to know her name. “How do you…?” Anna started slowly. “I saw you on TV.” The girl replied, “Daddy said I could learn a lot from you. You’re so cool!” Anna didn’t know how to react. Her mouth opened and closed in shock. She wasn’t ready to be recognised, to be some sort of celebrity endorsing a system she despised. When she saw the little girl’s smile, she could only wonder what harm she was doing, what potential was being lost as all these females were told to simply accept their place. To make matters worse the voice telling them to be happy with what they had was her own. “Can we get a picture?” The girl asked. “This is great stuff!” Anna could hear Mr. Sawyer enthusiastically speaking to his camera people, “Make sure you get all of this!” “S-Sure.” Anna said. The girl clapped her hands and stood in front of Anna and the others with a big smile on her face. Her father already had her phone out ready whilst the mother continued to stare. If looks could kill… “Thank you so much!” The girl spontaneously gave Anna a quick hug and then ran back to her parents to hop into a stroller she was far too big for. Anna’s mind was a whirlwind. The family continued past but as they did so the mother continued to stare. As they drew level she mouthed a word and Anna had no trouble deciphering the message though it made her blood run cold: “Traitor.” Anna’s blood ran cold. There was no doubt in her mind that the mother had said that. She looked around at the people with her, but no one seemed to have noticed. Anna felt like she about to burst into tears, she had a desperate urge to chase after the woman and scream at her that she didn’t mean it and that she hated all of this as well. It was all she could do to keep herself upright. “I’m… I’m sorry…” Anna mumbled to no one in particular. “Huh?” Ryan asked. “Nothing.” Anna said. Anna watched the woman walk away from her until her attention was taken by something else. Yet again her blood seemed to freeze but this time it was for a very different reason. In the middle of a large open area in what must’ve been the middle of the mall there was a giant sign. It read “SALLAS”, but every letter was gigantic and stood on its own. It must’ve been the place Thorn had told her to go. “Is everything alright?” Ryan asked as he followed her gaze. “Yeah…” Anna replied. Anna’s mind was whirling through a thousand different variables. She needed to get over to the sign but there were thousands of people walking around not to mention the production crew who were very deliberately keeping their cameras on her. It didn’t seem feasible that she could retrieve whatever was supposed to have been left for her without being noticed. She started to wonder if that was the point. Maybe this was a test of faith and even attempting it would get Thorn to trust her, or maybe Thorn was a government worker trying to tempt her to get into trouble and testing her loyalty to the regime. Anna’s head spun. The three of them walked around the central area. Anna did her best to play the good little wife that she was supposed to be for the cameras, but her attention kept being drawn towards those letters. She realised that she couldn’t get over there alone. After deliberately keeping Ryan out of everything she felt she needed him to help her now. “I need you to create a diversion.” Anna hissed. “What?” Ryan frowned and stopped as he stared at her. “Act natural!” Anna quickly said, “Create a diversion.” “But… why?” Ryan asked. It was a perfectly reasonable question about a very unreasonable request. “Do you trust me?” Anna asked. She was unconsciously mirroring the words Ryan had said to her so many times. “Of course.” Ryan replied. “Then when we get near the big sign do something to get everyone’s attention.” Anna said through her fake smile for the cameras. Ryan didn’t reply as they continued to slowly amble around the area. In the stroller Jane was looking rather bored but she was too obedient to say anything. As they walked around until they were level with the sign Anna kept waiting for something to happen. She didn’t know if it was even possible to cause the diversion she needed, and her hopes were dropping as they were seemingly walking away. Just as it all seemed lost Ryan moved over to a wall near a store and looked at Anna for a moment. They met eyes before he leaned heavily against the wall. As soon as Ryan’s elbow hit the wall an alarm started blaring throughout the whole centre and red lights started flashing at various intervals. It didn’t take long for things to get hectic. People were starting to leave but it wasn’t fast enough. Anna turned to Ryan again with pleading eyes. “Fire!” Ryan yelled. He tried to disguise his voice a little and hide that it was him speaking, “There’s a fire! Run!” That did the trick. The people went from slowly leaving to panicking. One person started running and then another. Before long there was a tide of people hurrying towards the exit and Anna was hidden from the production crew, no one would be paying attention to her now. Without a word she slipped away from Ryan. Getting across to the sign was harder than she imagined it would be. It was like swimming against the tide as she tried to push her way through the crowds. Every time she saw a small gap she had to dart for it and pray she didn’t run into Mr. Sawyer or any of his workers. When she reached the sign Anna looked around desperately. She went to the first S and prayed that there would be anything out of place. She couldn’t see what she was supposed to be taking, and she was starting to panic, the longer she was away from Ryan the greater the chance she would be found and questioned. “Nicely done.” Unlike the loud shouting going on around her this voice was calm and measured. It came from behind the S that Anna was standing near, “I was starting to think you weren’t going to come.” “I didn’t exactly get a lot of say in the matter.” Anna replied with annoyance. Anna walked behind the sign and saw a young woman standing there. She was short, a whole foot lower than Anna and had a bandana covering up her lower face. Her clothes were what really drew Anna’s attention. Far from the over-the-top baby dresses and onesies this woman was in an old shirt and torn jeans with a dark green jacket over the top. How she got into position like that was a mystery, but Anna didn’t have time to ask. “I’m supposed to take something from you?” Anna said. It was as much a question as a statement. “Yeah.” The woman had a backpack at her feet. She reached down and withdrew and package about the size of an envelope and very thin, “Do not give more than one a day. Understand?” Anna nodded her head but in truth she didn’t have a clue what the woman was getting at. She didn’t know what was in the package, only that she was supposed to pick it up and that it would help with Jane. The woman didn’t seem inclined to give more information as she held out the package. Anna took it with a hand that shook slightly. “You’d better get back.” The woman said. “What if I need to…” Anna started. It was too late. The woman who had handed her the package had put her backpack on and quickly walked away in the opposite direction to the rest of the crowds streaming from the exit. Anna remained where she was for a second holding the package in her hand until she realised what she was doing. Just as she emerged from behind the sign the alarms suddenly stopped. A voice over the PA system announced that it was a false alarm and for people to continue their shopping. As the chaos came to an end Anna was still a long way from Ryan and holding something she definitely wasn’t supposed to have. If she was caught with the envelope, she could only imagine bad things happening. Being dragged off to Finishing School and forced to give up the information seemed the most likely outcome. What happened after that, well, she might consider herself lucky if they killed her. Anna had to act fast. She had to hide the small package, but her outfit obviously had no pockets. She could only think of one place to put it. Lifting up the rear of her dress Anna pulled back the waistband of her quite wet diaper and slipped the package down. The paper it was wrapped in felt rough on her skin and it was anything but comfortable but at least it was hidden and not a moment too soon. “Anna? What are you doing over there?” Mr. Sawyer had seen Anna through the crowd and was walking over with a frown. “Oh, erm, sorry.” Anna replied quietly, “I must’ve got separated in the confusion.” “You better get back to Ryan, sweetie.” Mr. Sawyer said. His piercing eyes felt like they were boring through to Anna’s brain and reading her thoughts. She looked away and went back over to Ryan, she tried her best to act normal despite the object pressing against her butt. “What the hell was that all about?” Ryan asked when Anna got back to him. “I’ll tell you later.” Anna replied. “But…” Ryan started. “Later!” Anna hissed. --- If you want to see what happens next RIGHT NOW you can do so at one of the following links. Thank you, and all support is very gratefully received: https://reamstories.com/page/lpjgftb4y2/story/mf967rdsf7db10/chapter/milhun2138932311 https://subscribestar.adult/posts/2206366 -
No way I'm going to any store on BF. I drove through a small town and the drive took 10x longer. People were circling the parking lot to find a spot. -
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By astrodiaper · Posted
2 AM is my time of day, considering I'm a night worker. I hope I only pulled a muscle or bruised a rib. I reached over a pew to grab a purse for someone at church last week, but it's been hurting more during the week. Even without this, I've been having a hard time getting to sleep during the day. Once I get to sleep and wake up, I just switch positions and go back to sleep. I'm thinking a new mattress could be in the future, but I'll have to wait until the start of the new year to see where everything is at. -
The smaller mushroomhead scratch sometimes with the holes at the urethra. 3D printed i want to delite them. But the catheter stressd my urethra when i go by bike. An i go often by bike... Sex is verry impressive becsuse you massage your prostata from insite 🙂 Greetings from the north of germany. Flo
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