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    • Thanks! Yes, they are lots of fun. I do promis answers soon though. Thanks! Thanks! If you didn't copy/paste that into Word, that is a very good guess. It actually was longer before I trimmed it down. It was crazy to think I had initially thought I could do this story arc in only two chapters. The next chapter will provide a lot of details on her actual diagnosis, but it is safe to say her symptoms are intended to be pretty serious. A lot of why this took place over four chapters was because I didn't feel like a sudden turn into it would make as much sense as having a long run of worsening symptoms that get ignored until they start causing more serious problems. Correct, that is what she was hearing. Thanks! I don't think the next chapter will be too much of a wait. As far as the situation with her and her parents not noticing, it's really a comedy of errors. The mom doesn't notice that the bedwetting is a problem because she assumes it has been happening for over a month already, and she isn't aware that Maddy is having a UIT vs a period because she doesn't see the blood and Maddy isn't sharing any details about her bladder problems because of a combination of embarrassment and wanting to avoid pull-ups. On Maddy's end, she has never had her period before, and it isn't uncommon for kids to have misconceptions or misunderstandings of what that entails, so it is plausible that she might have just accepted it as being part of that and would not have recognized how serious things were. I think Maddy is going to need to hope her recovery is that simple.
    • This. When I give myself a shower enema I noticed movement and instability of my stent, leading to migrations. Anything hitting the prostate from that end is going to have an effect and if the plug hit right it could definitely cause damage. This is why we all have to he to be cautious with anything we put in our bodies. What @Reddy is describing may be nothing, just a little soreness and minor trauma or it could turn into something life threatening with infections. I hope he gets it checked out to be safe and then maybe look to see why the plug hurt him. Was it the material? The size? Etc.
    • Stoooooooop I don't wanna be reminded of how painful bladder infections are! I remember having one, sitting on the toilet, and downing cranberry juice for lunch. I hate cranberry juice! Well, it's good with enough pineapple to hide the aftertaste.
    • I always stay home. Though really, it's been more inconvenient than anything. Just snow. No ice (yet). 
    • Sometimes it would be nice if someone.. maybe even the right someone (interpret right at will) would put the pieces together.  If someone smells like a baby (thought derived directly from the new powder I found), and wears diapers (even on and off), and has a pacifier hanging around, and throws fits about when to be changed (I like wearing a soaked diaper for 5 hours), maybe it's time to be treated like a baby.   
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