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    • How are the scented oils for the skin though? And do you put on inside and/or outside of ths diaper? I would also worry about the oils breaking down the diaper early
    • Chapter 26: Two Months Later… Bound – LittleFallenPrincess ------------------------------- Samantha       “No, not there, over there!” … “No, not over there, look, where I’m pointing…” … “Are you trying to earn yourself a spanking?” Normally I’d enjoy Becks getting frustrated with her subs, threatening them with a good time, but right now it was more frustrating than anything. Two months. Two fucking months of this shit. At least the end was in sight, and this would all be over soon.   Becks came over to my little desk in the corner of the bookshop end and plopped her backside on the chair beside me, where I was happy in my own space, avoiding all responsibility, sipping on a nice tea she had brought for me. Apparently the task of renovating my… no, now it’s our shop… was a lot bigger than either of us assumed. Thankfully, she called in some help in the form of her subs, who were busy putting the furniture together, as we are due to open in the next two weeks. At least the major renovations had been done by the professionals already. We had a fully working kitchen area, albeit only a small one, and a counter with one of those viewing fridge things. “Gonna help?” she asked, grinning at me like it wasn’t a question, moreso an order. “You know I worked my arse off yesterday. I’m still in pain!” I replied, clutching my back. “Awww poor little princess…” she teased in that condescending domme voice of hers. I gave her a look that would’ve sent any sub running for the hills, instead she just laughed. “Look, I’ll help in a bit,” I sighed. “Honestly, if I get involved right now, the subs will get annoyed with me trying to help and revolt. And neither of us want that.” “You’re right. They are helping massively… but they do not work well as a team. And they are getting a bit snappy…. I may have to resort to bribing them to behave.” “Ooooh… the almighty Becks… being reduced to buying Happy meals for her little subs…” “Look, that may be what your subs would be bribed with, if you had any, but these ones have expensive tastes…” “Right. I’ve got an idea. I’ll go get properly ready and head out and get sweet treats. Would that make them happy?” Becky thought for a minute, staring back over at her three subs working hard on the renovations to the cafe area, before turning her gaze back to me. “Go for it. That may make them GET A MOVE ON!” The subs all turned to look at us, bewildered by Becks’ sudden volume increase. “I’ll go get ready then.” “Lovely Auntie Sam is going to get you some treats for working so hard. So get back to work for a little bit longer, then you can have a nice break, okay my loves?” Becks said to her partners, who had all stopped work for a second to listen to her, before diving back into their job with a newfound enthusiasm the moment they were promised treats and a break. Thankfully, Becks doesn’t work them too hard, she’s not cruel after all. She pushes them as much as they can handle, but no further. She respects them too much and would hate herself if she ever pushed their boundaries too far. That’s why we bonded as dommes really easily and how we work off each other so well, because aside from our variance in some kinks, we’re very similar. So I got up onto my feet with a louder than planned groan, my back and knees cracking a bit, and walked over to the door to my apartment. Thankfully it’s at the back of the new kitchen area, so no customers will be able to accidentally wander up to my apartment. But that being said… we’ve installed a new lock on it and put a ‘Do not enter’ sign on it, just in case.   “Thanks Auntie Sam!” “Yeah thanks!” “Thanks Sam.” The three subs were all working harder than before, now that I was going to bring them treats, and they were all extremely courteous (like they were trained to be). Though Craig, who had been struggling recently, was still acting awkward around me. He was worried he caused my breakup with Chloe, but even after everything he told me that they spoke about that night, I couldn’t blame him for what happened. It’s my own fault. Still, the poor guy is taking it out on himself still, despite my insistence that he did nothing wrong. But hey, at least he got a new job… which just so happens to be Becks’ old job! She recommended him to the owner of the business when she was quitting to come work with me. He’s doing well for himself apparently, despite their previous firm going under. He’s a lot less stressed, as it’s a much smaller company, though the food industry is a little bit faster paced than he’s used to. Still, it was nice to see him so full of spirits regarding work again. I grabbed my bag from near my desk in the corner, putting my hand on Becks’ shoulder and stroking it gently. “I’ll be like twenty minutes.” “So send out the search and rescue party if you’re not back in thirty?” “Exactly!” I replied, laughing, before turning to the three subs. “See people, this woman knows how to handle a crisis!” “So if you go missing for thirty minutes, it’s a national emergency?” Craig replied, grinning at me. “Yes. And I’ll have you on your hands and knees trying to get her scent…” Becks replied, pulling out her favourite flogger seemingly from nowhere, which made the eyes of all her subs widen in fear. “Right, be good. Becks, don’t torture them too much. Be right back!”   The weather wasn’t too bad, there weren’t too many people out, and I was feeling good about things for once in my life. My shop was being saved by my best friend, and we have made so much progress in two months. We still had quite a bit of work to go, but everything was meticulously planned by my bestie, and I trusted her more than anyone. So I had a bit of a spring in my step as I walked down the high street towards the bakery that I know does some amazing pastries and desserts, especially the eclairs. It even has little tables inside and outside, like a little cafe. I called in the corner shop on the way to stock up on coffee and tea for our little helpers, before continuing down the street, turning down the side street where the bakery was located. Being a bit busier than usual, I was glad that I was only getting some treats to take out from here, not sitting in like a lot of people had the idea to do today. So I queued up, ordered my box of treats (grabbing the last couple of eclairs they had, luckily!), and turned to head out the door. And I quickly regretted coming out.   She was laughing at something the other woman said, the one who was holding her hand as they sat across the table from each other, their arms resting on the table as they looked lovingly into each other’s eyes. Fuck. Why did it have to be this bakery of all places at this specific time. And how so soon after what happened? How can she move on so soon? Was she already in love with this woman when we were together? Is that how she moved on and wanted to break up so soon? Or am I just overreacting because my heart feels like it's going to beat out of my chest at any moment? I was blocking the way out for the other customers, and if I continued staring at the pair for any longer, people would yell at me, and that would draw the couple’s attention to me… …So I dashed out of the bakery, tears forming in the corners of my eyes, as I clutched onto the box of treats and rushed in the direction of my shop as quickly as possible.   “Hey Sam. You okay?” Becks asked, as I flew through the door, dashed down the empty aisle, practically throwing the box onto the counter as I headed towards the stairs to my apartment. I didn’t say a word in response, I just dropped off the treats and headed to my apartment, slamming the door behind me and locking it, sitting on one of the lower steps and taking deep breathes, hyperventilating as images of those two together flooded my mind. “Sam? Sweetie? You okay?” I heard Becks try calling out through the door. “FUCK OFF!” I screamed back, without thinking, instantly regretting my actions. “Sam. What’s up?” I didn’t reply. Mostly because I didn’t want to yell obscenities at my best friend and potentially scare her off. The shop needs this work done, and if I scare them all off, it’ll not get done in time for the opening… which will impact not only me, but also impact Becks. And she’s put a lot of effort and risked a lot of her own personal assets to start this business with me. I couldn’t let my little tantrum ruin that… so I stayed silent. “Guys, just carry on working. Sam just needs some alone time. I’ll check in on her soon.”   “Sam? Sweetie?” “Saaaaam?” “Samantha…” I could hear Becks call out through the door at the bottom of the stairs, even from the sofa upstairs I had eventually moved to. She’d call out every thirty to sixty minutes, checking in. I didn’t feel like talking, and I didn’t want to ruin the work being done downstairs, so I kept quiet. But oh my god… I wanted to scream. I needed to. I kept playing that scene in the bakery over and over again. That woman. Chloe’s laugh. Their hands joined across the table. I wanted to rip my heart out of my chest to stop this pain. So instead, I clutched a pillow whilst laying on the sofa, curled up, wishing this would all end.   I didn’t even put anything on in the background. I just let my mind go wild with thoughts of those two together, thinking about all the fuckups I made, about how it should’ve been me with her… but I fucked up. I fuck everything up. Becks kept checking on me, even as it started to go dark outside through the curtains. But I just lay there, crying. …Then I did something I really shouldn’t have…   It must have been about an hour after, that I heard the front doorbell ring downstairs. But I figured because Becks and the three helpers are downstairs, they’d answer it for me. And answer it they did. Then I heard a key being inserted into my apartment door, no doubt Becks’ spare key that I gave her, followed by footsteps coming up the stairs. “Sam. What’s going on? Why is she here?” Becks asked, as she walked over to the living room and stood directly in front of me, looking pissed off. “I saw Chloe. And another woman,” I replied, my words scratchy as my throat was dry from crying too much and not drinking anything all afternoon. “You’re a fucking idiot, you know?” “Thanks.” “No seriously. You see Chloe with someone else, and so you do the one thing you know will make everything worse?” “I… couldn’t help it…” “This is why Chloe left. You sabotage yourself too much.” “Exactly. So this is what I deserve.” “No you fucking don’t. But… far from me to tell you what to do. You’re a grown woman. You can make your own fuck ups, and this is probably your biggest. Me and the others are calling it for a day, we’ve worked our arses off downstairs, without your help by the way, and we’re going to get pizza and a few drinks.” “Have fun.” “I’ll leave you and your… guest. Seriously Sam… you’re a fucking idiot.” Before I could reply, before I could try and defend myself… not that I had any right to, as Becks was not wrong… my best friend walked out, angrily, even making sure to make her steps down the stairs sound angry, before she stopped and said something to my guest. “If you break her again… I’ll make sure you regret it.” “Oh Rebecca… It’s lovely to see you too, as always.”           ====================================================== Don't forget I'm on Subscribestar! Subscribers get 2 weeks early access to chapters, and exclusive short stories (Nessa's Tale is currently the only available one). The next four chapters of my stories are posted on my Subscribestar! ======================================================== I hope everyone enjoys this chapter! Please leave likes and comments and all that fun stuff, I love reading them! 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    • I would like to know what these nappies are like.  Are thick or thin? Are they reliable? Do they last a long time? I know this depends on what ines wetting frequency and amount of wetting.  Anything else anyone can tell me about these nappies.  
    • I tend to default to some variation of Megamax, either the original or the Airlock. 
    • I to have spent to much money trying to find a plug that might work for this purpose. I have ordered some of this plastic and will try to replicate your design. Hopefully this will work for me as well.  I have lots of experience with larger plugs and dildoes and I struggle to find a plug that is comfortable enough to sleep with so hopefully this will do the trick 
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