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    • I was aware of Milan's presence lingering as leaned over my new phrasebook. I looked up expectantly, wondering if he might take a seat and try to help me sound out Slovakian words with the correct pronunciation. Instead he remained standing and pulled the dictionary towards him, opening it up and scanning pages until he had found the words he was looking for. My green eyes sparkled as I listened to him speaking in French. Better still, I understood immediately what it was he wanted to say. "Tres bein." I encouraged him. It sounded strange being spoken without a French accent but his pronunciation wasn't too bad. "Pourriez-vous m'accompagner et me faire visiter le village ?" I corrected him with a better way of phrasing it. Then I hesitated because I realised after a pause that he was waiting for my answer to the question. "Oh..." I felt self doubt intrude my thinking. Was Milan only being so kind and helpful because I was now a teenage girl and he wanted me to like him? That seemed like a mean assessment of him, he seemed like a really good kid from what I'd seen of him so far. In a sense, I didn't want to be guilty of leading him on in what he might think of as a sort of date. I knew how young men thought! I glanced towards the window, it was still light outside. It would be nice to get fresh air and stretch my legs after being inside and helping with chores all day. It was also a good idea. It would be a good way for us both to learn. "Qui." I responded after my pause and my cheeks dimpled in a soft smile as my confidence grew on the idea. I closed my books, rose from the table and I went to my room to change quickly into a pair of jeans because I didn't want my loungewear getting dirty. Then I returned and put my shoes on and I was ready to go. I took the phrase book and Milan carried the dictionary. "Kde je..." I read from the directions section of the phrasebook to start us off once we were both standing outside the house. I ran my finger down the list of suggested places and frowned slightly. Asking were the airport or train station in a small rural village wasn't entirely helpful and I already knew where the bus stop was located. The Slovak word for restaurant made be baulk, it contained too many accented vowels and I didn't feel confident pronouncing it. I let my finger run down the page a little way further and I settled on "...barov?" I said and looked up from the phrasebook brightly. I seemed to me in a much better mood now that I could communicate a little bit. "Kde je brov? Dá sa tam ísť peši?" I repeated slowly and added an additional line from the phrasebook but I read and spoke it more like French than Slovak, missing the 'oo' sound and not giving the long vowel sound at the end of the last word. I like Milan correct me and repeated as necessary. Then I said the phrase "En français… Où se trouve le bar ? Je peux y aller à pied ?"  "peši... pied... peši... pied." I repeated to myself as we began to walk. The words were recognisably similar. I just needed to remember that Slovak contained a 'shee' sound. 
    • oops!!! This morning is brought to you by the courtesy of a wet and messy Seni Quatro diaper covered by blue baby print plastic pants
    • A harmless and simple pleasure of my morning routine when I wake up in a wet diaper is to relax and mess my diaper, check emails, get coffee, sit here and stay in my poopie diapie for several hours before I change. Vaseline and baby lotion when I put my night diaper on does a good job in preventing irritation/diaper rash and makes cleaning myself a little easier, less sticking to my diaper area. My wife knows everything, just like Google or AI, but we have a boundary of no stinky diapers around her. My Seni Quatro diaper covered by blue baby print plastic pants is very wet and now messy this morning, soooo warm, innocent, yet naughty, squishy, and soooo emotionally and physiologically comforting and pleasurable. I know messy diapers are not for every ABDL, but for me this is my typical morning. I wear diapers close to 24/7 and therefore wet my diapers all the time no matter where I am, what I am doing, or with who I am with. No one knows...I think... sometimes my wife will know that I am wetting my diaper because she might notice a brief glassy-eye gaze as I pee pee in my diapie. I wish I could go potty in my diaper all the time, but discretion and social courtesy prevails and against my DIAPER CODE OF ETHICS to subject people to the possibility of stinkies emanating from my soiled diaper. I will admit, however, that I messed my diaper a handful of times, or should I say, "a diaper full of times" walking around several stores and making sure that I kept walking and maintained social distancing. I was vigilant and never saw anyone give me a suspicious look. I did not violate my DIAPER CODE OF ETHICS. I knew my wife would not be home so coming home wet, poopy, and stinky was not a problem. Changed, got clean and fresh again, and air freshener, dirty diaper in a plastic bag, then outside trash and all was good. Right now I am         
    • Nice chapter ...  I knew i didn't like Alicia ... poor Sophia ... body modification and all the time with only crazy mommy and apparently very detached butler ...  I see that Hazel is already having Luci withdrawal symptoms .... it will be interesting to see, how much will this escalate ...  Good to see, that tears work even on tsundere Leo ... 🤣 I am also curious, what training does Julie have ... as she is really good at throwing pillows, but bad at throwing frisbee at the same time ... 😅 Also just a minor thing ... i think he is meaning Angie here ...  Looking forward for more as always
    • When I choose to, there is a bit of a squat, though I have done it laying on my side once.  When I don't really have a say in the matter, standing.
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