Critiques and Writer's Discussion

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1. Reference guide: Dialogue in stories 1 2 3

   By WBDaddy, January 27, 2019
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   • ValentinesStuff
   • August 30, 2025

2. Read First... No Excuses!

   By Repaid1, August 14, 2014
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   • WBDaddy
   • September 3, 2017

3. Site Rules

   By Bettypooh, August 1, 2014
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   • Bettypooh
   • August 1, 2014

4. Where else are we posting stories?

   By ABAlex, January 20   

   • abdl
   • diaper
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     • abdl
     • diaper
     • story
     • abdlstory
     • questions
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   • ABAlex
   • Sunday at 03:32 PM

5. AI

   By jblackbean2, February 8
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   • jblackbean2
   • February 8

6. Story Bible/Recap for: "Mommy Influencer The Road to becoming a Teenage Toddler"

   By Frostybaby, January 26
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   • Wittlebabiboi
   • January 26

7. Posting Out Side of Daily Diapers Story Forum (Thoughts?)

   By FingerToes, December 25, 2025
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   • Daymare
   • January 25

8. Step into Motherhood- Preview of my next story

   By Little Dino, January 3
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   • sklawlor
   • January 21

9. Third Person Point of View Writing Practice 'William's Evening In The Nursery'

   By Blushing_Alex, November 23, 2025
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   • Blushing_Alex
   • January 19

10. Before Mommy Influencer hits Chapter 50… How’s the Journey Feeling to You? (Feeback)

    By Frostybaby, November 16, 2025
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    • Wittlebabiboi
    • January 17

11. What do you think of my story? Title “A Routine Check”

    By littleone56, January 9
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    • 189 views
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    • spark
    • January 10

12. Keeping track of background characters

    By spark, December 13, 2025   

    • writing tips
    • 15 replies
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    • Babypants
    • December 18, 2025

13. Looking for tips on improving my writing

    By RogueDratini, November 29, 2025
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    • RogueDratini
    • November 29, 2025

14. special needs story

    By crink-L, November 24, 2025
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    • crink-L
    • November 24, 2025

15. Why Rabbits and Foxes Don't Mix

    By Smitty1991, November 21, 2025
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    • Smitty1991
    • November 23, 2025

16. New to writing for ABDL -- looking for critiques, suggestions, anything! 1 2

    By cipher12, November 1, 2025
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    • WBDaddy
    • November 12, 2025

17. Rendered incontinent but not AB

    By brucejedi, September 3, 2025
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    • Bobbyca
    • October 31, 2025

18. What Kills A Story For You? 1 2 3 4 8

    By PeculiarChangeling, October 20, 2012
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    • Babypants
    • October 28, 2025

19. Simon´s Dolly adventures critique

    By Baby-Dolly Selina, August 8, 2025
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    • WBDaddy
    • October 27, 2025

20. Ending a chapter with a minor resolution vs. cliff hanger?

    By spark, September 28, 2025
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    • 629 views
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    • WBDaddy
    • October 3, 2025

21. Some Going Up to Do- Preview Chapter 1

    By Little Dino, September 15, 2025   

    • preview
    • diapers
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      • diapers
      • wetting
      • advise
    • 7 replies
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    • Little Dino
    • September 21, 2025

22. help wanted Eli's diary

    By Regression School, February 14, 2024   

    • male
    • regression
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      • regression
      • regression school
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    • Bonsai
    • September 15, 2025

23. Have you heard this qoute? Who said this...

    By cbkid, September 13, 2025
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    • 375 views
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    • WBDaddy
    • September 14, 2025

24. Finding an Editor

    By Little Dino, September 11, 2025   

    • editor
    • editing
    • 2 replies
    • 325 views
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    • Little Dino
    • September 11, 2025

25. Back to Writing

    By FreezMilo, September 5, 2025
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    • 370 views
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    • Babypants
    • September 8, 2025