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    • Same, different user name but same profile picture, but there's really not much in the way of conversation over there,  it seems to mostly be americans posting pictures of rural america and old men showing off there plastic pants, I want to talk about logistics, technology, suppliers etc, and there's none of that. Mibby I'm just weird for being interested in where my nappies come from and how they work?
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    • Best form of poop is when you just let it go naturally and it slides out  Sitting in a wet nappy and you poop it naturally the best 
    • "This is Natalia." Anya spoke gently, gesturing to the woman. The woman leaned down and tilted her head, smiling. "Is this your new little boy? What was his name, Andrusha?" She asked softly. She was a bit shorter than Anya, and less muscular, but all the same the resemblance was clear. "Yes, that's right. My little Andrusha." She grinned and held him up proudly. "I'm surprised you actually took one this time, sister... Maybe you're finally growing up after all." She said with a slight condescending tone. 
    • "Force feed you?" She asked with an alarmed frown. "Of course not, dear! I'm only going to feed you when you're hungry!" She shook her head and placed a hand on his shoulder. "Don't you worry. I told you before, I will cause you no harm." She soothed. "Now... your maturity level... That's... really based on how you act once you get used to how things work around here. If you throw a bunch of tantrums and fuss and make it hard for me to clean you up, or to take you out in public, then I assume that you're not all that mature, so you'll need some extra corrective measures." She shrugged. "You'll get used to all of this in no time, I'm sure!" She chirped hopefully. "Then, you'll get to just lounge about all day, and I'll take care of everything you need! Doesn't that sound nice, my dear?" She leaned down and placed a kiss on his cheek, leaving a bright red lipstick mark for all the world to see. 
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