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    • I’m a diaper girl and a mommy who love to wear diaper 24:7 I have been seeking for a loyal and honest baby to take good care off I like to changed and breastfeed 🤱baby who wear diaper .. you can also text me on my telegram: @kimmygir   Or.  Zangi : 1048066234     Or my text number +15414143427
    • I’m a diaper girl and a mommy who love to wear diaper 24:7 I have been seeking for a loyal and honest baby to take good care off I like to changed and breastfeed 🤱baby who wear diaper .. you can also text me on my telegram: @kimmygir   Or.  Zangi : 1048066234     Or my text number +15414143427
    • The last chapter really hooked me. It showed the full power and value of this story. Like i already said: George is naive and immature but strong and observant, the aunt is civilized and orderly but caring and wise.    The characters feel very human. There not slaves to a backstory or theme. Which means you can do anything with them😊.    You can do many things with George and he will take it well, not some extreme reaction or cease to function. He is strong enough to be sane through everything and think through it, and can physically do what he wants to do. He is also reasonably mature so he won't do illogical stuff, he feels like an actual boy.  Same with the aunt. All kinds of things can happen and she is doing it to keep her house clean, take care of George, and direct everything to a mature end. She is serious but always cares and will help George through it all. And she is a good listener, sometimes strict but always listens. She feels like an actual woman taking care of this boy.  Just as long as you don't lose your writing style then that won't change. I can't wait to see what happens next 😊
    • For starters, grilled cheese sandwiches and soup. We like Campbell's tomato, but anything is good. If you want to dress it up, add slices of ham to the cheese before you grill it.  Another quick one (if you have the ingredients) is to fry some Italian sausage (Johnsonville or whatever) as you would ground beef (or slice links up into thin slices). While that's cooking, slice some onion and bell pepper and add that to the pan. Then smash a clove (or three) of garlic and toss that in. Finally, pour in a jar (or two) of whatever spaghetti sauce is available at the store for cheap and let it simmer while you cook the pasta. Top with some grated parmesan cheese (Kraft if you must). We also like to use mushrooms in this, but that'll add another 20 minutes to the cook time.  Every few months our guilty pleasure is to make chili dogs. We use frozen brick chili, but if you like that canned stuff, I'm not gonna turn you in. We've also noticed that Nathan's Franks are the only ones remaining that taste the same as they did back in the 60s and 70s. Hebrew National are a close second, but what every you like.  If you like Indian food, Patak's makes some great ready made sauces/spices/pastes and is available in many grocery stores these days (and online). They have recipe suggestions on the jars. Usually you just add some onion, ginger and garlic and a couple of skinless/boneless chicken thighs, some tomato puree (or coconut milk) and maybe finish with some frozen green beans, broccoli or cauliflower (or not) and you have a one pot meal. Serve over rice or not.   
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