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    • Andrew watched as Natalia left and brought back a bottle of milk and she gestured to her sister for cover his ears. As his hearing was muffled she said- “Here, this is how I did it with this darling, mostly normal milk with just a pinch of breast milk, to ease him into it. That way it’s not as much of a shock to his body. I’m sure he’s starving anyway, look how thin he is.” He watched their interaction with no sound and Anya was handed the bottle.
    • Anya shook her head. "I... hadn't really considered it... You see, he's still... you know... rather nervous by all of this... Poor baby was practically treated like a prisoner where he comes from. He spent nearly a whole week out on the streets just trying to get away from us... I don't want to force him to do so much so quickly..." she scooped him up, pulling him close to her chest. "He's never eaten like that... He hasn't ever felt real motherly affection!" 
    • Andrew nodded to her and rescue up for her wanting in her arms. Natalia smiled asking if she had him on a feeding schedule yet and if she prefers to swaddle him when she does feed him. He tilted his head before noticing her little attached into her chest and suckling and he shyed away slightly and looked up at Anya.
    • Natalia gasped and quickly turned to her own little. She unbuttoned the top of her dress, then she pulled open the nursing flap on her bra, then the girl was feeding, as if it were perfectly normal! Clearly Natalia had managed to get the girl good and drugged... and as soon as she was hooked on milk, it was over! While Natalia was busy feeding, Anya got to dressing the boy, helping him into the shirt, then pulling up the overalls and buckling the straps in place. "There we are... Nice and comfy, right?" 
    • Andrew blushed more at the outfit Natalia picked out and he squirmed a bit but found himself secured by a safely strap over his check keeping him on the table. Then the clock started to chime and her little started to fuss as it was her feeding time.
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