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    • Lily's heart soared as she found herself sitting on what she considered the best seat in the house, at least for tonight. She nodded, beaming at being called 'princess' and leaned against Miss Rose's body, resting her head against her coworkers breasts and watching a movie for little children. She was anxious, she felt like she shouldn't be doing this but it was the only thing she wanted to do and that kept her moving forward. As the movie progressed, Lily yawned and felt an urge she normally did at night. She lifted her hand to her mouth, looking up at Miss Rose almost for permission before sliding her thumb between her lips and returning to the movie.
    • "Please," Juniper begged, reaching her hand out, clasping on to Hugo's wrist. "Please, I know I smell so gross but I just don't want to be alone right now," she whimpered, looking away from him and down at the Triceratops he had given her.
    • Emily saw and felt Lily getting closer like a child would do with their parent, Emily felt her heart race as her motherly Instinct was crying out, gently and carefully Emily picked Lily up and slowly sat her on her lap, "a-are you comfortable princess?" Emily asked giving Lily a childish nickname, maybe she was pushing it, she thought she was pushing it, sshe knew she was pushing it but she had to try.
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    • Lily's heart began to race, the way her coworkers hand took hers wasn't romantic. There was no facing of the the fingers together, she held the entirety of Lily's little hand in her own, it felt motherly more than like what a partner would do. Still, Lily took it as an encouraging sign for what she was thinking about doing. She leaned gently against Miss Rose's arm. She waited, gauging her coworkers signals before continuing to get close. She wanted comfort, she wanted connection, and she didn't particularly care right now how much of little kid she looked like in trying to get it. She could be an adult teacher again in the morning...
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