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Pretty good written. The tension is very tight, it must be really embarrassing for Liam. btw I think the character descriptions were better than just dropping the name. It kind of feels like now there is missing some information. Grace being his mom for example is just being mentioned in the second half of the Prologue. Maybe the best solution would have been adding just the family first. Also you now just have a list with only one name, looks bit weird -
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Jimmy just shrugged as he was unsure as well as this was his first time that he can remember at least that he was being diapered and just sucking his thumb. It was oddly comforting to do so. -
Gabe not really caring about trying to be a big boy anymore just continues to suck his thumb. "So uhm Ice cweam?" He asks tilting his head
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