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    • I had on a Unique Wellness Superio for church and bedtime.  No padding, since it's a working weekend.  
    • I grimaced as she refilled the bowl, wishing I hadn't eaten so fast for her to see the need to refill it as I simply started pushing it around with my spoon. But as she effectively revealed the milk was tainted... I froze. The milk before me would surely make me need to... go again. But the fear of yet another punishment was haunting in the back of my mind. "B-but I.... but..." i stammered looking at the rubber nipple and back to her nervously, visibily overwhelmed, "I cant... I-I don't wanna... use my diaper!"  I leaned away from the bottle as she presented it, a small act of defiance but not outright refusal as I dared not bat the bottle from her hands
    • Anya smiled at the boy as he ate his slop. She was all too happy to refill his bowl once it was empty, not wanting him to go hungry, of course! "You need to drink your milk, princess. It has everything a sweet little baby like you needs, and it helps you relax so you can do your business easier." She cooed, gently poking his nose and holding the bottle up to his lips. "Drink now, sugar. Before mommy has to punish you." She whispered. She had just presented him with crucial information... she was PURPOSEFULLY putting stuff in the milk that would make him lose control of his stomach! She WANTED this to happen! And worst of all, there was very little he could do to stop her. He was between a rock and a hard place... Or, more accurately, between a messy diaper and a lead pipe. 
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