Jump to content
LL Medico Diapers and More

Critiques and Writer's Discussion

For more in-depth critiques of stories and story writing discussion.


549 topics in this forum

    • 55 replies
    • 11.8k views
    • 20 replies
    • 11.7k views
  1. Site Rules

    • 0 replies
    • 8.1k views
    • 14 replies
    • 689 views
  2. AI

    • 2 replies
    • 109 views
    • 4 replies
    • 206 views
    • 6 replies
    • 357 views
    • 1 reply
    • 209 views
    • 2 replies
    • 228 views
    • 19 replies
    • 727 views
    • 3 replies
    • 188 views
    • 15 replies
    • 326 views
    • 0 replies
    • 161 views
  3. special needs story

    • 0 replies
    • 299 views
    • 2 replies
    • 239 views
    • 35 replies
    • 1.3k views
    • 11 replies
    • 993 views
    • 176 replies
    • 25.6k views
    • 1 reply
    • 248 views
    • 13 replies
    • 629 views
    • 7 replies
    • 667 views
  4. Eli's diary

    • 1 reply
    • 1.2k views
    • 3 replies
    • 375 views
  5. Finding an Editor

    • 2 replies
    • 325 views
  6. Back to Writing

    • 2 replies
    • 370 views
  • Current Donation Goals

    • Raised $210 of $400 target
    • Raised $90
  • NorthShore Daily Diaper Ads - 250x250.gif

  • Posts

    • So i heeded the spoiler warning in the parent story and wanted to wait for the conclusion there ... and i managed it ... (for a whole 5 minutes) ...🤣 I didn't expect this length from a side story, but i loved every word of it ...  I loved how you built her character and her viewpoint of this example of crazy Amazon baby fever as perfectly normal ...  The realization at the court was that much more impactful because of that ...  The whole prison environment seemed so realistic i start to wonder if you aren't an escaped free little from that dimension who watched a lot of documentaries there and managed to escape here just before adoption ... 🤣 Anyways can't really blame you to not being able to wait longer to share this story ... it is really great!!
    • Back at work, so no padding. Saturday night/Sunday morning was spent in an ABU Lil Tykes, with a girl's XXL Goodnites for church.  I wasn't feeling too good for Sunday, so I really didn't pad up at all.  
    • It's morning here and I'm in a very wet pair of Tena pullups, which has had a small leak at the side. It still feels indescribably wonderful. 
    • Wow ... I didn't know how complicated can the judicial process get ... trial before trial and so on ... though i have to admit i do not even know how complicated it is here, where i live ... (only thing i know, that corrupted politicians always try for appeal ... 🤣)  Even though i do not know much about the process, it definitely felt right ...  I am curious how long this sentiment will last Greg ... I am afraid that not very long ...  I loved all the parts with Charlie, Kelly and Lexi ... babysitter getting a rope to tie up (possibly in shibari) a doll to a train track as an excuse to give them privacy had me laughing and face palming at the same time ...  Best part was Charlie's immediate, so which part are we fixing first segment and consequent planning session.
  • Mommy Maggie.jpg

×
×
  • Create New...