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sklawlor

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  1. this is like looking at a car accident, absolutely horrifying yet I'm compelled to look, at least for now. Amy is a horrible character, her sister is worse and if Chris were able to, he would call a divorce lawyer. You're doing a good job with character development even if I think the actions and personalities of the female characters are so reprehensible.
  2. good character development. the fact that I am so angry with Amy and Rosy are a testament to how immersive this world is becoming.
  3. good start, I like it. wonder if she'll be able ot keep her secret?
  4. Hi there, one part I don't see in this revision is Cameron metting his father after he got out of prison? i recall reading about it in the original but it was so long ago that I don't remember the details of that part or even if that arc of the story was resolved. I love all the new updates though. I hope you're doing well.
  5. a very compelling beginning, looking forward to reading more.
  6. good deal, thanks for the info. do you have an idea aobut how many more chapters you'll be posting here/ I know some people post their completed work here, though it's at a slower trickle. Anyway, this is a great story.
  7. where will the whole novel be published and how much will it cost to get it?
  8. this is really good, looking forward to reading more.
  9. nice story. looking forward to reading more.
  10. oh the upcoming chapters are going to be spectacular. can't wait to read them. The only question is, will Freya be Archies mommy/
  11. Great beginning, can't wait to read more myself as well.
  12. I agree with BabySofia, it's better to paste the text than give a link. Many people probably won't read it if they have to click on it as it really is a security risk.
  13. Can't recall if I've commented but I really like this story. It'll be interesting to see if they're dynamic changes in any way when he finally confesses that it was all an act, at least in the beginning. Knowing Emily, she'll say that she knew it was an act but was just playing along but then such a story telling device is just too easy. That's exactly why i'm not a writer, no imagination in that way.
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