diaper dimension Lights! Camera! ...What?!? - Chapter 145 - 6/29/2025 BONUS CHAPTER

[Guilend]

6 minutes ago, BabySofia said:

can't remember for certain, but I believe an appearance by here is going to return at some point again. The nurse isn't fully gone yet though...

You give me hope, but I know the only hope I have is a tease from the mistress of teasing (aka you 😂) I can't wait to see what happens next 

[TerranV]

Quite a little rogue's gallery developing for our heroines.

[Mushysnugglebutts]

48 minutes ago, BabySofia said:

She's definitely not the same person as her mom. I think the situations are a bit different, too, in that her mom knew she was giving herself over for an adoption - even if it was temporary. Carly has in mind this idea that she's still an independent college student. 

Of course, that means doing some dumb things every now and then!

 

I specifically mean in how she handles the fights with Bigs and Mids.  She seems to take more risks to do more damage faster, but it isn't necessarily paying off in how much it's returned when she gets hit in response.

I believe she could get baited fairly easily in a fight, and it would turn on her horribly..

[MandaSpiderweb]

I'm glad Fred was able to save Beth from the evil nurse. Then Holly shows up right in the knick of time.

I can't believe Carly ended up so hurt during the fight. I know she takes risks and just kept going. But I'm sure she would have been out for the count if her nanites didn't inject her. I doubt anyone would believe she was still fighting with those injuries even if the rebels told the truth. 

Can't wait to see what happens with the police. 

[BabySofia]

14 hours ago, TerranV said:

Quite a little rogue's gallery developing for our heroines.

Definitely! (Also quite a character tree I have to deal with at this point. I would wager the document of notes on plot and character is longer than most people's writings on here...)

10 hours ago, MandaSpiderweb said:

I'm glad Fred was able to save Beth from the evil nurse. Then Holly shows up right in the knick of time.

Yeah, I debated how far the nurse would get with Beth... seemed an appropriate team to save her! 🙂

 

Thanks for the comments everyone! 🙂

[Blastoslap]

1. Tuck is not wounded, but only stunned by the taser, even though he will be severely disoriented after being stabbed, he will surely have an immediate effort to escape - is anyone watching him?

2. The remaining three attackers are wounded and will probably end up in the etiquette school for real, but Tuck will probably escape.

3. One more fight like this and the knife shoes Stacy got from Grandpa Joe will be sitting on Carly. Where's the end of the boots? They could show up in the story.

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[Baby Billy]

On 7/12/2024 at 7:32 PM, Mushysnugglebutts said:

I specifically mean in how she handles the fights with Bigs and Mids.  She seems to take more risks to do more damage faster, but it isn't necessarily paying off in how much it's returned when she gets hit in response.

I believe she could get baited fairly easily in a fight, and it would turn on her horribly..

One thing you need to remember is that Stacy was only a red belt for most of the story.  She had to depend on others things when in trouble.  It was only after 4 years with grandpa Joe that she had the knowledge Carly has now.  It showed at her graduation when the Amazon girl tried to get her.

9 hours ago, Blastoslap said:

1. Tuck is not wounded, but only stunned by the taser, even though he will be severely disoriented after being stabbed, he will surely have an immediate effort to escape - is anyone watching him?

2. The remaining three attackers are wounded and will probably end up in the etiquette school for real, but Tuck will probably escape.

3. One more fight like this and the knife shoes Stacy got from Grandpa Joe will be sitting on Carly. Where's the end of the boots? They could show up in the story.

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Sorry, but the shoes went home with Stacy 30 years ago.

[BabySofia]

6 minutes ago, Baby Billy said:

Sorry, but the shoes went home with Stacy 30 years ago.

9 hours ago, Blastoslap said:

. One more fight like this and the knife shoes Stacy got from Grandpa Joe will be sitting on Carly. Where's the end of the boots? They could show up in the story.

I don't remember if I wrote that or not. She might not have had them due to concerns about security picking up on it. That being said, her mom was still about a foot shorter than her, so they wouldn't fit even if they were there. 

Thanks for the comments! 🙂

[Baby Billy]

42 minutes ago, BabySofia said:

I don't remember if I wrote that or not. She might not have had them due to concerns about security picking up on it. That being said, her mom was still about a foot shorter than her, so they wouldn't fit even if they were there. 

Thanks for the comments! 🙂

Yes BabySofia in the last chapter when Stacy went home the shoes went with her and grew to her size.  When the agents came to the house she got feed up and pulled one out and held it to the neck of the older agent.😀

[BabySofia]

7 hours ago, Baby Billy said:

and grew to her size.  When the agents came to the house she got feed up and pulled one out and held it to the neck of the older agent.

Been a while since I paid attention to that book/scene... Really the only thing I looked at for LCW was the final information about Stacy and her family... I do remember writing that now! 🤣

[Guilend]

55 minutes ago, BabySofia said:

Been a while since I paid attention to that book/scene... Really the only thing I looked at for LCW was the final information about Stacy and her family... I do remember writing that now! 🤣

She even forgot that most of the Amazons in her universe is being diaper punished 😁

[LittleFenny]

On 7/12/2024 at 1:19 PM, BabySofia said:

“Huh… that’s interesting,” she said a moment later.

“Interesting?” I asked.

“Yeah, I have a feeling you probably should be in worse shape than you are right now, Carly,” she told me. “I can actively see the nanites in the scan working to repair the damage to your body.”

Uh oh. I thought she wasn't supposed to have any active nanites right now... wait, other than the ones that were used for the movie? Did those, the original nanites, and the ones the former nest mothers dosed him with end up merging?

On 7/12/2024 at 3:05 PM, BabySofia said:

Lol, don't let them hear you say that! 🤫

That would be a paddling for sure! And not the fun kind!

On 7/12/2024 at 3:52 PM, CCApril said:

(Maybe they can tell the Detective that a passing Hellcat jumped out from a vent, saved the day, and then jumped back into the vent before the cops got there.  Got to be more believable then the truth.)

"You would think that was unbelievable, but that actually happens about once a week."

On 7/12/2024 at 4:47 PM, BabySofia said:

Nope! Silly Amazons! Diapees are for Ama... I mean Littles.

"Not to worry, Diapees for Amazons are scheduled to come out Third Quarter next year. We're projecting a minimum forty-two percent increase in profits. Possibly double that if the hypnotic marketing campaign is successful." The diaper company marketer looks around the forum. "Wait, this isn't my meeting. I need you to sign these NDAs. You'll receive complimentary free samples if you do."

On 7/12/2024 at 7:44 PM, Baby Billy said:

I think Carly should use the line her mom used at the mall just got tripped up by me and it it to themselves, with puppy dog eyes and a small smile.

"It was scary! They were hitting themselves over and over again, until I asked why they were hitting themselves and they got these scary smiles and started trying to hit me. I was able to jump away at first but then I got a bunch of owies but they got bored and started hitting themselves again." Carly gives the officer a wide eyed look, "They aren't going to come back and hit themselves again are they?"

"They tried to claim you hit them. But that's obviously nonsense. We'll have to make sure the judge knows they were telling really big fibs."

On 7/12/2024 at 9:31 PM, Guilend said:

It would have been karma if the nurse was so scared of security that she wet herself 😂 

It could still happen!

On 7/12/2024 at 10:44 PM, BabySofia said:

Of course, that means doing some dumb things every now and then!

Well yeah, are you really in college if you don't do a few foolish things a week?

On 7/12/2024 at 10:44 PM, BabySofia said:

I can't remember for certain, but I believe an appearance by here is going to return at some point again. The nurse isn't fully gone yet though...

Maybe we see her getting sized for the new Princess Potty Pants in Adult Amazon size! We did all sign the NDAs, right? I hope those free samples are something cute!

 

[BabySofia]

On 7/15/2024 at 1:11 AM, LittleFenny said:

I hope those free samples are something cute!

Lol! Sorry it took so long to respond. Thanks for the comments! 🙂

[BabySofia]

Chapter 123: No More Malls

 BETH HAD BEEN eternally grateful for Fred’s timing in getting there. She put the gown on, then realized she was missing something, “Umm… Fred?” She asked when he returned.

“Yes, Beth?”

“Did you happen to see where the lunatic lady left my pants?”

“Damnit!” He said, “I bet that’s what she shoved down that garbage chute!”

“So I take it I won’t see those again?”

“Doubtful,” I agreed.

“Any chance you can find me some underwear?” Beth cringed, “Preferably not the diaper she wanted me to wear?”

“Let me make sure you have Nikki back here first.”

“Where is she?”

“Not sure,” Fred replied.

Right then, the Little doctor returned. Beth noted she was probably just a few inches taller than Carly. “Hi, Beth, I guess we can officially meet now? I know your dad?”

Beth nodded, “He’s told me about you a few times?”

“Definitely rose above the circumstances we first met,” she smiled at Beth. “Now that I’ve taken care of the psycho nurse who wanted to make up rules for you, why are you here?”

“I don’t really know what happened, Doctor Nickerson. One minute, I’ve got a knife next to my throat, and I’m convinced I’m going to die, and then the next, I’m being woken up. Everything until I get to this room is really hazy?”

There was a knock on the door, then, “Can we come in?” Beth recognized Megan’s voice.

“Who are you?” Dr. Nickerson asked.

“I’m Megan Lethbridge, Miss Sylvester’s attorney, and Fred’s sister-in-law. We’ve met a couple times?”

“Right! Nice to see you again!” she told her. You have attorney-client privilege, so I’m okay with you coming in. Who is this other woman, though?”

“Sorry, I’m Nikki Paulson, Beth’s bodyguard?”

“Looks like you missed today?”

“Well, yes and no,” Nikki said.

“Okay, do you two know what happened to my patient?”

“Yes,” Nikki said.

“Okay, I’ll let you tell me that, then you can wait outside.”

“Actually, we need to hold off on Beth hearing Nikki’s side until she’s interviewed by the police. How about we just give you the basics, and then you can go down and check on the other patient you came in for?” Fred said.

“Go ahead?” Megan said, “Just a very broad overview? Just what was done to her physically, not any of the facts. I don’t want Detective James claiming we are changing stories here.”

“Got it,” Nikki said. “We were cornered in a restroom at the mall by a Tweener gang. Long stories short, Beth had a knife held against her neck that I believe may have left a small nick, the reason for that gauze, and then she was a contact victim of a Pulse Gun that I fired at the hostage taker.”

“So she received a full Pulse?” Dr. Nickerson said with a frown.

“Not directly, but it was enough to knock her out since the assailant was holding onto her. She was unconscious for about ten minutes.”

“Got it, Mrs. Lethbridge; you may stay in here? Fred, you’re also welcome since you have privileges here?”

“I think Megan has it in hand, and since Nikki is outside, I’m going to go see if I can scrounge some replacement pants up since our favorite nurse apparently trashed hers.”

“Make sure you purchase a new pair,” Dr. Nickerson told Beth, “and then send the receipt. We’ll dock it from her final paycheck.”

“Lie back, please, Miss Sylvester.”

“Please, just call me Beth?” She asked.

“As long as you call me ‘Doc,’ that’s usually what everyone calls me!”

“I can see that,” Beth said with a smile. She lay back on the table and waited for the scan to complete.

“I’m not seeing anything directly right now; I’m going to send the scan results on to a colleague who deals with more of these effects on adults brought in by the police. I think you’re good to go if he doesn’t see anything. That wound on your neck didn’t pass through the epidermis, so give it a week, and it should be healed. It shouldn’t even scar.”

“Thanks,” Beth said.

“Whenever Fred reappears with something for you to wear, feel free to change into them. Since you’re conscious and coherent, I don’t foresee any reason to keep you overnight.”

She sighed in relief, fearing she’d have more nurses like the first!

“Here’s your purse, Beth,” Megan said, handing over the valuable bag. She opened it and found her phone inside. She quickly texted her parents an update and was just going through the bag, hoping she had a spare pair of panties, at least when there was a knock at the door again.

Right then, the detective from earlier at the restaurant came inside.

 

GRANDMA SIGHED DEEPLY, “That daughter of mine!”

“You think Stacy is responsible?” Doc asked.

“I’m sure she is. I’ll have to call her later and figure out what she did and how we can avoid Carly having more problems. I’m guessing the nanites used energy from the body to heal her, which meant taking mass from somewhere.”

“That seems like a reasonable hypothesis,” Doc said. “It might be good to have a follow-up appointment sometime next week?”

“I’ll see when we can get in; what days are you scheduled?”

“Pre-consults mostly Monday through Wednesday. I do surgeries usually on Thursdays and Friday mornings.”

“I’ll see if we can’t get her in here on Tuesday; she’s got an empty spot in her schedule since a class got canceled.”

“Sounds good,” she said. “I’m going to go check on the results from my other patient; then we’ll get both the girls out of here!”

“Thanks, Doc,” Grandma said.

We were about to dress me back in the clothes I arrived in when Grandma realized there was a large hole in my sweater, and the jeans were ripped in an embarrassing spot right on my butt too. Fortunately, she had a spare onesie and leggings outfit in her bag that fit! I figured they were about to release me when a knock came on the door, and Detective Paulson arrived with Aunt Megan in tow.

“Good afternoon,” he said. “I’m hoping we can get your statement now?”

I looked at Aunt Megan, “This works as well as anywhere, Carly. Saves us a trip to the station.”

“Okay, where do you want me to start?”

“First, I need your name, date of birth, address, and phone number, please?”

I gave him the basic details, and he asked, “Where do you think this began?”

I sighed, “Beth and I went to a movie last weekend. We were waiting in the bathroom for a changing table when two girls tried to snatch my backpack off Beth’s shoulder. I think they thought it was a purse? A report of that incident has been made,” I said. “They couldn’t get the bag since their knife wouldn’t cut through the straps, so they hightailed it out of there.”

“Go on?”

“The next day, I was shopping with friends, and we heard one of our friends scream from the direction of the changing rooms she had gone to. As we were running, I noticed movement ahead of us and realized the girl from the day before was carrying a bag that matched my friend’s, who was screaming. I could see the strap was cut, so I decided to stop her.”

“The report said you broke the girl’s knee?”

“Detective, I hope you are not going to turn this into something we need to stop now?” Aunt Megan said.

“No, but you did?”

“She claimed her knee was broken?” I shrugged, “She had a friend with her again who she told to get away since she wasn’t going to make it with her. The injured girl was arrested and taken away? Then we shopped in another store or two and got out.”

“And today?”

“Today, we were having a good time with the girls from my family and Beth, hanging out and shopping? We’d stopped for lunch, but there was a… wardrobe issue for Nikki that she needed to take care of. Nikki, Beth, Shelby, Leelah, and I went to go to the restroom and let her sort it out. There were three stalls, so Nikki, Shelby, and Leelah each took one while Beth changed my diaper.”

“You’re a college student, correct? Not an adopted Little?”

“Correct?”

“But she changes you?”

“We have a close relationship,” I told him with a shrug.

“Huh,” he jotted a note, “Okay, so what happened next?”

“While she was changing me, a couple girls came inside. Neither of us was really paying attention, though. When she had me dressed and set me on the ground, I realized one of them was the purse snatcher’s partner. Right then, I realized the other looked like trouble, too. I also noted a cable running along the doors to block the stalls from opening, meaning Nikki couldn’t help us.”

“Then?”

“We might have tried running, but two boys came inside and shut the door behind them. We figured out one of them, ‘Tuck,’ was the leader, and the other was just another goon. I tried to stall by talking to them for a few minutes, but then he told them to grab us. At that point, I started ducking and doing my best to stay safe.”

“During this ducking, I understand there were some injuries?”

“They might have been really clumsy?” I said.

“Hmm… One girl has a broken kneecap and dislocated joint; her other knee has a fracture. Her lip is completely ripped open, and she has a bruised trachea. The other girl has what the doctors described as a ‘destroyed’ ankle - doctors are planning an extensive surgery with nanites tonight to try and save it. The shorter male had most of his left ear ripped off, a severe concussion, and a bruised and dislocated kneecap. And finally, the final one just has a mild concussion and after effects from the Pulse Bolt fired at him.”

“Detective, are you preparing to charge my client?”

 

BETH WAS GRATEFUL that her questioning with the detective didn’t go on too long. She described a bit of what she saw with the fight but explained that once ‘Tuck’ had grabbed her and held a knife to her throat, everything just kind of became hazy. Detective James was thankfully gentle with questioning her and left sooner than she could have hoped!

Fortunately for her, Fred had somehow found a pair of scrub pants in her size. He’d brought a Pull-Up, too, but Beth had been fortunate to find a spare pair of panties in her purse that she kept for just in case she leaked while she was on her period.

Grateful she didn’t have to wear infantile padding instead of panties, she quickly pulled on her borrowed scrub pants over them. Fortunately, her shirt was not missing!

Nikki knocked and came inside as soon as the detective left, and she waited to be discharged.

“How you doing?” She asked her.

“I hurt a lot!” Beth told her, “It feels like I just ran three marathons, lifted weights for eight hours, and then let a bulldozer run over me?”

Nikki blushed, “Sorry, Beth, I figured you being sore was better than him slitting your throat.”

“Do you…” Beth felt her words catch in her throat, “Do you think he…?”

“Would have done it?” Nikki asked.

Beth nodded.

“I would hope not, but I wouldn’t have trusted that. That boy was cornered and very angry. I won’t be surprised to find out he was on some combination of drugs, too.”

Beth nodded.

“Beth, one thing I spoke with your parents and Doctor Nickerson about is that I want you to schedule some therapy appointments this week.”

Beth felt her face move to alarm, “I’m not…”

“You’ve just been through a traumatic event, Beth, I’m insisting the same for Carly, too.”

Beth sighed, “Fine.”

“Now, why don’t you go ahead and actually call and talk to your parents for a bit with an update? That way, they’ll stop blowing up my phone?”

Beth felt her stomach twist, “God, they’re going to want me to come home…”

“I know… but I will say your dad understands more. Call them,” she said, pushing her phone to her from where she’d sat it down.

Beth looked at the phone like a snake for a long moment before pressing ‘Call Home.’

Her parents answered immediately!

“Oh my god, Beth, I’m so glad you’re okay!!!!” Her mom was crying.

“Me too, Mom,” Beth said.

“Won’t you please come home now?” Her mom asked.

She sighed, “Mom, what happened today could have happened back home too? It was just a gang?”

“But at least we can be there for you here?!?” Her mom said.

She saw her dad place a hand on her shoulder, standing on the couch beside her. “Addy, I know I’d feel better with her here too, but she’s right; this could have happened anywhere. Beth, Nikki told me what she knows. Can you tell me what happened?”

Beth squirmed and felt practically sick as she told her parents about what happened. She wanted to leave out the knife part, but the gauze that was still on her neck wouldn’t allow that. When she finished, “Look, Mom, things would have been way worse if it wasn’t for Carly?”

“Maybe, but it also sounds like she’s the reason for the attack?” Her mom answered back.

Her dad shook his head, “Maybe, but I see more and more she’s exactly like her mom. Trouble just kind of follows both of them.”

“Then maybe they shouldn’t see…” her mom said.

“No!” She and her dad said simultaneously, and she was grateful he was an ally.

“Look, Addy, Stacy had a knack for finding trouble, but she also had a knack for getting out of it unscathed, too. She went to the ends of the earth for her adopted sister, friends, and anyone she felt she could help. I can tell Carly is the same way.” He turned back towards Beth, “Look, Beth, we won’t run your life. All we can do is ask that you please be more careful?”

“Don’t worry, I’m never stepping into another mall ever again!!!” Beth told him.

“Well, we’ll see how long that holds,” her mom gave a nervous laugh.

A nurse came in then with a tablet, “Mom, Dad, I think they’re ready to get me checked out of here; I’ll call you again tomorrow sometime.”

“Okay, and I think Nikki already told you, but you will be seeing someone to talk about this during the week,” her dad said.

“Yes, Daddy,” she said. “Bye.”

“It’s always the same with parents, isn’t it?” The nurse told her. “Here, if you’ll go through and sign these forms here, we’ll get you out of here?”

Beth took the tablet and followed the instructions as quickly as she could. All she wanted to do was get to Amanda’s, put on some jammies, and cuddle with Carly and Rings!

 

DETECTIVE JAMES LOOKED at Megan intensely for a moment but shook his head. “No, to be honest, right now, I doubt there’s a prosecutor out there who would take the case, even if I thought they should. Carly looks like she couldn’t hurt anyone, but I worry that she seems to be leaving a trail of destruction?”

I felt my blood chill, as I worried I was about to be in a lot of trouble in this foreign dimension. ‘Would I be sent to an etiquette school?’

“You really believe she did all of that?” Aunt Megan asked, with a fair amount of skepticism in her voice.

“If it hadn’t been for the video I found of the department store, I probably wouldn’t. I would guess Carly was covering for Miss Paulson, but that was more than just a trip in that store.” He turned to me, “Miss Slane, I’m going to be wrapping up this investigation, and no, I won’t be recommending charges for you. As far as my report is concerned, there was a vicious attack by gang members on a harmless group of young ladies.”

I felt a grateful sense of relief and only then realized my hands had formed fists that I relaxed.

He paused, “They were defended adeptly by Miss Paulson. While she did fire a Pulse Gun in the mall, she did so in defense of life. The only charges being filed will be those against the members that attacked you.”

“Thank you, Detective,” Aunt Megan said to him.

“However,” he said, bringing back a sense of dread, “I will tell you this as clearly as I can. If I see this trail of broken bodies continue to build, I am going to have to tell the DA to seriously consider if you should be walking freely. I’m not a big fan of etiquette schools and forced adoptions, but that may be something that needs to be considered out there for the sake of society.”

“That would not happen without a fight,” Aunt Megan said. “If you’re finished with your questions, this interview is over.”

“Very well, have a good afternoon,” he said, closing the door behind him.

Aunt Megan turned on the device from the car again for a moment, “Carly, you are going to have to be very careful from here on out… Those were serious enough injuries that I think he might have been able to make a case against you.”

“Why do you think he didn’t?”

“Nikki… I think he appreciated her saving his butt this morning. If it wasn’t for that, I think we’d have seen a different side of him right now.”

“Got it… We’ll start with no more malls!”

 

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[Moon3ye]

I'm just going to be cheeky and say I speak for everyone when I say take a break.

I'd rather have another break now and finish the book than you working yourself to pieces so that nothing comes out.

The only small request would be that the break chapter doesn't contain the ultimate cliffhanger.

And don't even pretend it's not something you would do.

We both know you're lying.

Otherwise, recover, gather your energy and come back with renewed vigor and joy.

[CCApril]

2 hours ago, BabySofia said:

“However,” he said, bringing back a sense of dread, “I will tell you this as clearly as I can. If I see this trail of broken bodies continue to build, I am going to have to tell the DA to seriously consider if you should be walking freely.

Some one should have told the cop to get off his high horse. Ask him if there was a better way for it to be handled. It's great to look at the aftermath and say that Carly's response was too much. It is not like Carly can subdue an Amazon. She did leave them all alive. Her mother might not have. If Amanda's dad was still alive he would have been so proud of Carly. 

Take your break. We all know there will be cliffhanger. I'm hoping for a literal one. Some bad guy threatening to drop Carly off a cliff. Well for Carly that could just be a table top.

[Baby Billy]

That was as I expected the interview with Carly to go.  I speak for myself in saying that if you need a break it is fine, I have been following you since you started and remember you had to do that with Exchange.😀💜🤍

[Jayme]

Sadly enough those Amazonas can be a tricky bunch to spot at times.

[TerranV]

Of course simply sending Carly back to her own dimension is not on the table... not that I thought it would be.

[Blastoslap]

No More Malls
That's not an option, because the gang will be very angry and will be stalking Carly on campus, just like Stacy was stalked by Trellini's gang on campus.
Plus, something keeps telling me that Kelly, who probably grew up in the same orphanage as most of the gang members, will be connected to the gang.
Kinda looking forward to seeing Miss Lilly and Miss Mackenzie's reaction when they see the smaller and even cuter Carly. And then there's a classmate from her Voodoo Math class named Skylar, who has one of the most extreme maternal fevers of all the Amazons in the world, but is still quite successful at controlling it. Soon we see Carly in action again - providing first aid after Skylar suffers a very severe diabetic seizure while looking after Carly.
Oh, and we'd still need to patch a jar of baby food haggis + turnip + tripe or a jar of durian + pickled eggs into the story.

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[BabySofia]

12 hours ago, Moon3ye said:

The only small request would be that the break chapter doesn't contain the ultimate cliffhanger.

Checks notes... I'll have to write one of those still if I want to do that to you! Chapter ending of my last one is pretty calm. 🤔

12 hours ago, Moon3ye said:

therwise, recover, gather your energy and come back with renewed vigor and joy.

Thanks for understanding! 🙂

9 hours ago, CCApril said:

Take your break. We all know there will be cliffhanger. I'm hoping for a literal one. Some bad guy threatening to drop Carly off a cliff. Well for Carly that could just be a table top.

🤣

9 hours ago, Baby Billy said:

I speak for myself in saying that if you need a break it is fine, I have been following you since you started and remember you had to do that with Exchange.

Thanks for understanding! 🙂

3 hours ago, Jayme said:

Sadly enough those Amazonas can be a tricky bunch to spot at times.

Very too! Very tricksy creatures they are!

3 hours ago, TerranV said:

Of course simply sending Carly back to her own dimension is not on the table... not that I thought it would be.

Portal ticket is only good for one use on one day! Going home is not an option except on that day for them! 

44 minutes ago, Blastoslap said:

Oh, and we'd still need to patch a jar of baby food haggis + turnip + tripe or a jar of durian + pickled eggs into the story.

That may be the most diabolical item I've ever created in a story. I truly started with... what's the worst food in the universe? I think I accomplished that!

 

Thanks for the comments everyone, and being understanding! 💜

[CDfm]

First, I fully understand your need to take a break and as much as I will miss the story I feel it’s necessary for you to look out for yourself.  Don’t push yourself too hard and end up sick or something. Reading the story will be just that much more enjoyable when it returns. 
 

I was actually almost emotional reading this chapter.  The thought of this incident causing emotional distress for Beth and Carly really got to me. 
When it comes to charging Carly no prosecutor would ever prosecute her for defending herself or others around her as long as she wasn’t using excessive force.  You are allowed to use a level of force necessary to overcome the force being used against you.  In this case since Tuck held a knife, Deadly Force would have been justified. 
Whenever it comes,  I will be looking forward to seeing more. 

[Moon3ye]

2 hours ago, BabySofia said:

Checks notes... I'll have to write one of those still if I want to do that to you! Chapter ending of my last one is pretty calm. 🤔

*Checks his notes*

What have I ever done to you that you want to do this to me to write a mean chapter ending?

I never threatened to visit you and put you in a hole and dump cement on you like I do to others!

But I hope something goes wrong with the therapist and someone comes along who thinks Beth and Carly are too traumatized and need to be adopted.

No matter how long the book goes on I want the part where they are both dressed in diapers with the pinkest and frilliest dresses drinking breast milk from the fountain of a crazy Amazon mummy.

[Guilend]

Before they leave the hospital, the mean Nurse is dragged back into Beth's room wearing her shirt and a very spoiled diaper, crying from the humiliation and the spanking she received and has to apologize to Beth for being a naughty girl. 😁

[Mushysnugglebutts]

I don't think this is the case, but I could see Amazon's doing something this dirty: the "release" forms Beth signed were actually an adoption agreement form that she didn't read because a nurse handed it to her.