Andy-bozu Posted March 4, 2018 Share Posted March 4, 2018 Really happy with the story and the fact so many people are enjoying it! Pink Dino is amazing. Link to comment
PinkTheDinosaur Posted March 4, 2018 Author Share Posted March 4, 2018 2 hours ago, Kami-bozu said: Really happy with the story and the fact so many people are enjoying it! Pink Dino is amazing. thank you! ^,^ glad you liked it! it was a strange and nice experience making a story from the pictures. thank you for the experience! Link to comment
Pierry Louys Posted March 4, 2018 Share Posted March 4, 2018 Now you have to make more pictures so pink can continue this wonderful story Link to comment
PinkTheDinosaur Posted March 4, 2018 Author Share Posted March 4, 2018 11 hours ago, Pierry Louys said: Now you have to make more pictures so pink can continue this wonderful story Agree! Link to comment
CDfm Posted March 9, 2018 Share Posted March 9, 2018 I like the story line and think that overall you are putting in a solid effort. I also noticed there are lots of mistakes there were also a few places where it seemed like the Baby treatment was forced. Not that the ladies were forcing him to be treated like a baby reading about the treatment seemed forced. Keep at it though you will continue to improve. Link to comment
PinkTheDinosaur Posted March 9, 2018 Author Share Posted March 9, 2018 I like the story line and think that overall you are putting in a solid effort. I also noticed there are lots of mistakes there were also a few places where it seemed like the Baby treatment was forced. Not that the ladies were forcing him to be treated like a baby reading about the treatment seemed forced. Keep at it though you will continue to improve. thank you and sorry for the spelling and grammar mistakes. I'm still working on that... as for the forced treatment, well, this story is all based on 4 pictures. I had to find some way to make them flow like a story. Link to comment
Wannatripbaby Posted June 27, 2018 Share Posted June 27, 2018 I haven't read this one yet (not sure if I will) but if it's complete shouldn't you message Elfy and ask him to move it to the Completed Stories section? Link to comment
PinkTheDinosaur Posted June 27, 2018 Author Share Posted June 27, 2018 1 hour ago, Wannatripbaby said: I haven't read this one yet (not sure if I will) but if it's complete shouldn't you message Elfy and ask him to move it to the Completed Stories section? this story is in a bit of a gray area. I was asked by @Kami-bozu to make a story based on a few of his pictures. the story was left open-ended because Kami said they were planning on getting more pictures made and could continue the story. but if they don't get them soon, I do plan on moving this story to complete section. (also, you should give it a shot. ^.^ ) Link to comment
Pierry Louys Posted June 27, 2018 Share Posted June 27, 2018 It’s a shame if you don’t continue this story , it’s so good ! Please continue even if don’t have anymore pictures ! Link to comment
PinkTheDinosaur Posted June 27, 2018 Author Share Posted June 27, 2018 3 hours ago, Pierry Louys said: It’s a shame if you don’t continue this story , it’s so good ! Please continue even if don’t have anymore pictures ! If I don't get any more pictures I might just make one or two more chapters to end it fully, but this story was meant to be following the pictures. Link to comment
Pierry Louys Posted June 27, 2018 Share Posted June 27, 2018 7 minutes ago, PinkTheDinosaur said: If I don't get any more pictures I might just make one or two more chapters to end it fully, but this story was meant to be following the pictures. Ah ok , but it’s a shame !!! Because it’s a good story Link to comment
PinkTheDinosaur Posted June 27, 2018 Author Share Posted June 27, 2018 1 hour ago, Pierry Louys said: Ah ok , but it’s a shame !!! Because it’s a good story i know, but i try to keep to a theme when it comes to my stories. and this one was based on pictures. Link to comment
Eagle0769 Posted June 27, 2018 Share Posted June 27, 2018 I think this story is perfect even with the misspelled words. I did not read it as punishment. I read it as three women and their maternal side. I read all the post and what and how you answered them but I did not see one that asked what was in the box"? Link to comment
PinkTheDinosaur Posted June 27, 2018 Author Share Posted June 27, 2018 27 minutes ago, Eagle0769 said: I think this story is perfect even with the misspelled words. I did not read it as punishment. I read it as three women and their maternal side. I read all the post and what and how you answered them but I did not see one that asked what was in the box"? lol again sorry, my spelling is shit. ya, this is not a punishment story. the first 2 chapters were of his choices, and the last two are subtle manipulation. but nothing out of spight or anger. do you mean the present they gave him? Link to comment
Eagle0769 Posted June 28, 2018 Share Posted June 28, 2018 4 hours ago, PinkTheDinosaur said: lol again sorry, my spelling is shit. ya, this is not a punishment story. the first 2 chapters were of his choices, and the last two are subtle manipulation. but nothing out of spight or anger. do you mean the present they gave him? Yes. If this is complete I would like to know what the present was. Link to comment
PinkTheDinosaur Posted June 28, 2018 Author Share Posted June 28, 2018 12 minutes ago, Eagle0769 said: Yes. If this is complete I would like to know what the present was. it was the last line of the chapter. "LOVE Aunt Luna, Aunt Candace, and Aunt Celestia. I then turned my attention to the present. I ripped off the paper and the pacifier I didn't know was even in my mouth fell out. My aunts got me a Nintendo Switch!" Link to comment
Pierry Louys Posted June 28, 2018 Share Posted June 28, 2018 You said that if kami don’t make more pictures , you gonna write two more chapters to fully Finnish the story , so my question is when you gonna do this ? Because like I said earlier it’s a really good story !! Link to comment
PinkTheDinosaur Posted June 28, 2018 Author Share Posted June 28, 2018 4 hours ago, Pierry Louys said: You said that if kami don’t make more pictures , you gonna write two more chapters to fully Finnish the story , so my question is when you gonna do this ? Because like I said earlier it’s a really good story !! i dont know yet Link to comment
Andy-bozu Posted August 25, 2018 Share Posted August 25, 2018 Sorry for the absence, but I do have a new picture in works! Link to comment
Pierry Louys Posted August 25, 2018 Share Posted August 25, 2018 Cool really happy to hear this !!! Link to comment
redwelch2222 Posted August 26, 2018 Share Posted August 26, 2018 22 hours ago, Kami-bozu said: Sorry for the absence, but I do have a new picture in works! awesome. can't wait to see it and see what chapter pink can make out of it. Link to comment
PinkTheDinosaur Posted August 27, 2018 Author Share Posted August 27, 2018 On 8/25/2018 at 3:49 AM, Kami-bozu said: Sorry for the absence, but I do have a new picture in works! can't wait to see it! Link to comment
PinkTheDinosaur Posted October 29, 2018 Author Share Posted October 29, 2018 we got a new picter! and im hopeing to get it done soon! here is the link if you want to see it now or wait untill i post the new chapter! https://www.deviantart.com/kittythenerd/art/Andy-s-Trick-or-Treat-Change-769525248 Link to comment
Eagle0769 Posted October 31, 2018 Share Posted October 31, 2018 I just read your story again from start to do finish. This is one of my favorite stories. With the pictures it makes your story come alive. We never read a story with pictures. Thanks for posting your story. If you ever get more pictures I will be happy as a baby to read the chapter(s). Link to comment
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