Cya Posted December 7, 2016 Share Posted December 7, 2016 Commenti and FAV on DeviantArt Link to comment
Wetpamper Posted December 7, 2016 Share Posted December 7, 2016 I like the story, one of the ladies likes being helped the other not sure about it is a nice unique spin. Link to comment
paragondragon Posted December 8, 2016 Share Posted December 8, 2016 This is a rather good start. :-) I certainly encourage you to continue as soon as you can. :-D Link to comment
SGTbaby Posted December 8, 2016 Share Posted December 8, 2016 I like this story very much! Yeah little sand amazons. I also like how there are both men and women mentioned in this story. Looking forward to more! Link to comment
CDfm Posted December 10, 2016 Share Posted December 10, 2016 This was a very good start. I will say that getting carried so far away from the ship might have been a bit Link to comment
Cya Posted December 13, 2016 Author Share Posted December 13, 2016 Part 2: The Part You've Been Waiting For Link to comment
SGTbaby Posted December 13, 2016 Share Posted December 13, 2016 Thank you for the update and addressing everyone's comments. I do like the incidents and how Robin certainly experienced the worse of two girls. I think including some males into the dimension is a good thing and is something I am considering if my own. I look forward to seeing Robin's reaction and where the story goes from there. Link to comment
coletheriolu Posted December 15, 2016 Share Posted December 15, 2016 In your story Sanjay is spelled Sanji Also I really like this story keep it up Link to comment
Sky Hooves Posted December 17, 2016 Share Posted December 17, 2016 I think there went something wrong with the upload. Link to comment
Cya Posted December 17, 2016 Author Share Posted December 17, 2016 2 minutes ago, Sky Hooves said: I think there went something wrong with the upload. I fixed it. I write all of my stories on a cell phone and this new Link to comment
Sky Hooves Posted December 17, 2016 Share Posted December 17, 2016 1 minute ago, Cya said: I fixed it. I write all of my stories on a cell phone and this new 1 Link to comment
Cya Posted December 17, 2016 Author Share Posted December 17, 2016 4 minutes ago, Sky Hooves said: You write your stories on a cellphone? That's actually pretty impressive. Thank you. So, have Link to comment
Sky Hooves Posted December 17, 2016 Share Posted December 17, 2016 1 minute ago, Cya said: Thank you. So, have Link to comment
SGTbaby Posted December 17, 2016 Share Posted December 17, 2016 Thank you for the kind words. I agree it is very impressive writing on a phone. That is awesome in its own right. Your story is well done and I look forward to the two "adults" possibly meeting some of the kids she watches. Lol. I like the way it is going and look forward to your next update. Link to comment
coletheriolu Posted December 17, 2016 Share Posted December 17, 2016 Really looking forward to your next chapter. Also you're welcome Link to comment
Cya Posted December 22, 2016 Author Share Posted December 22, 2016 Part 4: Dinner Time "How are we going to get out of here? Our clothes are ruined and we're in diapers! " Nami stated in an exasperated tone due to the current state of things. "I'm honestly not sure. I have my doubts that there are any clothes that would fit us on this island." Robin replied while thinking about the predicament they're in. "If there were any clothes that would fit us, they would most likely be worn by infants. I don't really want to have to walk around in public like this or in baby clothing..." "I agree." Nami looked down, feeling embarrassed. Felicity returned with the books. She hands Nami a coloring book and some crayons. Then she gave Robin the picture book. "Enjoy!" Robin sighed. "Well, it's better than nothing..." Robin stated as she began to look through it, seeing pictures of animals and such on the pages. "Are you sure that you don't have anything more intellectually stimulating?" Nami started coloring as Felicity looked down at Robin. "I have a few boring old history books that document the island's past, but they're family heirlooms. I doubt you would find them interesting." Robin's eyes lit up at that. "History books you say? I'd personally love to see them." Link to comment
babybb Posted December 23, 2016 Share Posted December 23, 2016 really enjoying this story. Link to comment
coletheriolu Posted December 23, 2016 Share Posted December 23, 2016 another error it says Link to comment
SGTbaby Posted December 25, 2016 Share Posted December 25, 2016 I am fine either way really. I like this chapter and how they keep getting or appear to get sucked in more and more. I look forward to seeing more Link to comment
Cya Posted December 26, 2016 Author Share Posted December 26, 2016 Part 5: Mutiny In The Nursery Link to comment
BabyKayla Posted December 27, 2016 Share Posted December 27, 2016 Really great story 1 Link to comment
CDfm Posted December 30, 2016 Share Posted December 30, 2016 Sorry, I managed to get myself pretty far behind in my reading. I did manage to get caught up this morning though. The story had progressed very nicely. At this point it would seem as though the only option available for the little ladies would be to comply and give in to being treated as Felicity's babies. At least until an opportunity presents itself to escape. That seems like a long shot at this point but its about all they have. I am really looking forward to reading more. Link to comment
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