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"Current Party Policy?" I though this was set in the States? I'm seriously confused.

I really liked "Bits of Molly" even if I had know idea what the hell was going on.

Kick her ass Amanda!!! Put her in a hold while I go to work on her kidney's!!

I 've been reading Bits of Molly, up to Ch.15, and it's like damn the numbness and bursts of irrational anger..... That me **** pg. 38 Ah I think we have a Tyler Durden Situation **** I'm really liking this story wish there was a regular page where I could comment

Have you considered using FATE? It's designed to be simple, easy to run, and genre agnostic. I think I have a pdf of the book if you want to look it over. I would be totally down for this. As for the game itself, If you want to make the kinks part of the mechanics I would suggest doing something like persona where each characters manifests psychic projections based on their kink. Or it could your all part of the local fet club and urban fantasy weirdness starts. Or some combination of the above. Oh my god we totally have to do this! As for me personally. My Little side is basically a way of coming to terms with my disability. So my Little self tends be the same age as me (college) but occasionally reverts to high schooler like behaviors when stressed. I'm also a DL who wishes there were more diapers cute fem but adult designs. So basically I want someone who will take care of me but still respect the fact that I'm a complete person and treat me as an equal. See my story "Why I Wear Diapers After Work" for the perfect example.

Yeah my fucking head it hurts I want booze. I also want to punch something but I'm to exhausted I feel wiped.

I wish I could do something to help. Go in with a series of pentacles strung from my jacket as warding, 12 gauge loaded with rock salt, get every one out. Then salt the place and soak it in aviation gas. Light that bitch up.

So some kind of mass suggestion like an illusion spell or a compulsion that makes people not see things? Like if a social worker shows up they get confused about why they were there? What happens if one "makes the will save" for lack of a better term?

You tell those weird ass queerphobic ghosts Bridget.

My god this M knight Shamalan levels of plot twist but actually original and intersting I can feel the tension in my muscles and as a low pressure in my head. I can feel my self getting angry and frustrated like I want to scream and punch something. If you wanted to get us into the characters headspace you succeeded

No wonder the gaslighting is so spot on. It was honestly so god damn unsettling. Even knowing what was going could I resist that, your brain naturally tries to fill in the gaps maybe if I tried to focus by mind on something else a mantra to keep things focused? My name is Ashley ####, I was born on 03/29/1995 in #######, I have a sister named ######, I'm attending uni at ######, we went to check out the old asylum when things went full on Shining on us, keep calm they're trying to gaslight you, focus on these truths, focus on your breathing and count to 20, now focus your mind fight back, exorcise and abjure. This why you tear off a piece of the sheets wrap it around your fist then punch out the window

I mean at least according to the lore, Ghosts are either souls or psychic echoes of people who died in someway that left unfinished business, usually it's also messy and traumatic. The way to disperses a haunting is to either resolve that buisness or break a physical symbolic tie. I suppose you could also try for an exorcism. So the "ghosts" for lack of a better term are aware and not just acting out a final script as is typical for a haunting? This is a rather disturbing possibility.

I'm always amazed at how well Stacy handles this. Then again she's much more emotionally stable than I am. I actually that makes me think.... This place must be a special kind of hell for Littles and Inbetweeners with disabilities. It's probablly not that much better for amazons either.

This point where I'd be like Oh fuck I'm being brought before one member of the Court of the Seelie or Unseelie. Either way I'm so screwed.

Reila really should have looked up this number, 112 pan European emergency services. Also Germany has a far more robust social services than the US so how have these people not caught their attention? I mean homeschooling isn't even an option in Germany so you would think the teachers would have noticed something up with Nicky's situation? https://www.loc.gov/law/help/child-rights/germany.php

Yeah I'm bracing for my anxiety disorder to go ape shit. Also It's not going to take long for Reila to be reported missing and it's not like their moving her out of town so I wonder how much difficulty the cops will have finding her. Does rural Germany have an equivalent to the "good old boy" system? I mean in Germany the police seem to be primarly under state control instead of municipal so one would think that would make them less vulnerable to anything like that.

Yep I don't know if I'd die of embarrassment or make a different kind of mess in that situation, maybe both?

p.s. when Bridget was initially trapped would a glass breaker have worked on that door? Or a crowbar on the outer doors? I mean if I'm going to be do'n a little B&E I'm going to come prepared.

Although much to my shame I will admit the Audrey and Staycee sex scenes had an effect. Then again if I was in that situation anything that would take my mind off it would be welcome and if I could loose myself for a half hour with this person I've come to care about...

Some how I don't think my punch it in the face approach is going to work here. I'm a skeptic but I'm also genre savvy. For a lack of better idea I'd probably go full Sam and Dean and start a recitation of the roman rite and a couple other hermetic and Shinto exorcisms I would have downloaded onto my phone as a just in case measure. Salt also at the ready. I'd also probably free style with my own universalist abjuration right. [Holds up pentacle] "By my will I do bind Thee By the magnanimous power of the Magi and the Righteous dead I do bind and abjure Thee spirit By the Celestial Powers of the Light, Yeah Devas and Angels By the mastery of Shadow, of my darkest self, Lucifer Lord of Morning who in self mastery, powers I hold I do bind and abjure Thee In the name of the Allhighest The first Cause The First Action They who were called many names Ra, YAWEH, Krishna, Shiva, Great Spirit, Odin, Amaterasu I do compel thee be bound and dispelled You have no power here"

Honestly it's closer to love hate. But you're still great writers. I loved the characterization and elaborate world building. It felt like I really got to know these three. But there were a couple moments that completely broke suspension of disbelief. Then there's the fact that yeah this triggered the shit out of my anxiety disorder I'm not sure I'll ever be 100% comfortable with a story if it has an explicit rape scene. But again very well written. Honestly this is a common reaction to forced regression stories for me. I can appreciate the craft and skill of the writer(s) but there will always be a squick factor that makes it impossible for me to allow myself to relax and completely enjoy the ride. My guilt complex simply will not let me. I think that's why so far I liked your storing "Amazing" the best. Nothing like a moment of hot naughty kink between two people who are hella gay for each other.

Like Reila's an asshole but honestly she needs anger management courses and cognitive/analytic therapy not whatever torture session is in store that's only going to further destabilize her. Which is what that judge should have done if they had had any sense

Gods that was.. fuck... that was... one of the hardest things I've ever read. I suspect that rape scene could be a potential topic for the next several months of therapy. But I'm glad I got to know Audrey and Staycee. I'm glad I got to see them get through this together. Whatever their past sins they payed in full. @Sophie ♥

pg. 391 I'm glad these two at least have each other, honestly having someone to lean on would probably be one the few things that might keep me from going full Jack Nicholson in "The Shining" pg. 413 This is exactly like a traumatic brain injury or lesioning. I think this pretty much confirms the optogenetics hypothesis pg. 417 I think I know what happened with happened with Audrey. I'm guessing she had a friend someone with a terminal illness? ******** pg. 430 "But when I put you under to help you talk, you reconnected with your guilt. Usually that would unravel the conditioning, but your time as a Zero made that impossible, so a dam burst in your head and you started to drown. Each time you got your head above the water level, it rose higher, and so you took longer to make it back to the surface again. I wasn't even sure I'd be able to rescue you by this point, but you responded to my voice." So some kind of cascading seizure caused by the suppressed circuits reactivating and firing randomly? The fainting in response to stress certainly seems indicative of that. pg. 431 then they took the case to the court and tried me for crimes against the state." Is that even a thing in the US legal code? This sounds like some post 9/11 Black Ops bullshit. Some kind of secrete rouge court? Some kind of military tribunal set up illegally by who ever in the DOD and CIA that are running this nightmare factory": I wouldn't be surprised if the Koch brothers were in on this. Their certainly evil enough. Article 3 (Section 2) United States Constitution "The Trial of all Crimes, except in Cases of Impeachment, shall be by Jury; and such Trial shall be held in the State where the said Crimes shall have been committed; but when not committed within any State, the Trial shall be at such Place or Places as the Congress may by Law have directed." Section 3 "Treason against the United States, shall consist only in levying War against them, or in adhering to their Enemies, giving them Aid and Comfort. No Person shall be convicted of Treason unless on the Testimony of two Witnesses to the same overt Act, or on Confession in open Court. The Congress shall have Power to declare the Punishment of Treason, but no Attainder of Treason shall work Corruption of Blood, or Forfeiture except during the Life of the Person attainted." There is no way the charges against Velvet would hold up under scrutiny, this was a kidnap job. Deep Black Ops, operating unsanctioned inside US borders. If they go to the press they can't touch them without risking massive suspicion and blow back. ****** pg. 434 Oh.... I .... I can't even To have some one ask that of you to be with them when..... "She didn't deserve to be punished, she deserved a medal" I'm not sure about the ethics of Audrey's actions on that day but I can understand why they did what they did. I wouldn't call it murder, just a traumatized unstable teenager trying to help their friend without fully realizing the ramification of their actions. They needed help and compassion not torture and brainwashing. **** pg. 502 Sign the waver and go the press, indemnity is for civil not criminal charges. @Sophie ♥