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  1. Little Lamb started following Tequila Induced Chaos , Arbitrio Sanguinis - Chapter 2 (04/25/24) , I'm not a caregiver? and 2 others
  2. Little Lamb
    Yey!!! Finally a Lucy story!!! Nice start, looking foward for developments on her vampiric love life
  3. Little Lamb
    I'll just say my monday got a lot more interesting and much much more blushy all of a sudden... Eager for whats to come, specially if it entail readers as well...
  4. Little Lamb
    Loving this so very much, wanna know so much more bout the characters and world!!! Your craftsmanship really shows also, cramming this much worldbuilding and character development in just 2 chapters is really masterful. Cant wait for more
  5. Little Lamb
    You have a nice scenario set up here, with plenty of potential and some very hot scenes indeed. But at the same time its written in such a male gazey way that it makes really hard for me to enjoy it most times. Maybe consider taking the f/f tag? I know there's clear interaction between Lara and Stacey in a kinda kinky manner, but as a lesbian, it's hard not to see the tag in your story till now and not cringe whenever they are interacting with one another. Be it privatelly or with ted. Not to say you're writing them wrong or badly, not at all. It's just that I associate the f/f tag with relationships between women that have a much more intimate nature. Sorry for the long ramble around the tag issue. Felt it had to be said. That out of the way, you write very well albeit in a mostly clinical/matter-of-fact manner. It's pretty logical and comunicates without doubt every detail meant. But feels a little dry of emotion in some scenes, makes me wonder how much of the romance angle you pretend on playing.
  6. Little Lamb
    Ha! I knew it!!! Well played friend. Very well played! My suspicions were mostly on Jessica. I mean, kinda obvious on that dramatically ironic way... but still, for a few seconds I doubted myself and thought maybe Beth's sister was an unknown 3rd party, maybe a complicated ex from Emma's... Still, nice foreshadowing and "twist?" Anyway, eager to see more of Jess and Alex. Also loved that you didnt overplay breastfeeding as this magical mystical divine experience like what we're used to see being the norm. Im sure its awesome, still dream of it on the regular... (have you seen my mommy???) But I must say its tiring to always read about it like its this religious/spiritual experience that rivals nirvana. All in all a very nice chapter. These snippets of whats in Emma's head are damn tantalizing... I really wanna know whats haunting her, cus till now she's been so much of an awesome mommy... Makes me wonder if she's compensating for something in her past, or if she's just as much an insecure scaredy cat as us not so big kids, and should talk it over with a grown up to make it all better...
  7. Little Lamb
    Cant say much that havent already been said. Except that Im loving every bit of the story till now. Wanna know even more about Emma as the chapters go by. And it's such a joy and delight to see Roxie's friendship blossoming too. Wonder where that will lead and if Beth's sister is who Im thinking or another 3rd party...
  8. Little Lamb
    It's a very interesting start, Crystal surely seems a bit too forceful on Danny. Maybe even going beyond some limits she shouldn't. Like giving him ultimatums not even hours after a rather sudden break-up... And given her thoughts and reactions, she knows she's pressing on a very vulnerable guy at the moment. Curious to see how their dynamic will develop.
  9. Little Lamb
    I keep my criticisms from before, although with less intensity, cus it happens just once or twice. Cant stop feeling that this would be a superb story if wrote in a more "traditional" manner. As the continuity problems and the way People talk to one another makes the text more akin to a really long drunken dream than to something I could see happening IRL. Which is a shame, IMO. I say this because the plot till now was firmly planted on the 'these are common People learning about theselves and kink' corner. But the text makes it seem so much like a tequila induced dream it makes me wonder if it was accidental or on purpose... Either way the story was thought out to be, it has the problematic any and all AI assisted/made art gets till now. The utter lack of intentionality at all levels of detail beyond the prompt. I still really like the ideas and characters as they are now. But I cant just ignore these technical 'issues?' With the text, as they really make the whole piece feel more than underdevelopped.
  10. Little Lamb
    The premise of this one is very thoughtful, cute and heartfelt even. But the lack of revision shows very hard... Im not against AI assisted works, the tool sure has problems, too many for a forum post... But its uses can be very interesting, even change how we think some aspects of art production. That said, the text is so inconsistent with itself, with blatant contradictions every other chapter, sudden changes in voice that just distract and confuse for no clear reason, and so many weird wording choices throughout it all that it really hampered my apreciation of the story... Not to say that it's a bad story, the plot, premise, and ramifications from these few scenes are fascinating. The characterization of the couple was well made, and really thought out, even though their dialogues lack in it a lot, their actions through the Plot are superb. The way they are amateurs at kink is very well played, his insecurities, even after all the reassurances that things are okay, were so believable and grounded, and the conflict within the girfriend is an exploration Id love to see more often and look foward for further developments into it. The story really has lots of potential. I just cant shake off the feeling the text should've been through a few more re-reads and revisions
  11. Little Lamb
    Cute chapter all around, kinda bummed the exposition of Emma's Backstory was sidelined. But her insecurities and vulnerability were a very nice touch. Although I cant help but feel she's hiding some details... We'll see
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  14. Little Lamb
    Oookaaay... Im starting to get some complicated vibes from Emma, maybe that's the point, maybe not, we'll see. I'll point again that some things in the text rubs me off the wrong way, specially some dialogues. But as English isn't my first language and there are so many cultural barriers in place, I cant say if the characters sometimes really are talking very weird, or if Im the one out of the loop cus I live in another continent. (They talking weird isnt an actual criticism, like, Dune, LotR, GoT, anything Shakespeare is all weird talking... just a sensibility that felt just pointing out.) Anyway, nice chapter all around. Some of the exposition bugs me , some weirdness there too, but this I know is cus Im a degenerate who already considers these details as given... (a decade or two of internet does that to a brain) Also also... The contract was a nice, but creepy, very meta touch. The symbolism is great, and the execution very well done. I don't know yet if thats foreshadowing even more of my suspicions or not... Eager for more, thanks for the updates and regular posting schedule
  15. Little Lamb
    Glad I got to read this last chapter just as it came out. ^^ I'll surelly be keeping up with the story. Although some details don't add up for me on the long run. Cultural bias maybe? I must say the narrative really hooked me, it's earnest, optimist, cute, and really fun. Also, the way you handle voice in the text is awesome. It's really obvious who's PoV we're reading without being tedious or too overt.
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  17. Little Lamb
    Heyo, just read this one in the last... 30h or so... (I may have a binging problem...) But hey, not my fault you write so damn well. Loved most of the story, really really heartfelt and so much fun. The lovey dovey and smutty bits were top notch, your craft really shines on the fun delightful moments in this one. Made me all warm and Fuzzy and yearning for someone of my own. (Lucy feelings...) The back and Forth of the PoV was really nice too. As a switch, that made the story touch many of my kinky itches all around. Really really really liked this aspect. That said, some of my less kind criticism below: Lucifer felt a little like a devil ex machina at the epilogue, I was already expecting her, but the lack of more setup before the payoff felt a little underwhelming. Same for most impactful scenes when Vic or Nia are badasses. I felt like their reactions came a little out of nowhere. I was also expecting something more badass/impositive from Beatrice, given her character in Parum Mortis, she came out a little toothless in this one. But I think thats more of a me thing plus the whole prequel/sequel problem from a readers perspective. (And I may or may not have a crush on the superduper awesome badass witch nanny maid redhead dommy lady...) The excess of Nia's chapters at the hellish sequence felt a little off too, maybe cus I was expecting the back and forth structure, maybe cus I really loved Vic's inner monologue compared to Nia's. Dunno, the feeling of unrest and complete discomfort and dread I assumed you were aiming at for this sequence also added much to my, 'something's wrong' feeling. I didnt like it at all... which makes it so great, felt like hell, do not recomend. 10/10. Overall I've had much fun and was so invested in the characters and plot I didn't even feel time passing by. Many many thanks for the awesome story.
  18. Little Lamb
    Loved the story as a whole. So many Feelings... Now I'll have to binge more of your works, just so I can get the Campos, of course...
  19. Little Lamb
    Made me want so much more... I'll miss these characters till the next Story. And am already planning on binging your other works. Much thanks for such a great Story. It really is touching and moving and fun. Made me feel all the feelings and stuff.
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