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Earlier in the story, a few occurrences of have went should be have gone could have went should be could have gone for standard English. So I just read and this is definitely headed back to where we began. This time we will have a better understanding.

It has to be extra hard to have no depth perception. How do you keep from hurting yourself accidentally? Maybe you could Skype with a few people just to wet your feet as they say.

This was super fun to read. A couple of nods to @RambleLamb added to the enjoyment as well. Loved it and the length.

It's looking like Bess although fighting will eventually have to give up, zone out and become Adele's baby. Good Chapter.

There are rules of conduct. Essentially they are not allowed to break the law altho they may find a way around it.

I have heard that you get more daily votes with the Baby Banker enhancement. True or False?

This is similar to diamond...... not too many words are there with a silent a? Die Purrr works for me

My thought on this one is that this procedure is done when someone is trying to find out if someone is cheating on them although the rich may do it in advance of dating I suppose to "vet" someone. Probably I'm not the best one to reply to No. 2 as I knew it was a story and that it was part of the *plot* so to say. But you do pose an interesting ?

All the guns were removed from our house and given to a relative who was careful and knew how to use them. Everyone here is honestly too short-tempered when the going gets rough. I also think many of today's youth are just too inexperienced at gun-handling and too impulsive with the internet's lightning speed to have learned proper control unless they take a class or have someone teach them. Not to say that the old-timer's are/were not in need of that as well.

@Lionsheart Another great chapter, but you forgot to update the Title line with new chapter and date today! Thanks so much for posting again.

Megan is Amanda's baby sister; she is the nice sister.

I recall that show being in the stories. Looking forward to the next chapter. I don't know how you folks who work and have serious jobs ever get the time to write. Very impressive.

Since the colleges seem to be a way station for *re-education,* I am sure the online schools are up for all the endowments they too can acquire.

It's a good chapter, but the impending doom for them is just sooooo real that it almost hurts. If a Little doesn't choose to go to college at all what are the options?

Cool that you made the font larger. It was a bit small but I have a large screen so no worries. Those with phones, yeah..... no doubt too small. Good Chapter addition. The recruits are getting into dangerous territory now especially with Valorian being on the list. I'm ready for your next chapter. Thanks!

That's exactly what I was thinking! Catch you on points this weekend.

I wonder which Friday Adele meant. Friday a year from now?

I feel like we were just clued in to a secret. I think Danielle is a beautiful name.

Maybe I missed it with all the comments, but way back you said when the story finished you would say How You Came Up With the Title and why you chose the name Dani.... at least that's what I think I remember reading earier.

You won't, but then that's why I offered.

About Vanessa: Her hacking didn't really bother me (I know its fiction) until the last time she did it when Dani went to meet Julian at the spaghetti restaurant. It was at that point, I knew it was more than protecting herself, that it was a pattern. If she had not done it then, she would not have been caught. Also when you worded your reply to the sleepover, I knew it wasn't going to happen..... you said something like I want. That was when I actually thought you would take the alternate route.

It was one heck of a Wild Ride.

I can do both. I actually have a musical composition degree. That's not the title of it but the gist. Let me know .... I'll help you. What the heck is a serial monogamist? Going to look that up. Ahhh.... my cousin is one of those. That is, She used to be my cousin before she became a serial monogamist.

Ding Dong DANG! I honestly thought you were going for blood at the end. I'm glad you didn't as everyone mostly would have been disappointed. I however could have taken it, er, Maybe.

After having everyone bouncing back and forth like a ping pong ball, I think you've made your trajectory.