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  1. spark
    Remember, these are diaper stories, written by people who have a predilection to wear diapers. A conflict with these characters is that they are pretending to be something that they aren't. His mom senses that Robbie is hiding something, I can sense there is conflict in Robbie. Based on how his mom treats him, I don't think the long-term effects would be as devastating as what happened in All My Mother's Rules. In wasn't just the baby treatment that wounded Sarah, it was the harshness and callousness that her mom treated her with. In this story, I think the mom was very close to losing her son to delinquent behavior, and Robbie lost his mother in a similar way. Mom has been angry at Robbie for a couple of years, and he hasn't felt loved and supported by his mom since his behavior was so bad.
  2. spark
    I'm very close to making my next update. I'm working on his birthday chapter, which is two weeks into the school year. It's a detailed chapter and a lot happens, so the editing process is taking longer than usual. After that, I have two more chapters. The next one will be two weeks after Eddie's birthday, and that's where Sarah will explain to Eddie why she did this. The last chapter is set in 2025, and I'll give an update on all of the major characters in the present day. Eddie has finished college, and Tara is out of high school. After that, I'll release George's story, hopefully making him a more sympathetic character.
  3. spark
    Remember, being submissive doesn't mean failure in life. Obviously, an experience like this would be devastating in real life, even though it's a fantasy of mine. However, based on what I've read on this story, Robbie was heading towards jail. He thinks he's tougher than he really is, and jail would be far worse than this.
  4. spark
    We don't know what Robbie did to warrant this punishment. but it appears that he was heading down a dangerous path. Chances are, Robbie was hurting before this happened, and his acceptance is almost a relief for him. It's the same type of case with my story about Eddie. They are slightly different characters, because Eddie is 15 (now 16) going on 5, and Robbie was twelve, going on 17.
  5. spark
    Part of him is enjoying having his mommy back This is the type of story that I could write, which is the forced diapers, but combined with nurturing and protection that a mother would give a younger child. Surprisingly, I think this story is fairly realistic, and may have brought Robbie off his rebellious 12 going 18 attitude.
  6. spark
    Just no ketchup. That's worthy of excommunication.
  7. spark
    @Ishigreensa your stories always have this dark tone. Aunt Jenny is nuts
  8. spark
    When I finish the editing, I have the computer read it to me. That I can catch the clunky passages. It gets rid of the first draft syndrome. You hopefully will avoid the situation where you are constantly introducing the speaker the same way. For me, as soon as I see two speakers in the same paragraph, I don't bother to read on. I know that the writing will be clunky, and the character development won't be strong. However, I think dialogue is the best way to convey character traits in a story. There is a happy medium when introducing a speaker. I think some writers overuse pronouns. If you go more than 2, or 3 sentences with just pronouns, it gets confusing to know who the 'he' is. However, you don't want to keep using the name of the character, because that becomes stilted. The same thing is true when you don't introduce the speaker to a line. If it a long set of dialogue, it works, but the reader should know who is saying the line. When I just read it through, I miss a lot of that. I know what I wanted to say, so sometimes my eyes play tricks on me.
  9. spark
    I think a comment likely comes from a friend who would be expressing concern.
  10. spark
    He's close to coming back. I've got it drafted, and in the editing stage.
  11. spark
    It's clear she is happy that she has her baby back. At the same token, her baby was on the verge of becoming a ward of the court. If so, I don't think there was much to ruin.
  12. spark
    I realized that a few years ago. I was staying at my cousin's house. i used Pull-ups because I was travelling, and for discretion. I had a wardrobe malfunction, and pee leaked down my leg. Fortunately, I discreetly excused myself and changed before anybody noticed, but it was a lesson learned. If you can't trust a product, it isn't the right product.
  13. spark
    I usually get a feeling whether the idea is working or it's not fairly not. I usually get an idea for a story (usually while lying in bed) and eventually I decide to get it out of my head and on paper. Sometimes the words just pop out of my fingers, other times I get stuck and it just doesn't work. I've tried to make "Eddie's Potty Training Journal" several times, and the original bubble isn't identical to what I'm writing. Not to mention how different the final draft is to what I draft originally.
  14. spark
    The big factor is that Emma is the cool friend. In the world of MS girls, the cool friend always trumps the weird friend, even if you have far more in common with the weird friend How this usually works out is: the cool friend dumps the protagonist, and she finds the weird friend to help survive the jungles of middle school.
  15. spark
    Starting is the hardest part for me. Once I start, I usually can write freely. Especially if I've a lot of the ideas already in my head Work makes writing very hard. I generally need to be fresh to draft anything, and I'm in a low cycle during the afternoon. I usually bounce back at 8, or 9, but I don't want to sidetracked with a long project that late at night.
  16. spark
    they are both products of they're age, and kids that age are awful. Not to be misogynistic, but I've taught middle school- boys that age are real jerks, but they are 10 times nicer than the girls
  17. spark
    Based on how her parents have been written, I don't think her mom would have scolded Maddy for opening the door to Hannah for a potty emergency, but Maddy doesn't have the awareness to understand the difference. The real a-hole in this is Emma. She knew that Maddy was home alone, and knew that Maddy wasn't supposed to let anybody in the house. Rather than keeping that to herself, she sends Hannah over to Maddy's house, even though she knows that Hannah won't stop with "Sorry, you can't come in." This is what I hope Maddy does in about 4 years time when she is in high school and realizes that Emma is responsible for so much drama:
  18. spark
    That wasn't really all that fair for mom to do that. If Maddy was older, and had more experience with these things, she would know enough that there is a difference between bringing a friend over to play, and helping a friend out by letting her use the bathroom. There is a difference with generations between Maddy, and how it was handled with my generation. I was ten years old, and my mom left me alone in our house when I was stayed home from school because I was sick. Back then, that was just what we did, and I don't think she even asked a neighbor to check on me. In fact, I know she didn't, because there was an earthquake, and nobody came to check on me until my mom got home.
  19. spark
    It was strange. I sat down, and my fingers started tapping keys. I had to stop myself last night because I was about 1/2 through and I ended up writing a lot more this afternoon. I was so enthused that I decided to go to a lost story- but i think I've lost the plot with that one😀 Writing is fun, but it can be mentally exhausting.
  20. spark
    I think Maddy's secret is about to get exposed. The question is: will her true secret be exposed to her parents Maybe it's just me, but Emma seems like a real snot. with friends like her, who needs enemies? Maddy isn't quite old enough, or has enough social awareness, to realize that if Emma is talking like that about Hanna, who knows what she's saying about you.
  21. spark
    I learned something about my writing process this weekend. I updated my story last week, which was everything I've drafted so far in my story. The only thing I had was that it is his birthday, and I had an idea what the party could be like. I sensed that I needed to do something on paper this weekend to keep the story alive in my head. If I go more than a few weeks without at least drafting anything, I'm going to lose Eddie's. This happens all the time, and I have a ton of words sitting in limbo because I've lost the voice. I'm also a notorious 😁 . Why do something today that you can put off until tomorrow has been my unofficial motto since Kindergarten. This whole week, I've been telling myself that I need to draft at least something before the end of the weekend. I'm not going to be home tomorrow, so it needed to be today. The problem was: I'm tired when I get home from work, and it takes a lot of mental energy to create a story. For me, spreadsheeting is a mindless activity that I use to relax. I create all kinds of spreadsheets, and most of it is just mindless number crunching. So, why do something today that I can put off until tomorrow? I finally got to the point where I just needed to sit down and write something. Before I started, I thought "This won't a long update." Right away, as soon as I sat at the keyboard, things started coming to me. In the end, for something that I thought would be a short update, it ended up at 4.3k. It might be longer once I go through the editing process. Sometimes, the best idea to break through a block is to sit with the story and see what comes to you.
  22. spark
    There is a direct correlation between body mass and urine production. Most Pull-ups are no match for full void from a typically-sized male,so Shaq with need the extra thick variety. Shaq would shill anything that gives him money, so I wouldn't put it past him
  23. spark
    Maybe I misread a chapter, but I don't think we know enough about what Robbie did to say it's based on gossip. They might have the information to know. Even if it's gossip, you can see Robbie having a defiant attitude. There is a disorder, which we call conduct disorder. It's also called oppositional defiant disorder. In laymen's terms, the kid is being an ass because he is an ass. How that is usually treated in teenagers is: they go to jail. They keep pushing the envelope, and eventually end up in jail. That doesn't excuse his mother sharing it on social media though.
  24. spark
    This is a lot like the stories that I like to write. It's a different take on the older child being put in diapers by his parents. Robbie is very different character than Eddie in the story that I'm writing. Robbie seems to be a twelve-year-old going on twenty, and needed to put back into place. Because Robbie doesn't know what he did wrong, we don't know either. The question is: was it just childish mischief, or something more concerning? When I taught middle school, I saw some real brats that constantly did things, and then argued when they got in touble. In some cases, their parents didn't back us. The last I heard about one of those case, he was arrested for sex trafficking. It sounds like Claire's has learned that her son is much easier to deal with when he is kept in diapers, versus pretending to be thug
  25. spark
    I teach at a high school and I like to say that I can with 100% certainty, guarantee that at least one person at my school wears diapers. I don't worry to much, as long as I don't leak.
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