Hades Posted August 1, 2015 Author Share Posted August 1, 2015 Erica/ Laura Blackburn Link to comment
Shotgun Diplomat Posted August 2, 2015 Share Posted August 2, 2015 This was really good, thank you. I am glad to see the both Zeke and Erica are getting closer to their final catharsis which will allow them to move on and vacate with vessels. My one question is that when they do what will happen to the relationship between the actual occupants of the bodies? Will it continue with the babying? Link to comment
007specialk Posted August 3, 2015 Share Posted August 3, 2015 Thanks for a great chapter I do enjoy this story. Link to comment
Hades Posted August 3, 2015 Author Share Posted August 3, 2015 Well, I know I said it before, but the end really is near. The next chapter will probably be the last. The story has drug on a bit longer than I had intended thanks to the inclusion of Dante. Either way, I'm very excited to wrap this story up. Could anyone tell me how I can put that the story is updated? Everyone else seems to do it but I don't know how. Anyway, I hope you enjoy this chapter and are as excited as I am to see the conclusion. James/ Edward Blackburn Link to comment
fading.kitten Posted August 4, 2015 Share Posted August 4, 2015 Yeah. Sad to see the story come to an end; however, you've really done a great job at keeping the characters fresh and the pacing steady. Kudos to you. This has to be one of my favorite stories all the way through. Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted August 4, 2015 Share Posted August 4, 2015 Really enjoying this story. I'm sad to see it end, but in a way glad, too- since it actually did get finished! ^.^ Link to comment
Hades Posted August 23, 2015 Author Share Posted August 23, 2015 (edited) Erica/Laura Blackburn 8 Months Later "There we are sweetie. All nice and ready for bed." Erica cooed as she taped up Zeke's nighttime diaper. His week in diapers was a thing of the past, but he still needed them for bed, something Erica was happy for. The boy looked adorable in his diapers, though he hated to hear it. She tucked him into bed for what would be the last time. Tomorrow was the day they had to move on. It had taken a lot of convincing to get Mirah to let them stay until their time was up, but she had finally relented. The last eight months were a dream, as Erica enjoyed every last second with her family. Dante had vanished without a trace, and Mirah and her organization were frantic trying to find him again. While his loss seemed to trouble Zeke, he had been relieved at least to know that his family was safe. Edited August 23, 2015 by vampire4 Link to comment
hifox5 Posted August 23, 2015 Share Posted August 23, 2015 Fantastic ending, great story Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted August 23, 2015 Share Posted August 23, 2015 I really enjoyed reading this, loved the twists and turns. It didn't feel dragged out at all. Link to comment
Pierry Louys Posted August 23, 2015 Share Posted August 23, 2015 Wow realy great ending!!! Link to comment
Crimson_Wolf Posted August 23, 2015 Share Posted August 23, 2015 This was truly a great story and the ending was just as great. Link to comment
Shotgun Diplomat Posted August 23, 2015 Share Posted August 23, 2015 Thank-you so much for this wonderful story. It was a true pleasure to read and enjoy your work. Thanks. Link to comment
Hades Posted August 23, 2015 Author Share Posted August 23, 2015 I really enjoyed reading this, loved the twists and turns. It didn't feel dragged out at all. Link to comment
Cute_Kitten Posted August 24, 2015 Share Posted August 24, 2015 Ah yes, the child with the burn- I'd forgotten about that part when I was commenting (haha, that's what happens when I multi-task XD). Link to comment
Elfy Posted November 11, 2016 Share Posted November 11, 2016 Moved to the completed section and bumped for new readers Link to comment
Hades Posted November 11, 2016 Author Share Posted November 11, 2016 I am aware that the formatting got screwed up. for now, please read those affected parts as best your able. promise to do some editing soon. Link to comment
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