diaper dimension Jenny's Adoption

[littleTomás]

26 minutes ago, Cya said:

 A lot of people are jumping to conclusions here. I mean, I've written stories where the medical professionals have literally performed experiments on Littles (Correct me if I'm wrong, but I'm pretty sure that I was the first to write about an Amazon being surgically implanted with a Little). So, in comparison, the nurses in this story are pretty much average/doing their jobs. No one has done anything too dark or "Mengelesque" in this story...

The Dark Dweller, you write whatever you want. Let your imaginary run wild and most of all, have fun with it!

Agreed, just tag the story with “dark” to give your audience a heads up and then write to your heart’s content.

[WBDaddy]

5 hours ago, Cya said:

 A lot of people are jumping to conclusions here. I mean, I've written stories where the medical professionals have literally performed experiments on Littles (Correct me if I'm wrong, but I'm pretty sure that I was the first to write about an Amazon being surgically implanted with a Little). So, in comparison, the nurses in this story are pretty much average/doing their jobs. No one has done anything too dark or "Mengelesque" in this story...

The Dark Dweller, you write whatever you want. Let your imaginary run wild and most of all, have fun with it!

The "Mengele" comment was intentionally bombastic, but clearly it was received in a way that wildly deviated from what I was intending to convey, which was that they were behaving like typically sadistic Amazons do in so many of these stories (including my own contribution to the canon).  My apologies.

And by no means am I trying to tell the writer how to write their story.  Just trying to offer some constructive feedback.  If it's not welcome, by all means, I'll withdraw. 

[The dark dweller]

I am grateful for all the feedback you guys are giving me, as I was saying I am trying to improve my writing. This has just been a mild misunderstanding. Anyway I should be updating a big chapter later or tomorrow, so let me know if you enjoyed. Thanks again to everyone ;) 

[The dark dweller]

Ok guys here we go CHAPTER  3 AND 4... Getting a little darker, I hope it's alright   As always let me know what you think. Every criticism is welcome

 

 

Chapter 3-4

 

Jenny was laying eyes closed on the beautiful double bed of her attic apartment, her duvet covered her entire body making her feel warm and cozy. The sheet smelled clean and the aroma of coffee filled the air. She felt the strong hand of Brad -her current boyfriend- stroking her shoulders… “Baby wake up” he was saying... She relaxed on the mattress. So it had all been just a horrible dream. She should have imagined that. There were no such things as Giants who wanted to keep her in diapers. The whole idea was crazy…wasn’t it?

 

Something was off, she suddenly felt an itch spreading in her bottom area, she tried to reach it with her hands but she didn’t manage :  the duvet began smothering her and restricting her movements. The sweet scent of coffee was replaced by the acrid smell of shit. She tried to scream but no sound came from her mouth. It was horrible, she just wanted to get up…

 

Her eyes shot open. She was twitching face down on the crib mattress, her whole body still enclosed into the sleepsack, the horrible pacifier still inflated inside her mouth. Nurse Lilith towered above her. She was stroking her trying to wake her up.

 

“Hello sweetie! Did you have a nice nap?”

 

“Mhhhhphhhhhh….” Jenny emitted a  muffled cry of despair, the beautiful illusion was shattering around her, making her slip back into her waking nightmare.

 

“Yeah I know you enjoy napping. But we can’t let you sleep through all the morning, you’ll have problems sleeping when is time to go nite nite” She said turning the swaddled little on her back, and undoing the zip, freeing Jenny from her soft prison.

 

Jenny’s bottom was starting to itch really bad. She could feel the cold mushy substance smeared on her butt, squelching around whenever she moved. The stench was still unbearable. Looking at the nurse, she started pointing at her diaper, hoping that the young woman would understand. She hated herself for that, but there was no way she was getting out of that thing on her own.

 

“Mhhp, Mhpph…”

 

“What’s that baby? You want your diaper changed?”

 

“Mhhp Mhhmp” nodded Jenny.

 

“Well let’s see” replied nurse Lilith sticking two fingers on the front of her diaper.

The little girl whimpered, but she decided not to put any fight this time. She was willing to do anything to get out of that filthy mess.

 

“Well it seems you have wet a lot during your nap, yeah I think you’ve earned a change” smiled the nurse.

 

Jenny’s eyes widened, How was possible she had wet herself during her sleep? She hadn’t wet her bed since she was three. That stupid bitch was making a blunder. There was no way she had wet herself!

 

The nurse carried the diapered little to the changing table. This time she used a plastic belt to strap her in, while she started collecting changing supplies. Jenny laid still, counting the seconds that separated her from getting out of that diaper.

 

Nurse Lilith undid the tabs of the now enormous diaper, she removed it and threw it away. Then with one hand she grasped both Jenny’s feet and raised her legs, and with a moist tissue she started working on her privates.

 

“There you go baby! All dry and clean, isn’t that nice?” she cooed when she was done wiping “Now, since nurse Martha told me you were a bad girl earlier I’m afraid I must put you in another crawler.”

 

“Mhhhphh!!!!” Jenny shook her head, she hated that diaper! If she wet or messed it she would have been forced to stay in it for hours at least, not accounting for the impossibility to walk or stand properly.

 

“Shh baby, I’m sure you will be a good girl for us for the rest of the day. But you must understand that your actions have consequences, you still have a long way to go before earning some privileges” stated the nurse, raising Jenny’s legs and sliding the thick diaper under and between them before sealing it shut.

 

“I think I will leave you in just your diaper, you’re much cuter this way. Now let’s go have some nummies, shall we?”

 

The nurse carried Jenny to the kitchen area. It looked like was lunchtime for the littles. Some of them were eating small pieces of fruit with their bare hands while seating on the small plastic tables at the centre of the room, three babies were strapped into highchairs, nurse Martha was feeding them  a pureed goop in turn while keeping an eye on the other littles.

 

“Here we go” Said nurse Lilith sitting on one of the big chairs, then she produced a large bottle of milk and brought it to Jenny’s mouth.

 

“Mhhphhh!” the still silenced girl tilted her head while trying to escape the giant’s clutch.

 

“I’m sorry baby but it’s the rule here that bad babies must be kept on a liquid diet for as long as necessary” she  turned the ring of the pacifier, detaching the external part, then she attached the bottle to the remaining part of the enlarged pacifier with a “click” sound.

 

Jenny felt warm milk running down her throat, but this time it was different from the milk nurse Martha had force-fed her earlier. This milk was thicker and – most important – very, VERY bitter. The foul liquid was tasting worse and worse with every gulp she took.  

 

Jenny screwed up her face and kicked aimlessly the air as the red haired nurse gently rocked her into one of the most disgusting feedings she had ever remembered.   

 

At some point the disgust was so much Jenny threw up some of the milk, which returned to fill the bottle. But Nurse Lilith just smiled and squeezed the bottle harder, forcing the milk once more inside Jenny’s bloated stomach.

 

When the horrible feeding ended, the tears Jenny had shed had formed a large stain on nurse Lilith’s gown, but she didn’t seem to mind, as she bounced and lulled the diapered girl in her arms.

 

“I know it was bad, but it’s for your own good baby!” she chirped stroking Jenny’s hair and caressing her red puffy cheeks. Then she strapped her in one of the vacant highchairs and went to care for the other littles.

 

Jenny was still trying to keep the horrible milk inside her belly. She was terrified because if she had thrown up, she would have been forced to swallow by the large pacifier still inflated in her mouth. So she laid still in the highchair, taking deep breath and focusing on not vomiting.

 

She spent one hour and a half trapped in there. She saw the other littles having lunch, and the two nurses administering diaper changes for the good littles and spankings for the bad ones, then the other littles were taken to the large dormitory, leaving her once again alone in the room.

 

When nurse Martha approached, Jenny was almost falling asleep, her eyes were closed and her head was bent forward. The exhausting feeding and the boredom of waiting had left her drowsy and sleepy.

 

She roused herself as she felt the tray and the straps being removed.

 

Jenny was puzzled, since she had arrived at that place she had gotten tired much more easily than when she was in her dimension. She prided herself of being a very active woman, and she had never slept during the afternoon, even if she was late at night. How could she had fallen asleep so easily?

 

 

“I know this punishments seem hard, but you need to learn how to behave baby. And it’s better doing it now so you will understand once and for all that you are just a little, and littles are supposed to do what Bigs tell them to.” Nurse Martha started lecturing as she carried the little girl across the building.

 

For her part, Jenny wasn’t listening to a word. She closed her eyes and relaxed, imagining her strangling the red haired bitch Lilith. She would have gotten her for what she was enduring, size or not, that cunt would have paid for everything.

 

Jenny opened her eyes when she felt the temperature around her drop, The nurse had taken her to a room that resembled a veterinarian’s study. There was a desk and a drawer, filled with medical equipment. At the centre of the room stood a cold metallic examination table, four medical lights pointed right on it.

 

Inside the room was another woman, she was in her thirties, dressed in a black elegant tailleur under a white medical gown, her hair was brown and she had a pair of black square glasses.

 

“Hi Martha! How’s it going?” asked the new woman.

 

“Hello Dr. Ainsworth! All good, the babies are behaving for now, we had some problem with this one, but I guess that’s because it’s her first day, they all are a bit rebellious at first”

 

“Yeah I know what you’re talking about, I have two of my own. They always tried to run away before I had the surgery done to them, now they’re quiet and calm as angels, they just need a little time to settle”

 

Hearing that Jenny started hyperventilating “Surgery?! These people are crazy!”

She froze as the nurse handed her to the doctor

 

“This baby girl is shaking… poor thing” the doctor said as she picked her up and deposited her on all fours on the metallic table’s surface.

 

“Now baby I need you to stay still and don’t move, you are being very good but remember bad girls get punished, understood?”

 

“Mhhp mhhp” nodded Jenny. That woman terrified her, and the thought of what she could do on her unconscious body made her skin crawl. She couldn’t risk angering her, again she had to submit.

 

The doctor performed a complete medical examination on her. She took her pressure, a blood sample and examined her muscles, reflexes etcetera.

 

At some point the doctor deflated the pacifier, so she could ask Jenny about her past medical history and allergies.

 

Apart from the humiliation of having her diaper removed in front of the two women and her temperature taken rectally, the medical exam went smoothly, but that was until Jenny saw the doctor approaching her holding a strange device that looked alarmingly as a some kind of gun.

 

 

The little girl started shaking again, but managed to maintain control, staying still on all fours as the doctor pressed the device against her bare left butt cheek.

 

For a moment, Jenny foolishly thought that nothing was going to happen, but then the doctor pulled the trigger and a searing pain exploded where the gun had been pointed.

 

“OOOOOOWWW! YOU SON OF A BITCH!”

Jenny screamed at the top of her lungs, jolting away from the gown-dressed woman, risking to fall from the examination table if it were not for the nurse, who promptly grabbed her.

 

“My, my what a pottymouth we have” said the doctor as the nurse repositioned the naked, hurting little on all fours again at the centre of the table.

 

“What the hell did you do to me?” screamed Jenny, tears clouding again her eyes

 

“I just implanted you a tracking chip honey. It’s if your future mommy loses you, if somebody tries to kidnap you or if you try to escape. It will also give us some control over your body, but this is a thing littles have to discover for themselves” saind the doctor with a smile on her face, then she passed another smaller device over Jenny’s assaulted butt cheek “Yep, the chip is active, we are all good”

 

“Please, just send me home. I want to go home! I can’t take this anymore…” cried Jenny. If what the doctor had said was true every hope of escaping was lost. She would have been a diapered pet forever…

 

No, she couldn’t lose hope, not so soon, not without at least trying to escape.

 

 

“Don’t worry sweetie” said nurse Martha as she turned her over and started to rediaper her. Jenny weakly tried to kick her away, but few hard swats on her thighs rendered her still. “You are so cute we will find you a home in no time. The bigs of Catalon will do anything adopt you”

 

After she was locked in the crawler diaper, Jenny saw nurse Martha producing again the inflatable pacifier.

 

“Please…” She pitifully whimpered looking the nurse in the eye, but her words were soon silenced by the inflatable teat.

 

“Sweetie the quiet time is good for you. You are being too fussy and I don’t want to punish you. So maybe if you stay like this you won’t get into trouble anymore.” Replied the nurse as she picked her up and started rocking her.

 

“She will have no trouble getting adopted” the doctor said approvingly looking at the sobbing little held in the nurse’s arms. Jenny just hid her face inside the woman’s neck, hoping to disappear from the face of the Earth.

 

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After the medical examination Jenny was taken back to the playpen area with the other littles. Although Dave and some of the others tried to console her, she wasn’t in the mood to be with others, so she spent her afternoon sat in a corner, thinking about the life she lost and the nightmare she was going through.

 

When nurse Lilith arrived with the bottles, she submissively accepted it, not wanting another force-feeding. Nurse Lilith took the inflatable pacifier off just the time Jenny needed to drink her bottle, after that the infantile gag was stuck again inside her mouth.

 

Several hours passed, the littles in the playpen were taken out just to be changed by the nurses (if they deserved it), but with her enormous diaper, Jenny knew she had to wet herself several times to earn a change.

 

Her diaper was growing bulkier every time she peed, her legs were barely touching the ground when the nurses announced it was time for dinner.

 

“Dinner?!” Thought Jenny “But it can’t be later than seven PM!”

 

The two nurses opened the mesh wall of the play area, and kept watch as the littles got outside, waddling and crawling towards the dinner area.

 

With her enormous diaper Jenny was struggling to keep up with the others. Her movements were restricted and the pacifier stuck in her mouth prevented her from breathing correctly. She was quickly surpassed by the every little, as she tried to cover the long distance that separated her from the kitchen area.

 

She had just stopped to catch her breath when a hard swat landed on her padded bottom. Lilith stood behind her, arms crossed and the usual evil grin on her face.

 

“Come on Baby, chop-chop. Keep crawling or nursie will have to spank you again” she said, giving Jenny’s rear another swat.

 

“Mhhhph!!!” Jenny started to crawl faster, sweating, her face turning red as her thickly diapered bottom swung left and right in front Lilith’s amused eyes.

 

When she got into the kitchen, the other littles had already started eating, she was watching nurse Martha strapping a reticent little inside a highchair when she saw Lilith approaching her holding the same awful bottle of milk she had to drink for lunch.

 

“Please, please no… anything but that…”  “Mhhhphhh….”Jenny tried to beg the nurse, crying she fell on her knees and laid on the ground, in complete submission, hoping Lilith would change her mind.

 

But the giant nurse simply picked her up and force fed her the awful milk just like she had for lunch.    

 

After the feeding ended, the sobbing Jenny was locked inside one of the highchairs, as the other babies finished their dinner.

 

When the dinner was over, the nurses escorted the littles into the large nursery, and started changing their charges diapers. Two at a time the littles were strapped to the changing tables, their diapers changed and dressed with footed pajamas.

For fifteen minutes the crinkling rustle of diapers, the sing song voices of the nurses and some occasional whine coming from the babied littles, were the only sounds that filled the room.

 

When Jenny’s turn arrived, she was hoisted up by nurse Lilith and sat on the changing table.

 

Jenny was glad the nurse was going let her out the thick diaper, which had ballooned up even more since she was given the milk and now felt wet and squishy on her skin.

 

She was laid down and stripped of her giant diaper and after being wiped she was left naked on the changing table.

 

Nurse Lilith made one of her deviant smiles, and Jenny knew something bad was about to happen.

 

“Quite a first day you had in here baby Jenny. Nurse Martha and I are very displeased with your behaviour, but I’m sure tomorrow you will behave like a good little girl, am I right?”

 

Jenny was so scared of the giant nurse she started nodding vigorously, tears already moistening her eyes. She just wanted this day to be over, it was just too much for her to take. “Maybe this has been all a nightmare, and I’ll wake up for real this time”, she foolishly thought letting that crazy idea give her a little bit of comfort.

 

“Very good baby, I’m sure we won’t have problems with you tomorrow” smiled the nurse as she slid one of the nighttime diapers under Jenny’s bottom. The diaper was thick, but would allow Jenny to stand and walk.

But before sealing it, she started sprinkling a strange red powder on Jenny’s privates. The powder didn’t smell like anything, but left a nice fresh sensation when touched Jenny’s sensitive skin.

 

“Now I’m gonna remove the paci baby. I don’t want to hear a peep out of you though” said the nurse as she deflated the pacifier, letting Jenny stretch her cramped jaw.

 

Then she produced a pink onesie, this one had mittens at the end of the sleeves. Jenny cringed when she saw it, but after the horrible sleepsack, that was a progress.

 

She remained still and let the nurse lock her inside the soft garment. Then she was picked up, and carried outside of the dormitory.

 

“Since you have been bad, you will sleep in the punishment ward tonight Jenny. I don’t want to keep all the other babies awake tonight.” Chirped nurse Lilith as she bounced her in her arms.

 

She carried Jenny to what seemed like a small version of the dormitory. This room had only three cribs inside, but Jenny could tell they were different.

 

The cribs inside the small room had shorter metal bars – instead of the cribs in the dormitory which had tall wooden white ones-  and the upper part was closed by another set of metal bars, making them effectively three mattress-covered cages!

 

Humming, nurse Lilith carried the diapered little to one of the cages, unceremoniously plopped her in and locked the upper part.

 

Then she grabbed a chair and sat in front of the crib, smiling to Jenny through the steel bars.

 

Jenny took a moment to get back on her feet. Her legs slightly spread apart by the diaper. She didn’t like that situation, the smile on that bitch’s face was too broad. Something didn’t add up.

 

Then she started feeling it, a slight itch started coming from her vagina and the inner part of her thighs, then it spread to the crack of her ass… The strange powder Lilith had applied was mixing with her sweat, turning the freshness into a gnawing-flesh-like sensation.   

 

It suddenly grew to become an excruciating burning pain radiating from all her diaper area.

 

“What the hell? What is happening?” screamed Jenny. She tried to put her hands inside her diaper so she could relieve the burning pain, but she found out that both the diaper and the onesie had been sealed shut around her body. She tried to tear the fabric but it was just too strong.   

 

She started to scratch the front of her onesie-covered diaper with her hands, producing a loud crinkling noise, only to find that the thick padding didn’t allow her to feel anything but a slight pressure on her skin.

 

“OWWWW! IT BURNS!” she wailed falling on her back and starting to pound her diaper with her fists, in the desperate attempt to relieve the pain.

 

Lilith watched the little girl twitching and spasming on the cage’s mattress with amusement. “Bad girls in here have to cry themselves to sleep, little one” she smiled, as the poor Jenny stuck both her legs outside the crib, trying to ease the pain by grinding her diapered crotch to one of the metal bars.

 

“Seems like the bedbugs have started biting, but I know a secret to stop them” she whispered getting closer to the cage.

 

“If baby Jenny behaves like a good baby and drinks her bottle, she will make wetsies in her diapee and the pain will go away” She said producing a baby bottle filled with what seemed oatmeal and holding it just outside Jenny’s reach.

 

Jenny pressed her face against the metal, sticking both her arms out trying to grasp the bottle as hard as she could, screaming in pain, her face red and teary.

 

“But since baby Jenny was such a bad girl today and spat on nursie’s face, nursie thinks that baby Jenny won’t sleep a minute tonight, no she won’t”  she smiled dangling the bottle in front of Jenny’s outstretched hands and placing it inside one of her gown’s pocket.

 

“I’m sure I won’t have any problems with you tomorrow. Have a good night little one.” She concluded blowing the little girl a kiss and exiting the room after turning the light off.

 

“NOOOO PLEASE!!! YOU CAN’T DO THIS TO ME!” Jenny wailed, sticking her arms and legs out of the cage, as if to stop the giant nurse from leaving.

 

She remained alone, inside the dark room. The absence of light in some way heightened her other sensations, making the burning even worse.

 

She spent the night twitching and screaming on the crib’s mattress, she wouldn’t had crossed the nurses ever again, she swore to herself. 

 

The pain lasted all night and eased only a little bit when she released her full bladder into the waiting padding of her diaper.

 

Sunshine was filtering through the shatters, when she finally managed to doze off.

[SGTbaby]

Doing fine to me!! Love the chapter and extra torture you included. Write how you want to. Looking forward to more!

[ABAlex]

Love your story so far.

I think it might be fun to add a bit of variety to the nurses. I think it was mentioned they basically seem like faceless tormentors- but there being more of a variety would make it more interesting and believable, and the world gives space for variety. For example, it seems like they actually take pleasure in finding reasons to punish the 'littles,' but perhaps there are also some that legitimately think they are helping and see punishment as a sad duty for their own good, and others that see them as helpless victims in the system but just play their role. Each one would be sympathetic in a different way and to a different degree. 

[WBDaddy]

3 hours ago, ABAlex said:

Love your story so far.

I think it might be fun to add a bit of variety to the nurses. I think it was mentioned they basically seem like faceless tormentors- but there being more of a variety would make it more interesting and believable, and the world gives space for variety. For example, it seems like they actually take pleasure in finding reasons to punish the 'littles,' but perhaps there are also some that legitimately think they are helping and see punishment as a sad duty for their own good, and others that see them as helpless victims in the system but just play their role. Each one would be sympathetic in a different way and to a different degree. 

Spot on, Alex.  This.  Emphatically. 

I do want to add, however, that the little dream snippet was a GREAT effort at subtle character development.  Her in the middle of a nightmare having a dream about her previous life, giving us a tiny window into who she used to be - this is good stuff.  

[The dark dweller]

4 hours ago, ABAlex said:

Love your story so far.

I think it might be fun to add a bit of variety to the nurses. I think it was mentioned they basically seem like faceless tormentors- but there being more of a variety would make it more interesting and believable, and the world gives space for variety. For example, it seems like they actually take pleasure in finding reasons to punish the 'littles,' but perhaps there are also some that legitimately think they are helping and see punishment as a sad duty for their own good, and others that see them as helpless victims in the system but just play their role. Each one would be sympathetic in a different way and to a different degree. 

Yeah you are right. I didn't develop them a lot because SPOILER : this is just a temporary situation for Jenny, and the nurses are not going to stay. The second part of the story should have more emotional and psychological  depth. I already have some ideas. This first part was a good training to describe the situations, I will develop the charachters more in the second part. Or at least I hope so :P 

[Cya]

50 minutes ago, The dark dweller said:

Yeah you are right. I didn't develop them a lot because SPOILER : this is just a temporary situation for Jenny, and the nurses are not going to stay. The second part of the story should have more emotional and psychological  depth. I already have some ideas. This first part was a good training to describe the situations, I will develop the charachters more in the second part. Or at least I hope so

I had a feeling that was your plan. Keep up the good work and never deviate from your vision! 

[kirababy]

enjoying the tale, and reading all the other comments and critiques

[ABAlex]

15 hours ago, The dark dweller said:

Yeah you are right. I didn't develop them a lot because SPOILER : this is just a temporary situation for Jenny, and the nurses are not going to stay. The second part of the story should have more emotional and psychological  depth. I already have some ideas. This first part was a good training to describe the situations, I will develop the charachters more in the second part. Or at least I hope so

Fair enough  Keep working at it!

16 hours ago, WBDaddy said:

Spot on, Alex.  This.  Emphatically. 

I do want to add, however, that the little dream snippet was a GREAT effort at subtle character development.  Her in the middle of a nightmare having a dream about her previous life, giving us a tiny window into who she used to be - this is good stuff.  

Thanks!

I'd agree with that too. I also like it because I find contrasting pre-sub/ab life with post-sub/ab life fun in these stories. Also, it makes her more then just a generic blob to throw into punsihments- she's a person

[littleTomás]

21 hours ago, ABAlex said:

Love your story so far.

I think it might be fun to add a bit of variety to the nurses. I think it was mentioned they basically seem like faceless tormentors- but there being more of a variety would make it more interesting and believable, and the world gives space for variety. For example, it seems like they actually take pleasure in finding reasons to punish the 'littles,' but perhaps there are also some that legitimately think they are helping and see punishment as a sad duty for their own good, and others that see them as helpless victims in the system but just play their role. Each one would be sympathetic in a different way and to a different degree. 

Agreed. The best villains are the ones who we learn something about. Think about how complex Thanos from the Avengers is and try to create a story behind why they act this way.

[The dark dweller]

10 hours ago, littleTomás said:

Agreed. The best villains are the ones who we learn something about. Think about how complex Thanos from the Avengers is and try to create a story behind why they act this way.

Thanos is even better in the comics :P anyway I don't think I will deepen into the nurses personalities, sorry. Just because AGAIN SPOILER the next chapter will be the last one for them. I will take your advice for my next charachters though. Thanks again for commenting and giving me your opinion, I really appreciate it. 

[ABAlex]

On 11/15/2019 at 7:13 PM, littleTomás said:

Agreed. The best villains are the ones who we learn something about. Think about how complex Thanos from the Avengers is and try to create a story behind why they act this way.

LOLOLOL
"I will snap my fingers, and half the creatues in the world will become diapered littles. Perfectly fair, perfectly balanced."

[littleTomás]

1 hour ago, ABAlex said:

LOLOLOL
"I will snap my fingers, and half the creatues in the world will become diapered littles. Perfectly fair, perfectly balanced."

Please write that fan fic! I want to see Daddy Thanos, lol.

[The dark dweller]

Hope you're having a great weekend. And if not, I hope this chapter will improve it  I may have messed up some of the descriptions.

Here we go, chapter 5. Let's move things a little. Like always, comments are appreciated  Enjoy!

 

Chapter 5 

 

Jenny felt a giant hand rubbing her shoulders as she regained consciousness. The night had been horrible, she was feeling so tired she took several minutes to properly awaken.

 

The giant hand turned her on her back, and she was almost blinded by the solar light that entered the room.

 

Jenny slowly opened her eyes, the top bars of the crib had been lifted and nurse Lilith’s smug face greeted her with her usual devious smile.

 

“Good morning baby Jenny! Did you sleep well? Ready for a brand new day?”

 

Jenny grumbled as she lifted her upper body and sat on the crib’s mattress. Two dark circles had appeared around her eyes due to the lack of sleep, and she was feeling her eyes burn whenever she closed them. 

While she moved, a squishing sound came from her crotch, her diaper feeling warm, wet and clammy.

 

“What the hell?! I don’t remember peeing recently. Did I wet myself while I was sleeping?” she worriedly thought, but her elucubrations were interrupted by the nurse, who picked her up and carried her out of the room.

 

“Today is a big day baby Jenny! Weekend’s over and you littles get to go to the store! I’ve had so much fun with you that I almost hope you don’t get adopted!” said the nurse in a fake sad voice, bouncing the still half asleep little in her arms.

 

 “But a delicious and rebellious girl like you will be bought in no time, so I guess I will try to enjoy myself while you’re still here” she added, unceremoniously plopping Jenny on one of the changing tables. 

 

“What? The store? What store?” asked Jenny- now fully awake and preoccupied-

 

“But the Little’s pet store of course! Now we’re gonna make you nice and clean, so that every big in Catalon will want to adopt you.” She said as she laid her down and started undoing the snaps of her onesie, and working on the tabs of her diaper.

 

“Oh no! I’m going to be put for sale and adopted! That’s no good! I have to find a way to escape before that happens!” Jenny started frantically thinking. She began reviewing all her options, to finally realize she didn’t have any.

 

Looking around, she saw the daycare was buzzing with activity, there were 4 nurses and 2 enormous human-shaped robots that were roaming around scooping the littles up,  dressing, and changing them.  No little was being left unsupervised, she couldn’t escape now!

 

She was still looking around, searching a way to escape, as she felt Lilith finishing wiping her, then she was picked up without being put in another diaper!

 

One thing was being naked just the time to have her diaper changed, but now Jenny was sitting in nurse Lilith’s arms, her bare breasts and privates grinding against the gown’s rough fabric, and her undressed state started really bothering her.

 

She was rapidly turning red as she was carried by the nurse to another room. Lilith seemed to be in a good mood as she bounced and playfully patted the little girl’s naked bottom.

 

Behind them, Jenny saw nurse Martha and one of the strange humanoid robots carrying two naked littles each in their arms.

 

She smelled the sweet scent of lavender as they entered another room. The room was large, and most of it was occupied by a broad bathtub embedded in the floor at the centre of it. The high borders of the tub were slippery and on them there was a plethora of shampoos and shower gels. Looked like a small pool or a very large bathtub for children.

 

But like the previous times, something was off. Short metal posts were inserted inside the marble  at the borders of the tub, small silvery chains dangling from them.

 

“What are those?” asked Jenny, now shivering despite her contact with the nurse’s warm bosom.

 

“These are to assure little babies like you don’t drown in the tub, it also to makes sure that squirmy babies don’t give too much trouble when we are washing them. Today we will not have time to let you play in the tub, so we’re gonna make this quick” said Lilith opening the tap.

 

In a few minutes, the large bathtub was filled with steaming warm water, and after pouring soap in it, the nurses began to lower the littles inside, making sure the collars were secured to the metal posts.

 

“I will be good nurse, there’s no need to tie me up, please!” begged Jenny, as she was immerged in the warm water. That was so demeaning, she didn’t want to be tied to a pole like a pet.

 

“And I thought you had learned after yesterday’s punishment!” scoffed the nurse, attaching the chain to the squirming little’s collar, “I’m not punishing you just because we are in a hurry, now stay still and let nursie scrub your cute little tushie” 

 

And so, Jenny found herself tied up to the metal post, the chain allowed her to immerse her body, but not past her chest, so she couldn’t put her head underwater.

The chain also kept her near the borders of the tub, within the reach of the nurse. 

 

The bath was humiliating, Jenny was roughly scrubbed by Lilith, who cleaned every nook and cranny of her naked body. She didn’t allow the poor girl any modesty, and she slapped her bottom whenever Jenny didn’t assume the position the nurse wanted her to.

 

Jenny was again on the verge of tears, as she was kept on all fours, naked and with a rough sponge scrubbing the crack of her ass back and forth, her collar feeling tighter than ever.

 

When the nurses were finished, they wrapped each little into soft towels, and then they brought them to the changing tables to be dressed.

 

“Well well well… let’s what we’ve got here” said the nurse laying the naked little on the changing table.

 

Jenny’s eyes almost popped out as she saw Lilith produce what was the most ridiculous dress she had ever seen. It was a shocking pink princess dress, with white ruffles on the bottom area, and a very short hem that was obviously designed to show her diaper even if she was standing. 

 

“look at this baby Jenny! You get to be a princess for the rest of the day! Aren’t you happy?”

 

But the little’s girl spirit had already been almost crushed by the humiliating bath, so she just kept her dead down, silent tears running down her cheeks. There was no point in fighting them now, the place was too well guarded, she had to submit. But how much of a toll was this strategy taking on her psyche and dignity?

 

She managed to minimize her sobs as the nurse dressed her in the humiliating outfit, but couldn’t help but weep as she saw Lilith starting to put her in another thick crawler diaper, only that this one had a printed writing that spelled “Baby Jenny, 1200$” in wide pink letters, so her price was for everyone to see, branded on her now huge diapered bottom.

 

Looking around, Jenny saw that also the other littles were being dressed in similar outfits and diapers. The girls were dressed as princesses and ballerinas, while the boys wore a short sailor uniform, everyone of them had an exposed crawler diaper on, their price in plain sight.

 

“Why everyone has a crawler diaper on? Wasn’t it just for punishment?” weakly asked Jenny, as the nurse was closing the last tab of her enormous diaper.

 

“Well honey, you’ll be spending the rest of the week at the store, so you’ll probably get only one diaper change a day…”

 

Jenny’s mouth opened in horror and disbelief, one single diaper change a day for an entire week? She would have gotten a rash for sure! The only thought of it was sufficient to cause another set of sobs wreck her body.

 

But maybe there was hope, she could find a way to escape in the store… It surely shouldn’t have been as watched as the daycare was…

 

“…But don’t worry sweetie. If, by chance, you won’t get adopted during the week, we’ll be able to have more fun in the weekends like we had” wickedly smiled the nurse as she picked her up and carried her in another room.

 

They were heading towards the medical ward, Jenny felt the temperature dropping… then the nurse opened a door that led into a small warehouse, with two garage doors opening onto the street.

 

Seeing the opened garage facing a crowded street, Jenny had the sudden thought of escaping right there, but the nurse’s grasp was irony as she turned around to face the corner of the large room.

 

Stacked in the corner of the room, were 15 padded cages, like the ones used for pets, eight of them were occupied by littles, their tiny hands grasping the metal crates.

 

Jenny stared in horror as she was brought to an empty cage and locked inside. As soon as the gate closed she resumed her whimpering. She had always been claustrophobic, and that small prison only allowed her to turn around on all fours.

 

Through the metal crate, Jenny saw the last littles being locked inside the cages, some of them tried to crawl towards the open exit but didn’t even make it close, with their thick diapers restraining their movements the nurses caught them immediately.

 

As soon as the littles were safely contained, the nurses began loading the cages into the truck. Jenny found herself staring nurse Lilith, who waved at her from outside the two enormous vehicle’s metal doors.

 

“Bye bye sweeties, we’ll se you in a week” she cooed closing the door.

 

Darkness fell in the truck’s hold. Jenny could hear whimpering sounds coming from the cages around her, someone had already started to cry.

She forced herself to take deep breaths to stay calm. After 5 minutes of waiting, the truck’s engine roared and the vehicle started moving.

 

Jenny never knew how long the journey lasted, because the sleepless night she endured, the dark and the constant low roar of the engine caused her to fall into a deep sleep 10 minutes after the departure.

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Jenny regained consciousness, she was laying on her stomach, her legs bent by the thick diaper, her bottom sticking in the air. She felt a soft moquette-like surface touching her skin, and light coming from a non distinct point in front of her. She felt moist padding around her genitals “Great… I wet myself  while I was sleeping, now this stupid diaper will have swollen for sure!” was the first thing she thought.

 

She opened her eyes and with her hands she pulled her torso up, assuming a crawling position. She felt like having slept for a whole day, she was dazed and a line of drool was hanging from her mouth.

 

“What the hell… where am I?” she thought as she looked around.

 

In front of her she saw a sidewalk, with giant people coming and going and past that, a busy road full of enormous cars. But she was looking at them from an elevated position….How could that be?

 

She tried to crawl forward and reach the sidewalk, but she was suddenly blocked by a transparent glass surface! She immediately turned around, at her sides there were two more transparent walls, looking through she saw two other littles kept inside a cubicle cell like her, the fourth side behind them was closed by a metal crate. Looking up there was another transparent barrier, enclosing her inside what was a glass-walled box. Directly above her she could see another little’s diaper, the plastic fabric squished against the glass few inches from her head.

 

They had put her on display in a fucking shop window!

 

Her body acted before she could process anything, and she started banging her bare little hands on the glass surface, she desperately wanted out of there! How was even thinkable of humans being kept that way?

 

The two littles, a boy and a girl, at her sides gave her a look of comprehension and sadness as they sat on their heavily diapered bottoms.

 

She went to look through the crate and she saw the inside of what she would have guessed was a pet-shop, but this time the goods sold were little people! There were amazons customers wandering around the store, asking the clerks for prices and advices about the caring of littles.     

 

A couple of Amazons stopped by to look at the windows, they were cooing and smiling at the littles kept inside, their giant hands tapping on the glass wall.

 

“Look Samantha, they brought other non native littles, this one is so cute, should we buy it?” She heard a giant woman say to her teenage daughter pointing at the little boy at her left.

 

She saw the two of them enter the shop and two minutes later the crate behind the little was opened by the clerk’s giant hands, who carried the sobbing boy away.

 

The poor Jenny spent the next hour and an half crying and frantically looking for a way to escape, when she felt her stomach grumbling and remembered she didn’t hadn’t had any breakfast.

 

 

Grabbing the crate with her hands she tried calling out for one of the clerks, but they were too busy with the clients. She didn’t want to scream or attract attention, it had always ended badly when she had done that, so she decided to wait what her jailers had in store for her.

 

 The nap she took had made her lose track of time, but couldn’t have been  later than 1 PM when one of the clerks invited the last customers to come back during the afternoon and changed the sign on the front door from “Opened” to “closed”.

 

After all the customers had walked away, the pet shop was strangely quiet… Jenny heard only the sound of the giant clerk’s footsteps and occasionally some sobbing and whining coming from he cages around her.

 

She was feeling her bladder’s pressure building up again, but despite all the recent humiliations, she was still reticent about wetting herself in front of a street full of Amazons.    

 

Again, she tried calling for the clerks, and after some time she managed to get the attention of one of them. She was a girl in her mid twenties,her hair was short and she had a silver nose piercing. 

 

“Well hello there sweetie! Aren’t you a cutiepie in that princess dress?” she said smiling, and tickling Jenny’s chin with her fingers through the metal crate.

 

Jenny swallowed again her pride “I’m hungry...how long am I going to spend in here?” she managed to say keeping her voice straight.

 

“Littles spend all week in here honey, then they return you to the daycare facility. That unless you get adopted…”

 

A wave of terror shook the little girl from head to toe. She had to stay imprisoned in that cubicle, dressed like a doll and heavily diapered for a week?! She’d go crazy!

 

“…About you little tummy, don’t worry sweetie, I was just about to feed you, just wait a few minutes” said the girl.

 

After 5 minutes of waiting, Jenny saw the two clerks opening the cages and putting large bottles of milk inside for the babies to drink. But no little was let out. The clerks just put the bottles inside the cages, and then closed immediately afterwards.

 

When the short haired clerk girl had opened her cage, Jenny groaned.

 

“Milk again? Please there must be something else to drink!”

 

She knew the clerks weren’t there to take care of the littles, just to sell them. But the revulsion she felt for that white creamy substance seemed to surpass her logic way of thinking.

 

The clerk must not have been interested in reasoning with Jenny, because she just scoffed and produced one of the hated pacifiers.

 

“NO! Noo no no….” Jenny tried to crawl back towards the bottom of the transparent cage, but the girl grabbed her and after pumping the pacifier inside her mouth she attached the bottle to it, closing the crate afterwards. 

 

“Mhmp mmhmphh….” Jenny started making muffled sobbing noises. She had been silenced again, she hated the enormous nipple inside her mouth, and hated even more the idea these giants could deprive her of her speech anytime they wanted.

 

The bottle was big and so heavy she had to use both her hands to keep it from dragging her head down.

 

Despite her hatred for milk, the moment she felt it touch her mouth, her tummy started grumbling even more. This time the milk tasted good, it was sweet and creamy. She needed that, she couldn’t skip another meal. And without noticing she found herself on her back, her little feet and arms wrapped around the bottle, sucking greedily, her diapered bottom on full display.

 

The bottle was half full when she felt the pressure inside her bladder grow even more, that milk seemed to go right through her system.

 

She was still sucking the rich liquid when she lost control of her bladder, producing a stream of urine that flooded her already wet diaper.

 

“Mhhmp..mhhhhhhhh” Jenny moaned, milk running down her throat and urine streaming down into her diaper, as she experimented the odd sensation of being filled up and emptied at the same time.

 

After finishing the bottle, Jenny felt something wasn’t right, she was feeling light headed and drowsy. “What’s happening?”. Everything around her started spinning, her mouth and lips tingled. She tried to move her hands but her movements were so slow, like she was immersed in molasses.

 

“Oh no.. they must have spiked the milk…” was the last thing she thought before everything became blurred.

 

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Jenny’s consciousness slowly resurfaced… at first she was like a spectator of her body. She witnessed herself laying on the padded floor of the cage and frivolously playing with the bottle stuck to her pacifier, while emitting soft gurgling sounds and sucking on her binkie.

 

Little by little, she started to recover her faculties, until she completely recovered from the haze.

 

The sunlight had been replaced by an artificial one, the car lights and lamppost illuminated the street, and the sky was dark,  as Amazons now dressed in more heavy clothes walked in front of the shop window.

 

“What the fuck? What time is it? It wasn’t even early afternoon five minutes ago”

 

She looked down at her diaper and found it extremely swollen and warm, like she had wet it numerous times. The colour had shifted from white to yellowish and the pacifier and bottles motif of the waistband was now discoloured, the prices printed on the front and back were now unreadable.

As she moved she could feel it squelch against the padded floor, it was horrible. How had she gotten to that point?    

 

She was still trying to figure out how the hell had time passed so fast, when she heard the metal crate behind her open. Turning around she saw one of the clerks reaching for her while saying something. At first his lips moved but Jenny didn’t seem to understand, or maybe she just didn’t want to.

 

The realization hit her like a truck and her eyes widened as she was grabbed by the giant.

 

“Ok sweetie, your Mommy has arrived to pick you up!” he had said.

 

[ABAlex]

11 hours ago, littleTomás said:

Please write that fan fic! I want to see Daddy Thanos, lol.

HAHAH I might have to now. I don't normally do fanfics though

[Sarah Penguin]

[SGTbaby]

Ooh Mommy is here!

[Diaperingdaddy]

Great job! Looking forward to more!

[kirababy]

now we just have to wait to see what sort of mommy she is

[The dark dweller]

1 hour ago, kirababy said:

now we just have to wait to see what sort of mommy she is

That's THE question my friend. How would you like her to be? I have already decided, but I'm curious about what other people think

[kirababy]

24 minutes ago, The dark dweller said:

That's THE question my friend. How would you like her to be? I have already decided, but I'm curious about what other people think

well, the potential for a good story decreases the nicer she is...less room for conflict etc.  there is still the escape angle, but that is one aspect.

[Cya]

How exquisite. Like a fine dark chocolate. I'm glad you've continued to keep the dark tone. Few of us writers left who make a story where you feel bad for the character and yet want to see if they escape or submit. Great job!

[The dark dweller]

46 minutes ago, Cya said:

How exquisite. Like a fine dark chocolate. I'm glad you've continued to keep the dark tone. Few of us writers left who make a story where you feel bad for the character and yet want to see if they escape or submit. Great job!

Thanks a lot for your kimd comment. I hope not to bore the readers. I've discovered that if you want to keep them interested with a dark story, you have to keep changing the situations and the tortures. Luckily I have a lot of imagination for that  By the way, I red your story "Dragonball Z adopted by giants" and it's absolutely amazing. Great job, really.

57 minutes ago, kirababy said:

well, the potential for a good story decreases the nicer she is...less room for conflict etc.  there is still the escape angle, but that is one aspect.

Well, as you can imagine the conflict is the main pillar of my story, so a perfectly loving and caring mother would reduce that. Buuut... Well let's see, I really don't wank to make any spoilers