College Or Cribs?

[Kaidus]

Wow; that's something I didn't see coming.

[Rockies Fan in Diapers]

And tale Grows longer & the hole deepens...Oh boy, you keep surprising me & keeping me on the edge of my toes with this. What's next?

[Cute_Kitten]

Oh yes, this was gooood.

[Sarah Penguin]

I think, given the hospital, we're doing every permutation of diaperedness.

[Kara]

Curiouser and curioser. The playdate was amusing (Chris must have involuntarily looked absolutely darling in his dress, poor thing), and would have been a nice little installment in its own right. Then suddenly, hospital. Suddenly, flashback to the creation of mankind. Genesis gone Matrix. Personalias, I already knew that you without a doubt are the most ambitious writer in the community, and that it is always a pleasure to read a new installment in one of your stories, but I did not see this coming; not even remotely. You seem to be overdoing yourself with this one, and that's saying something.

[PUP-E]

That was....unexpected, i think Chris just got hit with a karma bomb!.

Now i must know what happens next!, please continue and thank you for sharing.

[Personalias]

[Kara]

Sooo...too ambitious in your opinion?

Sorry for the wait btw. The ideas in this story are all there, but it's hard to get out on the keyboard most days.

Oh, definitely not. You've bitten over a lot, yes, but anyone who has read your past works will know that you are quite the chewer. I'm really enjoying this story, and I really like the direction you seem to be bringing it. It's worth the wait.

[Shawnie]

I yes it is worth the wait,always for personalias to get us some good reading material out. Good job my friend good job indeed! Wonderful chapter

[good kid]

all more of this amazing story! It is like your very fingers dance on the key board. I love the felling of defeating a child, Picks you up after a bad day.

I loved the twist at the end, Chris finding out he is

[GamerGirl]

I'm gonna guess that the reality Chris has found himself in is the one where his fetish doesn't exsist and he was in the middle of having a mental breakdown

[Personalias]

[Kaidus]

Definetely the most awkward situation to be in to say the least; MORE PLEASE!

[Rockies Fan in Diapers]

Wow what a great chapter & an unexpected twist with Chris winding up in the hospital psych ward...And may I say Personalias, that you Sir, have a way with words in your story that I like a lot! Please continue,

[Kara]

This installment was brilliant on so many levels. From the complex dramatic irony to the very balanced and skillfull implementation of the introduction of new information about the core mechanic; I can hardly begin to list the reasons why I liked it. You are an artist.

[PUP-E]

I have no idea how he'll get out of this one!, but i can't wait to find out.

Please continue and thank you for sharing.

[Cute_Kitten]

Ah another brilliant chapter. This story gets more and more intriguing as it goes on. As far as the level of writing goes, this is as well written as a book in a bookstore.

[Shawnie]

Thanks Personalias that was a Great chapter thanks so Much

[good kid]

Oh you release another chapter...Must read.

[Personalias]

LUTHOR!

[Shawnie]

[WakkoWannaBe]

Saw this story last night, and I've been catching up with it ever since!

[Personalias]

Chapter 20: The Wake

[Rockies Fan in Diapers]

Wow, I think Roxanne really underestimated what Dr. Cole's Reaction to what happened to Chris. And obviously his Dad now knows the truth, so what will happen next? Please continue,

[Cute_Kitten]

What a page turner that was!