WBDaddy Posted July 20, 2011 Share Posted July 20, 2011 Well, there is conflict, if only in her own head. A positive step forward. 1 Link to comment
Summertime Posted July 20, 2011 Share Posted July 20, 2011 Short but worth the wait. I hope that Melissa doesn’t become too regressed but I like the introduction of the conflict. Link to comment
diaperboy4life Posted July 20, 2011 Share Posted July 20, 2011 nice chapter pls continue Link to comment
NappyBoy86 Posted July 20, 2011 Share Posted July 20, 2011 So refreshing to read a story that is so positive for a change & how loving her family are. Love the last chapter with the twist on the dream. Link to comment
ericdiaper Posted July 24, 2011 Share Posted July 24, 2011 i love this story keep it coming Link to comment
peepeepants Posted July 24, 2011 Share Posted July 24, 2011 I read all 11 pages in one sitting, I love it til now. Subscribed... 1 Link to comment
The All Posted August 5, 2011 Share Posted August 5, 2011 I...like this story, but at the same time wish there was a bit more going for it. It's well written, make no mistake about that, it just seems...somewhat generic. I'm not trying to insult, really I'm not. I like the story, I do, it just seems like it's missing something. This last chapter was perhaps one of the better ones, as it finally introduced the concept that diapers aren't a usual choice of undergarment for adults. Link to comment
nini_diaper Posted August 5, 2011 Share Posted August 5, 2011 im siting here holding my plushie bear reading this, and i absolutely love it, kudos. Link to comment
baby bing Posted August 7, 2011 Share Posted August 7, 2011 wow! brilliant, i wish i had a family like that. Link to comment
nini_diaper Posted August 7, 2011 Share Posted August 7, 2011 same here baby bing, this story, makes me happy that, you show such a loving a kind family dynamic, thank you for writeing this. Link to comment
Skeet Posted August 16, 2011 Share Posted August 16, 2011 I have read this story and have finally caught up. To the author keep up the good work and write how you want to write. We all love this story of yours as it is very unique and original in my mind. Thank you again for writing this and sharing it with us. Skeet Link to comment
nappiejack Posted September 4, 2011 Share Posted September 4, 2011 hope this storie continues this was always one of my faves x Link to comment
AndB Posted September 30, 2011 Share Posted September 30, 2011 So is this dead? I hope not. If the author does not want to continue it, can one of us have a stab at it? Link to comment
gcliment27 Posted October 1, 2011 Author Share Posted October 1, 2011 There will be more to come, no worries! Unless people want to see Melissa and her great life go through problems... jk Link to comment
nappiejack Posted October 1, 2011 Share Posted October 1, 2011 nooooo! cant let poor mel have problems hehe. cant wait to read more thanks for letting us know theres still more to come Link to comment
gah!ghost Posted October 4, 2011 Share Posted October 4, 2011 Where does that bear buy postage stamps? I haven't read the story yet, but just wanted to note, this exchange got such a chuckle out of me. Particularly because the first time I read it I thought lonewolf was authentically suggesting that the character be "mailed by a bear" instead of it being a typo of "mauled by a bear". Link to comment
gcliment27 Posted October 21, 2011 Author Share Posted October 21, 2011 The rest of the ride home Melissa hung out in the back of the car. She used this long drive home to daydream about becoming a baby and spending all day at home playing with toys, watching cartoons, using her diaper, not having to feed herself. Every so often she would come back to reality and see that she was in the car driving home with her whole family. She would look up front at her parents and wonder what they must be thinking about her. A lot of reflection went on during the trip home, and when they arrived Melissa was more confused as ever. She had just spent an amazing vacation with her whole family while wearing a diaper and playing as a toddler. Melissa slipped over the middle seats to hop out of the car when she realized that her legs were extremely cold. Just then she looked down to see that her pants were soaked. As quickly as possible Melissa hopped out of the car and ran up to her room before her parents could notice. She wasnt sure if she should just go hop on her bed like a baby and pretend she didnt notice, or if she should change her pants and wait for her mom to do her diaper. She decided that either way she was going to stay in her dirty diaper so she just hopped up on her bed. She heard some scuffling downstairs so melissa stuck her head out to hear what everyone was talking about. "I cannot believe she peed that much in the car" her father said. "Its my fault, I should have been checking her" said her mom. Melissa hopped back into her bed, wondering what she had done. She was very surprised that she didnt think about going to the bathroom and simply wet her diapers without thinking about it. Was she becoming diaper dependent? Soon Melissas focus turned to her soaked pants. "I cannot beleive this is real" she thought to herself. Placing her hand right on her diapered crotch she could feel how squishy and saggy her diaper was. She then smiled at how wonderful her diaper felt. Melissa slightly bounced on her bed to feel the pee pee in her diaper squish around. She then took her finger and poked her diaper and saw her finger mark impression stay. With a huge smile on her face, Melissa starting squeezing her legs together and bouncing and playing with her diaper. All of the sudden she heard footsteps coming up to her room. With a quickness Melissa hopped off of her bed and walked out of her room to greet her mom who was walking up to see her. "Mom, Im so sorry" Melissa said with a forced frown. She still had a diaper on that was sagging down to her knees and she had no worries about hiding anything. Melissa realized that she could pee right now in front of her mom and it wouldnt be a big deal. It would simply be thought of as a baby peeing her leaky diaper. Melissas mother walked Melissa back into her room and laid her down to change her diaper. While laying there Melissa felt so lucky to be getting her diaper changed by someone she loves so much. Her mother wiped her up and lifted her legs, all the while Melissa thinking about how she was actually getting her diaper changed. It was almost as if everything that has been happening to her was catching up to her at this very moment. She was laying on her bed having her diaper changed. She didnt have to do one thing, but lay there and get clean. When melissa was in a new fresh diaper she was so relieved and regressed that she didnt put pants back on. Just ran downstairs in a shirt and diaper. She ran all the way into the living room and hopped on the couch with the rest of the family. When she landed, powder squirted out of her diaper, and the scent of baby powder reminded her of how fresh her diaper was. While watching TV melissa started to come back to reality again, and realize that she was in a diaper and shirt around her family. What was she doing? Is she going to do this forever now? Why does she want to do this? All of these thoughts started coming back to her as she watched TV with her family. Is it too late to go back? Has she already started down her path? What if she doesnt want to do this anymore? 4 Link to comment
diaperpt Posted October 21, 2011 Share Posted October 21, 2011 Welcome back! Yes, she seems to be very conflicted. It's beginning to feel so normal and natural for her to be diapered, but shouldn't she want to be the teen she is chronologically? Ahh, but the diaper does feel soooo good! How will she deal with this struggle? Looking forward to more. Thanks! Link to comment
gcliment27 Posted October 21, 2011 Author Share Posted October 21, 2011 Soon:) I want to continue this as soon as I can. I hope everyone enjoys! Link to comment
wetatnight Posted October 21, 2011 Share Posted October 21, 2011 great story I can't wait for more. Link to comment
WBDaddy Posted October 22, 2011 Share Posted October 22, 2011 The story is much more interesting now that Melissa is starting to have serious doubts about her TB feelings. You have a number of options regarding direction here. Does she divulge her internal conflict to one or more family members? If so, how do they respond? We all know about the binge/purge cycle we experience. Does this come into play, where she suddenly, in a moment of shame, rejects it all? How would everyone react to such a shift in her mindset? So many possibilities. I trust you will consider them all, and deliver something even more engaging. 1 Link to comment
babykeiff Posted October 23, 2011 Share Posted October 23, 2011 gcliement, May I say that I admire your work. Whether this story be fantasy or whatever, that specification is your choice, and I enjoy it completely. Also, don't let the critics influence your free spirit. Do as you wish with your character, and they can do as they wish with their own characters, if they have the ability to write. To all you 'critics and nay sayers', if you think you can do better, go and write your own story. In my own experience, every critic I have ever met is a failure, ie a food critic is one who can't cook, but still thinks s/he has the authority to comment on someone else. Likewise, a literary critic is someone who has not got the ability to write, but still thinks that gives them the right to criticize authors. Shame on you critics... as I said earlier, if you don't like this story, or have ideas where you want this or any other story to go, write it yourselves.... if you can!!! Link to comment
kootzkoo Posted October 24, 2011 Share Posted October 24, 2011 this is one of my fav. stories i've read over the last 5 years or so.. i am so anxious for the next update Link to comment
Summertime Posted October 24, 2011 Share Posted October 24, 2011 gcliement, May I say that I admire your work. Whether this story be fantasy or whatever, that specification is your choice, and I enjoy it completely. Also, don't let the critics influence your free spirit. Do as you wish with your character, and they can do as they wish with their own characters, if they have the ability to write. To all you 'critics and nay sayers', if you think you can do better, go and write your own story. In my own experience, every critic I have ever met is a failure, ie a food critic is one who can't cook, but still thinks s/he has the authority to comment on someone else. Likewise, a literary critic is someone who has not got the ability to write, but still thinks that gives them the right to criticize authors. Shame on you critics... as I said earlier, if you don't like this story, or have ideas where you want this or any other story to go, write it yourselves.... if you can!!! I don Link to comment
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