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Edit- I have re-edited this post to better reflect my thoughts When it comes to stories, it all narrows down to what mood i'm in, I read all sorts of different types of stories ,some of my favorite being Humiliation stories, but also really love More Wholesome stories as well like characters who come to discover their love for diapers,. but either way, there is always something that can " kill " a story for me regardless of what type it is,. which would be the fallowing. Mental regression - ( especially if forced or permanent) : even though I know it is a rather popular theme in a lot of stories. to have someone revert to a mental infantile state acting like a baby, it's something I just don't really find myself liking so much, mainly two reasons, and that being, One, it sorta takes away how I can identify or understand what the characters going through, if the main character is acting like a baby because of some, use of hypnosis, brainwashing or some Magical reason, I feel it's not the same character were supposed to be learning and fallowing along in the journey with. one of my favorite things to do when reading a story is sorta imagine myself in the characters role or try to feel or understand what they are going through, and in ABDL Literature. I love to hear how a character reacts or feels naturally to things like wearing diapers or how they feel being dressed like a baby, hearing their emotions being described and own personals thoughts is one of the most important things to me. and if they are reverted to acting like a baby who has no thoughts other then just crawling around or sucking their thumb, doesn't really feel like a character to me., however, it's a something I can tolerate if it isn't the theme that takes up most of the story's plot. However, the other reason it can be a put off for me is, when it becomes a permanent outcome for the character. especially if it's how a story is supposed to end. as to me, it sorta comes of as Killing the character in a Mental way as appose to physically, as yes they are still alive and breathing but it's not the true characters mind, their memories and personality is all gone, all that's left is a big body acting like a big baby. and it can kind of come off as a bit dark in that aspect when you look into it. again especially if the effects are forced onto the character or are meant to be permanent. None consistent themes - basically, when a story tends to have an unrealistic premise that tries to make work in our real world logic, which just tends to put me off. I don't mind if a story is silly, over the top or even unrealistic as long as the story makes it easy for that to to see happening in that world. ( basically any story that is making suspension of disbelief work for itself ) so I'd rather read a realistic story that tries to stick to being realistic all the way through, and read a more unrealistic story that tries to stick to being a bit more farfetched most of it's way through then trying to make sense of it's unrealism. Main character deciding they like diapers and being babied suddenly out of nowhere : now this needs some explaining from me, as the thing is, I actually like stories that deal with a character having to wear diapers usually against their wishes,( could be for a Varity of reasons ) but overtime they find themselves starting to like or enjoy the feelings of being diapered and being babied, however when I read a story like this I really like that sort of discovery to be built up upon and not just happen the moment they slip the garment on, like they could maybe find it different from how they felt it would but not understand the feeling instantly, and as the story progresses they start to learn that they are enjoying the sensation of a diaper between their legs and the treatment of being babied. Overly sexual themes- Now I'm not against a story that has sexual element in it, but when whole story is basically just diaper sex, I'm going to pretty much loose interest. Physical abuse or changes - now as said above, I do enjoy a humiliation or forced regression story, however with that said, I personally prefer it be a story where character finds the thought of wearing diapers and be dressed as a baby humiliating enough to them, ( but also great if made to act and do babyish things to go along ) but what I don't enjoy is when the themes go full on abuse in a physical nature. like being whipped, shocked or physical changes ( I can tolerate some spanking ) such a surgery done to alter a persons body. ( like teeth removing, messing with nerves and muscles to make them weaker or become incontinence ) it just kills the story when that type of damage is done to a person. the only time I can, tolerate it is, if it's done through a magical nature, so there being a possibly way to refers any effects. Sexual content involving Underaged characters. so still on the topic on sexual themes, this is a pretty big one for me and really can break a story, like but let me say first, I don't mind if underaged characters are in a story, it's only when the story focus on or features sexual scenes regarding them it becomes a big problem,, it especially starts apply if the content is meant to be abusive in nature or be written solely as as some ones fantasy ,( like if the story in question is written by some over the age of 18, ) , Like I can at times understand if the story is written by someone who themselves is under 18, but regardless it's something I'm not comfortable with and one of the major things I'm glad this site takes into account about not letting be tolerated here.

Wow, well I have to say, even if your just giving your theorized explications, all the " points " you made , it sounds like it can be very close or truthful to what the Actual reasons are, ( from the reason of specific Diaper brands to why stories are more like what they are today ) and what i'm getting is, ABDL literature is evolving mainly because the community as a whole is as well ? sounds very plausible to me., but I have to agree that possibly why older stories tend to have that darker more forced aspect to them, being because it was the best way to convey the desire to wear diapers in a accepted way. by force if you will, Like As for me, Diaper punishment stories were the ones that did draw me toward ABDL literature in the first place. even though it is a form of punishment I'd find unacceptable in real life to do to anyone, ( though I'm not one of those who deny such forms of discipline ever happened or happen, though very less common today and usually result in Parent's or the guardians being charged or arrested ) anyway, for me it stemmed from my desires of being made helpless and even humiliated, and having fantasies of many sorts, so it was clear for me to see what drew me toward such Stories, my opinions on such tales now have changed very much though, as I myself had grown to appreciate more Kinder and adventurous stories you see these days . Ah, yeah, I can see that, very good points, characters are certainly something that has evolved quite a bit from the early days of ABDL literature it seems, along with things like plot, back then you'd seem to get a few stories here and there dedicated to the characters growth over time as appose to just, the character is wearing a diaper and is using them constantly through the entire plot. Which brings me to the other point you made, Diaper usage seems to very quite a bit these days, you may get a story where diaper usage seems to be the main element of the story,, or you may get one were it's sorta of a back occurrence and not the focus, I agree, a good story is something I would go for when I wan't to read some ABDL literature, Diapers and other ABDL elements as a clear presences, but the main focus to be the character and plot, even it if revolves around the usage of diapers and such things. oh and the separate forum Idea for specific story types, I think would be a very connivant Idea for those who are looking for something to match more their tastes. though sure it can be a bit fun to sorta go into a story without knowing what quite to expect at times. but still I'd be up for such a feature their. Great points, I do find it very interesting when stories will differ from the use of what sot of diaper brand is featured in it, older stories certainly did have cloth present a lot more then those of today, but you'll probably find more literature overall with the use of disposables, for me, while I lean toward preferring a story with disposables, I am not put off by a story that uses cloth, in fact I think it's kind of interesting to read stories today that still have them be written in. even more so when a story has the use of both at some point, like I have read a couple stories where the main character is first made to wear disposables, but later at some point cloth, and by a person who is usually old fashioned or the older type, so it'd make sense for them to be that way. also with how the world evolves and technology has, you can of course expect to see more up to date things present in modern stories, ( like with your example of fornite vs starcraft ) a lot of the old ABDL stories can be very dated when you hear mentions of things like, VHS's ,polaroid cameras, or even reading ones that mention the internet being a sort of " new " thing and and easy way to meet others with such " interests " but even with that, their is sort of a charm to reading back to such stories with those aspects. And for the basic plot, that's very true, the main premise of most Diaper stories basically works out that way sense the beginning of ABDl literature ( or so I'd imagine ) what really changes is like how you say, is the way or reason the character is put through such scenarios. and, I'm very much okay with that, to me, I don't mind of a story has a plot we or premise we all seen before, what I do care about is, is how the story handles or goes about it, adding enough stuff to it to give it some " moderation " to make it different in it's own way. Also, yeah, Diaper content is very much a key and important factor to many stories, and are of course the welcome and main reason you clicked on the story, but you also are looking for a story that can also have a griping plot and characters to fallow through. it's a Huge bonus when story has both of these done so well. And yeah, I for one don't Mind a Darker story from time to time, I don't mind if a story can get cruel, but usually I prefer the characters to eventually get through with what ever troubles they face it it can happen. the bittersweet endings I suppose are more what I'd look for ( like character ends up having to unwillingly wear diapers permanently, but has also overcome a great trouble in their life isn't as bad as having to wear diapers ) then straight up depressing or Twisted. but that wouldn't make a story bad just for that. but it is sort of interesting to see how Darker tales aren't quite the norm as they used to be. you still of course see them, but they don't seem to pop up as often, I'd admit I'd certainly hate for it to be a genre to see completely go away. though I don't think we'll have to worry about that ever going to happen. Oh my, ? yes, those are pretty much very common themes I can recall coming across in Older stories. which pretty much can be a sort of old school cliché, from the constant wetting and messing in one day and specially to the whole " Re-done bedroom into Nursey " ( if only converting a room into a Adult nursery was that quick and simple ?) I think I only read one story thus far that sort of subverted that element, were the protagonist had to Stay in a sort of guest room while their room was being worked on ( which took about 3 days, still a bit of a unrealistic time frame but still a lot more feasible ) though I can't say those make a story bad, but defiantly a strange aspect to find. ah yeah,That's another one. so many older stories usually have the whole " I secretly like diapers but don't want to be found out " premise, which is a very relatable aspect I think we can all agree, and in a lot of cases, and yeah either everyone's else is also into diapers or they'll at least have a friend who does indeed loves diapers too or gets very interested in diapers because of them. However this type of story can go two routes sometimes, and that being, the main character, takes to stealing diapers from younger sibling, or buy them from a pharmacy, usually they are able to fit the diapers despite them being toddler sized, parents find out, and A are very supportive and help their child by babying them and getting them all their own baby stuff, or B are not very supportive and " Help " their child by babying them and getting them all their Own Baby stuff ( in this case usually in hopes they'd get sick of it )

Ah, right, just did now, Thanks

Or " How ABDL literature has changed through the years ? " Okay, may be a bit of a strange thing to ask but let me first explain a bit about my self , You see One thing I enjoy doing is Reading Reading ABDL stories, and even giving very thoughtful reviews on stories If I get a chance too, and while I enjoy reading all sorts of stories, I have this sorta fascination with reading stories that are considered to be much older, stuff that was usually written well before my times of even being on the internet ( which was well over a decade now ) basically also anything written before the 2010's I'm interested in, and I've certainly come across quite a few stories that date back well before my common days of browsing the internet like I do now,, however from reading stories that date way back as far as the 80s it has got me a bit carious as to what others who may be like me and enjoy looking at older stories or have memories of reading older stories as they were still new, would have to say if they notice of How ABDL stories have changed over the course time, let me explain a bit. So What I mean by this is, have you ever noticed a certain Story genre or theme that was more Common back then in the earlier days of ABDL literature ? Like for me, something I tend to notice about older stories I come across, tended to mostly be about one's discovering of Wanting to wear diapers, usually of a Kid or teen protagonist ( with the occasional adult one ) sometimes the most common trend for a story being the " Bedwetter " and is made to wear diapers, which can also sometimes leads to a more, darker themes, which would be " Diaper punishment " ( which I know can still be around, but I never recall seeing seeming a common as as they seemed to be ), which I have notice a lot of older stories do have themes of being more on a cruel tone then commonly found today, like the main character being forced to wear a diaper as a form of discipline for a Varity of reasons, usually with the story of them being made to live with their Aunt or some close family friend, ( usually for the summer ),now I know the themes can not be for everyone ( I'm not super big on them myself, but do find a sort of fascination with them as they are part of what led me to discover the ABDL community a while back ) specially when it resolves around any character under the age of 18, which, yeah is something I tend to notice a bit more about older stories, stuff mostly found dating from the 90s to early and even Mid 2000s, were the main character is usually a Child one,. which I know can be a bit of a controversial element for a lot of people. specially again when it comes to the type of themes mentioned above, but either way, I feel like stories with a child as the main character was were far more common and accepted on many sites then they are these days. Now days I feel like stories tend to be less about The themes mentioned above ( you still find them from time to time, just, not as much as I would gather ) but instead I do feel like stories more common stories you'd find now, are ones with a more bizarre them, or adventurous take, like fantasy ABDL stories with themes of magic, mythical elements and other bizarre things alike ( Stories with Sci-fi Themes are another I tend to see more of these days ) you still find more " grounded " stories of course, but I know these types are something I'd not notice as much when searching the archives of ABDL literature. ( but there is probably still a lot more out there waiting to be discovered, so whos knows ) Also one element I think to have notice in older stories that pop up, would be the Use of Cloth diapers and rubber pants, now I have seen them in more recent stories, but almost all the old stories I tend to come across, usually have it that the main character wears Cloth diapers instead of disposables ( and I'm talking cloth with Pins and all, the old fashioned way ) which I think may have to do with when most of these stories were written by, let's say an older author of the time, could be the fact they were still using Cloths more commonly around the time they were young, so it could have been nostalgia thing. Anyway, with all that said, tell me, if you think there is anything you tend to notice about Stories of the past, vs stories being written today ? thanks a ton. Also, while on the Topic, I'd be carious to know what are some of your favorite " Classic " ABDL stories you've read or even enjoyed.

Ah, I see, well I understand, and again I think you still did a pretty good Job with adding much more depth and structure to this story, while keeping close to the material well enough for it not to stray off, which Is pretty neat for a first story attempt for sure. and yeah, plot holes can be a problem at times, but when you look at it, every story does have them, ( though sometimes it can be best to just role with them, sometimes ) and this version certainly does patch up a lot that the original did have at least. so still pretty good for what it did mange to fix. Also yeah I agree there are a lot of stories out their that left abandoned, too many to count, and a quite a few of those. certainly have some potential . and as for the Wndash's daycare story, to describe it basically, it was about a guy who get's trapped in an abandoned daycare with these little girls who have magic powers. . I'll send you a message more on it if you'd like, and as well as a few other things then I'd like to discuss. thanks. Oh, and thanks for the recommendation for your story, I'll make sure to go and check what I can and give my thoughts as well when I do.. .

Oh yeah No problem, When I read ABDL literature I love to be able to give my thoughts if I can, especially if a story does manage to captivate me enough ( instead of just saying if I liked it or not ), I like to give my detailed thoughts on a story, with what I both loved and think didn't work, but with that said I must also say this wasn't a bad job for a first attempt as a story as you say it is. Also as to what you say about Wndash's stories, despite that I did think they could push it on the realism factor and some did get a little disturbing at times. I can understand seeing them as Guilty pleasure, as I do think they did have some interesting Ideas that could have worked better with more time and structure put into them. ( as your remake certainly shows it ) and there are a few stories I was actually wanting to see be continued by them just to see where it'd go ( like their daycare story ) But I agree, the original was pushing it a bit much on just what William could endure. as there was a lot of scenarios that he could have ended up being dead from, like drowning, and suffocation could have accrued quite a few times but never became an issue. ( I'll Give Wndash some credit, they did know how to get creative some of their tortures though .) Your story did make things feel a bit more real, so that's why I did actually feel a bit more worried and bad for William as I felt there would be more serious outcomes to what he was put through. As for your characters, I can understand the trouble of it trying to stick close to the source material but still wanting to add to it as well to help improve. you certainly did do a good enough job, with stories it's important I feel to make people understand or hate a character for good reasons. And not just with writing ABDL literature but writing any story in general, and you removing some characters really did help, the whole will's short friend seemed really unnecessary, and opened a major plot hole where he decides to call him instead of his parents or the police, which after Jen captures him too only to later let him go, she warns him that if he tells anyone about this, she'll bring him back and torture him just like will, which makes no sense as that threat carries no weight once he was set free but he never does say anything. But yeah the problem with the original was it had no clear route in which it seemed to want to take, as you mentioned about W2 changing the name of the title,( to simply " Baby Girl " ? instead ) I think it had to do with them actually changing the whole setting of the story halfway through, when Jen decided to adopt Will and move him into her house with all her friends and drop out of school entirely ( did she not have parents or something ? ) Also yeah again I think the collage setting and her being the owner was a good choice, and probably one of the bigger improvements, so it can have it she could easily keep Will stashed away with out much risk of him being discovered, though I admit in the beginning It did confuse me as to where Jen's authority in her own school stands ( sense she can make choices for it without question and use it's money and have a special place for her own ( diabolical needs lol ) but also she's being asked by the school ( her own school ) to fill in for a temporary absent teacher which does seem a bit strange to ask someone like her, ( I may be missing something, but it's something that did pop into my head ) but yeah when it came to the original, it didn't make much sense to have everyone be okay with tormenting him, ( specially during the bit where they almost drowned him ) but as you say, a few assholes maybe, but not the entire school. And yeah, heh sorry, when it comes to stories of people being in situations they don't want to be in, I tend to think of ways they could have escaped as I read , I do it for all sorts of things and can be common in force regression scenarios, and even though he had a good opportunity to escape a few times, it was still entertaining and a little funny with some of his failed attempts, I do love the running Joke of him not getting noticed for not being a baby ( or a boy ) like when ever someone would just say how cute he looks and poke him on the chest after trying to get their attention ( and his reaction just being " crap " to one of them XD ( And thanks for the recommendation, I'll be sure to go and check out Be Good for Mommy when I can, I am carious to see what kind of story it'd be compared to this in terms of tone, could make the crossover more interesting to look back at.. ) Oh and yeah, in order for the story to work I can see the way you did have Jen be portrayed and there are tons of other ABDL stories with just cruel or insane characters who never seem to be questioned on their mental stability.)it's just interesting that this story does sorta go more into confirming it and I can see having Jen's more insane characteristics go unnoticed by others when they don't really know her, ( like with miss Mare ) the school though maybe I'd question if they'd check her background and notice her attitude a little, but also Jen does strike me as one who doesn't have any close relatives or friends sense she spends most of her time at the school or just with William ( kinda funny how in the original she was seen as a popular girl XD ) so no one probably has gotten to know her true colours. Now as for the Ending, first I must say I really do like the Idea of there being alternate endings, something I think would be neat to see in more ABDL stories,( though I don't think an actual good ending would have been a bad choice or have strayed too far from the original as you already did much to change and improve it, also it would have given a sort of Yin ang yang to the outcome for many readers. ) but still think it was neat you even decided to give it too endings. though I can understand you wanting to delete the " Bad " ending, it does push the realism and did seem a bit rushed, ( and personally for me I think it's darker then anything from the original story ) But if I did have to say one good thing about it, is that it sorta does show Jen getting what was coming to her, but also that I kind of see it as a Ironic Justice or turn of events for her. think about it ? Jen wanted Will to suffer just as she had, the way her mother made her suffer, so by having to put herself in her mothers place to make will Hurt,, she was basically setting herself up to the same fate, Her mother was stated being unstable just as Jen is shown to be, her mother is said to have been committed for her treatment of her daughter, the same fate that happens to jen for what she did to William, kinds seems like it was Irony showing her the outcome of both ends. ( Idk I just liked to look at it as that ) And I can see what you were getting at with the " Good " ending, and in the realm of fiction things like that can fly better I admit, though I still think that him regressing completely was a little bit sudden , as I feel something like that would no doubt have broken his sprits more then his mind, Like he'd probably give up trying to escape and just miserably let Jen do what she wants seeing nothing to fight for. ( but he'd still retain his sanity ) that would though mean he would probably someday make the attempt too, but he'd probably not see the point to do so for some time, until something inspires him to. but that probably would only drag the story, and this way, he doesn't really have to suffer at least. so I can sorta accept the choice made for it. But overall, I do think this was still a really good attempt at a first story, specially remaking something that had many issues to it. ( but you are right about the potential thing ) I really think it's neat you decided to do that. and while I think this story is much better then the original, I admit I'd be carious to see what a revamp could look like, but I still think this is a good attempt to fix a story, I certainly wouldn't mind seeing more stories with similar issues as the original get a similar treatment, be it a wr-write from the original authors or others trying their own hand and giving it re-work. But either way I do want to say, this was a good Job, and thank you for taking the time to write it. but also thanks a ton for taking the time to read and respond to my comment, much apricated , also if I may ask, would you be willing to chat maybe some more sometime ? ( messages ) I'd actually be really carious to know your opinions on some things maybe even more regarding this story ? but anyway, just want to say thanks again for your time and response.

Thanks a ton, it certainly does feel nice to be finally conversing with other people on such interests and such, thanks.

Thanks a lot for the welcome , and sorry to hear about those issues you faced for a while, but glad you could make a choice you found right for you.as for me, been having a very Good time on DD thus far with meeting some people and just getting share and discuss thoughts and interest's. I certainly look forward to else it will bring. thanks again for the kind welcome.

Even though it's certainly not " fast " Food.

When I was about about 12 or 13 I remember making a makeshift diaper out of a towel and my Swim shorts by folding the towel a certain way and sticking it into the shorts and sliding them on then rolling up the leg bits, I even recall wearing a plastic bag over it after I cut leg holes into it. lol it was the closest thing for me at the time that felt like wearing a diaper.

K, so Have you ever tried to eat a clock? It's very time consuming.

Okay after having read through this entire story and having actually gotten to read the original ( before it was taken down along with wndash's other stories,) I wanted to share my thoughts on the story , especially sense you took the time to actually re-write it. so here I go, oh and just a heads up, this may be a bit long. lol Now Firstly, I do enjoy a story with some themes of humiliation, forced regression and even femininization, ( mainly when I'm in the mood for them ) it was what originally drew me toward the original, even though that story could get a bit extreme for my taste, which yes this one also did as well in some parts, it at least it however doesn't go to the levels of the Original, but looking back,the original I really didn't see as a very well written story and this version while I admittedly do have some issues with it, ( I'll get to later ) still did quite a lot to improve upon that story, which are certainly worth mentioning first. like here's What I think are the biggest improvements over the original, firstly, the characters , Mainly Jen, going from this crazy one-dimensional bully who tortures William for no reason, to a , still very insane and cruel character, but one who has a motive, a crazy one yes, but a motive at least. that certainly helped the story quite a bit and in a way made things much more personal, I'm almost a bit curious to know how bad her own punishment was that made her resent William so much. also speaking of, William was improved a little too, not much but at least he had a bit of back story to him as well and something to sort of explain his condition and I do certainly feel bad for him in this, maybe even more so in this version, sure he was more innocent in original ( not to say this version he was a bad person or anything ) , but the overall tone of it didn't really make me feel much for any of the characters. it does pay when you make your characters actually have some, well, character to them. Secondly the overall flow of the story, where in the original it kind of seemed to not know where it wanted to go ( being just torture after torture ) being full of many potholes and seemed to just be making up its logic as it went along,, this version at least has a more straight forward narrative and somewhat more grounded logic to fallow, sure it's still not the most realistic story, but it at least made itself feel more like piece of flowing literature And the last few, the fact the setting was completely changed from a High school one to a collage one,( which does make it more comfortable to read as well ) and making Jen the sort of be the owner of place and having her the only one to be aware of what's happening to William,. as I recall in the original, she had a bunch of friends helping her and even got most of the school to be aware but none of them did anything about it, all that is certainly what helped improve itself from that version. Now, however as I mentioned before, I do still feel there are some issues with this version as well and I'll just say now I know this story is just fictional so it's going to have things that'll push it's realism but these are still things that came to my mind when reading or looking back at it, however, i'm just going state the main things that did stick out to me. So, firstly, I do think there a lot of ways in in which William could of gotten out of his situation or at least could have made more attempts to escape, like example at the daycare, he could have done something like suddenly start acting like he was very sick ( coughing, and doubling over in pain ect ) or even act like he was choking on something, as either way I'm sure that'd quickly alert and prompt Miss Mare to attempt to remove his pacifier to see what was wrong or even call 911, thus no doubt putting an end to Jen's scheme right there, ( note, I never read the story those characters from that chapter were from, but I'm still guessing that's how most people would react to such a situation ) Also even though I do think Jen is much better written compared to her original counterpart , I do think that for someone as crazy and clearly unstable as her, ( which seems to be hinted to run in her family ) would have a hard time keeping her appearance as a normal person the way she does for others before something would be said about her , I know crazy people can appear normal when you first meet them but over time, true colours do begin to show ( believe me ) and she's shown not to be very stable with her own mood a few times. Also her whole revenge plan on william, again it nice she has a motive, but, seeing as her back story happened when she was very young, ( with william only being five ) it does seem a bit of a stretch that she'd be able to prepare everything for him years later when she didn't even seem know him very well or his name at the time, and if she did, would at least have a hard time remembering it all the years after everything she had went through. ( specially his last name if she also learned it ) and I'm not so sure if she could even be aware of his condition at that time either as was never said if it was showing then, yet she still had all things specially prepared for him when he arrived at the collage. And finally, for me personally the two endings. now it's not just because they both end on a bad ( note, I can accept a bad ending from time to time , though I certainly was rooting for William, and I think a actual " good ending " could have worked out as well ) but because they did push my suspension of disbelief the most out of everything I mentioned, firstly, I'll start with the " bad " end, while I do think it was more logical to call the cops as appose to his mother, and can sorta accept the fact he didn't attempt to yell Jen's full name into the phone quickly before she grabbed it, my issue is mainly that Jen just happened to know or find someone who'd have to be as insane as her to perform such a surgical procedure described ( as they did so without even checking with the patient first ) and does open a bunch of questions on the medical elements that do need to go into it . but what also is a little bit hard to understand is how she also manages to escape the mental asylum she being held in and obtain and Mr bunny ( which I'm sure would have been confiscated as evidence along with all the other stuff she had to torment William. ) and get it too his place just as her whereabouts have gone local on the news ? honestly I felt that this end did seem to be really stretching it the most. As for the " Good " ending , while better than the previous, it still does have it's issues, like with her just happening to know some doctor who doesn't question anything about " sissy " but mainly it does seem a bit sudden that he'd just snap and regress to the sort of infant mental state the way he did, even for the reason given, I guess it doesn't help that I never been a big fan of mental regression ( as it sort of seems like killing a person, just not physically ) though I can at least accept it if it has a more backed up reason to it, like brainwashing or even magic ( which wouldn't fit here obviously ) but here it does seem like a bit of a sudden or rushed outcome. So then, even with those issues I do have with it, I certainly do still think this version is better written then the original, as I do appreciate how you did take the time to actually re-work and give what was certainly not even an attempt to be cohesive story and give it much more depth and structure. And most of all, an ending, again sure the ending's don't really work for me, but it is something I can at least again appreciate that fact that you went and did. also I certainly did enjoy many parts of this story( like when Jen did take him out to the park or even the daycare chapter despite what I said on it and I did like most of humiliations he endured ,heh heh but with that said it is basically my main overall thoughts on this story which had no doubt been an most intriguing and for lack of better words, captivating read.

I love using pacifiers, I only have a couple right now but always on the look out for getting more ., but I love using a them when I'm just browsing online, usually in the evening or when I'm reading some ABDL stories, as it's not just relaxing but puts me in the mood of things as I do that.

Oh thank you very much for the welcome ! heh heh

Just edited my first post to fix that, heh heh. but yeah I agree with you, forced cross dressing or Forced feminization is another big thing for me and partially I think what led me to discover I think the ABDL community because one of the first stories I can recall that dealt that Diapers I think was in fact a sissification story as it was basically about male character being made to dress as a baby girl, at the time I didn't really know much about my Diaper desires or anything like that, but it stuck with me as especially humiliating to be treated and scene in such a way, for me sissy stuff is mainly for the Humiliation I feel from it and not much else unlike my thoughts on just being treated like a Baby boy, which as I say in my original post varies.

Humiliation for me has always been a big part of my fetish side, and admittedly is what led me to discover the ABDL community in the first place when I recall reading some stories that dealt with Diapers being used as more of a Humiliation. after that the Idea just really appealed to me, the thought of being dressed as a baby, just excited me, just the thought of wearing diapers alone was an Embarrassing , but the thought of being seen in them and being treated " appropriately " how you look was even more Humiliating . I used to fantasize about being in such scenarios were I was being forced to wear diapers and act like a baby in public, being made to suck on a pacifier and wearing a diaper and baby clothing, usually being pushed around in a big stroller while people would laugh and tease me, and all that kind of stuff. now I'd never wanted that to happen to me in real life as it was just fantasy, and I even remember feeling a bit of guilt for thinking about such things, but I couldn't deny it was such an exciting thought for me..hence why back then I think I always preferred reading stories that were more about forced regression, or stories that did deal with, * ahem * Diaper punishment . So basically, I really enjoyed the humiliation aspect of things , However over time, My interests and feelings on being Diapered and babied began to have mixed feelings, I later began to adapt a more comforting feeling with them, as I got a little older I began to find the Idea of wearing Diapers still a bit embarrassing, but also comforting,,which led me to finding more of the appeal of be babied, I started to fantasies more about being diapered to feel young and innocent again and even began to enjoy more stories that involved such scenarios. Now were I am now, my fantasies about being humiliated wearing diapers are still there and I imagine will always be there, it's something I learned to accept . I just have a slight different outlook on the thing as a whole, when it comes to stories, I don't always enjoy forced regression as much now, but I still find myself drawn to them, and I know what still draws me to them, it;s the humiliation concepts they have, I suppose now looking at it just depends on what mood I'm in, do I want to be treated as a baby to feel humiliated, or do I wan't to so I can feel Young and innocent ( maybe both ? ). it's funny how some things just turn out.

Thanks a ton for the welcome, it feels great to finally come out and start to wanting speaking with others on such things. thank you again.

Heh heh, Thank you very much, I'll be sure to have a great time .. thank you again Thanks very much for the welcomes will be sure to enjoy my time !

Uh hello there, you can just call me Flaresnare if you want heh , I been sort of a lurker here for a short while, however mainly from just reading stories and viewing some posts on various topics, I just wanted to to keep it short, and say that as of late, I had been getting more and more confidant about coming out to join in on things, though despite my Lurking I am still a bit new to how things work around here, but am eager to get more familiar with this place and see more of what it has to offer, and in no time I imagine that'll be the case. also I hope to eventually get involved more in the forums in some way and meet all sorts of nice and interesting people in the process.