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Mugi

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  1. Okay, this story has piqued my interests! I like ABDL storys with this concept. Are you looking for constructive critism Nick? my critism is that at the end of chapter 2 it felt kind of rushed, has the stockholm syndrome already started after a day and he wonders if it would be better to be in diapers. Why would that be better instead of a life of crime? It feelt so suddenly considering how he cried moments before because he wet his diaper. There should be some good things to happen to him before he starts to think why a life in diapers would be better. Not trying to hate just thought it could improve you as a writer because you have potential! Keep up the good work!!! 😀👏💯
  2. Yeah this is true Perhaps this is one of the things that makes Personalias such a great writer! I don't know what I do in his position but I'm sure it could possibly be something similar or who knows maybe even worse!? And maybe it makes Clark a bit more sort of in a way relatable! Atleast it humanises him! Can't wait for the next chapter!
  3. That was one hell of a chapter! Even if I dislike Beouff for not looking at Clark as a person anymore or less and more of just someone who only has "maturosis" What Clark did was truly awful. A good plan for him but really evil. It was so bad of him to make her breakdown so much and get so sad!
  4. Damnit Clark why declare Victory!? Why not try and still pretend to be innocent? Know Beouff and the rest are gonna go extra hard on him I bet! Was a very funny chapter though, would love to see the scene with all the littles puking xD A nice contrast to this otherwise quite dark DD story.
  5. Hey Eve, Just wanted to say I miss chatting with you and Elle.

    Hope everything is good in your lives! ?

    XOXO. Ollie

  6. Story is getting sweeter and cuter for every chapter. This is really a feel good abdl story and I love it!!!
  7. Oh wow. I'm so glad Joey got to see what happend to these awful twins. Good for him! ? I just hope he is mature enough not to make the twins punishment even worse, sure messing with them a little bit might be fine but I feel he is morally superior to them, would be a shame if he fell down to the twins level. Excellent story Elfy!
  8. Assistant Nurse here, work in Eldercare ?
  9. In Sweden there are a few rare stores for handicap people and they carry cloth backed diapers, but they are very very rare because you are supposed to get the diapers you need from the country with tax payers money. Our Pharmacies started to carry some years ago pull ups and single use bed protectors. Us abdl people here in Sweden gets most of our diapers through online stores like Maxdiaper or Save, Diaper-minister etc Some fools actually go the route to get them prescribed and get diapers for free(Thanks to tax paying citizens like me) But that is ofcourse frowned upon, diapers should only be prescribed for those who really needs it for medical reasons.
  10. I'm wearing an Alphagatorz, plastic pants with says I heart mommy on the back and PJs with a hippo from Kiddo(Diaper-minister) I hope the Alphagatorz wont leak in bed because I already wet them once!
  11. I really like the book, I love that we have such a good doctor for our interests making books and helping in court cases. Go Dr.Rhoda!!! ?????
  12. Looks like even Jane is tired of her kids antics, I do wonder what will happen to Max and Megan this summer ? For doing that to poor Joey they sure deserve to become the laughing stock at that school!
  13. I just wanted to say I still consider this story top 5, Still debating sometimes if it might be my favorite story(No hate to all the other great great writers here) ?? No pressure but looking forward to the next chapter! ?
  14. Now I have caught up with this story! I like it a lot, Sofia you are one of the bests when it comes to abdl stories! ? I can't believe someone who isn't abdl would have the balls to go this dimension and stay at a dorm in Emerson if they knew how bad things are. Connor is straight up craz-ay! ? But I'm sure it will all turn out all alright after that little incident he had right Sofia? Not like he is going to get babied more right??
  15. That twist really got me, I had no clue that it was Liams parents who where behind the stress free campaign and black mailing. Really good story so far! ?
  16. Time to buy book 3! ?? Will give the books 5 star rating so more people can perhaps buy it! ?
  17. Oh heck to the yeah! ?????? I bought both books because I love your work Sofia and want to support you in a easy and simple way for me! I will purchase the third book and other works from you when I see them on amazon! Thanks for your great stories ❤️
  18. ABU AlphagatorZ, it's my second one and I like them! Pretty comfy and cute!
  19. The chapter was great Crono! I hope Kairi will be able to save Sean but in the end he gets willingly adopted by Zoe but not manipulated by it. He realises it's his only option if he wants to live a reasonable happy life. ?
  20. It's a nice story! If you want some advice. You could make the story go slower, maybe flesh out the characters. That gives readers more to relate to instead of mostly abdl things. And it could make the story longer! ?
  21. Nice story, looks like someone is in need of some bonding time ?
  22. Like what others have said, Can't wait for the new chapter. This story is so incredibly good, one of my favorite abdl stories! ??
  23. Great chapter as always Personalias, BUT to give some critique I do find it a bit wierd how Clark went from a well needed outburst of rage, I get that this baby treatment would pent up more and more anger. But I can't really see how he went from raging to terrified, sure the spanking of a lifetime might be hella scary but I just can't see how he gets terrified IMO it's more realistic if he cant become afraid because he is so furious. I could see him breaking down during the spanking but I could not grip the part that he broke down before and even used the mommy word. Otherwise its like I said great just that part I was not fond of.
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