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  1. bje
    I think that should read Lauren instead of April in both lines.
  2. bje
    I just read chapter 4 (It rolled over and over and over) and think this is very good story. I like a friendly story with nice persons. I just have a few comments on what could be improved to make even better: It seems inconsistent that Jack wonders if Lauren would be in sixth or fifth grade if he is not sure she can keep up in fifth grade. I understand this from the plot, but it doesn't harmonize with the fact that the story is told in first person with very good command of language. The "I" person's language is much better than Lauren's language would be. She couldn't be seven as she lost her parents just after eight year birthday.
  3. bje
    The pieces are set up wrong with pawns at both the first and eighth row in the photo. The photographed position is therefore not a valid chess position!
  4. bje
    Thank you for your reply. I misunderstood the text. Yes, twenty-four hundred hours is 8 pm in the Diaper Dimension when using a 16 hour clock. I thought that he converted to Earth time.
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    Sorry, but I have another question about the mathematics of history. 24 hours is halfway between noon (16) and midnight (32). I would think that it is equivalent to 6 pm in our world. How does Connor arrive at that it equals 8 pm?
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    BMI is based on the height squared, where it would give more useful values to use the height cubed, because the body has three dimensions. Therefore, taller people always have higher BMI values than shorter people for people with the same build. Body proportions also change with age, which also affects the ideal BMI some. When Connor's three-dimensional body is reduced equally in all three dimensions, his new measurements should be 48 inches and 40 pounds. His new BMI will be smaller because of the reduced height, but will not equal the BMI for children of the same height, since children and adults are not built alike. See also https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Body_mass_index#Scaling and https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2912631/
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    Another thing: The arrival height (48 inches) is 61.5% of the pre-arrival height (78 inches). If he still has the same proportions, I would expect the same proportional reduction in width and thickness. So shouldn't the new weight be 170 pounds times 61.5% to the third power which rounded off is 40 pounds?
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    I'm a little confused about the units. Aren't lbs and pounds the same thing? If so, why is it stated differently? And why is the pre-arrival height in feet and the arrival height in inches? I would think an automatic measurement system would be consistent. I'm already challenged by US units and the variation doesn't make it any easier.
  9. bje
    That's a good theory. I didn't consider that.
  10. bje
    No, I didn't know that. That is not an area I have researched.
  11. bje
    Thanks for a new story! The main character in several of BabySophia's stories changes gender. My guess is that Connor will turn into Callie before long (as per the name on the potty chart on the title page)
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    I haven't read it but the description sounds similar to a story which someone asked about in this thread in 2018: There was an answer suggesting "Keilani's Long Vacation" by ToddCheese which can be found at deviantart.com (https://www.deviantart.com/toddcheese/gallery) or https://toddcheese.tripod.com/Keilani.html. That could be Guinea pig by TheJ:
  13. bje
    From chapter 10 before they return to Earth Prime: And from chapter 12 when Paige is home again: Seems like magic that Paige is suddenly dry again without having been changed. Shouldn't that be: "... when I stole the statue from you."
  14. bje
    I meant Witch in Training. Sorry that I referred to it as the previous story which it is not. I found it extreme that a village and all its inhabitants were wiped out in Witch in Training, and as I wrote I was glad there is nothing similar in Thief in Service. So I have no problem with "the odd bit of violence" in TiS. Why should I avoid your stories from now on when I found it good, as I wrote as the very first thing in my comment? I find it logical to continue with the next story when this one was good in my opinion. Well, incontinence from Amazon milk is a permanent injury even if he's happy with it. The person who orders and pays for a criminal act to be performed is just as guilty as the person who performs the act. And excuse me, but it's bullshit that Alex didn't expect the jewel to be stolen. She directly said "I hired a guy to find a thief" in the story. That makes Alex a thief in the eyes of both the law and me.
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    That was good history. I was nervous to read it because the previous story was so extreme and unpleasantly violent, but was pleasantly surprised that no one (except Christian) was permanently injured or killed. It was also fun to hear about the other kinks that were presented. On the other hand, I'm disappointed to hear that Alex is a thief. I didn't think she was a criminal and I'm disappointed that she is. It's somewhat hypocritical that she was upset about being robbed and punishes burglars when she uses the same method to make her collection. I am also stunned by the violent tone of some of the comments on the story. Death threats are never okay, even if they may have been made in jest. I will understand if some don't want to post their stories in this forum because they are afraid of the reactions.
  16. bje
    She wasn't? This quote from the story seems to me to say so:
  17. bje
    Paige wasn't comfortable where Alex took her, and then she selects a place where Alex isn't comfortable. Neither acts considerately. They need to work on better communication.
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    I have now reached the end of the story, except that the story did not really end. I think the story has two parts. It starts as a sweet love story, and the tag "romance" is justified. I loved how the story began. But suddenly midway through, it turns into a war story that is not but should be tagged with "extreme violence". The second half can also be part of a good story but I'm not happy that one kind of story turns into something completely different. I also wonder that we do not hear about how the annihilation of an entire village affects the protagonists and especially Rose mentally. One had to think that she was really upset that an entire village was wiped out and all the inhabitants killed because she had sought refuge in the village. (I'm not saying it's her fault, but it would be strange if it did not affect her deeply.) There are also many unresolved and open questions such as the seemingly spontaneous healing of Rose's breast that must have happened and subsequent resuscitation of her, as well as the mysterious artifact which allows some to conjure without using a wand. If such artifacts exist, it is strange that no one else knows how to conjure without a wand. And where did Rose get the artifact from? All in all, I feel like too much is unexplained in the story. So I liked some things in the story very much, and other things not so much.
  19. bje
    In chapter 29 "Playdate", Noelle is put in a crawler nappy: Then Noelle's hidden memories resurfaces, the council attacks, and after it is over, this happens in chapter 32: Now I just wonder how is Noelle able to run so far in that nappy when she cannot even stand in it?
  20. bje
    I got the impression that this story is placed in @BabySofia's version of DD because DiaperedPrince earlier in a comment on page 2 wrote:
  21. bje
    Even if that does apply for Amazons, I will find unlikely that it applies for Littles too. You will not expose babies and by extension Littles to danger. I fail to see why it should be safer to be unharressed in a big vehicle than in a small. You will still fly around in the car in case of an accident. And tourist buses e.g. isn't excluded from using the car seats. That's not reasonable either. I would expect a law abiding car AI to enforce the safety rules for the passengers and stop the vehicle as soon as it is safe to do so if she unbuckled herself.
  22. bje
    Again a nice chapter and a fancy car, but not much happened plotwise in chapter 7. I wonder why Izzy didn't ask the car (Luxuria) where they are heading. I was a little surprised that Izzy is able to undo a standard Little-proof harness buckle, and also able to untape her diaper from the orphanage. Wasn't the orphanage diaper Little proof, or can she untape it anyway like the buckle? By the way shouldn't she be harnessed in Luxuria? I thought that is the law regarding Littles in cars, and Luxuria seems to follow other laws (the International Data Protection Laws for privacy, and the Maturity Laws for only serving non-alcoholic drinks). Is two sippy cups of apple juice really enough dinner for Izzy? Why didn't she ask for more food? Her stomach growled,so she must have been hungry.
  23. bje
    Nice! I'm glad that Izzy is on the way to freedom in Canada. I thought that Mike would somehow arrange an adoption of Izzy and hadn't guessed that she would be rescued and smuggled to Canada by the Little Railroad. The rescuer in the black combat suit should though have warned Izzy that their driver is an Amazon (but then there would be no need to gag her - and it would be less fun for the readers). ?
  24. bje
    Still intriguing! But the story progress is limited with so short chapters.
  25. bje
    Good writing. It is too early to know if I care for the content, but the first chapter was interesting enough that I will continue with the next chapter, and I found it positive that you wrote "except without all the rapey murdery stuff".
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