Jump to content
LL Medico Diapers and More Bambino Diapers - ABDL Diaper Store

sklawlor

Members
  • Posts

    129
  • Joined

  • Last visited

Everything posted by sklawlor

  1. oh man, he's going to be in more trouble than he's ever been in his life. He took a gamble and lost enormously.
  2. as much as I hate redge, it wouldn't make sense from a literary standpoint to just have him disappear. You did a really good creepy job of bringing him back, I figured that he was the masked person. I can tell this is going to get really intense.
  3. Hi there. Since i'm totally blind and my screen reader can't interpret the graphic of the timeline, is there a way that you could post a text version if it's not too much trouble? Thanks for the help if possible.
  4. this is such a cute story, I love reading every new chapter and you're writing is very good.
  5. I love the explanation of pandora's box aka the pocket demention, that's hysterical. a rusted gardener's jar. lol.
  6. I'm not really creative when it comes to story ideas but I vote for a sequel. This was a great story and that last chapter was just so cute and sweet.
  7. someone needs to turn redg into a baby with some nano technology. I hope addi becomes his care giver.
  8. Jamie is going to be in enormous trouble. I wonder if one of the other women will accidentaly pick up his mom's phone ans see the baby monitor app? I get the feeling she forgot to close it before she put the phone in the pile with the others.
  9. great chapters. I can't imagine the spanking will be too severe with his mom right in the kitchen.
  10. good start, loking forward to reading more.
  11. oh man, that's just creepy. phase three is going to be horrible for her.
  12. I'm a bit mixed up. If lucy is the demon from the first story and in that story, if I recall, it was voctoria who was her mommy, where did Samantha come from? Maybe I have the characters mixed up, keeping them all straight in my head has always been a challenge, it's one of the reasons I couldn't finish return of the king, I couldn't keep up with all the characters. By the way, that's not a criticism of any type, I love your stories, just hoping I'm making the right connections from the first to the second in terms of the characters.
  13. I would have never guessed that you only have these two stories. that's a testament to how good your writing is. I was an English major in college and actually wanted to be a novelist but after I dropped out of a graduate program in counselling, I got a synthesizer and discovered that I'm much better at putting sounds together than words.
×
×
  • Create New...