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sklawlor

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  1. this is a really good story. Your writing reminds me a bit of John Sandford. check out the Lucas Davinport series if you're not familiar with it, it's great.
  2. this is a nice story, hoping it continues.
  3. oh that was a great story.
  4. How did I know she was going to be caught?
  5. I agree with everyone here, on the one hand, it's a nice little story the way it is but there's room for expanding it. Either way, I liked it.
  6. yeah, I don't understand that either. this is just way over the top but everyone is different. won't be reading updates on this one.
  7. wow, what a great ending. i can't wait to read witch in training 2, the first one was great. You're as prolific in writing as I am in my music and i'm loving all of it.
  8. nice wrap up. good story as always. Not sure what the next story will be about but I'm looking forward to reading when it becomes available here.
  9. this doctor is the most deplorable sexist asshole I've ever encountered in a story. I'd like to see a story where he's the stupid baby. I guess some people get into the whole denegration thing and normally I would have just clicked away but this character made me so angry.
  10. I liked this, only one suggestion. at times, the voicing shifts between first and second person which is a bit distracting. I think it only happened that way in the first two chapters but overall, I liked the story.
  11. wondering who came to the door? I wonder if anyone from another demension is going to save her?
  12. totally agree with moon on this one. by the way, what is FF7 Rebirth? is that a video fame?
  13. this was a fantastic story, I can't wait to read the sequel, whenever it will be complete. I put you up there with little fallen princess, cute kitten and minosota writer for creating some of the most compelling fiction on this forum.
  14. I think Lindie is one of my favorite characters in this story. The interactions of her and Clark are great.
  15. curious aobut what the favor is?
  16. this is a good story so far. looking forward to reading more.
  17. yay, I was hoping that she would have elected to stay in town with her friends.
  18. put a pin in having her try diapers. clever word play.
  19. glad to see this one has returned. looking forward to the next update.
  20. what a great chapter.
  21. yeah, I had the same thought. can't tell who it is yet, maybe Eve doesn't know or has anything to do with it. After all, olivia hasn't witnessed Charlie taking the pills firsthand in either of these last two instances but I don't know why she would betray her wife like this.
  22. I really like this story.
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