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She's really screwed now, huh? There aren't many ways to leave Preston.

Time to flex my limited knowledge of phonetics. While stops like /t/ and /d/ can be dental, they are also commonly articulated along the alveolar ridge (which Beth probably has, considering the gum implants). Another problem would be /f/ and /v/, but you can substitute those for the bilabial fricatives, which are made using only the lips, and almost sound the same. Most phonemes in English have some kind of acceptable substitute that could be made, if the teeth weren't there. You should check out the International Phonetic Alphabet, it shows all the different sounds your mouth can produce, and how they're produced. It's a lot of fun trying to make some of the weirder (for an English speaker) phonemes.

This was really cool of you to do. Looking forward to the other chapters, if you decide to narrate those.

Oh man, this makes my stomach churn. Scary stuff.

Hopefully that sweetness comes around soon. Poor, poor Seenit needs it. You don't need to be sorry! Take all the time you need.

Really enjoyed this story! It was a captivating ride all the way to the end, and it was cool to see you come back from such a long hiatus.

Just thought I'd throw in, as someone who's already read all of the story, Lillikol is one of my favorite stories by you two. It's either tied with or just behind Evil Lolita Club. You guys did a good job with worldbuilding and explaining it in a way that really draws the reader (or me, at least) in. On top of that, all of the characters are really well done. Maisie seems like a teenager, a teenager going through a rough time. She was never really close with her parents, now they're dead, and she's been shoved into a foreign culture and surrounded by new people. She's gonna act combative and stubborn and... like a teenage girl in a bad spot. You both have done a great job writing her. Sugar's a pretty great character too. She's obviously a product of Lillikol's culture, but she's at least somewhat empathetic to Maisie's plight. Her struggle was represented well. I haven't been reading the comments here, so I don't know what criticisms people are throwing your way, but I've been stopping in to give each story-post a like, despite already having read the story, just because I like it that much. It's a really good read, and you've both done a wonderful job.

The only thing I can think of is that Ella's mom tried to kill Ella, almost succeded, realized what she was doing or was stopped by the Coach, then killed herself. No matter what actually happened, there's no way that lie works out in the long term for Heather and Rose.

A diaper dimension story from the Personalias? ? This is gonna be good.

Any chance of a continuation of Emerald Princess someday? ?

The dynamic between Ivy and Holly, the deception included, are what makes this story interesting, in my opinion. That's where the focus of the story seems to be. There isn't the same kind of conflict that existed in Exchanged, Emerald Princess or Undercover Tour. The potential for personal conflict between two characters makes this quite different than your other stories, and that's great!

This is just great. Makes me like Kinsley a whole lot more.

I feel really bad for Sabrina. You always write the most sympathetic characters, so it makes it hard to read. Hopefully, there's a bright light at the end of the tunnel, that doesn't involve Stockholm syndrome or something.

Sabrina might've been better off going homeless, depending on what kind of "talk" her and Kinsley are going to have.

That's understandable. Both this story and Fear of Missing Out are incredible, but they don't get much love. The emphasis on spanking might not appeal to everyone, but both stories are amazing for the niche they fill.

Great story! You did an excellent job making the mystery interesting and exciting. Thanks for sharing it with us!

Will do!

Seems like it's going to be an interesting weekend. Certainly, nothing could go wrong.

Cute seems like a stretch, but I'll take it! There might be another story sometime in the future, but it's up in the air.

Thank you for reading! At least somebody liked the ending. ?

Sorry, not gonna happen. ? I think I want to do more with Hailey and Kaylee in the future. Maybe just another short story like this one. There's some potential for world-building and cute situations. It makes me happy, though, that you like the story enough to want to write it and continue it yourself. You could always write in the same, not-really-established universe! It's not like I own it, and it's just a pretty vague globalized-fetish setting.

Unfortunately, that is it. Maybe there'll be a sequel someday, and your eternal punishment won't be quite so eternal. ? Thank you for reading, though! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Hopefully, you all enjoy the final part of this story. I'm not too pleased with how it turned out, but it is what it is. Sorry for how this one turned out. I got it out in time for Halloween, though. Speaking of the holiday, Happy Halloween! -- The embarassment, which Hailey had been fighting all night, finally won. Her face turned as red as a tomato. How could this have happened? There she was, a grown woman, on the floor trying to wet her diaper, in front of her not-crush. Sure, he was certainly wearing a diaper too, but that didn't matter much to Hailey. She knew she'd set this up. She knew she wanted something like this, but still. She decided that she had to respond. "Y-yes." "Number one or number two?" Hailey's face burned. Was this a normal question between big babies? "Number one." She surprised herself, by saying that with no stuttering. Even being able to respond at this point was an achievement to her. "I know just the thing for that. Be right back." And as fast as he appeared, he was gone. Hailey wondered what he could mean. The first thing that popped into her mind was a diuretic. Their parents had sometimes given Kaylee diuretics and laxatives, but it wasn't very often. It was doubtful that Avery had some on hand, or that he could convince Lindsey to give him some. However, that possibility wasn't out of the question. Before Hailey could consider options, the bee-suited boy was back. A sippy-cup was in each hand. One of them quickly ended up in her hands. The liquid inside looked a bit like grape juice, but it was a lighter shade of reddish-purple. She had studied it for only a second, when Avery began to encourage her. "Go ahead, drink it." He took a long gulp of his own drink, something orange. Deciding to trust him, Hailey took a swig of the drink. Immediately, she recognized the flavor. It was cranberry juice. Of course, the sugary beverage had been heavily watered down. A few more sips, and she was half-way done with her drink. She wasn't sure if she really had been that thirsty, or if the sippy-cup just didn't hold that much. Either way, it didn't matter much to her. "Thanks, Avery." He raised one of his eyebrows in a questioning manner. Hailey mentally kicked herself. She was Kaylee tonight, so she wasn't supposed to even know Avery existed, much less know his name. He'd really thrown her off of her game. Thankfully, he didn't call her out on the apparent slip-up. Instead, he just took sat down next to her on the playmat. To Hailey, Avery sat down a bit too close. Toddlers weren't renowned for respecting personal space, so why would an overgrown toddler be? "So, you're Hailey's twin?" The girl wondered how he knew her actual name. They'd never talked before. Beyond that, she wasn't sure how that question should be answered. Should she lie to him? Despite doing it the whole night, she somehow felt bad about lying to Avery. She didn't have long to way the advantages and disadvantages of that decision, however. The boy was staring right at her, with his piercing and studious gaze. She had taken too long. "Uh, yeah. I'm Kaylee. How do you know my sister?" Very subtle, Hailey thought. Not that he had much reason to suspect her real identity, but he had to see something wrong now. There was too long of a pause before she answered, and she felt too unconfident about it anyway. Should she have said that? Lying to Lindsey was one thing. They had been friends for ages, and they could clear up any misunderstandings later. Avery was a stranger, who she had a distinct interest in. First impressions are always the most important, and Hailey felt like she was messing up his impression of her. He began after his own pause. "We've had a few classes together. I'm pretty good with names." He nodded, as if confirming what he said to himself. Hailey didn't really no how to respond to that, so she nodded her head too. She was much more focused on something else. Was Avery suspicious? The costumed girl wasn't sure. She'd already given him multiple reasons to be. "So, are you pretty new to this?" He asked. "New to what? "The adult baby stuff. Not many of us struggle to go potty." Hailey remembered her own embarassment. Her blushing was definitely not stopping anytime soon. Potty-talk seemed to really get to her. "Yeah, I guess I'm new to it." She still silently hoped that he would never talk to her friends or family. If he did, what appeared to be a successfully-kept secret wouldn't be so secret. "Why'd you decide to make the switch?" Now she was getting worried again. "S-switch? What do you mean by that?" Smooth, very smooth, Hailey thought. He gave her a kind of dumb look. "From big girl to little girl, duh." Of course, Hailey thought. He couldn't have meant anything else. She had to get back into her rhythm from earlier. Her thoughts had to be Kaylee's thoughts. Now, she had to come up with an answer. Why is Kaylee still an adult baby? Besides a lack of potty-training. The simplest answer was probably the best. "Because it looked fun." "Looked fun?" For whatever reason, he was curious. "Well, the diapers are comfy, cute and convenient." She didn't mention that she liked to use them. That might be too much information to give. "Less responsibility is cool." That was a pretty common reason for everyone. "And the toys look fun." That was a lie. Mostly, it was a lie. Sure, there were maybe a couple toys Hailey could see herself liking, but the majority of them were on the level of real baby toys. However, it was quite a Kaylee-like thing to say. He stared at her, as if analyzing her face to see if she answered truthfully. Hailey felt like he was deeply studying her face this time. Her mind was abuzz with thoughts. Did he think she was lying? Did he think she was actually Hailey, somehow? Was he staring at her cause he liked her too? Did he like adult babies? Did she like him? This was the longest conversation they had ever had, and she wasn't even herself! There was pressure building in her bladder by this point too. Was there a diuretic in there, or did the cranberry juice go through her that fast? Eventually, he nodded again. "Wanna play?" Without waiting for a response, he stood up and walked over to the toy chest, ignoring the numerous toys scattered everywhere. Hailey figured that she'd passed whatever test he was putting her through. She didn't really want to play with any of Carrie's toys, but she'd live. The masquerade had to be kept up, and she wasn't gonna pass up doing anything with Avery. She decided to look at the TV while waiting for him. Some animated flick about a monstrous house. She'd never seen it, and it didn't interest her much. Still, it was preferable entertainment compared to the doll next to her. When Avery came back, he had a single toy car. He laid down on his stomach next to Hailey, and then he started running the car along the playmat. Hailey had been under the impression that they'd play together. Even though it was silly, she felt a little hurt. "Hey, hurry up and find a toy, let's play." That at least seemed like an invitation to jump in. She looked around for something suitable. Unsurprisingly, that might've been Carrie's only toy car. Hailey wondered if it was even her toy. Maybe a cousin had left it there or something. Every other plaything in the room was girly and not conductive to whatever game of pretend Avery was playing. Figuring that it didn't matter much, Hailey grabbed the plush doll from earlier and laid down next to Avery. Kids don't necessarily care if what they're playing with fits with a theme. Neither of the two playmates paid much attention to the time. Avery, much like any adult baby, lost himself in playing. Hailey, not really an adult baby, was less passionate about it. She still tried her hardest to enjoy herself. This was her chance to try it out, after all. Trying it out with Avery didn't hurt either, in her opinion. So, she tried her hardest to play along. It wasn't quite clear if the two were on the same page in their game of pretend, but it didn't matter much to her playmate, so Hailey didn't care either. They just played. Hailey's attention was only broken, when the pressure in her bladder became ever-present. The cranberry juice from earlier had done its job. She was certain she could pee now. Her diaper would be soaked, just like she wanted. Avery was still playing, when Hailey moved into a crouched position. He knew what she was doing. Not wanting to stop playing, he didn't pay her any mind. At least, not until a few more minutes passed. She was still crouching there. Hailey's face was still red—from embarassment or from exertion, neither could tell. Despite trying with all of her might, Hailey couldn't go. She wondered how it was so easy earlier. There was almost no struggle doing it in front of Kaylee. When Avery had walked in on her, the difficulty was due to a lack of needing to go. Now, her bladder was full, and she still couldn't piss herself. The only other variable was Avery. Hailey wondered if a shy bladder could be selective. She kept pushing and pushing. A silly voice in the back of her head told her she was lucky—lucky that she didn't have to go in a different way. That did not help her shyness at all. Now she was concerned. She was right on the edge. It was almost out, but not quite. There was no turning back, but no moving forward. She was stuck. It was kind of embarassing. She'd been feeling nothing but embarassment since Avery showed up, though. Couple that with her current shy bladder, and it made for an interesting dilemma. She would definitely be able to go if she wasn't around Avery, but she didn't want to walk away from him either. After looking at him from afar for so long, he was finally right here. Hailey was about to stand up, when a pair of arms wrapping around her waist shocked her. Sharply turning around, she saw Avery pressed into her back. "What're you doing?" "Helping you." Suddenly, he tightened his arms around her waist. Hailey understood what Avery was doing. Her parents had done similar things to Kaylee in the past. Usually, it was when she was constipated. The thought jumped into her mind. Did Avery think she was trying to go that way? She could feel the heat coming off of her face. She couldn't pay it any mind, however. "I don't think it's gonna happen." She stated simply. "Just try, for me." "I don't think I can. Not with you here." She added. His hold tightened more. "Try." This time, it didn't take much effort. As soon as Hailey began to push, the floodgates unleashed. The padding around her waist began to swell. It wicked away the wetness so well, she almost didn't feel it. The only sensation was warmth. A special, comfy warmth, that she had never felt before today. Her diaper kept swelling, and the warmth only grew in intensity. It seemed to go on for an eternity. She wasn't even fully aware of her surroundings. She was so focused on the feelings. The cold that surrounded her, and the warmth of the—currently being used—wet diaper. Maybe it was due to how much she had to pee, but this was far more blissful than her first wetting. Hailey had thought that was enjoyable. This was on an entirely different level. It was blissful, and it seemed like the bliss wouldn't end. As she slowly stopped wetting herself, Hailey was a little impressed at how much she had to go. She didn't think two, full, adult-sized sippy-cups could do this. No wonder Kaylee goes throught so many diapers, Hailey thought. Finally done, Hailey plopped down onto the floor. The squish from her diaper was very pleasant. Avery didn't have his hands around Hailey's waist anymore. Now, he was staring at her again, with a smile plastered on his face. Hailey found this odd. "What're you smiling about?" "You." Surprisingly cool-headed, Hailey responded. "Me?" "Yes, you." Hailey, not saying anything, gave him an inquisitve look. "You were smiling for the first time. Seems like you really enjoy your diapers. Is that why you're an adult baby?" "Well..." She wondered what to say. There was no apprehension about telling him that she liked the feelings associated with using a diaper. It was a bit weird and private, but it seemed like he already figured that out. Hailey was wondering if she should tell him the truth. She wasn't really an adult baby, not like Kaylee was. She wasn't really Kaylee, either. This seemed like the best time to tell him, but would he even believe that? If he did, would he be upset? She wanted to be friendly with Avery. However, she wanted to be friendly with Avery as Hailey and not Kaylee. "Avery, I have something to tell you. I'm not really Kaylee." Avery gave the girl a dumb look. Not Kaylee? What could that even mean. "I'm actually Hailey, and the other Hailey is actually Kaylee." She returned his dumb look with a sheepish smile. "It's a little confusing." Avery wasn't dumb. He was going to university, after all. While a bit confusing, that puzzle was easily pieced together. "So, you're twins... and you dressed as eachother for Halloween?" Maybe he was wrong, but any other possiblity seemed too far-fetched. Every high school had a 'twin day' for spirit week, and it was a trope constantly repeated on TV and in movies. It wasn't too hard to come to that conclusion. "Yeah. Guess it wasn't too confusing, huh?" She crossed her arms and puffed out her cheeks slightly. "Nope, I've watched TV before." He gave her a toothy grin. "Are you mad?" Avery didn't seem mad, but Hailey wasn't the best at reading the boy. "Nu-uh. Why should I be? It's kinda cool." Hailey was relieved at that. "So, you're an adult baby? I never knew." "Well, I'm not. Not really." Hailey proceeded to explain. She was a mature, big girl. She just fantasized about it sometimes, and she really wanted to try it out. There was a lot of emphasis on her being a grown-up. No way did she want that lifestyle full-time. Hailey didn't think it was a bad thing, but it just didn't resonate with her. She liked being an adult, most of the time. "So, you really just like the diapers?" Hailey shifted around, feeling the slowly-cooling wetness of her diaper. Despite not being as warm, the squishy feeling of the padding was delightful. "Sure, I guess." "Why not just wear diapers, then?" "That's..." She wanted to say that it was weird, but that seemed a bit hypocritical. Why not? "That is an option." Hailey imagined it. Wearing diapers while otherwise being a mature adult seemed naughty. Almost like it was forbidden. "Think about it." Before the conversation could continue, their privacy was interrupted. A girl in a unicorn costume nearly ran into the room. A bucket of candy in both hands, she was clearly experiencing a sugar rush. Hailey insantly recognized Carrie, having seen her plenty of times before. She and Avery exchanged a look. Hopefully, he realized that she was back to being Kaylee. They'd have to get together as Hailey and Avery sometime. At least, Hailey hoped he liked her enough to see eachother again. The pair didn't get the chance to seriously talk the rest of the night. While Carrie was there, all they did was play. By the time the unicorn-costumed girl crashed from her sugar rush, Avery seemed sleepy and the grown-ups were steadily streaming out of the house. With promises to see eachother at school, Avery departed the house and Hailey went to find Kaylee. The younger twin was passed out in a lawn chair in the backyard. Lindsey was still awake, and she was sitting next to her. "Hello, Kaylee." Hailey winced. Lindsey had put emphasis on the name. She must have found out at some point. Hailey figured there was a chance that she hadn't, so she kept up the act. "Hi Miss Lindsey. Did Hailey fall asleep?" "Yes, she did, sweetie. She had a little to much to drink." That confirmed it. Kaylee had told Lindsey. Kaylee wasn't normally allowed to drink, but, when she did, she was an incredibly loose-lipped lightweight. Hailey was about to say something, when Lindsey interjected. "Don't worry, though. I'll go call a cab for you two." "Thanks." "Thanks?" Hailey sighed. Lindsey seemed like she was really enjoying herself. "Thank you, Miss Lindsey." Until the cab got here, Hailey was not going to have a lot of fun keeping up the act. She wasn't going to have much fun either, dealing with a cranky and hungover sister. At least, if Kaylee slept most of the day, she'd be able to snag a few of Kaylee's diapers. Hailey figured that she might even get the chance to wear them. That, and looking forward to seeing Avery, would get her through it.

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Don't worry, there's definitely more to come! It just might take until Halloween... Thanks for reading! It's great that you're loving it.