TheChronicler

Omg I'm glad to see you're okay! Your stories were pretty awesome back in the day too. Glad you're still around 💖

Thankfully, Tara is the focus character. Brittany is both younger and more well adjusted, incontinence issues aside. Her being younger is by itself grounds enough for me to not have her be the focus but having her as a contrast to Tara makes it more humiliating for the older girl who should be setting the example. The dynamic and division of "screentime" works. Brittany can be the source of the rules and the pull ups/diapers and act as a foil to Tara just as she is now.

Glad to see that someone else has him on the mind. I DM'd him on discord awhile back but he stopped responding and I've been worried. Thanks @WBDaddy for the confirmation 👍🏾

This is stupid and never gonna happen but... Wow. Please continue this story. It is so fascinating to me on a writing level. Someone who is intimately familiar with ABDL tropes falling into an ABDL scenario despite knowing better. I would like to see the main character fleshed out a lot more because the hair trigger she's on feels a bit forced and I would like a little more in the tension between her wanting to be a baby and not wanting to be talked down to by her family but the potential! There is SO MUCH potential here. I would love to see it realized and have some of the more unique elements factor in more but this is really good.

Oh this is a spectacular direction! Love this immensely.

I'm really happy to see this story return. It's been my favourite since Melissa's Meltdown and I think it's very poignant that you introduced a character archetype here that derailed that story completely so I feel compelled to warn you: Please be mindful of your mean girl character. So many stories fall apart with the inhumane cruelty of the mean girl. The tone of your story this far has been light, comfy with a twinge of humiliation and self-doubt on Tara's part and the fact that she is a loner really contextualizes why she considers a girl almost half her age to be her best friend. All of that works. She has a case of arrested development. Ideally, if you're introducing this foil for her in the bully, I hope you don't completely dash all of it up on the rocks. I could be wrong and she might be a pure antagonist but I think contrasting her idea of maturity as the popular, mean girl with Tara's isolated, borderline incontinent immaturity could allow for a more natural integration but I trust that since you've pre-written so much of the story already that you are going somewhere with this and I look forward to it!

Of all the stories I was keeping up with at the time, this is the one I am saddest to see fall off. Writer, if you're still around, I hope you can find the inspiration to continue. If not, then I hope someone else can see this and be inspired to make something of their own with this as the base.

It's not that he was too quick, it's just how they edited the video. Besides which, they are probably upselling their reactions for dramatic effect.

Just for Laughs is a Canadian comedy show, made in Quebec. The second I saw the diaper on backward, I RAPIDLY lost interest lol.

I rarely if ever comment on stories in such an early state but this is so brimming with potential, I just have to encourage you and wish you the best with this!

That is an excellent takedown of the infantilization "commentary" trope.

Bless you, Sofia! I was searching through the forums for hours trying to find this lol.

Does anyone remember the story about a girl who had gotten a job at a hospital with her friend but the pressure of the job made her start having accidents and on Halloween, she actually wore a diaper and was confused for one of the kids and added to a children's ward? It was a really well written story. The two leads were very believable in their friendship and the smaller girl who ended up diapered was done so quite believably if I am remembering it right. I know there was also an older doctor boss lady that seemed to have it out for the new girl.

That... is probably the most tragic thing I have ever seen on this website.

Oh this is adorable. I love the frame work. Damn, now I want to go running. I would definitely love to see a relationship develop between these two, romantic, rival or anywhere in between, doesn't matter to me. I think they bounce off one another fairly well.