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  1. kerry
    My first thought was that they might be going to a zoo...
  2. kerry
    Although I am not at all fond of Sarah's mother, who is basically an abuser, I still must acknowledge that this is one of my favorite stories. I'm glad it's back.
  3. kerry
    This is starting out quite nicely. 🙂
  4. kerry
    I'm quite confused about the start of this chapter. At the end of the previous one, Patrick had settled down after unloading at a group session. It seems to me, unless I am totally missing something—always a possibility—that the second scene here should have been first?
  5. kerry
    Another very strong chapter. (Less traumatizing this time.) I can't help thinking that Redge might yet menace Patrick; why else would he have escaped custody?
  6. kerry
    And here we have the entire raison d'etre for this story. 🙂 It's nice to read chapters of this story that focus on primarily comical situations (sorry, Jennifer) instead of horror.
  7. kerry
    This was one of the most intense chapters I've read recently from any story, and Redge is among the most twisted and evil bigs I've yet encountered. I sincerely hope this is the last time we see him directly...and that we hear secondhand of his permanent downfall. (Wondering too whether Halgen might have noticed something in the parking area; Redge didn't seem very happy that she wanted to talk to him.) Anyway, the stakes for Patrick have just gotten much higher. Speaking of Patrick, you should be aware that there are several times when you use his name and mean Redge. Most of them, I think, are clustered near each other, but there is at least one toward the end as well. This is the are in the story where I noticed most of them:
  8. kerry
    What is Haven getting out of this? It travels across the galaxy just to find a host who will allow it to act out its kinkiest, most disgusting desires? To what end? And how does a weird black ooze from outer space get a messy diaper fetish in the first place? Inquiring minds want to know. 🙂
  9. kerry
    FYI: The spelling you want here is "gamut." I'm definitely enjoying this one so far. As soon as they went here, my first thought was, "Don't Panic." 🤣 I think this probably should be "shuddered," but maybe you mean something else?
  10. kerry
    Nice to see this back.
  11. kerry
    This story has been nothing short of wonderful. I'm sad that it is ending, but I have no idea what more the magic could possibly do to poor Nicole. For Vanessa's sake, though, I hope it shrinks her. She'd be much easier both to deal with and explain if she were actually baby-sized.
  12. kerry
    I like your writing style here except for one thing: the constant switching of POV is very confusing. I could not follow it at all for quite a while and then, after I understood what was happening, it still felt awkward. Maybe write it just from one POV? (His.)
  13. kerry
    This is so cute!
  14. kerry
    Fun. I'm thinking "good girl" is another trigger.
  15. kerry
    A narrative misstep, one of the only ones I have noticed: I mean, what else could that be? Not much "deduction" needed there. 🙂 This one is just bit of repetitive phrasing. I am truly enjoying this piece! Word of the day: soft. 🙂 Heehee.
  16. kerry
    I've missed this story so much!!!
  17. kerry
    Should this be Alice? Dear
  18. kerry
    My reaction to these final chapters is pleasure: I am so pleased to see such a lovely, nicely crafted finale to a story I've enjoyed so much. As to the questions at hand: I think she let the slippers go (and woe to those people sitting directly below her). In my mind, though, they never completed falling: being magic, they vanished long before bonking people on the head. Further, I think Isabelle grew up, went to Higgins, became a dancer, had a nice career, and then...bought the little store. I think this shop owner's name is Isabelle. 🙂
  19. kerry
    well, something here is a bit confused...
  20. kerry
    Jenny has been broken so long and so badly...it's nice to see her finally understand the truth. Don't think it will help with her next (first?) gyno appt, though...
  21. kerry
    I just wanted to pop in here and say what a wonderful story this is! I just finished Ch 21 on Patreon, but honestly I feel as if I am speaking into the void there sometimes. 😉
  22. kerry
    You don't like the musical? It's one of my favs! I thought that the recent film was excellent; what did you dislike about it?
  23. kerry
    This is easily my favorite chapter so far!
  24. kerry
    Not really. I mean, it is the Trunchbull, after all. Roald Dahl didn't exactly pull a lot of punches with her.
  25. kerry
    I totally agree! I don't trigger easily but this was so horrific...
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