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kerry

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  1. I really am enjoying the ways in which this story parodies the politics of the world in which we are living. Too bad we don't have a Collins to break through the lunacy.
  2. Um...I thought all she had before were drawings? In three hours, she went from that to a store stocked with the finished product? I mean, it's fantasy, but maybe you can be realistic when it is possible? Sad if you think about it, but why think about it?
  3. Absolutely agree, but I think this compromise (while not going as far as some of us would have liked it to) works also and is likely far closer to OP's original conception.
  4. This is exactly what I was thinking.
  5. I'm so looking fwd to seeing how all of this plays out. 🙂
  6. I'm not sure I have ever said this before, but I have, from the start, thought that this story might end with both Cam and Lili regressed, possibly by her own choice (in order to stay with Cam). I still see several routes that would lead to this end. I suspect that Asha would be in favor of it...
  7. I love the way you write, especially Mary's thoughts that seem utterly perfect. But oh no: how can she possibly wait until tomorrow???
  8. But loafers don't have laces. That's what makes them loafers.
  9. Well, I knew from the start of these chapters that escaping Inara would not be as easy as it seemed to be. I'm sad, though, of three things: That Inara won. That we never really learned just what Inara is and how she accomplished all of this. That it's over. Thanks for the fun tale.
  10. You know, if it were not for the current anti-trans insanity, I might find these protesters' actions unbelievable. Now, though—and this is so sad to say—nothing at all could surprise me.
  11. I hope that at some point, in a later chapter, you'll explore this. ??? I can't figure out how to parse this, even given your propensity to spell out initials. (BTW, why? What would be the reason that this language evolved like this?) OTOH: wow! This is one of the most inventive concepts I've read since...since PPP brought the DD into existence. And I suspect it's only going to get better. 🙂
  12. So much fun! I looked forward to it every day.
  13. I LOVE this! It is beautifully written and I'd think you should be able to sell it when it is finished. 🙂
  14. I was thinking for most of this chapter that Amaya would be the one to save them both somehow. The conversation (which surprised me b/c I didn't know Evie could still engage in one) actually makes me think that even more. I can't see Inara winning this battle. At least in the DD, the Amazons usually have their version of best care practice in mind as they infantilize the littles. Here, Inara is doing...whatever it is she is doing...with no possible agenda in mind other than pure selfishness. She must really need them to actively condemn themselves, and Amaya gave in early, but to Inara's surprise, Evie has (too late?) found the strength not to give in at all, which is somehow screwing up Inara's plans. Hmm... Could Inara be one of those witches who feed off of the capitulation of their victims?
  15. Exactly. And not only this unfair and corrupt system but Nelson himself...and his family.
  16. Oh my. She seems to have been offered a real choice, but what is a choice when both options are detestable?
  17. OMG. Have you been planning this all along? What a fantastic reveal! I briefly fell behind in this story (these stories?) and I'm so glad I didn't give up on them!
  18. Who ever said that the internal timeline of a story needs to run parallel to external events? This would undeniably be a better outcome for Grandma than the song's actual title, "Grandma Got Run Over by a Reindeer." This story is such fun! Though I'm sure I'm not the only one here who would rather be Merri right now than Tarja.
  19. I have a bizarre and unparalleled relationship with this story. First, it is brilliantly written and detailed, the proof of which is the significant number of us who are still here despite (in some cases major) trepidations about the way things are proceeding. What The Shithead Nelson said about the inevitability of their loss and his victory—I'm still holding out at least a small hope that he's wrong—is not a surprise, but it nevertheless doesn't make it any easier to accept for those of us who tend to like reasonable karmic balance. While this story is undeniably fascinating, though, it is also utterly infuriating: if you believe that the long moral arc of the universe bends toward justice (which in the real world is getting harder to believe every day), stories such as this one, which seems to postulate a world even more of, by, and for the wealthy, cynical, self-centered assholes than our is, are hard to take. But therein lies the bizarreness: I can't tell you how many stories I begin and then abandon because I am just not interested in immersing myself in their dystopian visions of the world...not that I hate dystopian stories per se, but when I read The Hunger Games or something like that I always feel there is a fighting chance that the people most like me will find a way through. Here, though, with the mounting evidence that no help is forthcoming for the protagonists—it's hard to conceive of a way out of this Option B nightmare even if everything that put all this in place collapses, and here we are so close to the end with no signs of any such collapse in sight—every chapter is more difficult to read than the one before. Yet I read them, surely a sign of the quality of your work. And here is why, besides the excellent characters you have created: you've held out just enough hope that help will come—John's dad's research, the outside rallies against all this, the flashforwards to some kind of sweeter resolution—to keep those of us who crave the justice I mentioned interested and with you. I hope that something will change, against all odds, but I'm on this journey with you and will be until the end.
  20. I am really enjoying the slow build here. You asked whether I knew what she was hiding; well, this is an ABDL forum, so I guess that helped make it obvious. Nice work in slowly revealing it!
  21. I just read through this entire story (so far), having managed to miss it before. I'm so glad to have found it! I love stories that create dynamics that are unlike the clichés that most writers trade in, and this is one of the best I've come across. I hope that Brock really is what he now seems to be; that's the guy I want exploring her little self with her.
  22. I'm loving this!
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