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  1. Hey everyone, I'm looking for a story that was (probably) posted to fictionmania or sissykiss years ago about a (boy, named Bobby) high schooler that gets bullied into diapers after witnessing a bully picking on another kid and suggesting the (girl, named Brandy) bully put her victim into a diaper, at which point the bully decides the protagonist is a bigger baby/sissy than her original target, hence he's the one who should end up diapered, which she gets accomplished through blackmail and some help from her mafioso uncle (named Vinnie, iirc), who starts helping the kid's mother, first with her car troubles, eventually giving her a (girly) second-hand computer which the bully ends up using to spy on the protagonist. A similar, but way less developed, story can be found at writing.com, under the name "Christian's Diaper Humiliation", (allegedly) penned by Princess Pottypants. Thanks for any help in locating the original version of the story!
  2. The story "Compromising Situation", along with its sequel "Sarah" can be found at https://web.archive.org/web/20190516044402/https://abdlstoryforum.info/forum/stories/non-member-stories/5946-compromising-situation and https://www.writing.com/main/portfolio/view/theprinces, although the first 2 chapters seem to be missing from writing.com.
  3. The 2nd one is "Machines are not toys" by CS Fox https://web.archive.org/web/20210206091151/http://foxtalestimes.com/Stories/machines_are_not_toys.htm
  4. Yeah, this story is clearly "inspired" by a video featuring Odette Delacroix, which can be found on xhamster, if you search for "the babysitter trap"... I love the idea of mistaken identity leading to diapers, so I'm not complaining, but I believe the author should give credit where credit is due...
  5. The Summer Job by Bob Smiley, it's posted to abdlstoryforum, I'm sure.
  6. The Little Girl. https://forums.abdlstoryforum.info/t/the-little-girl/5097
  7. Great start, I love sissy stories. If you don't mind a little critique, I think you should split the text into more paragraphs. It wasn't so bad at the beginning, but by the end, the walls of text became kind of hard to read. I'm not a writer, but as a general rule of thumb, you want every dialogue, inner monologue and actions to start a new line/paragraph. For example... “Still dry. So we don’t need to worry about changing you before bed. But we do need to put you in your bedtime clothes.” She went through one of the bags and pulled out this little pink babydoll dress. “You are going to look so cute in this.” she said with a little bit of sincerity mixed in with the mocking tone of her voice. She unbuttoned the crotch of the onesie and began to lift it up. “Arms up,” she said and I did as such, as she removed the skirt onesie from me. Leaving my arms up she slid the babydoll dress over me. I felt the dress flow down, and even sitting on the floor the dress barely reached the floor. “Stand up sissy,” I did as she asked, and she adjusted a couple things and took a step back to see how I looked. The dress was so short, it came down about half to my diaper, so that most of it was in perfect view. “You look so precious,” she said in admiration, “this outfit really does look…” she paused trying to find the word that would sum up how she saw me. “appropriate.” she laughed, “This outfit really does look appropriate for you.” I don’t know why she feels the need to embarrass me more than I already am. Isn’t it enough that I’m wearing diapers, crawling around like a baby, sucking on a binkie, and wearing girly clothes? Does she really need to make it worse with this mockery and how I look appropriate like this. Like this is how I always should have been dressed. Already defeated for the day, I was just going to take it and hope that she cannot tell how much this is bothering me. Again, I'm not a writer, so I hope this piece of advice is correct, otherwise someone please correct me, I certainly don't want to give misleading advice. That said, I can't wait to read more, I love where this is going, thanks for sharing your story with us.
  8. Sorry (but not really) for bumping this to the top. I was randomly thinking about this story earlier today (for the scene early on where Lilly's fellow teacher Joyce is outraged that Lilly is keeping her job while she's getting fired) and remembered it was part of this story, which still stands among the best stories I've ever read on this site and in this "genre" altogether. Anyhow, the only reason I'm posting/bumping this is that no one seemed to remember this story was written by an author known as "compassionate" (IIRC, I'm like 99% sure of it) and I'd hate to see him/her go uncredited for this awesome piece of work. Also a big thank you to ausdpr for saving and re-posting it.
  9. https://www.dailydiapers.com/board/index.php?/topic/66117-michelles-long-summer-chapter-5-jan-719/ It was recently updated, too.
  10. It's always great to read more of Stacy's adventures. The AB/DL content is almost absent in the last few chapters, but I don't see this as a problem. As much as I like cliché fap-material, I like stories that are good without only being smut or all about diapers even better. The time and effort you put into this shows and I'll be glad to buy the e-book version if/when you publish.
  11. Great addition to the story, I'm loving where this is going, please keep writing about Michelle's summer!
  12. This reads like an ad, it lacks character development and diaper content.
  13. Great update! I missed Stacy so much! There seems to be a bit of text missing in the last paragraph before Stacy joins her family for lunch, the sentence reads: "I was a little surprised he" and it ends like that... I don't want to be too critical, there are a few other mistakes/typos which don't really matter much, since it's easy to figure what you meant to write, but the abrupt ending to that sentence/paragraph made me feel like something was missing. Anyhow, it was a great chapter, a very instructive reminder of the Littles' reality. Stacy (and even Bella) have it so good with Amanda and Fred, it really contrasts with what's inevitably going to happen to a majority of Stacy's classmates. As much as I hope you'll find the time to write the next chapter fast, I don't mind the wait, considering the quality of your writing and of this story. Great work, as always!
  14. Thanks for pointing the "Hannah" chapters out for me. As for this "arc" ending in about 10 chapters, I guess I'll have to wait and see where you'll be taking the story. There's so much potential for things to go in any direction and so many new characters since Stacy started school, you practically created an "Emerson U" sub-universe in the Diaper Dimension. I'm both glad to know you'll be wrapping things up within a "reasonable" time and saddened at the idea of soon being denied my weekly fix of Stacy's adventures. (j/k) I initially copied the story to fix it when the formatting got messed up, literally copy+pasting each forum page, including reader comments, but I never completed the edit, so it's not ready to be reposted. It's a lot more work than I expected, but I'll try to find time to do it ASAP, or if you can't wait, I can PM it to you. It's so much work editing it, I can't even imagine the effort that went into writing it. Same goes for the effort Baby Sofia is putting into Exchanged, I'm not sure how many pages this would have if printed in book format, but I bet it'd be longer than most books/series I've read.
  15. Ugh, now I have to go re-read Amanda's version of Hannah's story, does anyone (ie.: the incredible author) remember what chapter it was? I really love this story, it's so intricate, yet packed with action. The pacing, (~one chapter a day) allows for so much details to be told, yet there doesn't seem to be anything superfluous and, in the words of St.Exupéry: "Perfection is achieved not when there is nothing more to add, but when there is nothing left to take away", and without meaning any offense to other authors who share their stories on this site (because there are -and have been- a lot of great authors here, each with their own style and pacing, which is perfectly fine), this is as close to perfection as I've seen, for such a long story, in a very long time. Honestly, my only "fear" at this point is that it will eventually have to end one way or another (ie.: reach its conclusion or the author moving on to another project), yet I really wish we'll get to read (against all odds, no offense meant) about Stacy's entire stay at Emerson, and even beyond (assuming an epilogue about her return to "our" universe would make sense, if that even happens, for example). However, assuming one chapter a day and a few more years of studies, that could mean over a thousand chapters, and at one chapter published every week, that'd take decades to complete. Long story short, you don't have to know base 60 math to figure it's not realistic to expect that to happen, yet that would literally be legendary... I normally read the story over at FM, so I don't know if someone brought it up in the comments here before, but what are your plans, as far as "completed story length / how long you intend to keep posting at this pace"? For comparisons, another of my favorite stories ever that was posted here, "A New Girl In School", by Jilly Poo, ran for over a decade (albeit intermittently, from 2005 to 2015), and followed the similar "one chapter a day" pacing -or actually, more than a chapter a day, considering there were 53 chapters posted here, detailing the first couple of weeks of the main character, Abby, getting tormented by the "Queen Bee" at her new school-, but it hasn't been updated since January 16th 2015 and was sadly lost when the board got wiped. It's the only story I backed up, too, and I'm glad I did..., but I'm diverging. In the end, I really don't mean this in a negative way, quite the contrary; and quite frankly, it is to be expected that you'll hit a block at one point or another, let alone that "real life" might not enable you to keep up this crazy pace. All that being said, Jilly Poo took breaks for years (a few times, literally) before coming back to her story, to the extent where I'm still hoping (4 years later) she'll get back to it someday, so this reader will certainly be patient, not to mention very lenient, if he has to wait longer than usual for the next chapter. I always found it hard to complain against something that's free, especially when it's of such quality that I wouldn't mind paying for it... In any case, thanks again for sharing Stacy's epic saga with us. (For the record, I'll be commenting here and from my PC from now on, I had another lengthy review written up from my phone on FM for last week's chapter and the site bugged when I hit the post button...)
  16. "Back to Daycare" by Elfy fits that description, although what happens isn't accidental... http://www.dailydiapers.com/board/index.php?/topic/53046-back-to-daycare/ There's also "Finding a Summer Job" by diaperjess over at ABKingdom. A free account is required to read stories there. http://www.abkingdom.com/library/doc/784 Finally, "The Daycare" by LilMisSierra is one of my favorites, which is told from multiple point of views in what I'd call "overlapping chronology". https://lilmissierra.deviantart.com/art/The-Daycare-Part-1-531176718 (Link is to Part 1 of 4) It's all I can think of, off the top of my head, but I know there are many others following that trope. Here's another (very short one) that doesn't actually involve a daycare, but which could still interest you, Little Millie's New Job, by SallyKA (and its sequel, Little Millie Gets On) http://abdlstoryforum.info/threads/50-Little-Millie-s-New-Job-by-SallyKA http://abdlstoryforum.info/threads/75-Little-Millie-Gets-On-by-SallyKA-Pts-1-2 There's also "Laura & Holly" by Princess Pottypants (also among my favorites) which features a girl taken to daycare against her will in the second half of the story, but not in the context of working there... http://princesspottypants.wordpress.com/2011/08/04/laura-holly-chapter-1 (Navigate with the Year/Month bar on the right to easily read it in chronological order.) http://princesspottypants.wordpress.com/2011/09/29/laura-holly-chapter-16/ (This is where the daycare scenes start, but I recommend reading it from the start.) Edit: Actually, I think Laura & Holly is easier read from PPP's Blogspot page : http://pottypants.blogspot.com/2011/08/laura-holly-chapter-1.html (Navigate with the Year/Month bar on the right to easily read it in chronological order.)
  17. 2 requests for a PPP story in a row. After Sucking Up that was just requested and linked to, I'm pretty sure the story you're looking for is "Dollies" by PPP, you can find it at: pottypants.blogspot.com/2013/12/ ...use the menu on the right to navigate through the 5 chapters on the non-mobile version of that site.
  18. http://pottypants.blogspot.ca/2012/09/back-to-school.html
  19. I still had no luck finding those. Anyone remember reading them?
  20. Hi, I remember reading a story about two years ago, where the main character is a salesperson doing a demonstration for some clothes restraints meant for invalid people, only to have an older woman ask him to put some of the restraints on, "to show her how they work", and end up trapped. It had a distinct long_rifle / Princess Pottypants vibe, but I couldn't find it on either authors' sites.
  21. I confirm, you'll get a decent amount of results.
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