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Ah,always so good with the swerve.
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Road To Discovery (Chapter One 8/3/19)
babytom2 replied to RambleLamb's topic in Story and Art Forum
a fine start -
From Boss to Baby Chapter 22 8-30-19 TBC
babytom2 replied to Tfmonkey's topic in Story and Art Forum
should mark this as completed maybe so they can move it. -
From Boss to Baby Chapter 22 8-30-19 TBC
babytom2 replied to Tfmonkey's topic in Story and Art Forum
I've seen this before,throwing things in for shock value while completely eroding the main plot.Trust me,I like the story well enough but I had to edit it a bunch when I copied it. When you go low I go high....enjoy your weekend. -
From Boss to Baby Chapter 22 8-30-19 TBC
babytom2 replied to Tfmonkey's topic in Story and Art Forum
You are,and it was mostly fine until this turn. -
From Boss to Baby Chapter 22 8-30-19 TBC
babytom2 replied to Tfmonkey's topic in Story and Art Forum
Hmm,this seems a bit odd of a turn.Kayla being small is one thing but Martha is obviously much larger and why would she embarrass herself and the coworkers go along with this new situation? -
From Boss to Baby Chapter 22 8-30-19 TBC
babytom2 replied to Tfmonkey's topic in Story and Art Forum
Excuse me for wanting the proper words in it XD....go take your torch elsewhere. -
From Boss to Baby Chapter 22 8-30-19 TBC
babytom2 replied to Tfmonkey's topic in Story and Art Forum
filling staff Think you'll need to edit a bunch once the story is complete. -
From Boss to Baby Chapter 22 8-30-19 TBC
babytom2 replied to Tfmonkey's topic in Story and Art Forum
Kinda shocked that Martha wouldn't be angry at being tricked or seeing her friend naked. Also there are some she/he mistakes in there.Still wish the dialogue was separated from the rest of it. -
Was this lost in the purge?Could have sworn this was still posted somewhere
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From Boss to Baby Chapter 22 8-30-19 TBC
babytom2 replied to Tfmonkey's topic in Story and Art Forum
Wish the dialogue was separated from the description,my eyes glazed over trying to spot them talking,lol. -
short chapter but fun
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Sheltered [12/03/2023] CH46+47 [Important Subscribestar Update]
babytom2 replied to Mee's topic in Story and Art Forum
It's fine but isn't really pertinent to the current story. -
Sheltered [12/03/2023] CH46+47 [Important Subscribestar Update]
babytom2 replied to Mee's topic in Story and Art Forum
That chapter was a little confusing. -
Quite a surprise for him!
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Hmm,pretty awkward,lol.
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Some of the dialogue is off because of incorrect words being inserted.
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Sheltered [12/03/2023] CH46+47 [Important Subscribestar Update]
babytom2 replied to Mee's topic in Story and Art Forum
Quite the info dump and long dialogue. -
nice update