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Everything posted by babytom2
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Great ending,the beginning had me concerned we were starting at 7 which might have been awkward.11 is a little better but still in the disturbing zone.
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A bit fast for love,lol
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- diaper girl
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Nice,story finally heating up
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jeez,you really dug around to read this one XD
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too much talking,not enough connective story.
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Heh,I thought maybe Wubby would add Samantha to the baby scenario and really make Chris feel awkward,lol.
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Why would the doll help Jenna after she tried to ditch it?
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Is this story dead?
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The Advertisement (Chapter Four, Updated 7/7/12)
babytom2 replied to Someteenbaby's topic in Story and Art Forum
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feel like im getting whiplash with all the stop and start.
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Hmm,you repeated the same info in text and then in dialogue.Not sure it was needed.
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You spent far too much time writing that smackdown.
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Don't you have other stories that need finishing?
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Kinda wondering how a 10 yr old can have a toned body?XD
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Parts of this are hard to read,increase spell check.
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these chapters are way too short.
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Think Hot means it's being viewed alot.Like over 2k views.
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This is getting stranger and stranger XD
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Will this continue?
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Pretty sure they mean their deaths are faked.Not literally dead.