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diaper dimension Your Move - Chapter 18 Posted [8/21/2022]
DiaperedPrince replied to DiaperedPrince's topic in Story and Art Forum
Hey everyone, just a quick update since someone asked me if I was still planning on continuing this story. Tl:dr: YES. Don't worry, I'm slowly making progress 🙂 I'm currently halfway through writing Chapter 22, progress is just really slow because I have a lot going on (school, research, part time job, internships, going on exchange next term), etc and my school terms are usually really heavy so I don't get that much time to write. I'm going to finish writing part 2 or at least the next 7-8 chapters of part 2, before I release some more chapters, which I'm guessing won't be for another year or so based on my progress so far (long time to wait, I know!) I have the whole story planned out at a high level (I finished the plan probably a year and a half ago), but it's taking more chapters than I originally planned to get through the content, so I might end up with anywhere from 40 to 60 chapters depending on what happens when I write the rest. If it's more than 50 I'll probably split up Part 3 into 3. Endgame and 4. Checkmate, but we'll see. Might end up somewhere like 11/19/10 for 3 parts, 40 chapters or 11/20/14/5 for 4 parts, 50 chapters or 11/20/19/10 for 4 parts, 60 chapters. We'll see when we get there, this will probably take me the better part of the next couple years to finish. Thanks for asking about the progress though, and I appreciate the support from all of you! 😀- 362 replies
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Emerald Princess - Revised Edition - Epilogue (5/18/2023)
DiaperedPrince replied to BabySofia's topic in Completed Stories
Completely understand! <Hugs>- 259 replies
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Emerald Princess - Revised Edition - Epilogue (5/18/2023)
DiaperedPrince replied to BabySofia's topic in Completed Stories
Spent the last month or so re-reading this before bed ^.^ Enjoyed every chapter, but now I don't have a good bedtime story! Sofia you gotta write more!- 259 replies
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Emerald Princess - Revised Edition - Epilogue (5/18/2023)
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Scary!! I need to reread this at some point.- 259 replies
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Pretty cool story! Got a bit depressing in the middle and I didn't like how Charley didn't unregress after Dash was gone but still a good read overall ?
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Emerald Princess - Revised Edition - Epilogue (5/18/2023)
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Sounds like someone can't handle their chopsticks! ?- 259 replies
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diaper dimension Your Move - Chapter 18 Posted [8/21/2022]
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Everything did!- 362 replies
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diaper dimension Your Move - Chapter 18 Posted [8/21/2022]
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Small update: I'm writing again. Not sure when I'll actually release more chapters since I have 0 cached, but I'm actively working on it!- 362 replies
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Foreword: This comment might come across as anti-Personalias, but it's not. It's an exercise of my freedom of speech and a response to the previous comment (by Personalias). I beg to differ. Different readers have different backgrounds and native languages and reading levels and tastes (like you mentioned). Fault isn't exclusively in the reader (or writer). Sometimes an author does need to break the fourth wall with some readers who might find it more difficult, in order for them to understand certain parts, even if the author is by no means obligated to do so. And they're sharing their thoughts for free. Free (as in libre) speech. Why? For a critique. I beg for critiques when I write. People pay editors for critiques. It helps improve your writing. Not accepting critiques cuts off many amazing ways to improve your writing. Why not? Have you seen Minority Report? Knowing the future enables changing it. Changing things based on user feedback is the best way to improve your product. The announcement was one comment. I wouldn't call that loud. I'm 99.9% sure they weren't trying to hurt your feelings. tl;dr: laudatory comments can be encouraging, but critical ones are the most precious, because they help you improve your writing.
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Diamond Tours - Republished 11/16/2022 - Complete
DiaperedPrince replied to BabySofia's topic in Completed Stories
Quite enjoyed listening to it, looking forward to more of Sofia's works read aloud! (And possibly mine when I'm done writing... ?) -
I remember my parents putting me into these as a kid because I couldn't keep my covers on me. I also remember hating them ?
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diaper dimension Your Move - Chapter 18 Posted [8/21/2022]
DiaperedPrince replied to DiaperedPrince's topic in Story and Art Forum
Tell me about it... I've been re-reading it lately as a bedtime story ?- 362 replies
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diaper dimension Your Move - Chapter 18 Posted [8/21/2022]
DiaperedPrince replied to DiaperedPrince's topic in Story and Art Forum
Nice! The other big inspiration for me was BabySofia's Exchanged, you can find links to all of those in her signature, i.e. at the end of this comment: https://www.dailydiapers.com/board/index.php?/topic/78782-your-move-chapter-18-posted-8212022/&do=findComment&comment=2006371- 362 replies
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diaper dimension Little Hen
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Yep these shorts have been great, but it'd be even better if you picked up Day in the Life again at some point! Hadn't read a story of that style (which I particularly enjoy) in forever! -
diaper dimension Little Hen
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Great short story! I seriously doubt it, given that nobody wants to be treated like a baby there. That'd be like someone dressed up as a terrorist or a dog (on all fours)... -
diaper dimension Your Move - Chapter 18 Posted [8/21/2022]
DiaperedPrince replied to DiaperedPrince's topic in Story and Art Forum
Don't worry, you didn't. I do like to take into consideration readers' feedback when I write though- 362 replies
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diaper dimension Your Move - Chapter 18 Posted [8/21/2022]
DiaperedPrince replied to DiaperedPrince's topic in Story and Art Forum
Weeeeell since the cat's out of the bag, I'll confirm the rumors: Izzy will fly at some point, and the exact methods have already been hinted at somewhere in this thread. ? We may see Izzy in VR again, but the problem with writing these little excursions from the main storyline is I'm good at thinking up a rough plot for it, but bad at actually putting the little details into words. Part of the reason I stopped writing part 2 where I did was writer's block hit me pretty hard halfway through writing the laser tag bit (glad you liked it btw), and I really ran out of ideas on what to have them do in the game/how to further develop the game help mode details. I might at some point extend the last chapter a bit to finish up the game, but we'll have to see if I'm up for it. If not, well Izzy likes to use her Cyrano quite a lot, and you can use your imagination about any VR adventures she might try! One of the reasons I love Sofia's writing so much is I share a LOT of personality with Stacy, down to liking dolphins and being a talented little hacker. Basically when I set out to write this story, I decided to put the rest of what Stacy isn't and what I am into Izzy and Mike. Many of the scenes I write about in this story were drawn from my personal experiences. Some may only be inspiration but some are/will be near-verbatim retellings of something that I actually went through at some point. So the flip side of this is if there's uncanny similarity between Izzy and Stacy in some aspect, it might just be that I'm like that too ? It's actually quite a fine line to balance. I mean, whatever execution environment the plant was running in didn't respond to a SIGINT, so only 50% Mike's fault ? Thank you! Term is almost over, I'll have plenty of time to write over my extended winter break ?- 362 replies
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diaper dimension Your Move - Chapter 18 Posted [8/21/2022]
DiaperedPrince replied to DiaperedPrince's topic in Story and Art Forum
Hold up... when did I leak that?- 362 replies
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diaper dimension Your Move - Chapter 18 Posted [8/21/2022]
DiaperedPrince replied to DiaperedPrince's topic in Story and Art Forum
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it Honestly I don't expect anyone to fully understand all parts of the story, it spans too many vastly different interests lol. Think about our world... just the other day I pulled a 4TB hard drive from one of the servers I maintain (it was dead and I have a bunch of extras so it wasn't worth fixing) and brought it to my Firmware course so the prof could disassemble it (thereby permanently decommissioning it) to do an object lesson with the class. 10 years ago a 4TB hard drive would have cost bonkers for a student to just bring to class! One of my beta-testers thought that was jarring and detracted from the main plot, glad you liked it! Izzy isn't superhumanly smart. She's good at playing chess though :))- 362 replies
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Fun fact, I didn't want to screenshot the code. I wrote it all in Google Docs (for portability) with nice formatting (I used an inline 1x1 table with black background and green font for the code), but then I realized that basically every site I post to (DD, Wattpad, ABDLSF, AO3) don't allow HTML formatting on that level, so I went with a screenshot of my WYSIWYG original draft for best presentation. I mainly did it so that you can easily skip over sections of the story that are too tech-heavy without missing out on plot. If I made the implementation details of a LALR parser or a TCP/IP stack or a NEAT network central to the plot I'd bore half my readers to death ? There's a lot of good DD stories!
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