aldl4811 Posted March 16, 2014 Share Posted March 16, 2014 I wasn't sure about Mayra's captivity (I could just be a softy), but this last chapter is right on track. Link to comment
Shawnie Posted March 16, 2014 Share Posted March 16, 2014 i like it i like it wonderful chapter nana Link to comment
nanamartinez Posted March 17, 2014 Author Share Posted March 17, 2014 Thank you all for your input. aldl4811: I fretted that that part went a bit too fast too. Do you think I should have drawn it out more? Link to comment
aldl4811 Posted March 17, 2014 Share Posted March 17, 2014 Hard for me to say, I only would have drawn it out a bit more to provide additional color to the reader. Link to comment
nanamartinez Posted March 17, 2014 Author Share Posted March 17, 2014 I'll think about it. Link to comment
aldl4811 Posted March 17, 2014 Share Posted March 17, 2014 Appreciate you taking the time to write this, take care. Link to comment
nanamartinez Posted March 17, 2014 Author Share Posted March 17, 2014 The woman known as Mommy gently brushed the hair from Mayra's face as she lay in her crib, zippered up snuggly into her footed pajama's that Mommy had dressed her in while she slept. Mayra was still asleep, calmly sucking her pacifier as she did so. Mommy smiled down on the pretty girl, admiring the rather pale quality of her skin despite her mexican heritage. She really was a very pretty girl, a rare gem just like Jake who was Mommy's first subject. Jake was very good at finding and acquiring his targets. So very skilled as well, capable of doing things such as making a car seem to fail at a random spot in the wilderness and bring in a girl like Mayra. Jake found it all very thrilling, which was useful to Mommy. Mommy was also very skilled herself, having spent years honing her techniques and her craft in behavior modification and hypnosis. Mommy had managed to train and reprogram many boys and girls to meet her clients needs. Mommy smiled down on Mayra again as she heard the sound of Mayra wetting her diaper as she slept, the mobile in her crib playing the tailored track thar reinforced the modifications that Mommy had designed for Mayra a few weeks ago when Jake first started spotted Mayra and began tracking her movements. Such a clever boy jake was, managing to find where Mayra lived and break into her home, stealing her iPod and replacing it wuth an identical one with the music tracks modifued, all without Mayra being aware. But the true master piece being Jake sending an invite by email to Mayra through Facebook from a frie d, inviting her out to a cabin in the woods and then following her until the car 'stalled'. Yes, Jake was very clever and resourceful. Mayra should fetch a great price from one of Mommy's client's. Mommy tenderly replaced the pacifier in Mayra's mouth as it had slipped out while she slept. Mommy then went to her computer and set up a secure chat room for this evenings work; the modifications for little Trang were complete, the asian girl who's diaper Mommy was changing when Mayra was first brought into the nursery. Tonight, Mommy's clients would want to see that and of course, start the bidding. 1 Link to comment
Rockies Fan in Diapers Posted March 17, 2014 Share Posted March 17, 2014 Hmm, I wonder what's to happen next? Please continue, Link to comment
nanamartinez Posted March 17, 2014 Author Share Posted March 17, 2014 Me too. *giggle* but tell me Rockies fan, this scenario now; plausible or not? Link to comment
Kaidus Posted March 17, 2014 Share Posted March 17, 2014 I can see something happening, but it's too soon to say; MORE PLEASE! Link to comment
nanamartinez Posted March 17, 2014 Author Share Posted March 17, 2014 Oh God, Granny Goodness. how delightfully evil! *mad cackling laughter* Link to comment
Fulldiaper Posted March 17, 2014 Share Posted March 17, 2014 Almost a sinister laugh I hear coming from my computer speakers as she types more. Please do continue! Link to comment
Rockies Fan in Diapers Posted March 17, 2014 Share Posted March 17, 2014 I don't know if its plausible or not Nana, all I can Link to comment
Personalias Posted March 17, 2014 Share Posted March 17, 2014 I don't know if its plausible or not Nana, all I can 1 Link to comment
nanamartinez Posted March 17, 2014 Author Share Posted March 17, 2014 Well even I can't say I expect this to be 'realistic'. Now I have so e hypnosis tracks to work on... 1 Link to comment
Ashleybabygirl667 Posted March 17, 2014 Share Posted March 17, 2014 Cant wait for more nana Link to comment
nanamartinez Posted March 17, 2014 Author Share Posted March 17, 2014 Thank you baby girl. Link to comment
Sarah Penguin Posted March 18, 2014 Share Posted March 18, 2014 Looking forward to more, have been enjoying it so much Link to comment
aldl4811 Posted March 18, 2014 Share Posted March 18, 2014 Thanks for the backstory . Link to comment
nanamartinez Posted March 19, 2014 Author Share Posted March 19, 2014 Mayra awoke to sunlight filtering in through the sheer curtains in the window and the sounds of birds singing in the trees. Rolling onto her side with a groan, Mayra buried her head in the pillow, covering her ears. As she did this, she heard the rustling sound of her diaper rubbing between her thighs. Initial confusion led to memories of last night, causing Mayra to sit up quickly. Doing so revealed to her the facts that she was lying in a crib that was sized for adults and was wearing a footed set of pajamas that were a soft, pastel pink. She also realized that she had wet during her sleep; not only was the diaper heavy and full, but she realized she was sitting in a puddle of urine as well. The legs and crotch of her pajamas were wet along with the sheets on the bed, assailing her nostrils with the smell of stale pee. Wrinkling her nose in distaste, Mayra went to unzip the pajamas, only to realize her hands were still wearing the mittens from last night. She tried to pull them off, first by tucking the hand under her opposing arm and pulling with her armpit, then trying to stick it between her thighs and squeeze them off that way. In frustration, she even tried to use her teeth, but it was to no avail. The mittens looked and felt soft enough, but were quality leather locked on with small padlocks. Grumbling to herself, Mayra decided to climb out of the crib instead. She stood up and went to throw her leg over the side when she suddenly heard a 'click', followed shortly by a mechanical whirring noise. Rather abruptly, Mayra felt herself tugged from behind, the pull seeming to originate around her hips and waist. She found herself unceremoniously dragged back onto her butt, the whirring noise continuing and the tugging at her waist and hips getting tighter. As quickly as it started, the click went off again and the whirring stopped. Mayra sat there in shock for a moment, trying to puzzle through what had just happened. Using her 'hands', Mayra felt a series of straps that had been sewn into the pajamas around the waist and thighs, not unlike a harness. She eventually felt something made of hard metal at the small of her back, which turned out to be a clip tied to a rope which disappeared into a hole in the middle of the mattress. Mayra couldn't see under the crib to confirm, but felt sure that the whirring noise was a small motor attached to a winch and pulley system, not unlike the one that had a cable attached to the front of her fathers 4X4. It made a very similar noise when operated. Mayra realized that the crib was rigged so that the person in it couldn't climb out on their own. She was starting to wonder what she could do to get pit of this mess when she suddenly heard a female voice speak to her from seemingly nowhere. "Ah ah ah, baby fall." The voice said cheerfully. Mayra was at first confused, seeing no one, until she saw the speaker on the mobile. The voice was coming from there. "Baby thirsty? Would she like her baba?" The voice continued. It spoke in tones one might use to address a two year old, syrupy sweet. "No, I want out." Maura stated in rather surly tones. She also said this with some regret; she was in fact thirsty but was hardly going to admit to wanting her 'baba'. "Aww, sounds like baby woke up in her grumpy pants. Is the baby wet? Does she need her diapy changed?" It asked in cheerful fashion. Mayra blushed, but again wasn't going to admit she was in fact wet from having wet her diaper while sleeping. "No! I want out!" She said with a growl. As Mayra glared at the speaker on the monitor, she completely missed the sight of a small black probe snaking its way up the mattress from beneath the crib. The probe got to the wet spot and left out a brief, sharp buzz, causing Maura to see it then. Wondering what the Hell it was, it just as quickly snaked away and out of sight. "Uh oh! Looks like baby lied to Nanny! Baby is indeed wet. Lying is bad for baby! Nanny is afraid she'll have to tell Mommy." The voice said in tones of sympathetic regret. Mayra responded by snorting her nostrils and sticking her tongue out at the monitor. At that point, the door to the nursery opened and the woman known as Mommy walked in. As soon as she spotted Mayra, she gave a warm smile, which Maura surprised herself by responding in kind. "Good morning, Pumpkin. How did you sleep?" Mommy asked as she approached the crib. Mayra went to respond, but 'Nanny' beat her too it. "Baby was rather grumpy this morning, Mommy. And she also lied to Nanny about her diapy being wet when Nanny asked her." Nanny cheerfully reported. Mayra felt herself blushing as Mommy looked down on her, folding her arms on the railing to the crib. "Is that true, baby? Did you lie to Nanny?" Mommy asked quietly. Mayra suddenly felt herself grow ashamed at this, lowering her head and silently nodding as she developed a knot in her throat and felt tears burning the corners of her eyes. She felt Mommy put her hand to her chin and gently lift her face up to Mommy's. "Answer me truthfully, little one; did you lie?" Mommy asked again. "Yes," Mayra said softly.she felt a tear start down her cheek, which Mommy brushed away with her thumb. "Babies don't lie, little girl. If you do it again, you'll be punished. Understand?" Mommy asked in the same quiet tone. "Yes," Mayra said again, barely audible thus time. Mommy responded with a raised eyebrow. "Yes, Mommy." Mommy said to Mayra. Maura blushed at this. "Yes Mommy," she dutifully replied. Mommy then turned on her smile again, instantly making Mayra smile back and feel relieved. Mommy then sniffed and wrinkled her nose. "Oh my, you really did wet your diaper. Well come on, Mommy will give you a bath. " Mommy stated as she lowered the railing, grabbing Mayra and easily setting her on her hip, carrying her to the bathroom with seeming ease. Mayra for her part accepted this quietly, resting her head on Mommy's soft shoulder and sucking her thumb as she did so. Link to comment
paragondragon Posted March 19, 2014 Share Posted March 19, 2014 Very nice, nana. Clearly my tutelage has improved your writings. Link to comment
Kaidus Posted March 19, 2014 Share Posted March 19, 2014 The only question I have is if anyone notices she disappeared; MORE PLEASE! Link to comment
Sarah Penguin Posted March 19, 2014 Share Posted March 19, 2014 Thanks for the fun update Link to comment
nanamartinez Posted March 19, 2014 Author Share Posted March 19, 2014 Kaidus: that question presents a crossroads for me: I can, of course, write sections of my story addressing that but should I? Will it add to the story and if so, how? Link to comment
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