Dang I can only imagine how scared Lorrie must be. Being in a whole new world and now getting this treatment. I hope El ends up adopting her if there is no way to get back to our world.
This story looks promising! It's pretty good ?
I would like to see more exposition if you want critic. like flesh out the personalities a bit more. That could make the story better I think! ?
I got kind of the same vibes about Tommy and Rob
What a nice story!!! Not really the ending I was expecting though. I thought Sandra and Erin would have a worse time after the divorce, but it was nice how Erin could see the error in her ways.