ABDLinTX

@adventurekido I’ve certainly enjoyed this story - thank you for sharing your writing! It’s very clear that you’ve got a talent for writing, and I definitely appreciate stories with solid grammar. One thing I’ve noticed as the story continues is the pace. It seems as though it’s become slightly rushed (which, I know very well, can be the result of burn-out and/or anxiousness to finish a chapter). This is unsolicited advice, so take it with a grain of salt (and my noted appreciation above!), but perhaps slow down and highlight some of those embarrassing moments (like the accidents & the changes). I’ve found that adding in some inner monologue with the shameful thoughts of comparison to the adult world helps immerse the reader. Nonetheless, keep up the great work! I hope you’ll be back soon with another installment!

There’s a seat for every (sometimes padded) butt! Perfection looks differently to everyone in its own imperfect way

“… if the perfect man came into my life and all he wanted was me to put him in some MFing diapers I will do it!” Love it. If only more potential partners and people saw it this way (the simplicity of what the partner is asking for), it would positively change the stigma surrounding the ABDL community.

Do you have an email to discuss some details?

Couldn’t agree more with you - but the one real bummer is when a writer produces a really promising storyline (which, sadly, is rare these days) but their grammar is severely lacking (sadly common). The amount of run-on sentences and absent commas I see is discouraging. In instances like these, I’ll reach out and attempt a conversation. I commend them on their storyline/originality. I also gauge whether they even want to achieve any degree of quality beyond what they’ve already created. It’s only then that I will politely offer to proof their material. Always ends the same. No response or a simple, “Thanks” (but no thanks). Thus, constructive criticism is great for those that want it. So I commend you on that, Elfy.

I’m an ABDL in Tyler, TX! (Sorry, a little late to the party in this forum!)