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The Foster Father and His Two Baby Girls
parkintochter replied to Ishigreensa's topic in Story and Art Forum
I'm interested- 44 replies
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- actual 13 year old
- actual 10 year old
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Diamond Tours - Republished 11/16/2022 - Complete
parkintochter replied to BabySofia's topic in Completed Stories
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really nice story so far. I love the monkey paw concept. The only thing I found odd was, she peed her pants in the bus and it the pants stayed dry. Yes she was thinking about how this was possible, but I don't get why she didn't check her pants/panties at home. Isn't that the first thing you do after you pee your pants? But that doesn't decrease the story's quality, keep up the good work!
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I think that might be was because of the picture. They seem to be strict about that But it's a shame. I really liked the story and wanted it to continue
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Log for the day: After a little break I started to continue this adventure. The story is still gripping. I can't believe the protesters had success with their work. Good for them, but I guess there is always a catch. I'm interested in how the theater will play out for Beth. I'm sometimes a little confused who is who because there are so many characters. Maybe I should look up who Charlotte and Lila are again Do you have like a Persona list or something? It is really helpful in fantasy books.
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The Rules Are Simple Tara (Ch. 3 - 4/12/24)
parkintochter replied to AnythingWillDo's topic in Story and Art Forum
cute story. But can you explain how Tara is only as big as a 10 year old? Is she very small or is this girl just really tall for her age?- 18 replies
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Megan's Strange New Life Chapter3: (4-4-24)
parkintochter replied to Ishigreensa's topic in Story and Art Forum
How do you like the changes from the first version? I think it was fun to dislike Larry, but I think it feels better without him- 18 replies
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- new town
- single dad and daughter
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sorry, if this was maybe too harsh. The time skip after chapter 15 had me a bit unsettled.
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I liked the regressing in the first page, but after that it felt a bit rushed in my opinion and the whole potty training part seemed to get skipped. That disappointed me a bit because that was the most interesting thing for me
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Megan's Strange New Life Chapter3: (4-4-24)
parkintochter replied to Ishigreensa's topic in Story and Art Forum
Even if I kind of know what to expect in the next chapters, I'm very excited for plot and twists you have coming for us- 18 replies
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- new town
- single dad and daughter
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Megan's Strange New Life Chapter3: (4-4-24)
parkintochter replied to Ishigreensa's topic in Story and Art Forum
Really good second chapter! I'm eager to find out what's the deal with Vanessa and how she got Octie. I also like the relationship between Megan and Octie. They seem to get good friends in the future.- 18 replies
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- new town
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For now, sadly it's the storyless story.
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Bookmark for today: I'm at page 51 Chapter 59. Things got wild after the weekend at his grandparents. It felt like there have been a political coup, everyone is suddenly so aggressive and sadistic. Let's see how things go. I'm glad he got rescued again for another weekend at his grandparents. Also I'm probably reading it too fast and therefore don't get details, but I guess his daily swim has something to do with his mostly intact bladder control. There is still much to explore for me. So I keep in touch.
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Logbook for today. I'm on page 36, Chapter 35: First, I see that you changed the frequency and published the chapters faster, cool thing of you. Maybe I'm rushing a bit through the story. But well, we do what we do. I have to say, so far it's still very good imo. I really like that the trope of "character has one accident and is now fully diaper dependent" isn't a thing in this story, at least not for Connor. Good to see how he manages to almost keep his dignity until this point, but on the other hand I hope he soon wakes up in his crib with a full bladder having to use his diaper 😈 But maybe I am just evil on this point.
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Well, I should do a break. I already read 21 chapters. I wanted to stop at page 10, but it was so good I couldn't stop reading. I really like the dorm setting and how Connor is resisting getting babied by following and bending the rules. He really is a fighter. Good work so far. By this rate, I might be done after the end of this week. There still is lots of story left. By the way I'm using comments as a bookmark so I can remember easily, where to continue I hope you don't mind😄
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Megan's Strange New Life Chapter3: (4-4-24)
parkintochter replied to Ishigreensa's topic in Story and Art Forum
Who doesn't know the feeling when smelling something funny and immediately thinking it has to be yourself😄- 18 replies
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- new town
- single dad and daughter
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Megan's Strange New Life Chapter3: (4-4-24)
parkintochter replied to Ishigreensa's topic in Story and Art Forum
Wow, really good first chapter! Everything feels so real!- 18 replies
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I think it's sad how this developed and that you gave it up because one rude comment before I even got the chance to read it. Megan's story had the potential to be big.
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Welcome friend! I wish you a good time here. Since you wrote that you have been writing stories in the past. Are they somewhere availabe? I really liked your style in the Bobby and Claire story