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  1. kerry
    I'm completely enjoying revisiting this story. 🙂
  2. kerry
    Could someone DM me and tell me "what happened" at the Site That Shall Not Be Named? I know it's gone (and good riddance) but I don't know why. I laughed out loud at this one!
  3. kerry
    Twice in one chapter Nina is at the center of a "mistake" about Sam's age? First, the crib; second, the kids' menu. I sense a possibility: could she have pre-arranged the crib and simply lied about its needing to remain? Could she, in the same vein, have discussed the menu thing with the waiter earlier? And what would be her goal in either of these cases, anyway? Hmmmm...
  4. kerry
    Very inventive: Grimm's Diaper Dimension!
  5. kerry
    Oh, hell, yes! Continue! This is a very original, very fresh and interested piece. And I have to know how you'll handle your narrator vanishing into "tweakdom."
  6. kerry
    I have an excellent vocabulary—I used to be an English teacher—but I doubt that even I have ever used "subsumed" in a spoken sentence. 🙂 I think I know why you feel the need for all of this background, but my reaction to it is: They are living in this world; why would they need to give each other recent history lessons? It would be like needing to recap the 2016 US presidential race in order to help a younger person understand Trump's role in 2024. Even if they were not around for it, they'd certainly know who Hillary Clinton is, what basically occurred, and the whole Jan. 6 mess. Maybe a better example: you'd never have a character explain 9/11, would you? (See, there was this terrorist named Osama Bin Laden, and he...) Shouldn't John, who grew up in this broken city, already know basically why it is this way? I think you'd be better off 86-ing that background dump entirely, maybe coming in at the tail end of the conversation with John. Your later exposition of the situation with the brother is much better, as John naturally doesn't know that story. I do like the world you are setting up here and look forward to reading more about it.
  7. kerry
    I don't know what is going to happen with Danni or the site, but I think we can all agree that this is a horrible situation. It's just the latest example of the insane violence brought about by political rhetoric. (She was actually doxed in error; the person who did it mistook her for the moderator of a totally different site. Didn't stop some asshole from nearly killing her on the street.) If you pray, send one up for Danni.
  8. kerry
    You're not the same Little Matt who wrote "The Error," are you?
  9. kerry
    I think that Ashley right now has a perfect situation: full little on weekends, Amazon during the week. Knowing how these stories work, though, as well as her partner's increasingly maternal mindset, I expect that things will, um, change.
  10. kerry
    I always did like these stories.
  11. kerry
    At least he bought plain white.
  12. kerry
    Who knew that Babypants was starting a whole new "universe" of interconnected Minnesota diaper stories? 🙂
  13. kerry
    Thanks so much! I think that, even for an unfinished story, it is generally only OK. I was very young and the tropes tend to dominate. (They weren't actually yet tropes when I wrote the story, but there is a reason they have become so.) Also, there is way too much information top-loaded. Still, I was not happy to discover that I'd lost the first chapter. 🙂
  14. kerry
    If anyone does have it, please let me know. I wrote it (long ago, in another lifetime) but I don't seem to have Chapter one anymore.
  15. kerry
    I'm starting to think this section of the story is being written as present to Guilend.
  16. kerry
    This is what I totally expected and urgently feared. And, as Guilend noted, you've eliminated pretty much all of the normal ways Littles get out of this kind of mess in these stories. I feel like I did upon first reading LFP's tale ("Thief in Service," I think) where one little was kidnapped and sold into babyhood on a private island...but as least that one had him monitored by others who knew he was missing from the jump. And that was not even a DD tale! Here? I believe that the littles will be saved, but I have no clue how.
  17. kerry
    Have I missed something somewhere? These two quotations from the last two chapters show clearly that Audrey is being considerate of Will's feelings. And then this public display???? What happened?
  18. kerry
    What an excellent ending to a thoroughly enjoyable and well-written chapter!
  19. kerry
    Another fun chapter. OK, though: I have a few long-gestating issues. Connor suspects that there is something in the sleep pod messing with him. Why does he continue using it without complaint? Why not have Amanda or Fred look into it? Why doesn't anyone call out the university on the absurdly early bedtimes? First, it's a group punishment, which shouldn't even be legal. Second, the university claims that it is paving the way for more littles to graduate, so how can it ignore something that so blatantly reduces their chances by eliminating a lot of study time? Mackenzie confuses me: she cossets him—that is clear—but she also seems to respect him as a person; yet she goes along with whatever is happening here with seemingly no issues. BTW: I'm another one who can't imagine that Connor's "temporary" nanite adjustments might not be all that temporary..
  20. kerry
    Of course, I expected more of Redge. I was just wistfully thinking I'd like this more if you could find a way not to give in to that particular temptation. Still, Redge is the epitome of evil, so I suppose there was no way around it.
  21. kerry
    !! 🤣 I love this. I also love this enclosure; too often octopuses floppy sea spiders are stuck in much smaller tanks.
  22. kerry
    Honestly, I agree. Although I have fully expected Redge to engage with Patrick again, it would be a nice change if his efforts were abortive and he was caught and incarcerated because of them...without re-endangering Patrick.
  23. kerry
    I'm another reader hoping for the "fair" ending. I mean it was clear from the start that something like this was going to happen (especially when Bethany left the room). But this turn of events has gone way too far. (And how is the relationship between the sisters ever going to survive this? I can't imagine that there could be any possible way for Elizabeth to apologize enough for Ashley to accept her as a sister-in-law, which would make it difficult for Bethany to see her.) I also do not think it would be realistic—she says, knowing how bizarre it is to apply that word in a case like this—for Bethany to have been in on it. You made it clear that there was real love between her and Ashley. How could she ever forgive her sister for defiling her girlfriend in such a horrific and at least partially permanent way?
  24. kerry
    I agreed with Guilend: I love the relationship between Cat and Amanda. And I have to say that this is (I'm sure) the first time that I've read a story that paid as much attention to that dynamic as it did to Big and Little. Their relationship looks wonderfully "lived in"; I get such a sense of their past together. And I also love that you don't feel the need to explain every one of their personal in-jokes; it just makes all of this seem even more natural! So far there has not been much drama re:Littles, but you make statements in your posts that suggest something is coming. For my part, though, I'd be perfectly happy to see more of what happens to two old friends as they settle into a new dynamic as mommies. 🙂
  25. kerry
    Is the stuffy Honey Bear or Honey Paw?
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