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  1. Just a theory, but I'm thinking that you have set up a denouement (still a bit down the road) in which Ian and Priscilla are the only "happily ever after" we'll see. Julia will warn her off, but we all know how well that sort of thing goes. And as for the Kink Squad, all three of them seem to want Ian in order to fulfill fantasies of their own, rather than true love. For a while now I've been of the opinion that Sarah is incredibly selfish and controlling, and she doesn't deserve him. Vickie seems to love him, but she is more into the kink as well. And Rita? I'd say she's just consumed by FOMO. All three want to control him: they'd take away his independence and ultimately make him into a different person who, though he would be the sperm donor for their babies, would be more likely to find himself in the nursery with them than out in the world as he has been. His own inability to say no to a strong woman has led him toward a life in which he could be totally dominated by three of them, but I've seen no real tender feelings from him for anyone other than Priscilla. I think it is only with her that he has the chance to be happy.
  2. You have not mentioned what the outcomes of this trial might be, have you? I mean: what would happen in the case of an unmitigated guilty verdict?
  3. At this point, I rather wish you had not allowed Darlene to succumb to the temptation to use hypnosis. There is something precious that is budding now, and maybe it would have happened anyway. (I think it easily might have.) but when/if he finds out about the hypnosis...well, all bets are off.
  4. I was a tad worried about this at the start, as it had the potential to go dark. Instead, it went cute, and it's so fun!
  5. I like pretty much everything about the way this is wrapping up. However, I'm finding it hard to understand why her friends have not visited her in hospital. It makes no sense to me, especially for Lisa. She's been there more than a week and no communication at all?
  6. Another intense chapter...and that think with Beth!? I hope she isn't being kidnapped. ๐Ÿ™
  7. This scene, so gently written, played out perfectly. Near the start, though, I must admit that I did wonder why no one in these stories ever thinks of cabs or Ubers in these situations... ๐Ÿค”
  8. I'm very happy to read this. My one issue with the other one for most of its length was that Samantha and Chelsea behaved like bigs but were the same size as everyone else. (I still don't really get that, though maybe it was explained and I just don't recall?) Anyway, they are Big now, so problem solved. I do hope that Samantha's seeming nonchalance is justified though; it would be a shame to lose her as a character this abruptly.
  9. The way that you have narrated this story from the start, one eye on where it is going but the other firmly on how it will get there, suggested precisely what happened in this chapter. No way were we going to go quickly to a diagnosis; rather, we need to see her slowly emerging from the stupor she has been in since school restarted...and to a great extent long before that. Otherwise, nothing good can happen: Sarah needs to begin to process for herself all of the ugliness that her mother's insanity has foisted upon her. That same careful narrative structure is why we see this: Sarah is not yet in any position to understand anything they might say even if they had a real clue what they were dealing with. That they don't is evident from their reactions. If Lisa or whoever brought them there told them about the abuse, she could not have known how bad it had gotten. She could not have known that her mother had broken her with all of this. It makes total sense, then, that the CPS people would assume she didn't really need diapers, etc. I do, however, assume that (no matter who reported it) they know that she is not normally the way she is currently coming across, and that they will immediately understand the depth of what her mom has done.
  10. Most of those stories lack any effort whatsoever of realism. Yes, Sarah's mother is a monster, but you carefully led us to understand what kind of monster she is, and it is clear here that she has fallen into her own delusion of what is "best" for her daughter. Sarah's breakdown, because we see it happen slowly, is entirely believable.
  11. Wow wow wow! This was excellent from the start, but every new chapter seems to up the ante! Most impressive.
  12. Hi, Loving this new piece. I quickly subscribed to your subscribestar because of it, but I hate the fact that subscribestar doesn't (apparently) let you organize by story, creating a long list of chapters and messages to scroll through. So I am canceling that and have subscribed to ream instead. Either way, I do enjoy your work.
  13. I see it as more as the mom being completely incapable of understanding why Sarah isn't succeeding, and lashing out at her. Pardon me, but this is really giving that abusive bitch of a mom more credit than she deserves. There is absolutely no scenario that could justify her actions. As for the potential ending: we've come a very long way since the cheer accident that resulted in Sarah's problems, but I think it would be wrong not to take her to a doctor who could actually diagnose her correctly. So, my probably-wrong predictions for the remainder of the plot: Mom continues to be abusive. Sarah, in diapers at school, either decides on her own to report things or, more likely, is compelled when either her friends find out or she is discovered by an enemy. CPS removes her from her mom's clutches along with Emilia. Sarah opts to live with Lisa instead of whatever relative takes her sister. At a court-ordered doctor appointment, Sarah's bladder injury is discovered and she remembers the cheer accident. Her mom, charged with abuse, goes into counseling, which may eventually allow her to get Emilia back...though not Sarah. As I said, it's probably all wrong. But it would be highly satisfactory. It even manages to help that abusive, twisted mom.
  14. Just catching up to this story now. It's fun! I always enjoy stories where characters just happen to be ABDL...and monsters to boot!
  15. This must be the worst mother in history! And of course she "changed her mind" and goes through with it...as she had already planned...and now the blame is shifted to her daughter! "as if"??? Just wondering: how have her sphincter muscles remained functional? Her leg muscles don't appear to have done. Very interesting start. I do like the physicalizing of the old "now she's the little sister" trope. And I'm glad you didn't focus on the technology, which is clearly impossible: better to let that lie. ๐Ÿ™‚
  16. Seriously: this little rebellion is the only possible decision she could have made, for exactly the reason she outlined.
  17. I have no idea how this would play to a six-year-old, but the screwed-up logic in it reveals tons about this woman's character.
  18. I'm immediately hooked. At first, I was a bit put off by the choppiness of the opening pages' quick-cut narratives, but that settled quickly (and even as I felt that way I was fascinated by what was happening). I also thought the woman on the bus with the 20-something daughter in diapers and acting like a baby was a bit weird, as nothing thus far had prepared me for such an extreme thing...and then extremity was obliquely alluded to later on. I hope that we'll get a look at just how something like this could have happened and why it doesn't have half the country or more in open revolt...but that is to come.
  19. I hope that the police become involved. Sarah's mother is horribly abusive!
  20. I loved this! It's always so much fun to spend time in Briana's mind. ๐Ÿ™‚
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