Jump to content
LL Medico Diapers and More Bambino Diapers - ABDL Diaper Store

kerry

Members
 View Profile  See their activity

  • Posts

    1,381

  • Joined

  • Last visited

  • Days Won

    9

 Content Type 

Everything posted by kerry

  1. kerry
    Very impressive writing in this chapter! Your effort shows.
  2. kerry
    Hi, WriteAndLeft, I just want to say how happy I am to see you writing again! K
  3. kerry
    I mean I understand that, but for all intents and purposes, it still means that her mother is treating a toddler-looking person in this horrific way.
  4. kerry
    I realize the need to demonize the mom, but come on: I am trying to picture someone yelling something like this at an apparent toddle and I'm just unable. Again, how is this at all reasonable given Sam's physicality and limits? Back to logic: who would hire a toddler to sweep floors? Sorry for harsh-ish responses. I just think that it's way too easy in a high-concept story to lose track of logic.
  5. kerry
    This is a really strong chapter, especially the conversation between Pete and his mother. I do have a couple of bones to pick, though: First of all, the people who run this place are not stupid. They know what Ian is. So why would they punish Pete for a pre-emptive strike against him? It's not like, at this age/size, he could really hurt Ian, and short of keeping the bully in isolation I don't see a way to prevent him from doing what seems to come naturally to him. Honestly, it does not make much sense. Further—and worse—is the attitude of the inspector. (Really? ARSED?) Whatever training he has received would have to include sensitivity to the emotional needs of children as they regress. There is simply no way that he would refer to them as "babies." k
  6. kerry
    They are in New York. Why not have pizza? Question: do places like this really exist? VIP suites and entrances in hospitals I mean?
  7. kerry
    Out of curiosity, why do you post three chapters at a time? I have to carve out a long block of space each time you post just to read it... Shorter postings, maybe more frequently—daily?—would be easier to handle.
  8. kerry
    You've repeated this line... Be that as it may, though, there's some kick-ass world-building going on here.
  9. kerry
    So happy to see this story continue!
  10. kerry
    Just caught up to this story and agree that it is wonderful. I'm wondering if the fantasy element might end up working differently from "The Ballet Slippers." Like maybe the hourglass will affect more than just Lillian...or maybe everyone involved will be aware of the magic as it works...or whether the inclusion of parent chapters might signal that they too will regress to an extent. In any case, I love the world building here; Seabrook is totally real.
  11. kerry
    I am not really a fan of stories that make the reader provide the ending even if that ending is pretty clear anyway. (I just watched a TV series that did the same thing: setting up an inevitable ending and then suddenly stopping before it could be realized. I had the same feeling then.) So...bottom line...I would rather have read the full moment rather than artificially stopping it midway there. Still, I loved this story...as I do all of your work.
  12. kerry
    Lots of fun here, even if the trope is well-worn. Super start.
  13. kerry
    I won't deny that there were a lot of times when I felt confused about how things (even contiguous things) connected, but reading this story was like a liberation. Not only did you address (most often directly) many of the things about the DD that have always felt like fabricated ABDL wish fulfillment, but you were utterly unafraid of challenging your readers to keep up. And the epilogue feels like the perfect culmination of what this story has been doing from the start. This is going to go into my books as one of the best of the DD stories.
  14. kerry
    I'm sure it will be very different, if only to avoid redundancy in the narratives. Anyway, the stories are set up very differently: unlike the other one, there is no suggestion that the ARs here are in any way mistreated or blamed for their condition.
  15. kerry
    In this case, it involves a pretty silly kidnap plot by criminals who would make the "Wet Bandits" from Home Alone look like geniuses. I know this is a diaper story with an impossible plot, but until this subplot you have strived at least to make it believable within itself. BUT nothing about this side plot plays as in any way realistic.
  16. kerry
    Um...do you know the expression "jumped the shark"?
  17. kerry
    At Tosche Station, by any chance?
  18. kerry
    Some of these Amazons! She actually named him Windel? 😉
  19. kerry
    It wasn't all that much of a bummer. I mean it did end with "Is breast milk vegan?"
  20. kerry
    I seem to be saying this a lot, but this is a wild and specific reinvention of the Diaper Dimension. DD2.0, maybe. It may be hard to follow at times, but it seems to be trying to resolve the many inconsistencies created by several decades of unfiltered additions to PPP's original world. I'm really enjoying this.
  21. kerry
    Hilarious! Just a random thought: with a solid subfocus on hockey and a 79/80 setting, are you going to deal with the Miracle on Ice?
  22. kerry
    I like this story a lot even though it is all over the map plotwise. It seems to rewrite the relationships, settings, and pretty much everything with the start of each new chapter. That could drive me crazy but instead it intrigues me. I'm wondering if there is a master plotline that you are following. Every once in a while I see hints of one, but it never remains. How are you keeping all of this in balance?
  23. kerry
    Don't worry about the diaper thing. This Xmas fantasy is already one of the most complex narratives I can ever recall seeing here. Honestly, I get as confused as Lily/Ellie at times, and I love it!
  24. kerry
    No pun intended?
  25. kerry
    This is a really nice exploration of how kids' minds—and their imaginations—work.
×
×
  • Create New...